Futuristic Project Team Zero (Hero's and Martyr's)(CANCELLED:How can I improve this?)

[Church418]

(((As of now, this RP will not launch due to lack of interest. More players are needed. However, I value the input of other players. My biggest question is: Why didn't this gain the popularity I anticipated it to receive? How can I make this perfect? )))


Greetings fellow Role-Players! I've been working on this idea for a little while, and wanted to post it to the forums to see what you, the community, think.


Obviously, I want to know if Role-Playing this sounds fun to you, but I also want to know how I did on setting this up. Is it easy to read? Is it boring to read? Did it make sense? Did the "computer style format" work for you or did it suck? (Honestly, I think it might've sucked, and you can totally tell me that! ) and finally, would this be better as a standard role-play or some form of dice game? I've DM'd for a group before, but have never attempted to create a concept like it from scratch.


Anyways, without further adieu, Welcome Cadet's! Death to the Empire!

PRESIDENTIAL TERMINAL





AUGUST 6TH, 2109






WELCOME MR. PRESIDENT!



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>_ALERT! CONDITION BLACK INITIATED


>_TIME OF INITIATION: 1436/ AUGUST 6TH, 2109


>_INITIATED BY: GOVERNOR JIM CARDIN, SOUTH EAST SECTOR


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>_CONDITION BLACK: EMERGENCY COMMUNICATION ASSETS AUTHORIZED


>_PRESIDENTIAL AND VICE PRESIDENTIAL CONFIRMATION REQUIRED


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(garbled)….from the earth! My god, they’ve…..(garbled)….hit the military first then the police staish(station?)….(garbled)…..borders! for god sakes seal the borders!.....(garbled)……jammed all comm(communications?)….destroyed the cell towers! I’ve been contacted by project tee(tea?)…..zero (Project Team Zero?)….securing the civilian population……(garbled)…….[TRANSMISSION LOST]

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MEMORANDUM FOR RECORD


TO: THE PRESIDENT of UNITED OZEA and THE MEMBERS OF HIS CABINENT


FROM: GENERAL ARSON (UNITED OZEAN ARMY)


SUBJECT: THE PURPOSE OF THIS MEMORANDUM IS TO DEFINE PROJECT TEAM ZERO, THE CANDIDATES, THEIR CAPABILITIES, AND THEIR PURPOSE. THE CONTENTS OF THIS MEMORANDUM ARE OF THE HIGHEST CLASSIFICATION

1.) MR. PRESIDENT. PROJECT TEAM ZERO IS AN ALL VOLUNTEER OUTFIT OFFERED ONLY TO THE ABSOLUTE BEST IN MY ARMY. THESE INDIVIDUALS HAVE UNDERGONE AN EXTENSIVE AND GRUELING SET OF AUGMENTATIONS THAT HAVE PLACED THEM, NOT ONLY ABOVE THEIR PEERS, BUT ABOVE HUMANITY AS A WHOLE

2.)PROJECT TEAM ZERO IS OUR RESPONSE TO THE RECENT DEPLOYMENT OF THE HALENBRAAD EMPIRE'S BIOLOGICALLY ENGINEERED MECHANOIDS THAT NOW SERVE AS THE FRONT LINE OF THEIR MILITARY. WE, THE COMMAND STAFF OF THE UNITED OZEAN ARMY, BELIEVE HUMAN INSTINCT AND INGENUITY ARE KEY TO A SUCCESSFUL AND PRODUCTIVE MILITARY. AS SUCH, PROJECT TEAM ZERO CADETS ARE IN FULL COMMAND OF THEIR ACTIONS AND CAN USE THEIR AUGMENTATIONS WHEN THEY SEE FIT.

3.)SIR, THE CADETS AT PROJECT TEAM ZERO ARE THE BEST OF THE BEST IN EVERY QUALITY THAT MAKES A SUCCESSFUL WARFIGHTER, HOWEVER, EACH OF THEM ARE SPECIALLY TRAINED IN ONE OF THREE CATAGORIES:




a.)

WARRIOR

THE WARRIOR CLASS OF PROJECT ZERO ARE SOLDIERS DESIGNED SPECIFICALLY FOR SHORT TO MEDIUM RANGE COMBAT SCENERIOS. THEIR STANDARD ISSUE ARMOR IS DESIGNED IN TWO LAYERS;

• THE FIRST LAYER IS A FULL-BODY, CLIMATE CONTROLLED SUIT COMPRISED ENTIRELY OF CARBON NANOTUBES. A LIGHTWEIGHT, VIRTUALLY UNBREAKABLE MATERIAL USED IN THE CONSTRUCTION OF OUR SPACE ELEVATORS. THIS SUIT WAS DESIGNED SPECIFICALLY FOR BALLISTIC PROTECTION.
  
  
  
  
• THE OUTER LAYER COVERS THE WARRIOR'S EXTREMETIES AND VITAL ORGANS, MADE OF AMPORPHOUS METALS WITH TWICE THE STRENGTH OF STEEL. IN ADDITION, EACH SUIT IS OUTFITTED WITH A SELF-REPAIRING METAL FOAM EMERGENCY DISPERSAL SYSTEM TO QUICKLY REPAIR GRIEVOUS DAMAGES TO THE WARRIOR'S ARMOR, KEEPING HIM FULLY PROTECTED. THE OUTER LAYER WAS DESIGNED SPECIFICALLY FOR ENERGY PROTECTION.
  
  
  
  

WARRIOR'S ARE ARMED WITH THE HIGHLY CUSTOMIZABLE .21 SC M-01(SMART)LASER RIFLE. THIS RIFLE LINKS DIRECTLY TO THE WARRIOR'S COMBAT HELMET AND DISPLAYS A TARGETING RECTICLE IN THEIR HEADS UP DISPLAY (H.U.D) WITH ONLY A 0.0001% DEGREE MARGIN OF ERROR. THE .21 SOLAR CELL(SC) IS THE PRIMARY AMMUNITION FOR THIS RIFLE. THE .21 SC IS EJECTED FROM THE RIFLE UPON EXPENDATURE, BUT CAN BE COLLECTED BY THE USER AND BE FIRED AGAIN AFTER AN 8-12 HOUR RECHARGE PERIOD. UPON IMPACT, THE .21 SC RELEASES A SMALL-GRADE ELECTROMAGNETIC SHOCK WITH THE CAPABILITY OF SLOWING, STUNNING, OR PERMANENTLY DISABLING ELECTRONIC PERSONNEL OR EQUIPMENT. TO ORGANICS; THE .21 SC MAKES IMPACT WITH FLESH AT 1,700 MPH AND 400 DEGREES CELCIUS. A STANDARD CLIP HOLDS THIRTY .21 CELLS

NOTE:

THIS RIFLE HAS NOT BEEN FIELD TESTED AND HAS ONLY BEEN USED BY PROJECT TEAM ZERO CADETS FOR TRAINING PURPOSES.




FINALLY, EACH WARRIOR CLASS IS TRAINED OZEAN COMBATATIVES LEVEL 4.5. AS YOU KNOW, LEVEL 4 COMBATATIVES EMPHASIZE THE DISARMAMENT AND ELIMINATION OF AN ENEMY WITHIN SEVEN SECONDS. IN LEVEL 4.5, WARRIORS HAVE BEEN SPECIALLY TRAINED WITH MECHANOID AND ROBOTIC UNITS IN MIND.









b.)

RANGER

THE RANGER CLASS OF PROJECT ZERO IS SPECIALLY TRAINED FOR STEALTH AND LONG RANGE COMBAT SCENERIOS. LIKE WARRIORS, THEIR STANDARD ISSUE ARMOR COMES IN TWO LAYERS:

• THE FIRST LAYER IS IDENTICAL TO THE WARRIOR CLASS IN EVERY WAY, SEE ABOVE.
  
  
  
  
• THE SECOND LAYER IS THE EXPERIMENTAL CHAMELEON CARBON SUIT (CCS). A SPECIALIZED LAYER OF CARBON NANOTUBES THAT HAVE BEEN CHEMICALLY ALTERED TO BOND WITH NEARLY EVERY MATERIAL IT COMES INTO CONTACT WITH, ALLOWING THE WEARER TO BLEND IN WITH NEARLY EVERY SURFACE. IN 2105, THE CCS WAS FIELD TESTED IN THE FORT SIERRA URBAN TRAINING GROUNDS AGAINST A SQUAD OF VOLUNTEER MARINES. THE SPECIALIZED NANOTUBES SUCCESSFULLY BONDED WITH EVERY SURFACE AND THE MARINES WERE UNABLE TO LOCATE THE PROJECT ZERO RANGER IN FOUR SEPERATE "HIDE AND SEEK" MISSIONS.
  
  
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  PROJECT ZERO RANGERS ARE VULNERABLE TO ENERGIZED WEAPONRY. UNLIKE WARRIORS, RANGERS ARE NOT DESIGNED FOR EXTENDED COMBAT AND ARE EQUIPPED WITH SPEED, MANUVERABILITY, AND VERSATILITY IN MIND.
  
  
  
  

THE FOREARM OF THE CHAMELEON CARBON SUIT IS EQUIPPED WITH A PLASMA BRACER THAT CAN PROJECT A PLASMA-BASED BLADE AT THE USERS DISCRETION. THIS BLADE IS COMPOSED OF TWO PARTIALLY IONIZED 'BLADES' OF FREE MOVING ELECTRON BASED GAS HELD IN A BLADE-LIKE FORM BY TWO SMALL MAGNETIC-FIELD SOLAR GENERATORS BUILT INTO THE BRACER OF THE WEAPON. THIS PLASMA BLADE WAS DESIGNED WITH SPEED AND LETHALITY IN MIND AND CAN CUT THROUGH VIRTUALLY ANY SURFACE WITH MINOR RESISTANCE.

NOTE:

EXCESSIVE USE IN A SMALL AMOUNT OF TIME WILL EXHAUST THE GENERATORS AND REQUIRES 4-6 HOURS TO RECHARGE.

THE .34 SC SNIPER RIFLE IS THE LONG RANGE COUSIN TO THE M-01 LASER RIFLE. WITH A MAXIMUM RANGE OF 5000M AND MAXIMUM EFFECTIVE RANGE OF 3000M COMBINED WITH THE SELF-CHARGING .34 SC ROUND, NO OTHER SNIPER RIFLE CAN COMPARE. LIKE THE M-01 RIFLE, THIS SNIPER RIFLE LINKS DIRECTLY TO THE USERS H.U.D. WITH A 0.0001% MARGIN OF ERROR. THE .34 SC ROUND CAN BE FIRED AS AN "E" ROUND FOR "ELECTRONIC" OR AN "O" ROUND FOR "ORGANIC." THE E ROUND, ON IMPACT, WILL EMIT A HEAVY ELECTROMAGNETIC BLAST CAPABLE OF FRYING ANY ELECTRONIC SYSTEM, EVEN IF THEY ARE GROUNDED. THE O ROUND, ON IMPACT, WILL IGNITE ANY ORGANIC MATERIAL IT COMES INTO CONTACT WITH. A STANDARD CLIP HOLDS TWO .34 CELLS.

NOTE:

THE .34 SC SNIPER RIFLE IS LOUD AND BRIGHT WHEN FIRED, LIKELY REVEALING THE RANGER'S POSITION.




c.) HACKER

THE PROJECT ZERO HACKER IS THE ULTIMATE IN COMBAT SUPPORT. EACH HACKER IS PAIRED WITH AN A.I. THAT PROVIDES REAL TIME ANALYSIS, ASSESSMENTS, AND RECOMMENDATIONS TO PROJECT ZERO WARFIGHTERS IN AN EASY TO UNDERSTAND FORMAT. THE HACKER UTILIZES A SINGLE LAYER OF CARBON NANOTUBE INTERFACE ARMOR (C.N.I.) THAT IS STILL UNDERGOING EXPERIMENTAL TRIALS. SOMEWHAT RELATED TO THE RANGER'S "CHAMELEON" CLASS OF ARMOR, THE "INTERFACE" CLASS ALLOWS THE WEARER TO ELECTRONICALLY BOND WITH ANY TECHNOLOGY CAPABLE OF GENERATING A SIGNAL. THE SUCCESS OF THIS FUNCTION HAS BEEN UNRELIABLE, AT BEST, AND REQUIRES FURTHER REFINING.




HIGHLIGHTING ENEMIES, IDENTIFYING HIGH VALUE INDIVIDUALS, AND PRIORITIZING TARGETS ARE JUST SOME OF THE HACKER'S MANY CAPABILITIES. USING A SURGICALLY INSERTED NEURAL INTERFACE, THE A.I. AND HACKER ARE THE DEFINITION OF EFFIECIENCY AND SPEED. WHETHER IT BE A LOCAL POWER GRID, ENEMY COMM TRAFFIC, OR HEAVILY SECURED GOVERNMENT DATABASE, THE A.I. WILL IMMEDIATELY RECOGNIZE THE HACKER'S NEED AND PROVIDE ACCESS, OR THE MEANS TO GAIN ACCESS.

THE A-03 "GAZE" IS THE FIRST PROTOTYPE TO SUCCESSFULLY INTEGRATE THE USER'S AND A.I.'S MIND'S AS ONE. OUTFITTED WITH THE NEWLY ENGINEERED "HARD LIGHT" OPTIC TECHNOLOGY, THE A.I. CAN PROVIDE A VISUAL DISPLAY OF THINGS THAT ARE OTHERWISE INVISIBLE TO THE HUMAN EYE. FOR EXAMPLE: IF THE HACKER WANTED TO JAM THE SIGNAL CONNECTION BETWEEN TWO POINTS, BUT ALLOW OTHERS TO CONTINUE, THE A.I. WILL ACTIVATE THE HARD LIGHT OPTIC AND GIVE THE HACKER A VISUAL REPRESENTATION OF THE SIGNAL SPECTRUM. THEN, USING HIS OR HER FINGERS LIKE A KEYBOARD, THE HACKER CAN PHYSICALLY MANIPULATE THE SPECTRUM TO THEIR BENEFIT. THE HACKER DISPLAYED IN THE FIRST PHOTO SHOWS THE HARD LIGHT OPTIC IN ACTION.

THE MX-17 "INTERFACER" IS PROJECT TEAM ZERO'S RESPONSE TO MECHANOID, FRONT LINE, COMBATANTS AND IS ONLY EFFECTIVE AGAINST THOSE UNITS. THIS EXTREMELY EXPENSIVE HANDGUN FIRES MICRO-TRANSMITTERS THAT TRANSMIT IN THE 30GHz-300GHz RANGE, HOPPING FREQUENCIES EVERY SECOND TO AVOID JAMMING OR INTERCEPTION. UPON MAKING CONTACT WITH A MECHANOID UNIT, THE HACKER CAN TRANSMIT A SIGNAL DIRECTLY TO THE MECHANOID, IGNORING ANY FIREWALLS OR SECURITY PROGRAMMING, AND EFFECTIVELY TAKE OPERATIONAL CONTROL OF THE MECH, SO LONG AS THE HACKER CAN STAY AHEAD OF THE MECHANOIDS SELF-REPAIRING SECURITY SOFTWARE. EACH CLIP FOR THE MX-17 CAN HOLD 5 TRANSMITTERS, AND ARE EXTREMELY EXPENSIVE TO REPLACE.

THE .10 SC RECOILLESS LASER SUBMACHINE GUN IS THE HACKER'S PRIMARY WEAPON, IN THE EVENT OF IMMINENT DANGER. SHORT RANGE, LOW TO MODERATE ACCURACY, AND VERY HIGH RATE OF FIRE FIRING .10 SOLAR CELLS WHICH ARE EJECTED FROM THE SUBMACHINE GUN UPON EXPENDATURE. THESE CELLS CAN BE COLLECTED AND USED AGAIN AFTER A 2-4 HOUR RECHARGE PERIOD. A STANDARD CLIP CAN HOLD 150 CELLS.

A HACKER'S ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE IS BY FAR HIS OR HER MOST LETHAL WEAPON. UPON NEURAL INTEGRATION, A HACKER AND A.I. WILL SPEND OVER A YEAR TOGETHER (IN THE HACKER'S MIND) BEFORE BEING TESTED IN HIGH STRESS COMBAT SCENERIOS. APPROXIMATELY 22% OF NEURAL INTEGRATIONS ARE SUCCESSFUL. THESE INTEGRATIONS FAIL FOR A VARIETY OF REASONS, 3% OF FAILURES HAVE PROVEN FATAL. BUT FOR THOSE 22%, WE HAVE A RECOGNIZED AN, ARGUABLY, UNBREAKABLE BOND. THIS RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN THE HACKER AND A.I. HAS SOME OF MY STAFF CONCERNED, BUT THEIR EFFICIENCY AND CONTRIBUTION TO THE BATTLEFIELD CANNOT BE IGNORED.





4.) THE POC FOR THIS MEMORANDUM IS GENERAL TIMOTHY ARSON.






TIMOTHY ARSON




GENERAL, UOA




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MR. PRESIDENT.HEAVY ELECTRONIC JAMMING DETECTED.TRANSMISSION SUCCESS UNLIKELY.PROCEED?

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>_manual cmd input:CADET'S, AND ALL OFFICERS, OF PROJECT TEAM ZERO; TODAY OUR NATION HAS BEEN SUBJECT TO AN UNPROVOKED ATTACK. WE HAVE LOST ALL COMMUNICATIONS WITH MILITARY, POLICE, AND EMERGENCY PERSONNEL IN THE SOUTH EAST SECTOR. THE ONLY NATION CURRENTLY CAPABLE OF PULLING OFF SUCH A SOPHISTICATED ATTACK IS THE HALENBRAAD EMPIRE


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YOU, THE PROJECT ZERO CADET'S, ARE THE BEST OF THE BEST. TRAINED TO COUNTER THE EMPIRE'S HIGHLY ADVANCED FRONTLINE MECHANOID COMBATANTS. WITHOUT THE CONCERN FOR PERSONAL ACCOUNTABILITY, THE EMPIRE HAS RAN RAMPANT ACROSS THEIR CONTINENT, UNCHECKED FOR OVER A DECADE. THEIR GREED AND LUST FOR POWER KNOWS NO BOUNDS, THEIR REGARD FOR THE BASIC LAWS OF WAR HAVE SLOWLY FADED, AND THEIR GENERAL CONCERN FOR HUMAN LIFE HAS ALL BUT EVAPORATED.

YOU HAVE BEEN EQUIPPED WITH THE BEST WEAPONRY AND TECHNOLOGY SCIENCE CAN CREATE. THESE TOOLS, ALONG WITH YOUR EXTENSIVE TRAINING, WILL SURPASS THE ABILITIES OF THEIR ROBOTIC SOLDIERS AND PLACE YOU ON PAR WITH THE EMPIRE'S MECHANOID'S. BUT TAKE HEED, THEIR NUMBERS FAR OUTMATCH YOUR OWN. WITH A "HIVEMIND" LIKE MENTALITY, THOUSANDS OF THE EMPIRES ROBOTS CAN COMMUNICATE TACTICAL UPDATES AND LOCATIONS IN MILLISECONDS. DO NOT BE CARELESS, UTILIZE YOUR TRAINING AT ALL TIMES, AND YOU WILL OVERCOME.


CADETS. PROTECT MY CIVILIANS. THEY ARE YOUR NUMBER ONE PRIORITY AND A TOTAL LOSS OF THE CIVILIAN POPULATION IN THE SOUTH EAST, REGARDLESS OF THE OUTCOME, WILL BE CONSIDERED A FAILURE. MY ASSETS TELL ME YOU ARE CURRENTLY SCATTERED ABOUT THE CITIES. LINK UP WITH EACH OTHER AND COORDINATE A RESISTANCE UNTIL HELP CAN ARRIVE.


FINALLY, AS THE PRESIDENT OF THE UNITED OZEAN STATES, I MUST ENSURE THE SAFETY OF THE REST OF THE COUNTRY. THE THREE MAJOR BRIDGES LEADING INTO, AND OUT OF, THE SOUTH EAST SECTOR WILL BE DESTROYED AND A HEAVY DEFENSIVE POSTURE WILL BE ESTABLISHED ALONG THE BORDER, UNTIL WE CAN COORDINATE AN EFFECTIVE RESPONSE. IF YOU RECEIVE THIS AND ARE NEAR ONE OF THE BRIDGES, EVACUATE THE AREA AND GET TO A SAFE DISTANCE. THE BOMBING RUN IS IMMINENT.


GOOD LUCK CADET'S, I'LL SEE YOU ON THE OTHER SIDE. PRESIDENT HARRIOT BLAKEMAN, OUT.


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[Lantern]

Been looking for something like this; count me in.

 

[Church418]

Cool!


Hopefully we can get a couple more

 

[0123456789]

Hacker category? Count me in!

 

[Church418]

Consider yourself counted

 

[Soviet Panda]

This sounds interesting, but I missed a lot because I couldn't read the second section with the fancy but, for me, hard to read text.

 

[AvidElmV2]

While I'm not exactly that experienced as a roleplayer, I do hold a year or two under my belt and I have been in two Detailed RP's. I'll try to include as much detail as possible into my post, but don't expect any novels out of me. If you'll still have me after hearing about my inexperience when it comes to Detailed RP's, I would absolutely LOVE to join this RP.


In other words, plux let me join despite me being a noob.

 

[Church418]

This sounds interesting, but I missed a lot because I couldn't read the second section with the fancy but, for me, hard to read text.

I noticed that I couldn't read the text either on mobile phone. Is that where you read the intro? If so it's a lot clearer on P.C.

 

[Church418]

While I'm not exactly that experienced as a roleplayer, I do hold a year or two under my belt and I have been in two Detailed RP's. I'll try to include as much detail as possible into my post, but don't expect any novels out of me. If you'll still have me after hearing about my inexperience when it comes to Detailed RP's, I would absolutely LOVE to join this RP.
In other words, plux let me join despite me being a noob.

I would LOVE to include you


I'm spending the next few days with loved ones for my Christmas holiday. When I return, I'll start a group message and try to get character sheets up.

 

[Soviet Panda]

I noticed that I couldn't read the text either on mobile phone. Is that where you read the intro? If so it's a lot clearer on P.C.

Nailed it. I'll try to remember to read it tomorrow.

 

[Sereda]

Is this still recruiting? Because if so, I am completely on board for this ship!

 

[Church418]

Is this still recruiting? Because if so, I am completely on board for this ship!

Thank you for your interest!


Sadly, while I received some interest, the pool of interested players wasn't large enough to make this successful. I don't intend to let this die, however. I will rework key aspects of this world to make it more engaging and relatable to players, so that it can be successful. All of you, on this thread, can help by identifying what you liked about this world and what you would like to see more of.


Thank you!

 

[Soviet Panda]

I liked the three simple classes that covered basically everything. The hammer, the scalpel, and the skeleton key. I also liked how there was a clear, common enemy and the idea of guerilla warfare. What I didn't like was how this was presented, it was wierd and took me a while to understand what was happening. If you could make it clearer, faster, that would be great.

 

[Church418]

I liked the three simple classes that covered basically everything. The hammer, the scalpel, and the skeleton key. I also liked how there was a clear, common enemy and the idea of guerilla warfare. What I didn't like was how this was presented, it was wierd and took me a while to understand what was happening. If you could make it clearer, faster, that would be great.

Noted. Thanks for your constructive feedback.