Gospeller
Tempered Preacher
Alright then - we're back in business. GM post will be up within the hour.
Thank y'all who did for waiting patiently and apologies for the situation
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Thank y'all who did for waiting patiently and apologies for the situation
Gospeller
Tempered Preacher
CS FEEDBACK
@Julie -> Character's occupation has been set as 'hitman'. This development was not covered in the backstory - though even if it was, it would be considered a bit too high profile. See below ;]
@Shimakage Thunder -> Character is too high profile; as the overview says, it is a main focus on down-to-earth maybe-slightly-skilled recruits into a gang that will raise in the ranks. High profile hitmen and assassins are too much for a low-time gang, though that may be what the 'recruit group' ascends to ;]
@Darth Gangsta -> CS includes quite a bit of spelling errors. Fixed a few of them - but double read your CS yo'h :]
@Julie -> Character's occupation has been set as 'hitman'. This development was not covered in the backstory - though even if it was, it would be considered a bit too high profile. See below ;]
@Shimakage Thunder -> Character is too high profile; as the overview says, it is a main focus on down-to-earth maybe-slightly-skilled recruits into a gang that will raise in the ranks. High profile hitmen and assassins are too much for a low-time gang, though that may be what the 'recruit group' ascends to ;]
@Darth Gangsta -> CS includes quite a bit of spelling errors. Fixed a few of them - but double read your CS yo'h :]
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Spacing Out
Boredom at its finest
Dang it! Alright I guess I'll make her an old member of the gang. I still like her side career though. Maybe she can also be a supplier at the same time? Since they are struggling perhaps they might still need her to go on missions and events. I don't know just an idea.Gospeller said:
Gospeller
Tempered Preacher
She could be a sub-supplier of some sort? So whilst out on missions, she carried extra (but not crazy) gear for the group? Utilities and such such as gasoline, flick knives, screwdrivers ... etc ... or perhaps a former supplier that has lost their fortune and had to start from scratch?
At this point in time, due to their relative smallness, MB doesn't need a direct supplier of arms/drugs etc ... as they are just feeding it through several sources. Though as they become more firm standing they will need them ;]
At this point in time, due to their relative smallness, MB doesn't need a direct supplier of arms/drugs etc ... as they are just feeding it through several sources. Though as they become more firm standing they will need them ;]
Gospeller
Tempered Preacher
A "Neutral Characters" tab has been raised, allowing players to go back and check on all the information collected about certain NPCs that may have further involvement in the RP.
Spacing Out
Boredom at its finest
Sure I don't mind making her a sub supplier. Might be fun actually. I guess since she moved to Los Angeles from Brazil, she'll have to start from scratch so it makes sense. I guess she'll become a main supplier later on. I mean she does work for a weapon company after all.Gospeller said:
Alright I'll change the CS now. But other than that am I accepted?
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Gospeller
Tempered Preacher
Yuppsies. I'll make an update of the Accepted List later today ;]
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Boredom at its finest
ThanksGospeller said:
minajesty
𝘢𝘬𝘢 𝙈𝙄𝙉𝘼 !
Fixed it...thanks for telling meGospeller said:
Darth Gangsta
fresh out of h*cks
So I isn't accepted?
Is it alright if we do like the list of the accepted is also the posting order?
Gospeller
Tempered Preacher
As I said before ->
Rather than a posting order we'll have a posting timeframe - which is a minimum of 24h and a maximum of 48, depending on people's response time. That way, someone doesn't have to wait for someone else that (e.g) is temporarily absent or comes on later in the night/day to post. Thus, posts can come out as they do.
That being said, post away. Worst case scenario? Edit your post to keep up with the rest.
Rather than a posting order we'll have a posting timeframe - which is a minimum of 24h and a maximum of 48, depending on people's response time. That way, someone doesn't have to wait for someone else that (e.g) is temporarily absent or comes on later in the night/day to post. Thus, posts can come out as they do.
That being said, post away. Worst case scenario? Edit your post to keep up with the rest.
BloodThunder27
Seven Thousand Club
So I over-qualified?Gospeller said:
Gospeller
Tempered Preacher
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Accepted Characters (Update 4)
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Nathan 'Phoenix' Birk - @Julie
Also just putting down here - in case people are uncertain, the time-frame is closing and we will soon be moving on. Due to the lack of responses I will delay it to tomorrow before the GM post shoots up. Any character that hasn't responded until then will be said to have -> Stayed outside due to uncertainty. And may rejoin whenever.
Accepted Characters (Update 4)
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Nathan 'Phoenix' Birk - @Julie
Also just putting down here - in case people are uncertain, the time-frame is closing and we will soon be moving on. Due to the lack of responses I will delay it to tomorrow before the GM post shoots up. Any character that hasn't responded until then will be said to have -> Stayed outside due to uncertainty. And may rejoin whenever.
Darth Gangsta
fresh out of h*cks
I wonder if I can still go in this RP . . .
Gospeller
Tempered Preacher
The next GM post is coming up today! [Albeit a tad late]
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Gospeller
Tempered Preacher
The GM post is up - delayed due to how long it is. Again apologies if it is a bit saturated with details!
Should I continue making them as long as they are, or want me to dim it down to basic need-to-know?
Should I continue making them as long as they are, or want me to dim it down to basic need-to-know?
Elephantom
Chicken Broth Paragon
Details are real good, man. Real good.
Due to the fact that school and work have been keeping me very busy...I wont be able to join this and it sucks cause I really wanted to
Hansel
Hansel
Ah, excuse me, but I was wondering about the role-play order.
In the rules, it's written that there's a turn-system in this role-play, so I was wondering where I could see the order of turns and where my turn is?
In the rules, it's written that there's a turn-system in this role-play, so I was wondering where I could see the order of turns and where my turn is?
Gospeller
Tempered Preacher
@Midnight Soul -> Ah what a shame. But thanks for notifying!
@Hansel -> You probably missed it in the heap of posts, but we have put it down as a 'time-based' response at this point. This means that everyone has a certain amount of time to post before the GM post comes up and responds and we move on. So go ahead and post - though find a way to integrate yourself into the story. E.g lateness for recruitment etc ... if you want help on it and/or have ideas on how to, then throw me a PM and we'll sort it! :]
@Hansel -> You probably missed it in the heap of posts, but we have put it down as a 'time-based' response at this point. This means that everyone has a certain amount of time to post before the GM post comes up and responds and we move on. So go ahead and post - though find a way to integrate yourself into the story. E.g lateness for recruitment etc ... if you want help on it and/or have ideas on how to, then throw me a PM and we'll sort it! :]
Hansel
Hansel
Sorry, that was my bad. And I'll just jump in and give my character a late arrival. Just give me a bit and thank you for responding.
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Elephantom
Chicken Broth Paragon
@Gospeller
I think we should move it on, since the others don't look like they'll reply anytime soon. Or you could tag them, see if they're still interested.
I think we should move it on, since the others don't look like they'll reply anytime soon. Or you could tag them, see if they're still interested.
Gospeller
Tempered Preacher
Nathan 'Phoenix' Birk - @Julie
We will be moving on.
We will be moving on.
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