Fandom OOC for Earth 17371

[Vsland]

And yet you don't complain about a living black hole who has infinite energy stated as one of their powers. Interesting.

 

[Karcen]

you post i have doubts the other person will ever post from the rps i have been in with them also you can cancel that out

 

[Vsland]

Cancel out someone being a living black hole? Not really...

 

[Karcen]

black holes are based on gravity you cancel out the gravity and boom no more black hole

 

[Karcen]

also you could actually set off nukes as you are by simply using kentic force on atoms to smash them till they split.

 

[Vsland]

Well, that would imply that the kinetic force is great enough to break the strong and weak bonds within an atom to break the nucleus. That happens within the sun due to immense pressure and heat. Alone, I cannot do that. If someone on my team could create a fire hot enough, then it is possible.

Nukes we use consist of unstable isotopes. Not enough in the air to create a harmful explosion with my powers alone.

 

[Karcen]

that is never mentioned in "Jordan posses the power over forces, however, he can only control once at a time with ease and two with strain." so i see no reason you can't

 

[Vsland]

I didn't mention it as...you know...my character can't control heat and so I can't make nukes?

 

[Karcen]

you are missing the point your character has 2 defined limitation one gamma is magic around them so nothing can be done and 2 you can't control two forces except with great strain

also you can heat is caused by things vibrating vibrating is motion motion is kentic energy you control kentic energy therefore you control heat

 

[Vsland]

I'm really not missing the point. You're complaining about my character being too strong, yes? You said my character can make nukes...I gave you the real life science why I can't make nukes. Vibrations can't make enough heat for that sort of nuclear activity; vibrations can't produce the same amount of heat as the sun ever.

 

[Karcen]

No actully I am okay with his powers just it is ill defined I am saying may be you should describe your power more maybe tell us some limitations of it

 

[Karcen]

Though in truth nukes are a silly way to judge given you kentic ability makes you able to turn into a mobile rail gun who needs a nuke when you can accelerate a rock to 10% light speed

 

[Neon Valkyrie]

For the sake of everyone who ever onced with even slight freely ... would you two PLEASE shut the f@#k up.

...

PLEASE.

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the f&%k.

 

[Karcen]

onced with even slight freely
.

what?

 

[thebigbadwolfy]

While I can't decipher that exactly, the basic gist is that it would be fantastic if you two would stop??? Arguing? Or whatever this passive aggressive exchange has turned into.
If Vsland 's character has a problem, it doesn't matter because they've been accepted. And if it becomes a problem, I'm sure OP will deal with it appropriately at that time.

 

[Booperboy]

Alright peeps, I suppose while we wait for thebigbadwolfy and rooke to finish their characters, and for me to finish the sub-plot villain, I suppose I could 'critique' the applications so far. If your post was either liked or loved by me, then it's accepted (which is all but one of you), but there are still some things that could be further explained/improved upon, or a quick change. So, why don't I begin with the first application then:

1. Aurum : To clarify, your character's main powers can only be activated when in her fire form? If so, does that stand true for her enhanced physiology as well?
2. fin : While your first character can breathe in most toxic gases, he can't fully ventilate all toxic gases? So would it stand true that there are a few toxic gases that could potentially be harmful? Also, I suppose the Inhumans dislike Zotz to a certain degree, through your description of their standing affiliation being "strained" (nothing wrong with that, just curious is all).
3. SeantheIrishman : Nick Fury would technically be dead in this RP, but for the sake of context, I'll just allow the possibility that Fury became an A.I. (similar to what happened with Tony Stark in "Infamous Iron Man #1")
4. Neon Valkyrie : You're character looks fine; no real quirks in my eyes
5. Lux___Wolf : Just to clarify, Pharos and Orion are separate 'people'. Pharos is the picture to the right, and Orion is the picture to the left? Could you also elaborate a little more on your ability "Laser Pierce"? Also, Orion and Pharos "struggle to work the microwave", yet they know how to correct eyes, spines, and skin - and remove hair and tumors? Seems a little off is all.
6. fin : I got nothin'.
7. Karcen : You're missing your strength stat. And no skills?
8. Elekta Kount : You're good.
9. DOUBLENICK3L : Your Pym Particles ability is not finished and your "Skilled Thief" belongs under skills. Minor things, really.
10. Vsland : Now, Bia is the personified spirit of Force, and Kratos is the God of strength. However, in the MARVEL universe, it's different. That being said, you can keep Kratos as the God of Force or you can switch to Bia. Up to you really. Also, just add fundamental before "forces" in your abilities section. Your character's abilities, and character in general, is fine. This RP, when it was originally created, was intended to allow the writer's full control over how they wanted their characters to be - whether that be powerful or weak, dumb or smart, fast or slow, etc.
11. Lil Shirou : Could you elaborate more on what you mean by: "She has all the weaknesses of the animal forms she takes"? What weaknesses would these be?
12. thebigbadwolfy : You're still working on yours, so . . . you're excused for now. Looking good though.
13. rooke : I'll review yours when you're done.
14. MrThe : For *obvious* reasons, I cannot accept your character. Your application, despite it's comedic input, has offensive content that others are sensitive of.

 

[Karcen]

Booperboy She is 14 and due to backstory in mind she could not develop skills that could be applied if you want to know then well we have a m as i wish it to be something of a surpise

 

[Booperboy]

I await in suspense then Karcen

 

[Lux___Wolf]

Yes, Orion is the human on the left, the weaker counterpart of Pharos, like Bruce Banner and the Hulk.

Laser Pierce: Orion cuts and drills diamond and steel. Like a lightsaber but a more steady thin laser beam. It won't be able to cut through adamantium though aka Wolverine's skeleton/Captain America's shield. Just cuts diamonds and steel. Pharos disintegrates and vaporizes diamonds and steels gone in one beam shot. But I can see where his speed of light starts to look like an overpower. Laser Pierce would consume too much energy for him to be able to go lightspeed. It can be his weakness, having to stay in one place and charge up that beam shot.

Orion and Pharos "struggle to work the microwave", yet they know how to correct eyes, spines, and skin - and remove hair and tumors? Seems a little off is all. Sometimes smart people are dumb people, and vice versa. He has developed a medical understanding of the human body now that he can see through it. As with the cheap, crappy or expensive, convoluted microwave that he owns, he could be mentally hindered from bothering with the buttons that don't seem to do what they're labeled. It's not so funny now that I'm explaining it but it was FUNNY in my head ok, their character flaw cos they're normal intelligence, not a doctor

 

[thebigbadwolfy]

Booperboy Oh I meant to ask (because I can always change this if you'd like) if mars' backstory, involving repurposing Hydra tech, was okay? I'll probably rework it a lil bit but I kind of want that aspect to remain

 

[rooke]

Booperboy I believe I am finished with the first character. Is it okay if I make a second that would be a villain who completely counters him?

 

[rooke]

Notice me!!

 

[MrThe]

Eh, I figured it'd be rejected. Is it alright if I create a different Character? This time more serious.

 

[fin]

Alright peeps, I suppose while we wait for thebigbadwolfy and rooke to finish their characters, and for me to finish the sub-plot villain, I suppose I could 'critique' the applications so far. If your post was either liked or loved by me, then it's accepted (which is all but one of you), but there are still some things that could be further explained/improved upon, or a quick change. So, why don't I begin with the first application then:

1. Aurum : To clarify, your character's main powers can only be activated when in her fire form? If so, does that stand true for her enhanced physiology as well?
2. fin : While your first character can breathe in most toxic gases, he can't fully ventilate all toxic gases? So would it stand true that there are a few toxic gases that could potentially be harmful? Also, I suppose the Inhumans dislike Zotz to a certain degree, through your description of their standing affiliation being "strained" (nothing wrong with that, just curious is all).
3. SeantheIrishman : Nick Fury would technically be dead in this RP, but for the sake of context, I'll just allow the possibility that Fury became an A.I. (similar to what happened with Tony Stark in "Infamous Iron Man #1")
4. Neon Valkyrie : You're character looks fine; no real quirks in my eyes
5. Lux___Wolf : Just to clarify, Pharos and Orion are separate 'people'. Pharos is the picture to the right, and Orion is the picture to the left? Could you also elaborate a little more on your ability "Laser Pierce"? Also, Orion and Pharos "struggle to work the microwave", yet they know how to correct eyes, spines, and skin - and remove hair and tumors? Seems a little off is all.
6. fin : I got nothin'.
7. Karcen : You're missing your strength stat. And no skills?
8. Elekta Kount : You're good.
9. DOUBLENICK3L : Your Pym Particles ability is not finished and your "Skilled Thief" belongs under skills. Minor things, really.
10. Vsland : Now, Bia is the personified spirit of Force, and Kratos is the God of strength. However, in the MARVEL universe, it's different. That being said, you can keep Kratos as the God of Force or you can switch to Bia. Up to you really. Also, just add fundamental before "forces" in your abilities section. Your character's abilities, and character in general, is fine. This RP, when it was originally created, was intended to allow the writer's full control over how they wanted their characters to be - whether that be powerful or weak, dumb or smart, fast or slow, etc.
11. Lil Shirou : Could you elaborate more on what you mean by: "She has all the weaknesses of the animal forms she takes"? What weaknesses would these be?
12. thebigbadwolfy : You're still working on yours, so . . . you're excused for now. Looking good though.
13. rooke : I'll review yours when you're done.
14. MrThe : For *obvious* reasons, I cannot accept your character. Your application, despite it's comedic input, has offensive content that others are sensitive of.

Yes, I purposefully put in most so that he is vulnerable to some gases, as well as for other characters who might have some form of gas manipulation, he'd definitely be vulnerable to those.

As for Abigail, she's good, right?

 

[MrThe]

Ok so I put in my second more serious character application.