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  • Clan Name


    Silverstreak


    Alias


    Snow Assassin


    Gender


    Male


    Age


    21


    Rank


    ??


    Affiliation


    Kaigangakure
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  • First Name: Ayumi


    Clan Name (Last Name): Arima


    Age: 10


    Gender: Female


    Height: 5'0


    Weight: 102 lbs


    Attire Appearance/Clothing:


    Currently, her only wardrobe is a once-fancy, tattered dress. She can be seen with splotches of dirt on her skin.


    Alias/Nickname:


    The Shadow Caster


    Jinchuuriki


 
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Zao Silverstreak

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  • Clan Name


    Silverstreak


    Alias


    Snow Assassin


    Gender


    Male


    Age


    21


    Rank


    ??


    Affiliation


    Kaigangakure
    ​





  • [/QUOTE]
    First, your bio doesn't really fit into the lore of the RP since you're adding Canon aspects (The leaf and sand village don't exist in this Rp) also a lot of your Jutsu won't be used since you'll be starting at Genin rank. (The high ranks are filled and more genin are needed)
 
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  • First Name: Ayumi


    Clan Name (Last Name): Arima


    Age: 10


    Gender: Female


    Height: 5'0


    Weight: 102 lbs


    Attire Appearance/Clothing:


    Currently, her only wardrobe is a once-fancy, tattered dress. She can be seen with splotches of dirt on her skin.


    Alias/Nickname:


    The Shadow Caster


    Jinchuuriki


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Accepted.
 
Name: Ubusho Iozumoko


Nickname: "Steel Oni"


Age: 26


Height: 6'7


Goals: To revive the Oni race


Village: None


Affiliation: Jashin Cult


Appearance:


Picture_20111109214540.png



Personality:


Ubusho is a cruel human being. He has a short temper, lashing out at any time against anyone, even against his own teammates. Due to his past and affiliations with demonic, corrupt chakra, Ubusho himself is corrupt. He loves to spill the blood of his enemies, nicknaming him "The Bloody Mist" when he was a chunin in his small village, out in the mountains. After slaughtering them all, his hate has grown more and more, his temper even shorter.


Bio: Ubusho was born in a small village in mountains that were rich in iron, making this village very specialized in Steel Release. However, there was a large downside. Since this village was so rich in resources, and so secluded from others, they were victims of a demonic cult. They abducted three children in the village, and gave each of them the same Cursed Seals: Cursed Seal of the Oni. Ubusho was one of them, and the only one successful to survive with it. After the two children died, the cult released Ubusho back into the Village. The poor village fell victim as Ubusho tore everyone apart that night, slaughtering and drinking the blood of his own villagers. He is easily one of the most demonic of the Jashin Cult, being a blood thirsty murderer, and very cunning in battle. Since his town was close to Hagengakure, there were many stories told of him. To prove that they were true, Ubusho made a trip to the village, and killed all the ninja he could find before disappearing back into the shadows


Battle Gear: He wears the cloak of the Jashin Cult, with a black tank top and black pants, the tank top having a symbol of a shattered skull.


Kekkei Genkai: Steel Release


Easily Ubusho's strongest style. Utilizing steel style, he traps in his enemies with walls and boxes, mostly sealing them in with deadly poison. He also uses this style to pierce people with spikes, or guillotines and blades popping out of trees. But his most powerful use of his Steel Release is


Demonic Forbidden Art: Steel Release: Armor of the Underworld Beasts: Black Oni


Ubusho will summon a suit of armor infused with corrupt chakra, the full body suit representing the look of an oni. Once he transforms into his full Demonic Oni form, he will summon this armor, making him easily one of the strongest powerhouses in the New Akatsuki.


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Cursed Seal of the Oni:


This powerful cursed seal transforms Ubusho into an Oni, giving him immense strength, and powerful Taijutsu. More shall be revealed in the RP


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Steel Release: Great Titan Steel Saliva


The user will infuse their steel chakra with their saliva. This will create a a liquid metal that instantly hardens when it touch oxygen.


Steel Release: Cage


After forming the needed hand signals, the user creates an iron cage around an opponent. It uses the user's chakra to channel strength into it. The chakra fed into the structure of the cage slowly repairs any damage dealt to it, but it also causes significant drain on the user. Depending on the level of the user and the direction of the chakra flow, the cage can be broken out of with a powerful-enough strike towards a weakpoint.


Steel Release: Reisig Labmagen


Steel Release: Reisig Labmagen is a powerful Steel Release technique that causes sharp spears to jut out from the ground. This is done by the user placing his or her hands on the ground and channeling their steel nature chakra into the earth. This compresses and molds the precious minerals/metals found in the ground into sharp spears. The user must then lift up his or her hands which then causes them to thrust out from the ground. This can be used both offensively and defensively. The width and length of the spears depends on how the user molds the metals in the ground. These spears can also resemble different variations of swords, pikes, and other bladed objects.


The user can also choose to bring the blades in front of him or her, in the back, to the sides, or even around the user. This is done by channeling the steel nature chakra to where they want the metals molded. More experienced users can even focus all of the steel nature chakra into one place and then thrust it forward thus creating a line. When the user brings up his or her hands, it creates a long line of steel spears. However, the farther this jutsu travels, the weaker and smaller the spears become. As well, it can be taxing on the user physically so only experienced users can use this technique without much problem.


The steel blades or spears can be strengthened with the Steel Release: Stahl Herz to increase the durability and strength. This can be done while the spears are still within the earth. This technique is excellent at surprising opponents to venture to close within the range of the attack. It is particularly useful against Shinobi that focus on Taijutsu.


Likes;

  • Bloodshed
  • Battles
  • Demonic Rituals
  • Praying to the Underworld
  • Meetings
  • Wars
  • Torture


Dislikes:

  • Peace
  • Tranquility
  • Peace
  • Normality
  • Family
 
National said:
Name: Ubusho Iozumoko
Nickname: "Steel Oni"


Age: 26


Height: 6'7


Goals: To revive the Oni race


Village: None


Affiliation: Jashin Cult


Appearance:


Picture_20111109214540.png



Personality:


Ubusho is a cruel human being. He has a short temper, lashing out at any time against anyone, even against his own teammates. Due to his past and affiliations with demonic, corrupt chakra, Ubusho himself is corrupt. He loves to spill the blood of his enemies, nicknaming him "The Bloody Mist" when he was a chunin in his small village, out in the mountains. After slaughtering them all, his hate has grown more and more, his temper even shorter.


Bio: Ubusho was born in a small village in mountains that were rich in iron, making this village very specialized in Steel Release. However, there was a large downside. Since this village was so rich in resources, and so secluded from others, they were victims of a demonic cult. They abducted three children in the village, and gave each of them the same Cursed Seals: Cursed Seal of the Oni. Ubusho was one of them, and the only one successful to survive with it. After the two children died, the cult released Ubusho back into the Village. The poor village fell victim as Ubusho tore everyone apart that night, slaughtering and drinking the blood of his own villagers. He is easily one of the most demonic of the Jashin Cult, being a blood thirsty murderer, and very cunning in battle. Since his town was close to Hagengakure, there were many stories told of him. To prove that they were true, Ubusho made a trip to the village, and killed all the ninja he could find before disappearing back into the shadows


Battle Gear: He wears the cloak of the Jashin Cult, with a black tank top and black pants, the tank top having a symbol of a shattered skull.


Kekkei Genkai: Steel Release


Easily Ubusho's strongest style. Utilizing steel style, he traps in his enemies with walls and boxes, mostly sealing them in with deadly poison. He also uses this style to pierce people with spikes, or guillotines and blades popping out of trees. But his most powerful use of his Steel Release is


Demonic Forbidden Art: Steel Release: Armor of the Underworld Beasts: Black Oni


Ubusho will summon a suit of armor infused with corrupt chakra, the full body suit representing the look of an oni. Once he transforms into his full Demonic Oni form, he will summon this armor, making him easily one of the strongest powerhouses in the New Akatsuki.


110a85eec9cef4f04cf374aeffd149c3.jpg



Cursed Seal of the Oni:


This powerful cursed seal transforms Ubusho into an Oni, giving him immense strength, and powerful Taijutsu. More shall be revealed in the RP


134b72e863860b689f2d9e92e961287d-d4wh0ur.jpg



Steel Release: Great Titan Steel Saliva


The user will infuse their steel chakra with their saliva. This will create a a liquid metal that instantly hardens when it touch oxygen.


Steel Release: Cage


After forming the needed hand signals, the user creates an iron cage around an opponent. It uses the user's chakra to channel strength into it. The chakra fed into the structure of the cage slowly repairs any damage dealt to it, but it also causes significant drain on the user. Depending on the level of the user and the direction of the chakra flow, the cage can be broken out of with a powerful-enough strike towards a weakpoint.


Steel Release: Reisig Labmagen


Steel Release: Reisig Labmagen is a powerful Steel Release technique that causes sharp spears to jut out from the ground. This is done by the user placing his or her hands on the ground and channeling their steel nature chakra into the earth. This compresses and molds the precious minerals/metals found in the ground into sharp spears. The user must then lift up his or her hands which then causes them to thrust out from the ground. This can be used both offensively and defensively. The width and length of the spears depends on how the user molds the metals in the ground. These spears can also resemble different variations of swords, pikes, and other bladed objects.


The user can also choose to bring the blades in front of him or her, in the back, to the sides, or even around the user. This is done by channeling the steel nature chakra to where they want the metals molded. More experienced users can even focus all of the steel nature chakra into one place and then thrust it forward thus creating a line. When the user brings up his or her hands, it creates a long line of steel spears. However, the farther this jutsu travels, the weaker and smaller the spears become. As well, it can be taxing on the user physically so only experienced users can use this technique without much problem.


The steel blades or spears can be strengthened with the Steel Release: Stahl Herz to increase the durability and strength. This can be done while the spears are still within the earth. This technique is excellent at surprising opponents to venture to close within the range of the attack. It is particularly useful against Shinobi that focus on Taijutsu.


Likes;

  • Bloodshed
  • Battles
  • Demonic Rituals
  • Praying to the Underworld
  • Meetings
  • Wars
  • Torture


Dislikes:

  • Peace
  • Tranquility
  • Peace
  • Normality
  • Family
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And I wonder where this came from :3 Accepted
 
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First Name: isabella


Clan Name (Last Name): lavenza


Age: 16


Gender: female


Height:5"8


Weight: 125 lbs


Attire Appearance/Clothing:


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Alias/Nickname: ghost


Affiliation (Village/Organization, if none place 'Rouge' or 'Traveler'): rouge


Rank (Ask me regarding this unless you choose Genin): C class


Personality: Isabella is a quiet and peaceful girl. She's secretly sweet and always carring but on the surface she's distant and quiet


History: Isabella was borne in a long since destroyed village. She lived in her village till she was only 10.... Then it happened, a reign of fire and destruction as an unknown attacker came and slaughtered all but her as her parents hid her. After the raid she had no idea what to do so she started to look around till she found another village. But that only survived for three days till she was branded a murdurer for a crime she didn't commit and was forced to leave. Since then she's been traveling. Looking for a village to take her in


Achievements/Crimes: (Only applies for ranked Shinobi and Rouge Shinobi):


Chakra Natures: (Read mechanics, For Genin two)


Jutsu: (Here, describe what jutsu you have and what they can do)


A custom kekki genkai passed down to her by birth that's name is unknown to her but it's called reavers bane. She can do practically anything with this Justu from making people think she's somewhere else. To changing her look for certain periods of time (1-9 posts with 9 being her time limit on it) whenever she changes her appearance fully it's never always perfect. Say she changed her appearance to look like another character, it wouldn't be a perfect copy as in, the hair might be a different tint but the same color, her eyes might be her eye color instead of there's, a scar might be out of place. Those kinds of things. And she never uses her powers for offensive manuvers


Natural Skills/Techniques:


Strengths:


She's not quick to trust


Weaknesses:


Sticks to her self


Concidered fragile


Other:


(If you don't like anything please tell me so I can change it)



 

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[QUOTE="Daniel reaving]View attachment 219621
First Name: isabella


Clan Name (Last Name): lavenza


Age: 16


Gender: female


Height:5"8


Weight: 125 lbs


Attire Appearance/Clothing:


View attachment 219626


(Remove the big back pack)


Alias/Nickname: ghost


Affiliation (Village/Organization, if none place 'Rouge' or 'Traveler'): rouge


Rank (Ask me regarding this unless you choose Genin): leaving it up to you


Personality: Isabella is a quiet and peaceful girl. She's secretly sweet and always carring but on the surface she's distant and quiet


History: Isabella was borne in a long since destroyed village. She lived in her village till she was only 10.... Then it happened, a reign of fire and destruction as an unknown attacker came and slaughtered all but her as her parents hid her. After the raid she had no idea what to do so she started to look around till she found another village. But that only survived for three days till she was branded a murdurer for a crime she didn't commit and was forced to leave. Since then she's been traveling. Looking for a village to take her in


Achievements/Crimes: (Only applies for ranked Shinobi and Rouge Shinobi):


Chakra Natures: (Read mechanics, For Genin two)


Jutsu: (Here, describe what jutsu you have and what they can do)


The illusion on forgot it's fucking name. She can do practically anything with this Justu from making people think she's somewhere else. To changing her look for certain periods of time.


Natural Skills/Techniques:


Strengths:


She's not quick to trust


Weaknesses:


Sticks to her self


Concidered fragile


Other:


(If you don't like anything please tell me so I can change it)

[/QUOTE]
It looks good to me but if you can't remember the name of the illusion jutsu (Since in your bio your village is destroyed, you can make the illusion thing a custom kekkei genkai)
 
[QUOTE="Sinister Clown]It looks good to me but if you can't remember the name of the illusion jutsu (Since in your bio your village is destroyed, you can make the illusion thing a custom kekkei genkai)

[/QUOTE]
Ok I'll do that then thank you for the advice how should I word that in her cs
 
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[QUOTE="Daniel reaving]Is that any better?

[/QUOTE]
It looks pretty good to me, just fix the grammar mistake with 'custom' and when you say 'a period of time' what do you mean by that exactly? (If you could maybe try lists how many posts the illusion would take place for?)
 
Just to add a small reccomendation; when naming your character, considering Naruto is based in a Japanese-esque setting, try aiming for japanese names rather than western names. It's just in accordance of being historically accurate and makes your character not seem like they hopped in from another time period)
 
[QUOTE="Sinister Clown]It looks pretty good to me, just fix the grammar mistake with 'custom' and when you say 'a period of time' what do you mean by that exactly? (If you could maybe try lists how many posts the illusion would take place for?)

[/QUOTE]
Ok I will and when I say a period of time I'd say any wear from one post to 15 depending on how long she uses it. After 15 it automatacly stops
 
[QUOTE="Daniel reaving]Ok I will and when I say a period of time I'd say any wear from one post to 15 depending on how long she uses it. After 15 it automatacly stops

[/QUOTE]
Well, I'd like you to add some requirements to actually cast the Genjutsu..Since you can probably understand the issue with an illusion where you can alter anything even your own location for a total of 15 posts if she chooses..Either that or maybe make a few ways to escape the illusion.
 
[QUOTE="Sinister Clown]Well, I'd like you to add some requirements to actually cast the Genjutsu..Since you can probably understand the issue with an illusion where you can alter anything even your own location for a total of 15 posts if she chooses..Either that or maybe make a few ways to escape the illusion.

[/QUOTE]
Ok then maybe have the limits to it weakens her greately if she uses her abilities for 6 or more posts and if she's used it for the full fifteen posts she's to weak to use any more abilities. And it takes about 3 days after the full fifteen post limit for her to be able to use her abilities again?
 
[QUOTE="Daniel reaving]Ok then maybe have the limits to it weakens her greately if she uses her abilities for 6 or more posts and if she's used it for the full fifteen posts she's to weak to use any more abilities. And it takes about 3 days after the full fifteen post limit for her to be able to use her abilities again?

[/QUOTE]
No, he means make ways for the victim to possibly ESCAPE the genjutsu. Every genjutsu has it's weakness.
 
[QUOTE="Chara Angel of Death]No, he means make ways for the victim to possibly ESCAPE the genjutsu. Every genjutsu has it's weakness.

[/QUOTE]
I know, I figured I would add some other weaknesses to her while I was coming up with what he wanted
 
[QUOTE="Daniel reaving]View attachment 219621
First Name: isabella


Clan Name (Last Name): lavenza


Age: 16


Gender: female


Height:5"8


Weight: 125 lbs


Attire Appearance/Clothing:


View attachment 219626


(Remove the big back pack)


Alias/Nickname: ghost


Affiliation (Village/Organization, if none place 'Rouge' or 'Traveler'): rouge


Rank (Ask me regarding this unless you choose Genin): leaving it up to you


Personality: Isabella is a quiet and peaceful girl. She's secretly sweet and always carring but on the surface she's distant and quiet


History: Isabella was borne in a long since destroyed village. She lived in her village till she was only 10.... Then it happened, a reign of fire and destruction as an unknown attacker came and slaughtered all but her as her parents hid her. After the raid she had no idea what to do so she started to look around till she found another village. But that only survived for three days till she was branded a murdurer for a crime she didn't commit and was forced to leave. Since then she's been traveling. Looking for a village to take her in


Achievements/Crimes: (Only applies for ranked Shinobi and Rouge Shinobi):


Chakra Natures: (Read mechanics, For Genin two)


Jutsu: (Here, describe what jutsu you have and what they can do)


A custom kekki genkai passed down to her by birth. She can do practically anything with this Justu from making people think she's somewhere else. To changing her look for certain periods of time (1-15 posts with 15 being her time limit on it).


Natural Skills/Techniques:


Strengths:


She's not quick to trust


Weaknesses:


Sticks to her self


Concidered fragile


Other:


(If you don't like anything please tell me so I can change it)

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Okay, Allow me to step in for a second.


First of all, the overabundance of grammar mistakes makes the post pretty hard to read. Perhaps type a little slower or make sure your spelling's alright? Because it can create a huge problem if there are so many mistakes that someone can barely understand what you're saying.


Second of all, the basis of her being a rogue just makes... No sense. No sane person would accuse a 10 year old of killing an entire village, especially one without a tailed beast who could accidentally commit genocide. Think of a better reason for her becoming a rogue, if not, just lighten down and say she's a traveller.
 
[QUOTE="Chara Angel of Death]Okay, Allow me to step in for a second.
First of all, the overabundance of grammar mistakes makes the post pretty hard to read. Perhaps type a little slower or make sure your spelling's alright? Because it can create a huge problem if there are so many mistakes that someone can barely understand what you're saying.


Second of all, the basis of her being a rogue just makes... No sense. No sane person would accuse a 10 year old of killing an entire village, especially one without a tailed beast who could accidentally commit genocide. Think of a better reason for her becoming a rogue, if not, just lighten down and say she's a traveller.

[/QUOTE]
I apologize for all the mistakes it's kinda hectic for me at the moment so I've tried my best. And with her ring a rouge I guess the grammar made it bad because I meant it as in the second village she arrived in she was accused of murdurer of a villager in that village not her home village
 
[QUOTE="Daniel reaving]I apologize for all the mistakes it's kinda hectic for me at the moment so I've tried my best. And with her ring a rouge I guess the grammar made it bad because I meant it as in the second village she arrived in she was accused of murdurer of a villager in that village not her home village

[/QUOTE]
Ah, I see. I was a bit confused. Don't worry too much about the mistakes, just take your time, no need to rush considering you can update your post at any time, so it's not like there's a time limit to beat as far as typing it.
 
I personally can't stand using my mobile to write posts...I generally just use it to see who has posted what xD
 
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