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The God-Emperor of Mankind
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Fantasy The Calm after War Characters
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Paint The Wind
gay
Be nice!
Best Trekkie.
Purging heretics since the 41st millenium
Yes be nice...
...but Your right. It is quite broken.
I created the character to specifically counter Vathomir and characters with mithril equipment
...but Your right. It is quite broken.
I created the character to specifically counter Vathomir and characters with mithril equipment
Kylesar1
This is my loudest bork
Making a character specifically to counter another is called metagaming and is a no go in most RP. It's like looking at someone's pokemon team and making one that'll beat that.
Mithril is not that strong. If anything, it's just another metal to make weaponry and armor. You're essentially using a sledgehammer against a fly. There are plenty of ways to counter good armor. For me personally, I give my characters a spell called Stillpiercer to pierce armor
There is plenty of action, but not to that level
Best Trekkie.
Purging heretics since the 41st millenium
Are you going off of the Lord of the rings trilogy or not? Cause I am.
Best Trekkie.
Purging heretics since the 41st millenium
Then technically specifically countering in real life is also against the rules
The Fabulous Emerald
It's never illogical to be fabulous
erm...no? whatever gave you that impression? this rp has never once said that it is based of any fandoms.
Kylesar1
This is my loudest bork
In the RP world, it's all too common to see some character prepared for any and every situation ever
It eliminates originality. Plus, in your case, you've made a RACE that counters it. It's not like IRL where you fight someone, learn their equipment and take stuff to counter it. Your character is a counter first and a character second
Kallo
Member...ish
BASIC INFORMATION
Name: Xonrot
Aliases: Iron horse.
Age: 87 years
Gender: Male
Race: Draconian: The draconian shifter is a species that has formed as the blood of dragons and other species have intertwined over many generations, their blood being what some would call the perfect mixture. As they have the same links to the arcane world as a dragon, while the same ability to function fully in a land barren of energy. They are naturals at magic and commonly take up a class similar to the spellsword. With a slight catch, every once in a while they can turn into their dragon form at will, though it takes time to recover from such a transformation and they must return to their normal form by the end of a four hour period.
Class: Dragon Knight.
PERSONAL
Sexuality: Straight
High Concept: A giant youngling.
Character Alignment: Chaos good
Relatives: None known
Organizations\Affiliations: No-one.
Personality: His personality is one that is hard to examine. As at times he can be among the most serious people one could know. While other times he could be the largest fool you know. Though he does try to stay neutral at all times. He is also at times curious about the world around him. Especially should he see anywhere he hasn't been before.
Bio: His family was one where few people even heard of them, though rumor has it that they where killed in battle and he was sent to an orphanage that was fairly far away. Where he was slow to grow compared to others, as eventually he was hidden from others until a new person took over the orphanage. Allowing him to surface again as he spent an easy twenty years in the 'backroom'. Looking much alike a mid-teenager...Though he had a few aspects where he would have to wear long sleeve shirts and pants constantly.
PHYSICAL
Appearance: He stands at about 5'8 currently, his skin being fairly tan as he normally wears a cloak which covers his torso and most of his legs. Falling short at just about the knees where his pants continue on to cover his skin down to his feet. Which are covered by a pair of leather boots that allow for decent maneuverability with decent protection. As his face has a few sharp features that give away his bloodline to anyone well versed in his species. As his ears end in slight points with a few ridges built into them which don't quite look right. Though under his cloak on his arms and torso to his feet are scales which work much like that of a true dragon. His hands now covered in gloves which hide away his hands which have nails that are fairly sharp, almost like the claws of a lion. His jawline being well built and somewhat rigid with his teeth being noticeably sharper than a normal mans. His skin looking as if it had scales somewhat meshed in the lower layer of his skin.
Weapons & Armor: A spear that reaches out to five feet.
His armor is his own scales...They are as strong as iron easily and protect with extreme efficiency against slashing blows.
Items & Personal Belongings: A special stone he holds...Helps to make his transformations easier.
Skills & Abilities: He can surprisingly stalk nearly silently. While he has a slight silver tongue when he wants to use it.
Spells & Magic: Shapeshift: He can transform into the form of his bloodline. A transformation which is normally extremely taxing on his body and has a limit of use being once every few days and only lasts for a few hours.
Fire breath: He can summon forth the flames from his dragon form in his 'true' form once every few minutes. The flames are only hot enough to burn leather and heat iron armor up to the point where it's uncomfortable to hold.
Aura: He possesses a weak aura which surrounds him in light holy energy. Being more or less only enough to help protect him from weaker dark magic and disrupting weak undead around him. Other stronger dark or evil creatures would be made uncomfortable or in slight pain when in his presence.
Weaknesses: While he may seem otherwise. He is fairly unexperienced with true combat. Should he fall into a full out battle he may make many mistakes when it starts to 'dragon'.
As his pride is one of a weak stature as well. As should one managed to make him doubt himself it would cause a full decline on his effectiveness.
He is extremely untrained in the use of his holy energies. As they constantly pour from him, giving a slight reminder of what he is exactly to anyone that could read auras or the like.
FLUFF (With peanut butter or naw?)
Hobbies: (to be found out)
Quote\s: (Notable things that the character has said, that may show off their personality or speech type)
Theme:
Other:
Name: Xonrot
Aliases: Iron horse.
Age: 87 years
Gender: Male
Race: Draconian: The draconian shifter is a species that has formed as the blood of dragons and other species have intertwined over many generations, their blood being what some would call the perfect mixture. As they have the same links to the arcane world as a dragon, while the same ability to function fully in a land barren of energy. They are naturals at magic and commonly take up a class similar to the spellsword. With a slight catch, every once in a while they can turn into their dragon form at will, though it takes time to recover from such a transformation and they must return to their normal form by the end of a four hour period.
Class: Dragon Knight.
PERSONAL
Sexuality: Straight
High Concept: A giant youngling.
Character Alignment: Chaos good
Relatives: None known
Organizations\Affiliations: No-one.
Personality: His personality is one that is hard to examine. As at times he can be among the most serious people one could know. While other times he could be the largest fool you know. Though he does try to stay neutral at all times. He is also at times curious about the world around him. Especially should he see anywhere he hasn't been before.
Bio: His family was one where few people even heard of them, though rumor has it that they where killed in battle and he was sent to an orphanage that was fairly far away. Where he was slow to grow compared to others, as eventually he was hidden from others until a new person took over the orphanage. Allowing him to surface again as he spent an easy twenty years in the 'backroom'. Looking much alike a mid-teenager...Though he had a few aspects where he would have to wear long sleeve shirts and pants constantly.
PHYSICAL
Appearance: He stands at about 5'8 currently, his skin being fairly tan as he normally wears a cloak which covers his torso and most of his legs. Falling short at just about the knees where his pants continue on to cover his skin down to his feet. Which are covered by a pair of leather boots that allow for decent maneuverability with decent protection. As his face has a few sharp features that give away his bloodline to anyone well versed in his species. As his ears end in slight points with a few ridges built into them which don't quite look right. Though under his cloak on his arms and torso to his feet are scales which work much like that of a true dragon. His hands now covered in gloves which hide away his hands which have nails that are fairly sharp, almost like the claws of a lion. His jawline being well built and somewhat rigid with his teeth being noticeably sharper than a normal mans. His skin looking as if it had scales somewhat meshed in the lower layer of his skin.
Weapons & Armor: A spear that reaches out to five feet.
His armor is his own scales...They are as strong as iron easily and protect with extreme efficiency against slashing blows.
Items & Personal Belongings: A special stone he holds...Helps to make his transformations easier.
Skills & Abilities: He can surprisingly stalk nearly silently. While he has a slight silver tongue when he wants to use it.
Spells & Magic: Shapeshift: He can transform into the form of his bloodline. A transformation which is normally extremely taxing on his body and has a limit of use being once every few days and only lasts for a few hours.
Fire breath: He can summon forth the flames from his dragon form in his 'true' form once every few minutes. The flames are only hot enough to burn leather and heat iron armor up to the point where it's uncomfortable to hold.
Aura: He possesses a weak aura which surrounds him in light holy energy. Being more or less only enough to help protect him from weaker dark magic and disrupting weak undead around him. Other stronger dark or evil creatures would be made uncomfortable or in slight pain when in his presence.
Weaknesses: While he may seem otherwise. He is fairly unexperienced with true combat. Should he fall into a full out battle he may make many mistakes when it starts to 'dragon'.
As his pride is one of a weak stature as well. As should one managed to make him doubt himself it would cause a full decline on his effectiveness.
He is extremely untrained in the use of his holy energies. As they constantly pour from him, giving a slight reminder of what he is exactly to anyone that could read auras or the like.
FLUFF (With peanut butter or naw?)
Hobbies: (to be found out)
Quote\s: (Notable things that the character has said, that may show off their personality or speech type)
Theme:
Other:
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Kylesar1
This is my loudest bork
Nice work
The only thing I need you to change is the Race. It can all be summed up with the Race Draconian, as you're not the first half Dragon made.
Accepted though
Kallo
Member...ish
I has it fixed now then... :3 Anyways...Is it fine if I add spells over time as he learns new ones?
Kylesar1
This is my loudest bork
Of course.
Scarlett-Wulf
Four Thousand Club
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LORE
BASIC INFORMATION
Name: Alexandra Snow
Aliases: Lex of the Rose, Lex, Alex.
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Race: Succubus
Class: Assassin
PERSONAL
Sexuality: no preference
High Concept: A silver tongued harlet who gets more out of killing than the life she steals.
Character Alignment: Neutral Evil
Relatives: no living relatives
Organizations\Affiliations: Hidden Petals
Personality: Alexandra is a strong willed individual with a silver laced tongue and strength of mind to kill without batting an eye. While her looks are one part of her natural ability to get in close she is more than skilled with her choice of weapon, as long as she can keep her opponent at a slight distance. Her techniques still rely on her beauty though, what she is willing to do to get to a target but like all assassins there is a point when she is vulnerable, if she is recognized or found at when she is setting a honey trap it leaves her wide open. While being flexible, quick witted and precise she isn’t physically strong.
Bio: Alexandra was taken by the leader of the Hidden pedals out of mercy for killing her parents and was raised by the same man. While being taught everything that he had known she was also taugh how to act in a noble manner as well as how to perform if the need arose to deal with a target. Just as the art of a silent kill was taught to her she was also given normal and advanced schooling to fit in on any assignment. On her twentieth birthday when he training had finished she made her first kill and was given her first tattoo, which was customary in the group. By twenty five she had already killed more than twenty targets, all without leaving a trace that she was even there. Yet upon finishing a mission that year she had received news that their leader had passed away, which upon returning to their hideout left her feeling vulnerable for the first time, no successor had been named yet, a trial and vote had to be held first. In the end of the trial Alexandra had lost to the final opponent and was voted down due to her lack of experience. Nobly accepting the position she was granted the title of second as well as her former master and leaders scythe.
PHYSICAL
Appearance:
Weapons & Armor: scythe above as well as leather vambrances and leggings
Items & Personal Belongings: a silver anklet with roses and thorns etched into it.
Skills & Abilities: pickpocketing, lockpicking, sneaking.
Spells & Magic: Crimson Dervish: a volley of red energy slashed sent out from her scythe.
Attract: a spell used to entice, manipulate and loosen up a target through eye contact or a kiss.
Strengthen: a spell used put a barrier on her body to lessen or absorb an attack spells damage based on the strength of the spell.
Summon weapon: just as it says she can summon her scythe regardless of her location.
Gear exchange: she can change her clothing based on what she has the spell bound to back at the base.
Weaknesses: Has a tendency to get emotionally attached to those near the target or the target themselves. Her obsession with blood. Being physically warn out after “tricking” her opponents into bed and draining them, she’s barely able to move.
FLUFF (Optional)
Hobbies: If she isn’t drinking or relaxing in the sun she spends the rest of her time feeding on those she picks up in bars or helping out at orphanages in small and major towns/cities.
Quote\s: (Notable things that the character has said, that may show off their personality or speech type)
Theme:
Other:
IC
OOC
CS
LORE
BASIC INFORMATION
Name: Alexandra Snow
Aliases: Lex of the Rose, Lex, Alex.
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Race: Succubus
Class: Assassin
PERSONAL
Sexuality: no preference
High Concept: A silver tongued harlet who gets more out of killing than the life she steals.
Character Alignment: Neutral Evil
Relatives: no living relatives
Organizations\Affiliations: Hidden Petals
Personality: Alexandra is a strong willed individual with a silver laced tongue and strength of mind to kill without batting an eye. While her looks are one part of her natural ability to get in close she is more than skilled with her choice of weapon, as long as she can keep her opponent at a slight distance. Her techniques still rely on her beauty though, what she is willing to do to get to a target but like all assassins there is a point when she is vulnerable, if she is recognized or found at when she is setting a honey trap it leaves her wide open. While being flexible, quick witted and precise she isn’t physically strong.
Bio: Alexandra was taken by the leader of the Hidden pedals out of mercy for killing her parents and was raised by the same man. While being taught everything that he had known she was also taugh how to act in a noble manner as well as how to perform if the need arose to deal with a target. Just as the art of a silent kill was taught to her she was also given normal and advanced schooling to fit in on any assignment. On her twentieth birthday when he training had finished she made her first kill and was given her first tattoo, which was customary in the group. By twenty five she had already killed more than twenty targets, all without leaving a trace that she was even there. Yet upon finishing a mission that year she had received news that their leader had passed away, which upon returning to their hideout left her feeling vulnerable for the first time, no successor had been named yet, a trial and vote had to be held first. In the end of the trial Alexandra had lost to the final opponent and was voted down due to her lack of experience. Nobly accepting the position she was granted the title of second as well as her former master and leaders scythe.
PHYSICAL
Appearance:
Weapons & Armor: scythe above as well as leather vambrances and leggings
Items & Personal Belongings: a silver anklet with roses and thorns etched into it.
Skills & Abilities: pickpocketing, lockpicking, sneaking.
Spells & Magic: Crimson Dervish: a volley of red energy slashed sent out from her scythe.
Attract: a spell used to entice, manipulate and loosen up a target through eye contact or a kiss.
Strengthen: a spell used put a barrier on her body to lessen or absorb an attack spells damage based on the strength of the spell.
Summon weapon: just as it says she can summon her scythe regardless of her location.
Gear exchange: she can change her clothing based on what she has the spell bound to back at the base.
Weaknesses: Has a tendency to get emotionally attached to those near the target or the target themselves. Her obsession with blood. Being physically warn out after “tricking” her opponents into bed and draining them, she’s barely able to move.
FLUFF (Optional)
Hobbies: If she isn’t drinking or relaxing in the sun she spends the rest of her time feeding on those she picks up in bars or helping out at orphanages in small and major towns/cities.
Quote\s: (Notable things that the character has said, that may show off their personality or speech type)
Theme:
Other:
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The Fabulous Emerald
It's never illogical to be fabulous
Best Trekkie.
have you actually bothered to read the lore/scenario? you clearly haven't. not to mention that character is OP as balls
The Fabulous Emerald
It's never illogical to be fabulous
WHAT? 'oh no, you misunderstand. it can slice through pretty much everything but it can't cut through atoms. that would be silly.' do you even know what obsidian is - wait, what am i saying. you don't. you like to make up absolutely ridiculous science, even by a magical setting's standards, in an attempt to validate OP characters. not to mention last i RP with you, you powerplayed to high hell.
Kylesar1
, i am usually fairly accepting/passive of/about characters but that's two characters now that he thinks he can get away with and i can guarantee even if he was accepted, no-one would want to interact with him.
Best Trekkie.
Purging heretics since the 41st millenium
Better? they are gone now.
The Fabulous Emerald
It's never illogical to be fabulous
mhmm. now, i know i sound harsh, but you are trying to make characters a) do not even remotely fit in the setting, b) making characters that are virtually indestructible and have no real flaws, c) making characters specifically to counter non-OP at all characters, a form of metagaming and d) seem to not read the setting, rules, lore etc.
forgive me, but if your characters were allowed, what would stop others making them and ruining the RP? i mean, your latest character was indestructible, had machine guns, invisibility, super strength, super speed, obsidian daggers that were basically lightsabers....not to mention your first attempt. you didn't even get past the race - the fifth thing of the CS detail list - before it was rejected.
Best Trekkie.
forgive me, but if your characters were allowed, what would stop others making them and ruining the RP? i mean, your latest character was indestructible, had machine guns, invisibility, super strength, super speed, obsidian daggers that were basically lightsabers....not to mention your first attempt. you didn't even get past the race - the fifth thing of the CS detail list - before it was rejected.
Best Trekkie.
Best Trekkie.
Purging heretics since the 41st millenium
No his weaknesses are obsidian and magic as that is what can kill him
The Fabulous Emerald
It's never illogical to be fabulous
really? first off, as opposed to a normal person? secondly, how can a mage see him, let alone hit him, if they are invisible and with super speed?
The Fabulous Emerald
It's never illogical to be fabulous
and, i know you. You will metagame/powerplay to the moon and back before you take part in an actual fight.
Best Trekkie.
Purging heretics since the 41st millenium
I'm sorry I just assumed that you would understand that mages could see him because they were using magically enhanced eyesight.
Best Trekkie.
Purging heretics since the 41st millenium
sorry if that sounded rude
The Fabulous Emerald
It's never illogical to be fabulous
erm...based on what exactly? does it say that on CSs? you've already been assuming stuff about the RP already without permission.
Kylesar1
This is my loudest bork
You're putting me in a hell of a position. I have no idea why you're making these either OP characters, out of genre characters, or both, but you're not about to turn this RP into something it is NOT.
Technology is flintlock tops. Your character's race alone is far more advanced technologically than this entire RP world. Only one person in this RP has a gun and motorized technology. The only otherworldly beings are the Otherworldly Gods, not galactic police or something.
THIS IS NOT THE RP FOR THAT
I have to agree with Fabulous here. Everything your character could do can be done within the parameters without all that sci-fi stuff. I have no idea what your problem is with the parameters, but they won't be compromised and turned into something else.
Best Trekkie.
Purging heretics since the 41st millenium
okay yes ma'm
