[Occam's Razor] [Occam's Razor] Out of Character Chat Area

Okay so I'm going to have to spell this out, Fantastic. Awesome. I love having to clean up messes, Makes my entire evening.
 
Not so kek.


Agh why can't I be a night owl like you guise?


Eleven at night and my body screams for sleep...
 
*twists neck around exorcism style* I have no idea what you're talking about Spoon...
 
Kazanna said:
Okay so I'm going to have to spell this out, Fantastic. Awesome. I love having to clean up messes, Makes my entire evening.
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Kazanna said:
Ah fuck... No one pays attention to anything. Look. There are TWO, count them, TWO lifts in that hallway. Nadia should be using the one she came up in. Malcom and Jace went down in the opposite lift. Make sense? Sorry to make you revise ><
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Sorry about that, about to revise and make Nadia go back to the one she had used to get up there
 
Okay so I'm going to place in several points where my posts have been clearly ignored. I'm detecting massive amounts of TL;DR. I dont accept this. Ever. So stop.

Kazanna said:
Malcom let his arms drop to his sides, his face slowly paling, he stared at the hallway, shaking his head, "I... I don't know..." He slid the kukiri in his grasp back into it's sheath before he stumbled over to the wall with a slight shudder. After bracing himself against it, he let the natural reaction in his stomach take effect, and he vomited, despite there being little more then acid and bile. He shivered and shook his head, muttering, "Adreniline fatigue... Not going to be able to keep this pace up Jace." He pushed himself away from his own mess and took a look towards the lift, there was a second across the hall.
Malcom took several steps towards it before pausing, "When we were in New York... My squad was detailed to the city zoo. We came upon the lions... They had mutated, busted out." He made a face, "But they weren't killing any of the infected humans, they were just after my squad..." He wiped his mouth, he went on after a moment, "They ignored a guy in my squad, Alvarez, he'd been bitten by one of the infected humans, and he beat it's face so bad blood got into the cut... We figured out later..." He cleared his nose, rolling his shoulders as he then cleared his throat, "That the infection takes about two... Three hours or so, before it starts setting in, before they stop trying to kill you..." He looked to Jace, his face ashen, "How long ago did we kill the big one in the hall..." He whispered.
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You ignored the Bolded Section, Clearly.

xxDragonEater95xx said:
Nadia made sure that her knives were sharpened and she had adequate ammunition for the weapons she was carrying. She was properly geared up and was about to head out when she remembered about the med-kits...they could probably definitely use some, recalling the scene she last saw before she took Ethan to the lift. She went through different lockers, searching high and low, before she found it under a pile of falling uniforms, and she smiled as she quickly knelt down and stuffed it into her Bag'O'Death that Jace had originally owned.
Upon gathering all that she thought she would need she decided to go ahead and head out. Woods had gotten his commands and should be following behind soon, so it wouldn't really be that bad if she went on ahead. She figured that those two, now three, had caused enough ruckus that perhaps she wouldn't be overrun like they had been earlier, but of course she was taking an enormous risk attempting to traverse to the lower levels alone. She opened her comm channel, for all to hear, "Got a medkit and all the guns and ammo I can carry, heading to the lift...or rather shaft to Hades, Woods shouldn't be too far behind. How's the situation down there?" she secured the bag over her shoulder as she made her way to the lift. "Any chance there's a service ladder in the shaft? I'd hate to have to try to use the cables or something to try to climb down." she said with a slight grimace. She wasn't necessarily afraid of heights or anything, but rather cautious and weary of them. Nothing like climbing the gym rope to the roof and then falling and breaking an arm at a young age to made you do a double-take at the thought of heights and climbing.


As she got the the open shaft she stared down into the abyss, contemplating what horrors lie below, waiting for their chance to strike and yearning for flesh and blood. Not exactly what one would use to pump themselves up but the reminder of the mutated humanoid creatures and the fact that there were things far far worse than that helped get her adrenaline flowing as well as sharpen her senses. She knew she'd need to be on her P's and Q's once she began her descent or else she'd end up paying the ultimate price...and she wasn't really ready to cash it in that just yet. "Woods! Let's get a move on, I'm already at the shaft!" her voice a bit pushy, as she was ready to get back into the heat of battle, the taste of leaving her comrades still a bit bitter in her mouth.
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Heres the exact place you began ignoring it. Fix this and then...

xxDragonEater95xx said:
Nadia was making her final preparations for her decent when Woods voice came through her calm, even without him being visibly present she lowered her head a bit. "Sorry about that, Captain. Just a bit eager to get to our guys," she began to get herself primed to into the shaft when Woods asked her for the location of the gear, "Ummm...fourth locker, if I'm not mistaken it should still be open." she responded.
She jumped into the shaft, grabbing a hold of the cables and waiting for her erratic swinging to stop, and then began to slowly work her way down into the darkness below. "I take it you guys are at the very bottom of this darkness..." she left her comm open so that she could be heard by all, "So I take it you guys were able to secure our newest member, how was the reception from our mutant monster buddies?" she asked as she meticulously worked down the cables, hand-over-hand. The talking really helped her not think about the whole climbing down the shaft ovrdeal, and even with the heavy bag of weapons on her back she was making good pace down while maintaining good stability.


"Nothing like climbing down a dark, creepy, hopefully empty, lift to reconnect with your team...and possibly be ripped limb from limb." she was chatting away to distract herself from the darkness and eerie stillness around her, "Being eaten is definitely not in my game plan. Get frozen they said, it'll help they said. Damn near made all of us packaged frozen snacks for these things..." she stopped as she realized that she hadn't turned off her comm, and with that realization came a long sigh of irritation and embarrassment. "Rail gun on board and in route." she said, trying to say something relevant to make up for her absent-minded ramblings.
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Here is the second place where you ignored it. Fix this ENTIRE section. Keep logically in mind that if the car for the elevator is gone, the cables went with it. That's how they work, if the cables break, they fall with the lift because of how they're built.

[QUOTE="Veirrianna Valentine]Revelia listened as the voice over the radio, Woods, stated that 'he had it too'. That meant that people were infected, which left an uneasy feeling in the pit of her stomach. Still, as long as no one was randomly turning, she supposed it was worth sticking around. At least for now. Limbering up, Revy shook out a couple kinks before nudging Malcom with her foot.
"Hey, just going to ask, shouldn't we start making our way towards the lift? You know, to be there for when it arrives?"


She wasn't trying to be obnoxious, she was just hoping to offer some useful advice, or pitch in a bit. That and being stuck at the end of the hallway with the furry spiderpede blocking the escape route seemed like piss poor tactical planning.

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Somehow, Despite just joining the play, She manages to not only notice my post, but reply properly to messed up replies...


I'm really, REALLY not amused. I'm so tired of dealing with TL;DR's in this play already. I'm not going to put up with it again. Seriously. I take the time to read each and every letter of each of your posts and I reply with genuine passion and finesse, I give you as much respect as I can through written word, All I ask is for the same courtesy...
 
Lift A. The one you used. Is fully operational. Lift B. Is totaled. it's doors beside the one Jace and Malcom passed through are sealed shut.
 
For this next fight sequence, whoever is posting, throw a new creature in, variant needs to be a lesser type, between the size of a human (so not much smaller) and a small bear or a dog (So not much bigger then that) Keep in mind the humanoid types tend to be ghoulish, with slight claws and sunken in eyes, they're fast and very strong, but dull witted due to the lesser hive. The larger Gorilla-Lion's are smarter, they work in a single, overpowering hive, and are much smarter then this pack, even if they were fooled by the loudspeaker trick. Each of the groups we will encounter from now on will be part of a lesser, or greater hive, depending on the scenario. For this circumstance, were dealing with part of a lesser hive. This is the majority of the group and could lead to a decimation of their leader caste if we play this correctly. I will "spawn" the leader caste types myself for targets for the rest of you, please do not assume them yourselves.
 
Firstly, I saw my post in your mini-rant, Kazanna, and though 'crap, what'd I do?', but then realised I wasn't being grumbled at xD


Secondly, I'll post here in a bit, but I totes think that a horde of mutated children, ages 2-10, would be a pretty trippy/horrifying enemy, but also something not too big for Revelia to handle.
 
... I am glad u said that... Cause Jace would freeze up. You have NO IDEA. (unless you literally read the entire play O_o and knew about his soft spot for kids)
 
Morridan said:
... I am glad u said that... Cause Jace would freeze up. You have NO IDEA. (unless you literally read the entire play O_o and knew about his soft spot for kids)
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~Whispers~ "I totes read through and saw his soft spot for kids..." 
Feel free to inform me that I'm a bit of a di*k. Cause I know, and it won't surprise, alert, upset or alarm me.


^.^
 
O_o Well, Jace is going to be absolutely horrified, but. I think we're waiting on Kaz now to have Malcom react to that? Cause atm, Jace would have just snapped and reacted, and then went in complete horror at crushing the little child-demon-mutation-....thing. And he'd probably lose his nerve xD (not gud) So I'mma leave it for Kaz to have Malcom do something.
 
I just kind of thought to myself, "Huh, how can a girl make a zombie like kid ten times more terrifying, oh wait, I know! Lets give them giant bone meat hooks for hands and turn their half their face and the front of their neck into a massive, fang filled mouth!"


Then I realised I was a terrible person.
 
At least you didn't make their back-sides the abdomen of a bug, give them fly wings, and make one of their arms a throbbing lump of deformed tissues... (*remembers Doom 3*) Uuugh...


Aaand we wait. =)
 
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Okay so for anyone who didn't catch it. Malcom has his comm open to his military personel right now. Nadia and Alexander can hear him. Jace no longer has a comm? I think? so he's out of that contact.
 
Yeah, when he initially started running, that bad boy flew right off his ear. xD  
LOL!!! @Runcible Spoon


That "Nopenopenopenope!!!" Seemed pretty legit
 
Post now, wait for Dragon, post now, wait for Dragon...


It would help if I could see if he were online.


I don't think it ever worked, never been sure.


And I try, Morr.


I really do.
 
Well, whatever works. I really like the idea of Malcom and Jace reaching their limits, staggering into the elevator with Revy, and as the door closes on sticks their face in and meets her Bang-stick xD


I think I'm going to have her name it 'A Fist Full of Hollers'.
 
No, it has never... not even once.. showed me that Dragon was online. It doesn't even say WHEN he was last online either. lol


@Veirrianna Valentine That is so gud. lol I'd have probably called it the "BOOM Shaka- Shillelagh" or something. =P
 
I'd have just called it "My BOOM-Stick."


Because what better name is there than a literal one?


Ladies and gentleman, I'd like to introduce you to a good friend of mine... This is My BOOM-Stick!"


*proceeds to demonstrate it on the nearest person*


Huh, that wasn't as funny as I imagined it in my head.


I shall work on that, and get back to you later.
 
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