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SharkBark said:
I didn't even get a notification for it. Guess I forgot to watch the page.
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It happens man, I posted the Valkyrie vs. Harpy war too and explained a little more how the Demons came to be close allies to the Harpies.

But the big focus Luminosa's lore lol
 
AlphaBlueWolf AlphaBlueWolf

Now that...is some amazing lore right there.

An expansive and detailed explanation of Luminosa's history from the start to present in chronological order, 9 (i repeat) NINE WHOLE CHAPTERS of well paced writing, AND it was easy to keep up with. While reading each chapter, I wasn't confused on what was happening not once. It was very well elaborated. Kudos to you for that. I truly enjoyed reading it.

'Divergent Narratives' and 'Lyris's Hope-Enlightened Period' were my favorite chapters by far. Divergent Narratives presented several necessary questions and had me thinking about what was right, what was wrong, and what had truly happened with the first Cabrera and his descent into 'evil'. Because when you think about it, how did anyone know what the Shepard boy was doing, and if he was even cursed at all? From what I read, he was sort of shunned and ignored, so not a single person was genuinely able to get his perspective on the matter. He could have just been climbing with his goats, (as stated in the lore) or trying to see if he was capable of reaching the top of Solqueador. It has excited to find out what really happened on that cursed day, which hopefully we'll find out through the roleplay.

The part about the entities identity was also very interesting. It introduces the many different perspectives and beliefs from the various versions of the tale. Was the entity a god or a demon? Was their intention to gift the Cabrera or curse them? And most importantly, who is this entity?

Now with 'Lyris's Hope-Enlightened Period', I can't help but feel bad for the guy 😭 Lyris just wanted to alleviate the distress induced by his brothers, which was a success, yet he is still very underappreciated by his own people. Bro was even "thought of as silly and unnecessary for the growth of the city". AND his statue is now just used as a main area for street performances and games. Yes, he is still acknowledged through the times of celebrate, but not enough. I think bro deserves as much recognition as Ignis😭😭

In conclusion, great job with the lore, Alpha! I loved reading it.
 
SharkBark said:
AlphaBlueWolf AlphaBlueWolf

Now that...is some amazing lore right there.

An expansive and detailed explanation of Luminosa's history from the start to present in chronological order, 9 (i repeat) NINE WHOLE CHAPTERS of well paced writing, AND it was easy to keep up with. While reading each chapter, I wasn't confused on what was happening not once. It was very well elaborated. Kudos to you for that. I truly enjoyed reading it.

'Divergent Narratives' and 'Lyris's Hope-Enlightened Period' were my favorite chapters by far. Divergent Narratives presented several necessary questions and had me thinking about what was right, what was wrong, and what had truly happened with the first Cabrera and his descent into 'evil'. Because when you think about it, how did anyone know what the Shepard boy was doing, and if he was even cursed at all? From what I read, he was sort of shunned and ignored, so not a single person was genuinely able to get his perspective on the matter. He could have just been climbing with his goats, (as stated in the lore) or trying to see if he was capable of reaching the top of Solqueador. It has excited to find out what really happened on that cursed day, which hopefully we'll find out through the roleplay.

The part about the entities identity was also very interesting. It introduces the many different perspectives and beliefs from the various versions of the tale. Was the entity a god or a demon? Was their intention to gift the Cabrera or curse them? And most importantly, who is this entity?

Now with 'Lyris's Hope-Enlightened Period', I can't help but feel bad for the guy 😭 Lyris just wanted to alleviate the distress induced by his brothers, which was a success, yet he is still very underappreciated by his own people. Bro was even "thought of as silly and unnecessary for the growth of the city". AND his statue is now just used as a main area for street performances and games. Yes, he is still acknowledged through the times of celebrate, but not enough. I think bro deserves as much recognition as Ignis😭😭

In conclusion, great job with the lore, Alpha! I loved reading it.
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If it was a god, Alpha would have to run it by me first so that I can make sure it fits within the existing pantheon lol
 
Not saying it cant be but I have a very specific idea about this world's pantheon so I wanna sure make sure they have good cohesion in terms of that.
 
Kumii said:
*weak laughing*
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I see that you're really liking that Serobliss code 😭 I don't know why, but somehow it fits each one of your characters perfectly. Considering that they are all "royal" is a kind of way. ESPECIALLY Maria. Bro, I was shocked to see how well it came out. So regal for real.
 
SharkBark said:
I see that you're really liking that Serobliss code 😭 I don't know why, but somehow it fits each one of your characters perfectly. Considering that they are all "royal" is a kind of way. ESPECIALLY Maria. Bro, I was shocked to see how well it came out. So regal for real.
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I'm surpirsed how much I've taken a liking to that particular code too

And yeah, I agree. I mean she's the freaking High Queen of the main nation of the RP! She deserves only the best treatment!!
 
Kumii said:
I'm surpirsed how much I've taken a liking to that particular code too

And yeah, I agree. I mean she's the freaking High Queen of the main nation of the RP! She deserves only the best treatment!!
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THE ABSOLUTE BEST OF THE BEST TREATMENT FOR QUEEN MARIA

Salute GIF
 
SharkBark said:
AlphaBlueWolf AlphaBlueWolf

Now that...is some amazing lore right there.

An expansive and detailed explanation of Luminosa's history from the start to present in chronological order, 9 (i repeat) NINE WHOLE CHAPTERS of well paced writing, AND it was easy to keep up with. While reading each chapter, I wasn't confused on what was happening not once. It was very well elaborated. Kudos to you for that. I truly enjoyed reading it.

'Divergent Narratives' and 'Lyris's Hope-Enlightened Period' were my favorite chapters by far. Divergent Narratives presented several necessary questions and had me thinking about what was right, what was wrong, and what had truly happened with the first Cabrera and his descent into 'evil'. Because when you think about it, how did anyone know what the Shepard boy was doing, and if he was even cursed at all? From what I read, he was sort of shunned and ignored, so not a single person was genuinely able to get his perspective on the matter. He could have just been climbing with his goats, (as stated in the lore) or trying to see if he was capable of reaching the top of Solqueador. It has excited to find out what really happened on that cursed day, which hopefully we'll find out through the roleplay.

The part about the entities identity was also very interesting. It introduces the many different perspectives and beliefs from the various versions of the tale. Was the entity a god or a demon? Was their intention to gift the Cabrera or curse them? And most importantly, who is this entity?

Now with 'Lyris's Hope-Enlightened Period', I can't help but feel bad for the guy 😭 Lyris just wanted to alleviate the distress induced by his brothers, which was a success, yet he is still very underappreciated by his own people. Bro was even "thought of as silly and unnecessary for the growth of the city". AND his statue is now just used as a main area for street performances and games. Yes, he is still acknowledged through the times of celebrate, but not enough. I think bro deserves as much recognition as Ignis😭😭

In conclusion, great job with the lore, Alpha! I loved reading it.
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Thank you Shark! Yes, there's going to be a lot elaborated in the rp. Our characters are gonna be like mini detectives lol We're gonna leave the chapter with a lot of things answered and hopefully those answers shock you guys.

Yeah, Lyris gets left in the dust a bit. Both of his brothers have reputations, one of greatness and one of scorn, while he's just the silly little guy. I mean he loved the things he ended up being known for, but people often forget that he fought off the Beast too and that he was as powerful as his brother. Both of Ignis' brothers aren't given as much credit or attention as they should've gotten, with Ignis soaking up the spotlight most of the time.
 
AlphaBlueWolf said:
Our characters are gonna be like mini detectives lol We're gonna leave the chapter with a lot of things answered and hopefully those answers shock you guys.
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Definitely excited for this!
AlphaBlueWolf said:
Yeah, Lyris gets left in the dust a bit. Both of his brothers have reputations, one of greatness and one of scorn, while he's just the silly little guy. I mean he loved the things he ended up being known for, but people often forget that he fought off the Beast too and that he was as powerful as his brother. Both of Ignis' brothers aren't given as much credit or attention as they should've gotten, with Ignis soaking up the spotlight most of the time.
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#justiceforlyris 😔
 
SharkBark SharkBark AlphaBlueWolf AlphaBlueWolf
Just a heads up, the next Royal Guard is going to have some... disturbing topics, so if you don't feel comfortable reading it, then you can skip reading the background. Just thought I'd let you guys know beforehand.
 
Kumii said:
Yeah, I know some people don't fair well with that. It'll contain mostly slavery but... some implications too.
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Yeah, some people have certain triggers. I don't really have triggers as long as those hard concepts are handled well and respectfully. I think you'll be fine with that though.
 
It also expands on Lola's (The Maid Assassin) a bit more too! So there's a silver lining in the tragedy lol
 
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