Fandom Naruto: Ryū no sensō

[Kiyoko Tomoe]

[QUOTE="Dai tenshi]Hmm................ Well this is what I think we can do. I would like to ask you to try to think of a custom jutsu to replace it, but if you can't I will allow it. However I will be treating your character as a kekkai genkai user in terms of learning new jutsu. It will take your character a bit longer to learn and prefect new jutsu. But I doubt that would bother your character very much. As for the swords and such. I would like to specify what he carries on him. I don't mind if he has a basic understanding of how to use those weapons.

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He'll carry around standard ninja gear, meaning kunai, shuriken, etc., as well as will during important missions carry around a single sword, and then either two pair nun-chuck or a pair of giant shuriken (like Mizuki) depending on the mission's nature. Never all three though, and all times weapons will be specified. As for custom jutsu... Let's see here, perhaps just follow the whole them and create another line of Lotus techniques to have him learn alongside the Primary and Front Lotus, including one of which he knows before any others that's not as strong as Primary but still makes use of things...? Basically, a line for use outside of Eight Gates that's able to be strengthened by the Eight Gates due to, well, the physical strength increase of the gates.

 

[Kiyoko Tomoe]

Ooh, I know the first one to make... Blooming Lotus. Definitely fits the theme and the character!

 

[Razgriz]

Question in regards to summons....
First off; Genin are allowed to have them, right? Cuz it works into my WIP character's clan and history...


Secondly; if I'm correct and summons are allowed, does the handseals refer to the summons Jutsu, or how the master/summoner summons their companion..? I'm assuming it's the second, but I just want to make sure, as always.

Well yes I will allow a genin to summon only one summon. As for the second question is doesn't matter really. I never include the hand signs. it is just there for those who would like to add that.

 

[SummerWolf]

Ah. Makes sense.


Thanks.^-^

 

[Razgriz]

[QUOTE="Kiyoko Tomoe]He'll carry around standard ninja gear, meaning kunai, shuriken, etc., as well as will during important missions carry around a single sword, and then either two pair nun-chuck or a pair of giant shuriken (like Mizuki) depending on the mission's nature. Never all three though, and all times weapons will be specified. As for custom jutsu... Let's see here, perhaps just follow the whole them and create another line of Lotus techniques to have him learn alongside the Primary and Front Lotus, including one of which he knows before any others that's not as strong as Primary but still makes use of things...? Basically, a line for use outside of Eight Gates that's able to be strengthened by the Eight Gates due to, well, the physical strength increase of the gates.

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Yes that works. Prefect!


And it seems more like you character is a combination of rock lee and tenten.

 

[Kiyoko Tomoe]

[QUOTE="Dai tenshi]And it seems more like you character is a combination of rock lee and tenten.

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Really, it just turned out that way. Dunno how, just did. No summoning jutsu though, given no jutsu at all that isn't Taijutsu... Either way, still weapons and a scroll involved, even if the scroll's just record-keeping xD

 

[Razgriz]

[QUOTE="Kiyoko Tomoe]Really, it just turned out that way. Dunno how, just did. No summoning jutsu though, given no jutsu at all that isn't Taijutsu... Either way, still weapons and a scroll involved, even if the scroll's just record-keeping xD

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Well he seems to be more of a taijutsu and bukijutsu user.

 

[Kiyoko Tomoe]

Alright, how's this technique look...? It's kind of a play on Primary Lotus and Lion's Barrage if you can't tell



This I'll probably change given it's too close to Lion's Barrage, though then again I can't exactly put Lion's Barrage on there given it was invented later on in the timeline... Oh well, here it is! xD

Name of Technique:

Blooming Lotus

Type of Jutsu:

Taijutsu

Rank:

C-Rank

Range:

Close-Range

Nature Type:

N/A

Handseals:

N/A

Description:

Launching the opponent into the air, the user's starting point for Blooming Lotus is initially from below the opponent, opponent facing upwards giving clear view of the back. Getting just below the opponent, facing upwards with them and palm against the back (such as by use of Dancing Leaf Shadow), the user extends their arm all the while keeping their hand pressed to the opponent until fully extended, allowing the user turn before releasing their palm to allow kicking into the opponent's back.

Following the initial kick, the user pushes off and continues with a spin kick to the opponent's side. Generally this is meant to be blocked, giving the user either something to push off of and swing above, or the opponent will grab and pull the user upward to try slamming the user down; in this case, the user will twist their foot to break free as brought upward, with either situation resulting in the user spinning and kicking sideways with the top of their foot into the opponent's abdomin, resulting in the opponent crashing to the ground.

Regardless of whether or not the second kick hits, the user can still proceed into the third kick by using the second kick to move the opponent downward instead of going upward from the other two methods, which actually adds not only more hits but more momentum upon kicking the opponent down, resulting in more damage from the crash landing. This technique can be used alongside the Eight Gates, allowing for more destructive taijutsu skills, as well as due to the level of skill and physical activity involved, does not require Eight Gates such as Primary Lotus as well as is something a taijutsu-specializing genin/chunin could learn after long enough practice.

Weakness:

The main weakness of this technique is the fact that it requires physical abilities. If not done properly, the user could injure themselves. There's also the fact that the user has to manage launch the opponent in the air as well as enter the air themselves, meaning that it often times requires preparation to perform as opposed to other Taijutsu skills. Lastly to the weaknesses, is the user is completely open should the opponent be able to react while in the air. For instance, if the opponent flips face-down in the air, the technique's very likely to fail given that the opponent can not only use Ninjutsu on the user, but also has the advantage of being higher up even though both are in the air; this mean,s countering is fairly easy plus when gravity takes over, the opponent can easily hit the user hard.​

 

[Razgriz]

[QUOTE="Kiyoko Tomoe]

Alright, how's this technique look...? It's kind of a play on Primary Lotus and Lion's Barrage if you can't tell



This I'll probably change given it's too close to Lion's Barrage, though then again I can't exactly put Lion's Barrage on there given it was invented later on in the timeline... Oh well, here it is! xD

Name of Technique:

Blooming Lotus

Type of Jutsu:

Taijutsu

Rank:

C-Rank

Range:

Close-Range

Nature Type:

N/A

Handseals:

N/A

Description:

Launching the opponent into the air, the user's starting point for Blooming Lotus is initially from below the opponent, opponent facing upwards giving clear view of the back. Getting just below the opponent, facing upwards with them and palm against the back (such as by use of Dancing Leaf Shadow), the user extends their arm all the while keeping their hand pressed to the opponent until fully extended, allowing the user turn before releasing their palm to allow kicking into the opponent's back.

Following the initial kick, the user pushes off and continues with a spin kick to the opponent's side. Generally this is meant to be blocked, giving the user either something to push off of and swing above, or the opponent will grab and pull the user upward to try slamming the user down; in this case, the user will twist their foot to break free as brought upward, with either situation resulting in the user spinning and kicking sideways with the top of their foot into the opponent's abdomin, resulting in the opponent crashing to the ground.

Regardless of whether or not the second kick hits, the user can still proceed into the third kick by using the second kick to move the opponent downward instead of going upward from the other two methods, which actually adds not only more hits but more momentum upon kicking the opponent down, resulting in more damage from the crash landing. This technique can be used alongside the Eight Gates, allowing for more destructive taijutsu skills, as well as due to the level of skill and physical activity involved, does not require Eight Gates such as Primary Lotus as well as is something a taijutsu-specializing genin/chunin could learn after long enough practice.

Weakness:

The main weakness of this technique is the fact that it requires physical abilities. If not done properly, the user could injure themselves. There's also the fact that the user has to manage launch the opponent in the air as well as enter the air themselves, meaning that it often times requires preparation to perform as opposed to other Taijutsu skills. Lastly to the weaknesses, is the user is completely open should the opponent be able to react while in the air. For instance, if the opponent flips face-down in the air, the technique's very likely to fail given that the opponent can not only use Ninjutsu on the user, but also has the advantage of being higher up even though both are in the air; this mean,s countering is fairly easy plus when gravity takes over, the opponent can easily hit the user hard.​

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It looks fine to me.

 

[Kiyoko Tomoe]

Alright, editing it in and removing Front/Reverse Lotus.

 

[Razgriz]

[QUOTE="Kiyoko Tomoe]Alright, editing it in and removing Front/Reverse Lotus.

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isn't his picture the male version of tenten???

 

[Kiyoko Tomoe]

[QUOTE="Dai tenshi]isn't his picture the male version of tenten???

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Yeah, probably. Just looked for a male appearance, found it, and used it because I liked it. Didn't actually realize until after deciding I liked it it was a male Tenten picture xD

 

[Razgriz]

[QUOTE="Kiyoko Tomoe]Yeah, probably. Just looked for a male appearance, found it, and used it because I liked it. Didn't actually realize until after deciding I liked it it was a male Tenten picture xD

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LOL xD

 

[LiteracyUnmatched]

Uh.. The Uchiha I made doesn't have the sharingan yet, and I wasn't planning on giving it to him for a long time.


It's just that I spent alot of work on that character and don't want him to go waste. Can he be accepted if I don't give him the sharingan. I said in the CS that he doesn't know if he has it so can I just make him not have it.. Well until you trust me enough?

 

[Kiyoko Tomoe]

By the way, any plans for another team, for the new characters? I'm hopin' Kojiro be put on a team but the information of his lack of Ninjutsu and Genjutsu skills not be reported thus resulting in confusion from the Jonin as to why he's got so much Chakra coming from him yet doesn't use it for Ninjutsu or Genjutsu, perhaps somebody unaware about the Eight Gates as well to make the source of said chakra a mystery? xD

Uh.. The Uchiha I made doesn't have the sharingan yet, and I wasn't planning on giving it to him for a long time.
It's just that I spent alot of work on that character and don't want him to go waste. Can he be accepted if I don't give him the sharingan. I said in the CS that he doesn't know if he has it so can I just make him not have it.. Well until you trust me enough?

By the way, I find your character's sheet odd... I mean, up until the wiping-out of the Uchiha clan, the Uchiha Clan basically kept reproduction between clan members, so as to keep the clan's Kekkei Genkai more prominent. That's basically how all clans worked up until somewhere after the third war as up until then blood relationships were everything when it came to clans; not related by blood 100%, not part of the clan. At least, that's what I remember about it.


Also, no real effort'd be wasted if you just omit the Uchiha part and make everythin' else the same, such as nature release and jutsu, etc.; unless of course it involves some key factors related to him being an Uchiha in his bio or something, in which case you might have to rework that...


Don't yell at me for stealin' your job Dai xD

 

[LiteracyUnmatched]

@Kiyoko Tomoe thanks for the lesson in common sense. I'm just pretty lazy, and it's 11pm right now, I'm pretty lying in bed looking for something to do.


I just finished watching The Last: Naruto the movie now I'm bored outta my mind.

 

[Razgriz]

@Kiyoko Tomoe thanks for the lesson in common sense. I'm just pretty lazy, and it's 11pm right now, I'm pretty lying in bed looking for something to do.
I just finished watching The Last: Naruto the movie now I'm bored outta my mind.

Well may I ask what are you going to choose to do. Since the point @Kiyoko Tomoe made was coorect.

@SummerWolf[/URL] is making a new character you should have the third member for your team soon.

 

[Kiyoko Tomoe]

@SummerWolf[/URL] is making a new character you should have the third member for your team soon.

So... Should I just play it like Kojiro's not part of a team yet, kindal ike there's a delay in selecting a Jonin or something thus allowing him basically free-roam and do intense training...? xD


Ooh, perhaps I should have him challenge monkey-man to a match and keep up for a bit before landing flat on his ass from trying too hard? xD

 

[LiteracyUnmatched]

Alright, alright... I'll edit out of the Uchiha thing. Thanks for giving me a chance I'm glad to take part in your RP.

 

[Hanarei]

@Quiet @Saru @ValkyrieRose


I was thinking about Sayuri just kinda trying to sort out the trial, but I figured "You know what, that would be far to simple, we need a chance for their sensei to be more threatening first."


That, and it allows anyone who wants to be bold and try just straight winning to go to promote some chaos. Sayuri would be able to piece together a bit of the scenario for them to do it properly, though it seems a little too orderly for most genin teams to all just suddenly jump on (Sayuri happens to be on the smarter side, my smart Genin as opposed to the 'other' ) Granted, even with the plan she still would keep up the competition aspect, she would just make it so they don't all goof up what is needed.

 

[Razgriz]

[QUOTE="Kiyoko Tomoe]So... Should I just play it like Kojiro's not part of a team yet, kindal ike there's a delay in selecting a Jonin or something thus allowing him basically free-roam and do intense training...? xD

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Well if you want. I think is should be tomorrow when summer is done. You can just say that your jounin was out on a mission. Since I am thinking of having Izayoi be your jounin. And my female jounin be the sensei for the other team.

 

[LiteracyUnmatched]

Alright, I'll try posting a CS as soon as I can tomorrow. I'm currently on my phone right now, so I can't do it.

 

[Razgriz]

Alright, alright... I'll edit out of the Uchiha thing. Thanks for giving me a chance I'm glad to take part in your RP.

No problem. Just to let you know I hate criticizing others ideas, but I really just don't like the Uchiha. I have been in other rps where a Uchiha character destroys the rp. So I have lost trust in Uchiha characters. And I am happy to have you in my rp.

 

[Razgriz]

@Nenma Takashi @Kinzu Hekmatyar


Sorry about the delay. I promise you two will have your team ready tomorrow.

 

[Razgriz]

I will be getting off for tonight. I need to get some sleep for my exam tomorrow. I will answer any questions or deal with anything else tomorrow after my exam.