OOC Discussion

[welian]

[QUOTE="Manic Muse]Morgan, Page

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Approved! Go post.

Masters, Greg

Also approved, you did good. I might consider chopping one point out of agility and adding it to intelligence or willpower, but Greg is a solid character as is.

Bruno Clare Liew

Do you even math??? Go fix those stat points and fill in some of the missing info. u r a disgraic.

Akachi, Ime

I'm still on the fence about Ime. His weaknesses seem overly specific for how powerful he is, and I am concerned that you're shooting yourself in the foot with his backstory. It relies heavily on his brother - a second character that doesn't technically exist yet in the way that you've described him (a teacher at 108). I would like you to nerf his powers, give him more broad weaknesses and downfalls (I'm honestly impressed he hasn't killed himself with his own radioactivity). Doing that might even drop him down to an A Rank, which would make monitoring him significantly easier both IC and OOC. In addition, you should revise his backstory and relationship in such a way that Ime will be able to stand on his own as a character without relying on Ayo's presence.

 

[Dano]

@welian thank you!

 

[simj26]

Do you even math??? Go fix those stat points and fill in some of the missing info. u r a disgraic.

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I no u dum dum, I no how count good k I fix thing now

 

[Necessity4Fun]

dEKITA!!!


RIZZO PELLEGRINI, CECILIA

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Cecilia Rizzo Pellegrini
  Codename	Mistral
  Gender	Female
  Age	14
  Rank	B
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Caucasian (Italian)
  Eyes	Brown
  Hair	Medium Height, Curly and Light Brown
  Height	5' 7''
  Build	127.8 lbs, Thin members and little muscular mass
  Limiter	Level 2, Active
  Notes	Owns a Italy flag necklace that she never takes out

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????​	Courageous	06	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????​	Altruistic	04	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????​	Orderly	04	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????​	Kind	07	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????​	Proactive	09	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  • Good Trait Determinated: If Cecilia decide to do something she will hardly give up on the task. If certain way isn't working then she'll try another tactic until it is fully resolved.
    
  • Neutral Trait Reliable: You can always count on her to do her part or help you out when in trouble.
    
  • Neutral Trait Confident: Cecilia hardly doubts herself or her decisions, it would take something extremely harmful to break her confidence.
    
  • Bad Trait Impulsive: She never thinks before acting what gives room to a lot of disaster.
    
  
  
  History
  
  
  Cecilia came with her Grandmother from Italy when she was 10 and has been living in the USA ever since. The cultural and language transition was a difficult for her and made her a target of other students, and ever some of the teachers, mocking. Cecilia took it all and never said a word about it to her Grandmother. "This is their nation, their place of birth, it must have been equality hard for them to see an outsider like me making silly mistakes on their language" she thought to herself. After a large amount of ignoring, the kids got tired of seeing no reaction and went to mock someone else...
  
  
  Four years later, teenagers had started making fun of her accent and hand waving. It seemed pretty harmless for a couple months until, someone discovered she lived with her Grandma and started mocking her! That was it! Cecilia could take any kind of swearing directed at her but not at her Grandmother, the person who had been taking care of her for years in a complete new place!
  
  
  On the way out of the school, Cecilia went, with her habitual Italian hand-waving explanation, to confront those mean adolescents. She was enraged and indignant. But suddenly, in the middle of her argumentation (lecturing), the bullies had been scattered around by a violent gusts of wind and were now about three meters away from their first position! Cecilia look around to see if any passing by strangers had seen what had just happened. No one was around at that time so, she just grabbed her backpack and went straight home.
  
  
  When she arrived home, there where really tall looking men at her door. The very threatening-looking men pulled a shocked-looking Cecilia to a deserted corner of the street and, after hearing a very supplicant and terrified Italian girl, explained her that she had inherited a very special gene that could give people special abilities. They also told her she had been spied on by AEGIS since she had arrived from Italy and that they wanted to help her understand more about her abilities.
  
  
  The little Italian was too surprised to say a word and just took the card they had given her. A week later she contacted the agency to sign-up for training. She never said the truth to her Grandmother, just that she had been called to a far away and very exclusive course that demanded her to move town for a while and that she would be okay.
• ---

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????​	01	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????​	01	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????​	04	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????​	01	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????​	03	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????​	08	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  • Air Manipulation: The ability to bend air at will. Cecilia can shape and utilize the air around her to make breezes, wind gusts, mistrals, hurricanes and even attack an opponent using air. She can also involve herself and/or people around her in a wind sphere or make an air wall for protection against physical attacks.
    
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  • Aero-kinetic Immunity: Immunity to air. Cecilia can't be harmed by any physical air attacks and any effects of them
    
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  • Electromagnetic-wave attacks: While wind can indeed protect her from physical attacks and mechanical waves like sound, Cecilia is completely powerless against light attacks or any other Electromagnetic waves because they don't need matter to propagate and thus don't depend on air currents.
    
  • Range limit: Cecilia can't keep her manipulation on a range larger than 10 meters from the opponent or ally. This means she can't protect and ally too far and all her attacks (including hurricanes) will wear off and disappear when out of range.
    
  • Mental and physical strain: The larger the attack, the more strain she will suffer on both body and mind. Cecilia can make lots of little wind gust and physical air attacks but hurricanes, whirlwinds and even mistrals will wear her off. It is possible to do only two or three of these (one for hurricane) before collapsing of exhaustion. Forcing her body further may result on organ harm.
    
  
  
  
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i CAN'T BELIEVE i DID IT!! OMG >///<


I hope it's good, I'm a little rusty xD

 

[simj26]

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@welian it is dong.

 

[call me rae]

@Necessity4Fun - Awesome profile. Nice strengths and weaknesses for her powers. The only thing is I believe that welian said she would prefer no photgraphs for character faceclaims.

 

[Necessity4Fun]

@Necessity4Fun - Awesome profile. Nice strengths and weaknesses for her powers. The only thing is I believe that welian said she would prefer no photgraphs for character faceclaims.

I'm glad you like it :33


Oh, okay I can change it ^^ Actually, I prefer doing my own drawings but well, drawing and painting can takes from days to months with me... It's not like we have all that time xD

 

[welian]

RIZZO PELLEGRINI, CECILIA

YAY YOU SURVIVED!! Like Rae said, I'd prefer if you avoided photos for faceclaims. If you want, you could simply not post a picture right now, and wait until you've drawn her yourself. Cecilia's profile actually looks quite nice. I only question how practical immunity to air attacks would be.... but then again, powers don't always have to be practical or useful. Add a little more meat to those personality traits, and you'll be good to go!

 

[call me rae]

I'm glad you like it :33
Oh, okay I can change it ^^ Actually, I prefer doing my own drawings but well, drawing and painting can takes from days to months with me... It's not like we have all that time xD

If you like to make your own characters - Rinmaru Games this has lots of dollmakers where you can make your own characters.


This is my favorite version - Rinmaru Games-Mega anime couple creator but it's a two-parter.


This is a good single character dollmaker - Rinmaru Games-Anime cosplayer dress up game

 

[Necessity4Fun]

YAY YOU SURVIVED!! Like Rae said, I'd prefer if you avoided photos for faceclaims. If you want, you could simply not post a picture right now, and wait until you've drawn her yourself. Cecilia's profile actually looks quite nice. I only question how practical immunity to air attacks would be.... but then again, powers don't always have to be practical or useful. Add a little more meat to those personality traits, and you'll be good to go!

It's practical because her own hurricane won't suck her up too I think? xD


I might need a tip on the Personality Traits, I have no idea what else to write there... This was the hardest part for me cause I'm used to just listing the words... Help?


I put up an Anime photo for now, I might change or add the drawing later on the Gallery when it's done

If you like to make your own characters - Rinmaru Games this has lots of dollmakers where you can make your own characters.
This is my favorite version - Rinmaru Games-Mega anime couple creator but it's a two-parter.


This is a good single character dollmaker - Rinmaru Games-Anime cosplayer dress up game

oH GOD I love those flash games creators, they always help me out! Only issue is I'm not always near a computer and these need flash and Puffin Browser takes a good chunk of my cellphone space...


But! I will bookmark these anyway! Thank you for those

 

[Meredith]

Reposting because the BBCode works now. Thank god.

LEE, REN

• General
• Biography
• Relationships
• Superpowers
• Gallery

• Full Name	Ren Lee
  Codename	TBD
  Gender	Female
  Age	15
  Rank	D
  Role	Student
  Subject	N/A

  Race	Asian
  Eyes	Amber
  Hair	Green
  Height	4'9"
  Build	Small and Thin
  Limiter	N/A
  Notes	Consistently wears at least one flower in her hair.

• Heroism Meter
  
  
  

  Less Heroic	Points	More Heroic	Total	Description
  Flighty	?????????​	Courageous	02	Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes?
  Selfish	?????????​	Altruistic	07	Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first?
  Chaotic	?????????​	Orderly	05	Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone?
  Cruel	?????????​	Kind	06	Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress?
  Reactionary	?????????​	Proactive	08	Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things?

  
  
  Personality
  
  
  Diligent
  
  
  When Ren sets her mind to a task, very little stops her; she'll work through all hours of the night to finish what she's started. With a strong thirst to prove herself, Ren prefers to show off her mental capacity, taking her time to think through complex issues.
  
  
  Protective
  
  
  Though she doesn't have much of an ability to fight, Ren is incredibly protective of her comrades on the field, and looks out for them the best she can. Unfortunately, she can only see the past, and so she prefers to use more technological means (such as cameras and microphones) to keep touch with her teammates. Her protective instinct makes her somewhat dangerous, as she values the lives of her those she trusts more than the lives of other individuals.
  
  
  Decisive
  
  
  Ren tries not to second-guess herself, and she's appreciate it if nobody else would either, thank you very much. She gets defensive about the decisions she's made, sometimes wondering if she should have done otherwise. Once she's made a choice, she usually goes through with it.
  
  
  Skittish
  
  
  As a super with little to no combat prowess, Ren has to keep a good eye out, and stay out of trouble. She often backs down from physical fights, preferring to keep combat verbal, unlike many of her peers. She's also more of a backlines worker, preferring to stay in the safety and plan, almost as a dispatch officer. She's also quite quick to startle.
  
  
  History
  
  
  Ren grew up in a rather large home within the city limits. As the middle child, she's never felt too much pressure from her parents, which she is grateful for. Her mother, Lila Lee, works as a journalist for the local news; her father is a maths teacher at one of the several public schools in the city.
  
  
  She's never had many problems in school, at least, not until her powers started cropping up. Neither of her parents were aware they carried the power gene, and it was quite a surprise to them when she started having issues focusing and dealing with the world around her. Suddenly she didn't want to touch anything, leave her room, or go to school.
  
  
  Her parents, rightfully worried, decided to bring her into her school's therapist. The teacher decided to first send Ren for superpower testing, and though her parents were less than thrilled, they agreed to let her attend and learn how to control her powers.
  
  
  The twins, her younger brothers? They're super jealous. How come she gets to have superpowers?
  
  
  
• Character Name
  
  
  Description of relationship

• Ability	Points	Total	Description
  Health:	?????????​	02	The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health.
  Strength	?????????​	01	Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on.
  Toughness	?????????​	01	Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going.
  Agility	?????????​	02	Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly.
  Intelligence	?????????​	04	Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information.
  Willpower	?????????​	03	Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.

  
  
  Primary Power
  
  
  Retrocognition
  
  
  The ability to see into the past through trances, visions, or simply through gut feeling. Ren can an any point be taken over by visions or thoughts of the past, though with training or a sufficient effort she may or may not be able to restrain them. Visions range from peaks in instinct to full-on hallucinations.
  
  
  Secondary powers
  
  
  Object Reading & History Reading
  
  
  Object reading refers to the ability to (or curse of) experiencing an object's history when it is touched. This is immediate and fairly well unavoidable. If Ren has previously touched an object and events have occurred since then in the object's immediate surroundings, her powers 'update' her on the changes. These information transfers rarely take more than a few seconds, temporarily taking over Ren's vision.
  
  
  After this transfer has occurred, she may flip through the object's memory in her mind if she so desires.
  
  
  History reading refers to an ability to see a person's memories, first person, after prolonged contact (think between five and ten minutes). In this state, a history reader will experience the event like their target did, including any pain or emotion they faced.
  
  
  Weaknesses
  
  
  General visions or trances are random, Ren cannot trigger them, at least at this current time. They also have the not-so-small chance of being badly interpreted, as the trances are usually disorganized and chaotic, and so Ren is only right with this form of vision about eighty-five percent of the time.
  
  
  They may also take over her senses and therefore incapacitate her for a time, though she may still move when in a trance. She thinks her longest time 'out' was probably about three minutes.
  
  
  Object reading can put an amount of strain on the mind, and something as simple as getting dressed can take a bit of time just to avoid overloading herself with more than two or three sets of memories at once. It's also difficult for her to remember the history of any particular object after about a week.
  
  
  History reading, depending on the memories, can seriously screw with the reader. Depressed feelings, the pain of breaking limbs, you name it - history reading needs to be done with a lot of caution.
  
  
  
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[call me rae]

It's practical because her own hurricane won't suck her up too I think? xD
I might need a tip on the Personality Traits, I have no idea what else to write there... This was the hardest part for me cause I'm used to just listing the words... Help?


I put up an Anime photo for now, I might change or add the drawing later on the Gallery when it's done


oH GOD I love those flash games creators, they always help me out! Only issue is I'm not always near a computer and these need flash and Puffin Browser takes a good chunk of my cellphone space...


But! I will bookmark these anyway! Thank you for those

If you like I could make something temporary for you. I'm working on my own computer at the moment ( i'm getting my own face claims up ) so I'd be happy to help out.


Just give me a general description and I can at least give you a "temp photo". lol might fuzz around on photoshop and make it look like a crappy photo from an old camera.

 

[Meredith]

@Necessity4Fun


Here it's more of a 'list the word, then why'.


Like... if you're determined, what makes you that way. Do you complete a task, whatever it takes?


Do you drag others into your projects? How does your character show that?

 

[Necessity4Fun]

If you like I could make something temporary for you. I'm working on my own computer at the moment ( i'm getting my own face claims up ) so I'd be happy to help out.
Just give me a general description and I can at least give you a "temp photo". lol might fuzz around on photoshop and make it look like a crappy photo from an old camera.

Oh, that is really sweet but, I actually kinda of like the Anime photo I chose xD


It makes a good temporary thinky :33


Thank you again for the offer!!

 

[call me rae]

Oh, that is really sweet but, I actually kinda of like the Anime photo I chose xD
It makes a good temporary thinky :33


Thank you again for the offer!!

Not a problem I'm happy to help

 

[Dano]

@readingraebow you help out a lot... I'm not sure what I'd have done w/o some of your guidance! Are you a site mod in disguise? (^.^)

 

[call me rae]

@readingraebow you help out a lot... I'm not sure what I'd have done w/o some of your guidance! Are you a site mod in disguise? (^.^)

Nope just a user with a lot of time on her hands. It was a snow day so I had nothing to do

 

[simj26]

I guess there's snow time like the present, eh.

 

[welian]

Bruno Clare Liew

We have discusses your character endlessly in Discord. Approved.

 

[welian]

LEE, REN

Also approved, I'm glad the BBcode was finally fixed!

 

[TheDaftStudent]

-lurks-

 

[welian]

NICCALS, DANTE

Approved. Go post.

 

[TheDaftStudent]

Approved. Go post.

Noice! (} )

 

[TheDox]

-lurks-

Lurk moar

 

[TheDaftStudent]

Lurk moar

I think I'm lurking at my maximum potential...