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It should work.
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LEE, REN
It should be fine.
It should work.
Nobody can find anything wrong with the BBCode.
It didn't work.
I'd like all critique atm to deal with the character itself. Please tag me, because I'm not watching this thread, honestly.
LEE, REN
Full Name Ren Lee Codename TBD Gender Female Age 15 Rank D Role Student Subject N/A Race Asian Eyes Amber Hair Green Height 4'9" Build Small and Thin Limiter N/A Notes Consistently wears at least one flower in her hair. - Heroism Meter
Personality Diligent When Ren sets her mind to a task, very little stops her; she'll work through all hours of the night to finish what she's started. With a strong thirst to prove herself, Ren prefers to show off her mental capacity, taking her time to think through complex issues. Protective Though she doesn't have much of an ability to fight, Ren is incredibly protective of her comrades on the field, and looks out for them the best she can. Unfortunately, she can only see the past, and so she prefers to use more technological means (such as cameras and microphones) to keep touch with her teammates. Her protective instinct makes her somewhat dangerous, as she values the lives of her those she trusts more than the lives of other individuals. Decisive Ren tries not to second-guess herself, and she's appreciate it if nobody else would either, thank you very much. She gets defensive about the decisions she's made, sometimes wondering if she should have done otherwise. Once she's made a choice, she usually goes through with it. Skittish As a super with little to no combat prowess, Ren has to keep a good eye out, and stay out of trouble. She often backs down from physical fights, preferring to keep combat verbal, unlike many of her peers. She's also more of a backlines worker, preferring to stay in the safety and plan, almost as a dispatch officer. She's also quite quick to startle. History Ren grew up in a rather large home within the city limits. As the middle child, she's never felt too much pressure from her parents, which she is grateful for. Her mother, Lila Lee, works as a journalist for the local news; her father is a maths teacher at one of the several public schools in the city. She's never had many problems in school, at least, not until her powers started cropping up. Neither of her parents were aware they carried the power gene, and it was quite a surprise to them when she started having issues focusing and dealing with the world around her. Suddenly she didn't want to touch anything, leave her room, or go to school. Her parents, rightfully worried, decided to bring her into her school's therapist. The teacher decided to first send Ren for superpower testing, and though her parents were less than thrilled, they agreed to let her attend and learn how to control her powers. The twins, her younger brothers? They're super jealous. How come she gets to have superpowers?Less Heroic Points More Heroic Total Description Flighty ▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮Courageous 02 Do they have a pair of steel, or do they prefer to exit before chaos strikes? Selfish ▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮Altruistic 07 Are they motivated to help others, or do they help themselves first? Chaotic ▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮Orderly 05 Are laws and regulations "suggestions", or written in stone? Cruel ▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮Kind 06 Are they genuinely nice to people, or do they enjoy causing distress? Reactionary ▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮Proactive 08 Are they content to watch events unfold, or do they jump in and guide things? - Character Name Description of relationship
Ability Points Total Description Health: ▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮02 The ability to resist illness and recover quickly from injuries, overall health. Strength ▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮01 Physical strength, the ability to strike hard, lift heavy objects, and so on. Toughness ▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮01 Endurance and stamina, the ability to take a hit and still keep going. Agility ▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮02 Speed, dexterity, nimbleness - agility is the ability to move quickly. Intelligence ▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮04 Not book smarts, but the ability to perceive and retain lots of information. Willpower ▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮▮03 Strength of mind, the ability to stay focused and determined.