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Fantasy The Dark World (ooc)

Bam- posted. I glanced over it and I don't think I missed anything in the cs but if I did ples lemme know lol (I won't join for a little while yet though since I do need to real quick do my daily workout and chores)
 
Bam- posted. I glanced over it and I don't think I missed anything in the cs but if I did ples lemme know lol (I won't join for a little while yet though since I do need to real quick do my daily workout and chores)
hm immediately, i need to know his abnormality x3 like exactly what it is?

he can slow time, but also use plasma?

thats fine tho ^^ have fun with your workout and chores :>
 
yeah okay just a few minor things, but he looks good overall

  • like i said, how does he have plasma using, and time manipulation powers? (also as for the time based powers, exactly how do they work? and since time-based powers are super OP, i will be looking at that hard)
  • you said he loves food and is never not seen snacking.. not really a problem, except in this world where food isnt super easy to come across. how does he manage to be always snacking?
  • tho there are some... very rare exceptions, basically everyone should only have one power. while heightened tasting and smell isnt... like i get it, you arent really focusing on that as a power. convince me to just let him keep that since he already seems to have a power. basically, it isnt a huge deal in this case, but it is different than other people's characters
  • also, yes, he may have been born an Abnorm, but how did his parents know that?
Isolde Isolde
 
Wifu permission to change Nissa's age to something younger... I am looking and I think I left that age in from her base CS I use and modify for other RPs. It's too old for how kind of... idk... young she turned out to be while I play her. I mean she is super tiny and doesn't speak a lot and kinda follows Khayn around like a sidekick, so she just feels younger to me. Like 16 or 17. But only if it's okay :) Her age hasn't come up yet btw.
 
Wifu permission to change Nissa's age to something younger... I am looking and I think I left that age in from her base CS I use and modify for other RPs. It's too old for how kind of... idk... young she turned out to be while I play her. I mean she is super tiny and doesn't speak a lot and kinda follows Khayn around like a sidekick, so she just feels younger to me. Like 16 or 17. But only if it's okay :) Her age hasn't come up yet btw.
thats fine hunny, actually i was surprised you made her 19 lols
 
yeah okay just a few minor things, but he looks good overall

  • like i said, how does he have plasma using, and time manipulation powers? (also as for the time based powers, exactly how do they work? and since time-based powers are super OP, i will be looking at that hard)
  • you said he loves food and is never not seen snacking.. not really a problem, except in this world where food isnt super easy to come across. how does he manage to be always snacking?
  • tho there are some... very rare exceptions, basically everyone should only have one power. while heightened tasting and smell isnt... like i get it, you arent really focusing on that as a power. convince me to just let him keep that since he already seems to have a power. basically, it isnt a huge deal in this case, but it is different than other people's characters
  • also, yes, he may have been born an Abnorm, but how did his parents know that?
Isolde Isolde
(My workout didn't go as planned and I don't have to do chores for tonight anymore xD So I'm back early lol)

Sorry I didn't realize/remember there's only supposed to be one power goin on. In that case I guess plasma manipulation would be my pick- unless the taste/scent combo counts as a power. As for how the plasma manipulation works I could send you a 15 minute video on it xD but I'm not cruel lmao so I'll ellaborate on it without the help of youtube. Basically he's able to collect a small amount of plasma/energy and project it as an orb. Normally this orb is loose and has little more impact than a well-landed punch and it feels around 70 degrees Fahrenheit since I mean it is plasma after all. However, if he is able to collect a little more plasma than normal and can manipulate the orb into a much more compact form, its impact is almost like a bullet. As for his snacking thing I guess I can lower the amount of it lol but he'll still go out of his way to hog as much food as he can come across and he'll probably just chew on his nails or something whenever he doesn't have a snack. Also for the parents knowing I guess they knew from him having an unnatural hair color since it's not every day you pop out a normal baby with pure white hair lmao
 
(My workout didn't go as planned and I don't have to do chores for tonight anymore xD So I'm back early lol)

Sorry I didn't realize/remember there's only supposed to be one power goin on. In that case I guess plasma manipulation would be my pick- unless the taste/scent combo counts as a power. As for how the plasma manipulation works I could send you a 15 minute video on it xD but I'm not cruel lmao so I'll ellaborate on it without the help of youtube. Basically he's able to collect a small amount of plasma/energy and project it as an orb. Normally this orb is loose and has little more impact than a well-landed punch and it feels around 70 degrees Fahrenheit since I mean it is plasma after all. However, if he is able to collect a little more plasma than normal and can manipulate the orb into a much more compact form, its impact is almost like a bullet. As for his snacking thing I guess I can lower the amount of it lol but he'll still go out of his way to hog as much food as he can come across and he'll probably just chew on his nails or something whenever he doesn't have a snack. Also for the parents knowing I guess they knew from him having an unnatural hair color since it's not every day you pop out a normal baby with pure white hair lmao
okay (i dont think anyone has plasma making or anything lol) so with these changes ill accept your charrie ^^ <3
 
kk! welcome back too haha
Yeah I kinda maybe got stung when doing some chores though I'm not sure what from since for some odd reason I stepped on a stinger. No bee, just its stinger lmao and now my foot's swollen so I gotta just try and ice it or something xD
 
Yeah I kinda maybe got stung when doing some chores though I'm not sure what from since for some odd reason I stepped on a stinger. No bee, just its stinger lmao and now my foot's swollen so I gotta just try and ice it or something xD
O_O uhhh wow, yikes, you okay?
 
O_O uhhh wow, yikes, you okay?
Yeah it just confused the hell outta me when I realized I'd been stung by a lone stinger lmao. I thought I'd stepped on prickers and was planning on taking them off once I was done with doing my current chore (taking out the mulch) and then I realized my mistake a few moments later when it started hurting worse. Gotta say it's been a while since I've been stung and really caught me off guard xD
 
Yeah it just confused the hell outta me when I realized I'd been stung by a lone stinger lmao. I thought I'd stepped on prickers and was planning on taking them off once I was done with doing my current chore (taking out the mulch) and then I realized my mistake a few moments later when it started hurting worse. Gotta say it's been a while since I've been stung and really caught me off guard xD
that sounds really bad and painful :< sowwy that happened!

And Garret has been edited <3 <3
kayyy ill give him a quick look over ^^
 
Dw about it- I know shit'll get better in a few hours and I'll be fine. ^-^ Also thanks! So any way I could somehow hop in?
ummm well we just got through this biiiig battle in this town and are probs gunna stay here for a while. So they could be already there and interact or saw the explosions and came to help :)
 

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