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Oh Asya is so gonna get Alarik to teach Adriana how to fight >]
HAH! With his stubbornness and demeanor, she'll have a better chance convincing him to play ring a ring a roses with kids. But I'm totally excited to see thier interactions with that. :D
 
HAH! With his stubbornness and demeanor, she'll have a better chance convincing him to play ring a ring a roses with kids. But I'm totally excited to see thier interactions with that. :D
Bahaha, he's totally gonna become Adriana's eternally-frustrated demon instructor, and when she comes home covered in bruises Asya will be like "Good, you need to toughen up' xD
 
Bahaha, he's totally gonna become Adriana's eternally-frustrated demon instructor, and when she comes home covered in bruises Asya will be like "Good, you need to toughen up' xD
He'll be REALLY tough, but only for her sake because it'll benefit her. It's a kind of morbid selflessness in a way.
 
Almost finished everyone, I just have to do his backstory. Which wont take long
Looks good so far, though rather than "Lo'dianc Cal rarely comes out of Alarik's body" it would be more accurate to say "Lo'dianc Cal rarely materializes"
"He can shape his blood into tendrils... trap opponents in a prison of blood." I don't recall us discussing that last part, but as for now Rik can already more than enough so that can come later.
The iron deficiency part is great, caught me off guard.
"Expert Martial Artist" It's fair to say he can fight and has experience, but expert is too much. I'm trying to emphasis humble beginnings. Though a superb strategist is fine, I don't think that niche is filled yet.
And y'know, I was gonna continue praising the iron deficiency by following it with "at least you didn't give him hemophilia" but no, the mad man fucking did it.

Can't wait for the backstory!
 
I'm not sure exactly how Hawkshaw will feel about Rik, need to see him in action first. But I'm confident that Bask won't like him at all. A clash of personalities.

Not sure why I hadn't thought of theme songs before, but it seems appropriate.

(Yes he's partially based off the song)
 
Looks good so far, though rather than "Lo'dianc Cal rarely comes out of Alarik's body" it would be more accurate to say "Lo'dianc Cal rarely materializes"
"He can shape his blood into tendrils... trap opponents in a prison of blood." I don't recall us discussing that last part, but as for now Rik can already more than enough so that can come later.
The iron deficiency part is great, caught me off guard.
"Expert Martial Artist" It's fair to say he can fight and has experience, but expert is too much. I'm trying to emphasis humble beginnings. Though a superb strategist is fine, I don't think that niche is filled yet.
And y'know, I was gonna continue praising the iron deficiency by following it with "at least you didn't give him hemophilia" but no, the mad man fucking did it.

Can't wait for the backstory!
I was using an already existing character I made, so I probably missed that. I'll go change that.

Well how about I remove the superp strategic part and replace it with the expert martial artist? Or just leave the superp strategic part.

And I'll go make the necessary corrections with the wrong terms I used.
 
Another thing to note is that Alarik has Hypoalgesia. Meaning he has diminished pain in response to stimulation that typically produces pain. And because of this he naturally has a higher pain threshold than others.

Another thing to note is that Alarik possesses the Rh-null blood type, or the "Golden Blood". Blood is considered Rh-null if it lacks all of the 61 possible antigens in the Rh system. This not only makes it rare, but this also means it can be accepted by anyone with a rare blood type within the Rh system.
 
I was using an already existing character I made, so I probably missed that. I'll go change that.

Well how about I remove the superp strategic part and replace it with the expert martial artist? Or just leave the superp strategic part.

And I'll go make the necessary corrections with the wrong terms I used.
Still no on the martial artist.
 
Probably George Probably George Finished, and also edited some things, mainly on his weaknesses part and extra info
 
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Third wave only started about two months ago so that's how long, at most, any of our characters can have been anchors for.
Alright, I changed the years into weeks, is it good now?
 
Alright, I changed the years into weeks, is it good now?
Just a couple little things,
- How did he become anchored? It isn't a latent ability, it's symbiosis with an enigma.
- As an anchor he wouldn't have been thrown in jail, either drafted or executed.
"There's only 2 good types of anchors. Dead ones and the ones that make them dead."

But aside from that it looks fine (though I'll double-check when I get on my pc.)


Let it be he; Volatile Alarik, the ichor.
 
I'll work on a mega-post to get Hawkshaw's and Bask's turn, as well as introducing elements and plot hooks.
After that things will be shorter and more detailed. (Actual investigating this time.)
 
Just a couple little things,
- How did he become anchored? It isn't a latent ability, it's symbiosis with an enigma.
- As an anchor he wouldn't have been thrown in jail, either drafted or executed.
"There's only 2 good types of anchors. Dead ones and the ones that make them dead."

But aside from that it looks fine (though I'll double-check when I get on my pc.)


Let it be he; Volatile Alarik, the ichor.
1. I'll fix that
2. What is drafted then, how would that process work with him?
3. I don't understand, when I said why the government chose him I used "presumably" and continued with "whatever the reason may be", it was an outside perspective on his backstory, which was evident in the 3rd person POV. But if it suits you, I'll change that as well.
 
1. I'll fix that
2. What is drafted then, how would that process work with him?
3. I don't understand, when I said why the government chose him I used "presumably" and continued with "whatever the reason may be", it was an outside perspective on his backstory, which was evident in the 3rd person POV. But if it suits you, I'll change that as well.
Drafting is explained in other CS's. Your identity as an anchor somehow reaches the office of internal affairs and you're captured, most likely by an exterminator.
I didn't know it was third person though, I thought you were writing it past tense. My mistake. But for clarity let's avoid ambiguity in the CS.
 
FINAL CAST LIST! Woot!

-Curious Hawkshaw, the spade (played by Probably George Probably George )
-Benign Bask, the quake (played by Probably George Probably George )
-Apprehensive Theresa, the shade (played by @Spoiled Bread )
-Ingenuous Adriana, the evolved (played by Ayama Ayama )
-Sanguine Notti, the empath (played by @BuggaBoo )
-Exhaustive Gray, the omen (played by @BittyBobcat )
-Gold-hearted Evelyn, the siren (played by Lost Echo Lost Echo )
-Diligent Ionna, the forge (played by @Mineczka )
-Sadistic Fayze, the armed (played by @Gaius Danius Griinia )
-Volatile Alarik, the Ichor (played by Xen6n Xen6n )

With the assistance of:
-Unscrupulous Asya, the shackle-maker (played by Ayama Ayama )
-Cocksure Vasoine, the glistening (played by Probably George Probably George )
-Reticent Haken, the warden (played by Probably George Probably George )
-Abashed Warpae, the liquifier (played by Probably George Probably George )

How's errybody doing~?
 
ALRIGHTY, tax season is finally done so that's a massive load of my shoulders. I'd manage to put in bits and pieces of the upcoming post but now I'll have plenty of time to devote to it. I'd say I'm probably 40% done, just need the other half and to proof read a few times.
Sorry I hadn't been checking in, end of tax season is very stressful and busy.
New post soon(ish).
 
Whoops. I missed your "everyone check-in" post, Ayama Ayama . I'm not dead yet, and am ready to post for....(I definitely had to look her name up again:-_-lines:) Evelyn.
 

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