Kumii
Hydro Dragon
AlrightyI can imagine how strong Karzhul's glare must be through the screen. Would have my heart skipping.
Also, from this right here, it seems you like you feel you did something wrong. Nah, you didn't. But reading it now, I wasn't expected another character to join the interaction. From what Alpha and I have been planning for a while, it was going to be Lloyd, Aiko, and the spirit slayers. Just them. Then, once Lloyd takes Aiko away from the slayers, I think that's where they were supposed to encounter the Finch group and Karzhul. Or maybe it was the attack on Ironshire first, then they meet the others. I can't recall.
What I'm saying is, that interaction was supposed to be just our two kiddos getting their long-awaited introduction, Lloyd saving Aiko, and then running off. Just the kiddos.
But with Karzhul here now, it'd most likely be him doing most of the work in the battle or scaring the others off, which to me, highkey ruins the storyline of Lloyd saving Aiko and their friendship blooming.
So, I think that adding Karzhul in disrupts the scene, you feel me? I get that you had this idea and you seemed eager to execute it. But, it's not really needed right now and, frankly, messes up Alpha and I's plans. I feel bad bursting your bubble like this, but could we just have it be Lloyd and Aiko? There'll be plenty of time for them to meet Karzhul later, and I think it was actually planned for them to meet him too. So, it's not like this is the only opportunity for it.
Once again, I feel bad shutting down your idea like this, but I don't want the storyline to be thrown off, Kumii. So, could you please implement Karzhul into the story later? Feel free to give me your thoughts, of course.