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Fantasy Super-Delinquents

Look I'll go and re do my post, be more clear next time please. My anger isn't directly aimed at what everyone has done. I am in a fowl mood and took it out on you. I apologize @AlphaDraco
 
Well so far my character has killed a but load of people. @AlphaDraco and jphis character hunted mine down and "killed him" there was a muderer at the orphanage, a kid died and we are all near a church. So just jump in if you want!
 
TheMadHatter44 said:

Joe Delia Jones






Heroes seemed to get stronger by the day, this light user got the better of him this time. He was weak now, hia body hurt from the burning away of his shadow form. In tjat state he was made of shadows, he could move alomg walls, he could blend in with any depth of shadows. He was unsure the full extent of his powers other than what he had so far been able to do. He did however know that when night feel, he would be king of the streets. His power would be unmatched i. The depth of night, he could use his other forms with ease.


Joe cracked his neck as he he rounded another corner. Sewage was still raining down off the side of buildings from the females attack. He avoided a hunk of shit as it fell from the horn of a gargoyle. It made a loud "plop" as it hit the sidewalk. He needed to make his own team of villains, he force of evil greater than anything seen since the Nazi regime. He had some thoughts but it would be better if he did things on his own at the moment. He had no one he could trust.



His next target was the power plant, he was going to take out the power in order to ,ake the city pitch black tonight. The shadow of the earth would be his power, he would drown that dame hero in true darkness and snuff out his light, like he did so many others.
In your text you said you were in shadow form. You weren't in human form when I attacked
 
That is not a t all what i meant, i meant when tou surrounded him with your copies and the burning of his shadow form. He feels the pain of the shadows being burned away from him it like his flesh
 
Then why were you talking about being made of shadows and blending in with any shadows? That had nothing to do with the current situation unless you were using the form to escape. You have to be more clear with your post.
 
Yes, i made a mistake, chill. I was explaining what he cpukd do i his shadow form. Yes ot was congruent to the situation, its to let the read know how hw can use it.
 
I did in the last paragraph of my post. Go re-read mupy character wouldn't be able to see where it came from but ita mentioned.
 
Shouldn't you have had that in the Power description? Also, you said 'in that form' immediately after talking of the current state you are in. Naturally, that would be referring back to it unless you specifically state what form you are talking about.
 
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Shadow Stalker


Aka Joe Dalia Jones


The light user had blinded him, he could feel himself cut off from any other shadows besides the ones already surrounding him. His sword was so easily deflected and rightfully so, he lacked the skills of proper swordsmen ship. He had always focused om brute force rather tuan skill. As he opened his eyes, he saw copies of the hero surronding him, his large shadow form slowly being melted away by waves of light. His only choice was to pull in all the loose strands of shadows in around him, making a solid demonic looking suite of shadows. He pulled in the large form and settled for a more streamline, faster form.


He was silent as he stood there, his shadows now in a solid state. He looked at the hero, a smile creeping across his face. He looked up jist in time to see a female form, this was his chance to escape and plan for his next attack. He dodged the girls fist and used the force of the impact to jump high into the. The copies of the gilded knight just stood there like mindless dolls, must of been a scare tactic?


He was now high in the air, useing the shadows around him to make a lonf claw hand grab the nearest building. "Till we meet agian, i will end your sorry lives!" He swung away into an ally way. He rounded a corner and disappeared from view. He dropped his shadow form and rejoined the people on the street a block over. He would lay low for a bit, he needed to figure out a way to get the advantage.+"


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Yes, but once again, that was a seperate post. You specifically have to refer to the form you are talking about when using 'that', otherwise you mean the last thing talked about, and the last form you talked about was your burnt form.
 
Ya my actual character'sflesh was burned because of the light burning away his shadow form. Just drop it dude i already apologized.
 
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@TheMadHatter44 @AlphaDraco


Girls, girls, you're both pretty!


But seriously, I'm glad you guys managed to get the fight to a reasonable conclusion and that this OoC argument reached an end.


TMH, your character just happened to be a perfect excuse for my character to play hero, and since the Gilded Knight is an ACTUAL hero, Joe was never in any real danger of being killed off...


Though I gotta admit it kind of annoyed me that you started off the RP with just senseless bloodshed without anything having the time to be established. I feel like that was rushed, but that's just my 2 cents on the matter, I'm not actually mad at you for it since it managed to come to an end.
 
Meanwhile, I'm waiting for Blitzkrieg. I don't even know why Laila thought Joe was the guy who killed the guy on the street when she was the first one who realized that it was Solomon who did it.
 
This RP is some kinda superpowered Cluedo.


"Joe killed the random bystander using shadow claws of doom in the side alley."
 

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