Fantasy Seiunita OOC

[Historical Storyteller]

That's your opinion.

Not really though, you're more of a drone to Eleph and stick to his opinions like a bug sticks to a windshield.

That's your opinion too.

We're similar and we're friends, but there are times when I call him off whenever he really gets out of line. Otherwise, I do like to indulge in his fantasies and some of his weirdness, but I think its fun!

 

[Historical Storyteller]

Lacklustre pacing, lack of tension, poor choice of words, extreme 'would' syndrome, no mundane symbolism, no underlying themes, no cool characterization, Stephen Hawking dialogue.

NAILED IT!

 

[Elephantom]

That's your opinion.

Not really though, you're more of a drone to Eleph and stick to his opinions like a bug sticks to a windshield.

Hey, careful there, buddy, we're the only reason you're still even here. Heis is my pal, and it would be in your best interest of you were to abstain from insulting him, Mac.

 

[Elephantom]

That's your opinion too.

We're similar and we're friends, but there are times when I call him off whenever he really gets out of line. Otherwise, I do like to indulge in his fantasies and some of his weirdness, but I think its fun!

In nice words, yes.

 

[Elephantom]

NAILED IT!

There's more too, but I'd rather not indulge any further.

 

[BubbleButt]

Lacklustre pacing, lack of tension, poor choice of words, extreme 'would' syndrome, no mundane symbolism, no underlying themes, no cool characterization, Stephen Hawking dialogue.

Doesn't Stephen Hawking talk with a text to speech? Or was there a time where there was a Stephen Hawking stereotype WITHOUT the TTS?

I also fixed the "would" problem and only used it a couple times in a post.

As for "lack of tension", you personally told me to keep it down a notch because it was the beginning.

 

[Historical Storyteller]

Hey, careful there, buddy, we're the only reason you're still even here. Heis is my pal, and it would be in your best interest of you were to abstain from insulting him, Mac.

. . . . Well . . . Damn, I nearly forgot about that.

Its really hard for me to like Bubblebutt, I know that he's a teenager and he's got a long way to go and that I have a lot of my own flaws, but Bubblebutt keeps being a damned ass. I don't know why he acts like that. Is there something we don't know about him?

 

[BubbleButt]

Hey, careful there, buddy, we're the only reason you're still even here. Heis is my pal, and it would be in your best interest of you were to abstain from insulting him, Mac.

I don't see it as an insult, unless he decides to turn in to a softy on me and starts crying.

. . . . Well . . . Damn, I nearly forgot about that.

Its really hard for me to like Bubblebutt, I know that he's a teenager and he's got a long way to go and that I have a lot of my own flaws, but Bubblebutt keeps being a damned ass. I don't know why he acts like that. Is there something we don't know about him?

I'm me, if you don't like it or my personality, kick me out and go cry in your corner. Otherwise, man the fuck up.

 

[Elephantom]

Doesn't Stephen Hawking talk with a text to speech? Or was there a time where there was a Stephen Hawking stereotype WITHOUT the TTS?

I also fixed the "would" problem and only used it a couple times in a post.

As for "lack of tension", you personally told me to keep it down a notch because it was the beginning.

Exactly. Whenever I read your posts, I imagine Hawking talking with TTS. Female version.

But it has scarred your reputation forever...

Mate, you don't need a cataclysmic amount of action to bring out the tension — you've got to get the audience asking questions, not you questioning them.

 

[Elephantom]

I don't see it as an insult, unless he decides to turn in to a softy on me and starts crying.


I'm me, if you don't like it or my personality, kick me out and go cry in your corner. Otherwise, man the fuck up.

We're already man enough, kid, more man than you could ever hope to be now. Keep your mood swings in check, and your eyes on the prize, Mac.

 

[Historical Storyteller]

Doesn't Stephen Hawking talk with a text to speech? Or was there a time where there was a Stephen Hawking stereotype WITHOUT the TTS?

I also fixed the "would" problem and only used it a couple times in a post.

As for "lack of tension", you personally told me to keep it down a notch because it was the beginning.

I don't know about the Stephen Hawking thing and I think you did a good job at fixing the "would" problem, and you did blast a sun bolt at someone in the Prancing Squig... so you did provide some tension in the story.

Still, I don't think your Breen character isn't that good yet. I'll just wait and see what happens next.

I don't see it as an insult, unless he decides to turn in to a softy on me and starts crying.

That is exactly the reason why you caused so much problems in this chat. You're being such a hardass and shitting on everybody with that attitude.

I'm me, if you don't like it or my personality, kick me out and go cry in your corner. Otherwise, man the fuck up.

Damn, you're so... passive-aggressive.

 

[Elephantom]

Otherwise, man the fuck up.

And you're really testing my patience, kid, REALLY.

 

[Historical Storyteller]

Exactly. Whenever I read your posts, I imagine Hawking talking with TTS. Female version.

But it has scarred your reputation forever...

Mate, you don't need a cataclysmic amount of action to bring out the tension — you've got to get the audience asking questions, not you questioning them.

Ah, didn't see that. Thanks, Eleph.

We're already man enough, kid, more man than you could ever hope to be now. Keep your mood swings in check, and your eyes on the prize, Mac.

And you're really testing my patience, kid, REALLY.

Meh, it isn't the end of the world for him. He's still 14 and he's got a lot of time to mellow out eventually. If you met me a few years ago you'd be thoroughly annoyed like what's happening here with Bubbles.

 

[Elephantom]

I don't know about the Stephen Hawking thing and I think you did a good job at fixing the "would" problem, and you did blast a sun bolt at someone in the Prancing Squig... so you did provide some tension in the story.

Still, I don't think your Breen character isn't that good yet. I'll just wait and see what happens next.

Just because you blast a sun bolt at someone, doesn't provide insta-tension. It's more run-off-the-mill, to me.

That is exactly the reason why you caused so much problems in this chat. You're being such a hardass and shitting on everybody with that attitude.

And especially on me.

Damn, you're so... passive-aggressive.

That's complete aggro. He's ticking me off.

 

[Elephantom]

Ah, didn't see that. Thanks, Eleph.

Like, seriously, I sometimes turn on the TTS reader when I'm going over Bub's posts. Female version, again. He has some sort of feminine tilt to his posts...

Meh, it isn't the end of the world for him. He's still 14 and he's got a lot of time to mellow out eventually. If you met me a few years ago you'd be thoroughly annoyed like what's happening here with Bubbles.

14 is the new 34=

 

[BubbleButt]

I don't know about the Stephen Hawking thing and I think you did a good job at fixing the "would" problem, and you did blast a sun bolt at someone in the Prancing Squig... so you did provide some tension in the story.

Still, I don't think your Breen character isn't that good yet. I'll just wait and see what happens next.



That is exactly the reason why you caused so much problems in this chat. You're being such a hardass and shitting on everybody with that attitude.



Damn, you're so... passive-aggressive.

I only shit on people if I have to, we're way past that ever since the... thing.

And you're really testing my patience, kid, REALLY.

I didn't even say anything close as an attempt to piss you off and you're already getting your patience tested? Better get a ruler, because your patience is a centimeter long apparently.

Just because you blast a sun bolt at someone, doesn't provide insta-tension. It's more run-off-the-mill, to me.



And especially on me.



That's complete aggro. He's ticking me off.

I don't even target you, never have, and you're saying YOU'RE being insulted, give me a break.

Like, seriously, I sometimes turn on the TTS reader when I'm going over Bub's posts. Female version, again. He has some sort of feminine tilt to his posts...



14 is the new 34=

Every single kid who got a PS4 for Christmas says hi, go meet them and see how "34" they can be.

 

[Historical Storyteller]

Just because you blast a sun bolt at someone, doesn't provide insta-tension. It's more run-off-the-mill, to me.

Hey, we gotta start somewhere...

And especially on me.

Funny, I remember literally shitposting with you in chat now.

That's complete aggro. He's ticking me off.

Why does he have to be this way?!

Like, seriously, I sometimes turn on the TTS reader when I'm going over Bub's posts. Female version, again. He has some sort of feminine tilt to his posts...

Wha?

14 is the new 34=

OK, I'm now convinced that the End of the World is drawing near...

We're going to be overrun with teenagers and they'll be starting more wars than we could count because of their damned hormones.

 

[Historical Storyteller]

I only shit on people if I have to, we're way past that ever since the... thing.


I didn't even say anything close as an attempt to piss you off and you're already getting your patience tested? Better get a ruler, because your patience is a centimeter long apparently.


I don't even target you, never have, and you're saying YOU'RE being insulted, give me a break.


Every single kid who got a PS4 for Christmas says hi, go meet them and see how "34" they can be.

. . . . . . .

Huh, I sometimes I can't tell whether you're trying to be reasonable or trying to be a smartass.

 

[BubbleButt]

Hey, we gotta start somewhere...



Funny, I remember literally shitposting with you in chat now.



Why does he have to be this way?!



Wha?



OK, I'm now convinced that the End of the World is drawing near...

We're going to be overrun with teenagers and they'll be starting more wars than we could count because of their damned hormones.

At this point, it's probably going to happen if this conversation got leaked and people got the "Adults think we're full of shit" idea

 

[BubbleButt]

. . . . . . .

Huh, I sometimes I can't tell whether you're trying to be reasonable or trying to be a smartass.

Put on your reading glasses then, because you're obviously far-sighted if you can't see my reasoning behind my speech.

 

[Historical Storyteller]

At this point, it's probably going to happen if this conversation got leaked and people got the "Adults think we're full of shit" idea

Put on your reading glasses then, because you're obviously far-sighted if you can't see my reasoning behind my speech.

I was wrong all along, you're not being reasonable at all and you're not being a smartass.

You're just being an asshole!

 

[BubbleButt]

I was wrong all along, you're not being reasonable at all and you're not being a smartass.

You're just being an asshole!

Y'know, you could have just called me an asshole and gotten to the point instead of acting like you have autism.

 

[Elephantom]

Put on your reading glasses then, because you're obviously far-sighted if you can't see my reasoning behind my speech.

There is no reasoning, pal, insulting Heis is like insulting me. It's an adulto-collective mind that you kids won't understand, especially kids who can't write even if their life's on the line: that means you, mejasaewsar.

 

[Elephantom]

Y'know, you could have just called me an asshole and gotten to the point instead of acting like you have autism.

Again with the fucking stupid asshole-ery.

 

[Historical Storyteller]

Y'know, you could have just called me an asshole and gotten to the point instead of acting like you have autism.

I give up. All I wanted to say was that I have a problem with you acting like that, and so does everybody else. Nobody likes being talked down like that, ever, and it will destroy everything beautiful you can ever have with the people around you. Its really sad, Bubblebutt. You're not only destroying the relationships you can have with the people around you but you're also destroying yourself.