Fantasy The Chronicles of the Ebony Embers (OOC)

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Alright, getting to the serious questions. Is there somebody that loves to drink and brawl and could be good friends with Karina?

 

[Archdemon]

Alright, getting to the serious questions. Is there somebody that loves to drink and brawl and could be good friends with Karina?

Hmmmmm....

I have some issues with the background, mostly the beginning bits like the elf lord and the wolf pack.

Having a more feral and barbaric character is fine, especially for a High Elf (Though I think we have a bit too many)

The problems lie on the fact that she killed the wolf. I think the character would benefit more from being adopted from a barbarian tribe instead of wolves because it makes more sense with her berserk nature. Also High Elves, especially Nobles would never outright try to kill their affair lovers or bastard children, at least not publicly. So I'd say he would take the mother and child to somewhere far away from the public and do the business there, maybe like up north towards the more barbaric lands.

I think that would make the backstory a little less convoluted and more intriguing since there's a bit more to it.

 

[Archdemon]

Pryno Fen'Harel isn't wearing his armor, he is wearing more common clothing. Just so you know that's what he looks like currently.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Hmmmmm....

I have some issues with the background, mostly the beginning bits like the elf lord and the wolf pack.

Having a more feral and barbaric character is fine, especially for a High Elf (Though I think we have a bit too many)

The problems lie on the fact that she killed the wolf. I think the character would benefit more from being adopted from a barbarian tribe instead of wolves because it makes more sense with her berserk nature. Also High Elves, especially Nobles would never outright try to kill their affair lovers or bastard children, at least not publicly. So I'd say he would take the mother and child to somewhere far away from the public and do the business there, maybe like up north towards the more barbaric lands.

I think that would make the backstory a little less convoluted and more intriguing since there's a bit more to it.

It said clearly that it is a rumor. That is what people say is her background. Her real background might be different. I was intending to stay vague.

Her real background might just be that she is simply a very crazy woman from a very crazy elven tribe that has developed her own special weapon.

 

[Archdemon]

It said clearly that it is a rumor. That is what people say is her background. Her real background might be different. I was intending to stay vague.

Her real background might just be that she is simply a very crazy woman from a very crazy elven tribe that has developed her own special weapon.

Eh, there aren't really any Elven Tribes, the only ones that can come close are Wood Elves or Dark Elves with their varied nations/kingdoms.

High elves are pretty much like some of the most civilized people in the world.

Besides, I personally don't care for vague backstories unless there is a good reason for them character wise. And that's a very elaborate rumor if I must say so myself. The character itself is fine, I just personally don't care too much for the backstory. If you do want to keep it vague, I would only put in her more recent accomplishments like what did she do in the last few years to make herself stand out, what is her biggest accomplishment, basically what is her story from the last few years then as we go with the Rp, we learn more about her and her story just like how I plan on doing the same for my character.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Eh, there aren't really any Elven Tribes, the only ones that can come close are Wood Elves or Dark Elves with their varied nations/kingdoms.

High elves are pretty much like some of the most civilized people in the world.

Besides, I personally don't care for vague backstories unless there is a good reason for them character wise. And that's a very elaborate rumor if I must say so myself. The character itself is fine, I just personally don't care too much for the backstory. If you do want to keep it vague, I would only put in her more recent accomplishments like what did she do in the last few years to make herself stand out, what is her biggest accomplishment, basically what is her story from the last few years then as we go with the Rp, we learn more about her and her story just like how I plan on doing the same for my character.

Honestly, if it had been an option i´d just not have put a backstory, but it was required. I can put in recent achievements, its just that she is very special and well, not common to the people around these parts and that is where the rumors, partly very elaborate, come from. If its different, people will talk, then take what other people said and continue it and that goes on.
Recent achievements would mostly just be kills on high priority targets for mercenaries.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Eh, there aren't really any Elven Tribes, the only ones that can come close are Wood Elves or Dark Elves with their varied nations/kingdoms.

High elves are pretty much like some of the most civilized people in the world.

Besides, I personally don't care for vague backstories unless there is a good reason for them character wise. And that's a very elaborate rumor if I must say so myself. The character itself is fine, I just personally don't care too much for the backstory. If you do want to keep it vague, I would only put in her more recent accomplishments like what did she do in the last few years to make herself stand out, what is her biggest accomplishment, basically what is her story from the last few years then as we go with the Rp, we learn more about her and her story just like how I plan on doing the same for my character.

I edited the last part to include a bit more of the last events around her, so i kept the rumor, but also have what you suggested. ^^

 

[Zane]

Will be posting very soon.
The Fluffiest Floof

 

[Zane]

I'm on weekend now so I'm able to post quite often.

 

[Pryno]

I will reply as soon as I can.

ShakinMcBacon

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Aight, i will post soon as well.

Archdemon Bakuyoshi Are the changes i made to her past alright? I´d just like to keep the rumor part, because that gives her something people can refer to. Also it is part of her reputation, that´s part of why i´d like to keep it

 

[Zane]

I'll be posting tonight or tomorrow before work.

 

[Archdemon]

I'm back from IRL stuff, I'll be posting soon peeps!

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

I already thought you had left us for good. both of you two. Happy to hear you did not and happily awaiting your post.

 

[Zane]

Im still here too. Just on a 8 day workweek.. today is the last one though, then a long weekend. ♡

 

[Archdemon]

I already thought you had left us for good. both of you two. Happy to hear you did not and happily awaiting your post.

Yeah no, I still wanna do this but I've been like super busy and Baku has been waiting on me.

Might still be busy since my mom had surgery and I have to take care of her for the week until she recovers.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Yeah no, I still wanna do this but I've been like super busy and Baku has been waiting on me.

Might still be busy since my mom had surgery and I have to take care of her for the week until she recovers.

Dont feelm rushed, im just glad to hear from you, you kinda disappeared out of nowhere.

 

[Zane]

Man that took a while. Sorry The Fluffiest Floof . I'm back with a vengeance, only work two days this week so I'm ready to go.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Man that took a while. Sorry The Fluffiest Floof . I'm back with a vengeance, only work two days this week so I'm ready to go.

Ah don't you worry friend. My reply might take till later today or tomorrow, but after that i am all good to go as well. Im currently on a trip to Munich so my chances to post are rare. ^^

 

[Zane]

Ah don't you worry friend. My reply might take till later today or tomorrow, but after that i am all good to go as well. Im currently on a trip to Munich so my chances to post are rare. ^^

I'm jealous! Every time I plan a trip le gets in the way. >>
Canceled my Vietnam trip twice now...
Anywho, no rush Kitten. Enjoy your trip and post when you can! Thanks for letting me know. ♡