Riddle78
Four Thousand Club
First of all,Firebreather,welcome to RPNation. I'd like it if you stuck to the character skeleton exaclty,as there are several sections that can be relegated to the power origin,and several areas are confusingly laid out. I'd preffer you give every individual power it's own section (sections being Power,Power Explanation,Power Limit,and Practical Examples),in order to minimize confusion. I don't need to know your character's allignment;that much will be made plain in the RP. Furthermore,I don't need to know what your occult type is...Whatever that is. All that matters is that your character is fundamentaly above human limits in some way. Finally,your attachments are sorta broken. Might I reccomend you use the embed image function? The button is part of the reply editing tools,right beside the linking tools.