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Thalia_Neko Thalia_Neko Then I'll try to work on a response tonight then. I'll see what I can do for character interactions?

Edit: Just give me about 10 minutes to re-read the last 4 posts and then I'll begin writing :P
 
it is edited
Your character seems fine after its edited.

But the whole "my parents didnt do anything" is still falling under the same trope. Parents not doing anything = they might as well be dead, haha.

It is The Coven, or the Coven, proper nouns should be capitalized :) -- just a minor criticism in your bio. There are other covens within the world. They arent THE Coven though.

It is fine for your bio too, but lets not make spirits that grant wishes randomly to bunches of people a common thing. :P Most Spirits are quite proud, so while they arent malevolent like Demons, they often dont worry about the troubles of humans. Your Spirit being kind and benevolent is fine though! :)

its also a minor criticism, but you should probs put spaces between your paragraphs

but otherwise, your character seems fine and is accepted! :) note The Coven does not like Apostates so... you probably dont want to get involved with them unless your cool with her dying or joining The Coven XD
 
I won't use Cerise until later, tbh.
The thing with her parents is that they didn't know enough to teach her themselves and couldn't afford to pay somebody to, but at least they tried to get her to make friends.
I based Our Lady Underground off of a character and the goddess Persephone
Her thing with The Coven is that she doesn't really know how to join or where to start, but she's fine with joining.
 
I won't use Cerise until later, tbh.
The thing with her parents is that they didn't know enough to teach her themselves and couldn't afford to pay somebody to, but at least they tried to get her to make friends.
I based Our Lady Underground off of a character and the goddess Persephone
Her thing with The Coven is that she doesn't really know how to join or where to start, but she's fine with joining.
Mhm mhm, cool cool :>
got it ^^
 
yup :P but its working now haha
I think I'm going to have my first post with [my character] studying back at Staircase just as an establisher, I won't really have him come into the fray until things actually start happening on the Collective's side of things

[Note: all my edits not in IC will be contained in brackets from now on]
 
I think I'm going to have my first post with [my character] studying back at Staircase just as an establisher, I won't really have him come into the fray until things actually start happening on the Collective's side of things

[Note: all my edits not in IC will be contained in brackets from now on]
iduno when things are gunna start happening on the collectives side of things, just a warning :/ lol

also site went out again bleh
 
probs :o

what are you expecting out of the collective?
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Nah, maybe have a member of the Collective mentor him and possibly serve as a father figure, but nothing else
hmmm that sounds cool but hm
im not really rping in the collective tho >< i feel like Aon would possibly mentor him at some points (not exclusively, Aons got stuff to do, but sometimes), but im not really intending to rp Aon too much cuz i want to rp Letitia hm
 
hmmm that sounds cool but hm
im not really rping in the collective tho >< i feel like Aon would possibly mentor him at some points (not exclusively, Aons got stuff to do, but sometimes), but im not really intending to rp Aon too much cuz i want to rp Letitia hm
I oonterstand
Anyway, I think I'ma change my mind and have my character sneak into the party, but once again I won't be able to post today because every post I make on mobile is turrible
 
I oonterstand
Anyway, I think I'ma change my mind and have my character sneak into the party, but once again I won't be able to post today because every post I make on mobile is turrible
up to you. and kay :P tho i dont know how some random person from the collective knows about a random party in the coven XD
 

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