Kumii
Hydro Dragon
If Alpha still wants the responsibility of an entire nation, this'll be the first time that I won't get involved in choices regarding a major city in the RP.
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Got it. Also you missed about 4 other questionsAlso it'll first take place in Ironshire with the probe attacks with some scattered assualts on the Seiryoku Empire. How long it'll last is indeterminant...
Did I? Which ones?Got it. Also you missed about 4 other questions
Oh, I didn't scroll up enough. I see your answers now.Did I? Which ones?
If Skyla's going to have to fight in the war, then it'll be likely that Rai follows alongside her. Mateo's life is taking a turn into him finding out new things, plus he might find an ancestor soon, so I don't know if I can say the same about him.Or at all. They can choose to not fight in the war at all--
I lied, depending on how Skyla's chapter turns out, she wont but Mateo and Rai will have that luxury.
I get how you feel. Don't beat yourself up too much about it though. Pacing can be hard sometimes, especially knowing when and where to introduce something new or a character. You made a new character and plot idea and got excited to throw it in, I get it. Next time just think about whether a crucial moment is going down or something....I felt bad that i stole Alpha's scene ;-;
Said she wasn't being a jerk or anything but I could tell that she was upset
Well, i'm still gonna do the sneaky sneak things but thats just normal in any piece of writing. Even in situations where it might seem irrelevant, writers will sometimes throw in something to allude to a later event. Something that's intended to be quickly overshadowed but a good detail for those who pay attention to it.If Skyla's going to have to fight in the war, then it'll be likely that Rai follows alongside her. Mateo's life is taking a turn into him finding out new things, plus he might find an ancestor soon, so I don't know if I can say the same about him.
Lloyd is excluded from the war of course.
I get how you feel. Don't beat yourself up too much about it though. Pacing can be hard sometimes, especially knowing when and where to introduce something new or a character. You made a new character and plot idea and got excited to throw it in, I get it. Next time just think about whether a crucial moment is going down or something.
You apologized and rewrote the post. We'll see how Alpha reacts to that, but till then, just try to take it as a lesson, yeah? Maybe you can introduce Ren and the energy flux things a little later in the rp. Let's leave new discoveries and things like that to Alpha for now with the Skyla outline. It is Mateo's chapter after all.
That's true. Let's just hold back on those when it comes to important and key moments involving Alpha's characters.Well, i'm still gonna do the sneaky sneak things but thats just normal in any piece of writing. Even in situations where it might seem irrelevant, writers will sometimes throw in something to allude to a later event.
Lloyd is not excluded from the war. Lloyd must fight for the Motherland.
I mean, I already did one in the rewrite but it got quickly swept away by Skyla so as to not take away from the question she asked.That's true. Let's just hold back on those when it comes to important and key moments involving Alpha's characters.
You are so right. Lloyd will fight his hardest. FOR MOTHER RUSSIA
Ah the dizziness. What's going on with that? Or will it be discussed later?I mean, I already did one in the rewrite but it got quickly swept away by Skyla so as to not take away from the question she asked.
He better. The Motherland depends on him.
It's still part of Ren/Skyla thing. It'll be discussed later but it also involves a piece of equipment that belonged to Mika.Ah the dizziness. What's going on with that? Or will it be discussed later?
Yeah, he'll most likely be doing more of service to civilians less than fighting. Maybe he'll fight alongside Finch or Serena here and then, but then he'll go back to helping civilians.
Also, I love the names for the war participants. Deathly Coalition and the League of Nations.
No problem.It's still part of Ren/Skyla thing. It'll be discussed later but it also involves a piece of equipment that belonged to Mika.
Thank you lol
Tried my best to think of names for like 'Factions' of the war.
It's nightNo problem.
Gonna head off to sleep now. Since it's pretty late where I'm at. Goodnight, Kumii. (or day depending on how it is for you)
It's completely alright man! Like Shark said, pacing and stuff. I know you weren't doing anything malicious about it, just got excited about a new idea as we all do, and you were super chill about postponing it and rewriting the post. Thanks for that, by the way. I'm sorry if I came off harsh with explaining the whole thing, I just wanted to explain my point of view. I'm not upset. In the moment, a little annoyed? Yeah. (I guess, can't think of a good word to describe it.) But I'm glad we got it resolved so quickly and that it wasn't a big issue. Thanks for being so cool about it!...I felt bad that i stole Alpha's scene ;-;
Said she wasn't being a jerk or anything but I could tell that she was upset
I'll take it up charge! lol. Natalie's a skilled general and one to not shy away from fighting. She'd definitely be good as an aggressive fighting force against the Death Knight's army. Also, again, there's no one else who could take the position, and we've already established her as the acting leader of Ironshire.AlphaBlueWolf SharkBark
I wanna let you know that war will start before the timeskip, not during like I had intended originally. ANd it will start soon. Very soon and it will start as the post mentions, with probe attacks on Ironshire which Alpha's character, as the current acting leader due to Cyan's absence, will have to deal with according.
AlphaBlueWolf
The choices you make with your character will affect Ironshire and, to an extent, the course of the war on Ironshire. It's a big responsibility, do you still want it like we discussed?
Yeah, he's taking a turn, but he's gonna follow the people who are like family to him rather than the family he's never known. He'll be a great field medic, a rival to the ladies of the Red Cross. Their battle will be legendary. Though, I don't know how the war will affect the character chapters, as Rai still needs to get his and then there's also the Desert Nation chapter which seems like it'll be independent from the war.If Skyla's going to have to fight in the war, then it'll be likely that Rai follows alongside her. Mateo's life is taking a turn into him finding out new things, plus he might find an ancestor soon, so I don't know if I can say the same about him.
Lloyd is excluded from the war of course.
I get how you feel. Don't beat yourself up too much about it though. Pacing can be hard sometimes, especially knowing when and where to introduce something new or a character. You made a new character and plot idea and got excited to throw it in, I get it. Next time just think about whether a crucial moment is going down or something.
You apologized and rewrote the post. We'll see how Alpha reacts to that, but till then, just try to take it as a lesson, yeah? Maybe you can introduce Ren and the energy flux things a little later in the rp. Let's leave new discoveries and things like that to Alpha for now with the Skyla outline. It is Mateo's chapter after all.
Brings a tear to my eyes. The whole team is going out to war together. Our #1 healer is back in action.Yeah, he's taking a turn, but he's gonna follow the people who are like family to him rather than the family he's never known. He'll be a great field medic, a rival to the ladies of the Red Cross. Their battle will be legendary. Though, I don't know how the war will affect the character chapters, as Rai still needs to get his and then there's also the Desert Nation chapter which seems like it'll be independent from the war.
Who's Natalie?I'll take it up charge! lol. Natalie's a skilled general and one to not shy away from fighting. She'd definitely be good as an aggressive fighting force against the Death Knight's army. Also, again, there's no one else who could take the position, and we've already established her as the acting leader of Ironshire.
Oh yeah, it'll take place at the Empire, starting only with proxy attacks at first then escalating into a full blown invasion at about the same time the invasion of Ironshire happens.Who's Natalie?
Also, Kumii , you never answered. Where will the Seiryoku-Urag-hau vs Deathly Coalition part of the war take place? Unless you want it to go down at the empire.
Oooor maybe the attacks get timed with the dragon attacks...Brings a tear to my eyes. The whole team is going out to war together. Our #1 healer is back in action.
We really can only hope that things turn out well after the way relating to future chapters. I don't know how the war will turn out (considering there'll be a ton of critical choices), so there's really no telling what drastic things will take place in the lives of any of our characters. Aleph's arm will be done soon, and he'll be taking him back to his clan, so depending on when the war starts, I'm sure that he'll be gone for the duration.
We also have the dragon battle to start and finish, so maybe Kumii will delay the attacks on Ironshire till then. That'll just leave Seiryoku and Urag-hau to battle. (if he chooses to do so)
For now, Luminosa and the Desert Nation will be untouched by the war until the conclusion of the corresponding character chapters.Yeah, he's taking a turn, but he's gonna follow the people who are like family to him rather than the family he's never known. He'll be a great field medic, a rival to the ladies of the Red Cross. Their battle will be legendary. Though, I don't know how the war will affect the character chapters, as Rai still needs to get his and then there's also the Desert Nation chapter which seems like it'll be independent from the war.
Natalie Talvik. She's Finch's stepmother and an elven general of Ironshire. She's the current head of Ironshire now that Cyan has gone off to Oghma. Finch also has a stepsister, Skylark, or Lark for short. Bird Siblings! lolBrings a tear to my eyes. The whole team is going out to war together. Our #1 healer is back in action.
We really can only hope that things turn out well after the way relating to future chapters. I don't know how the war will turn out (considering there'll be a ton of critical choices), so there's really no telling what drastic things will take place in the lives of any of our characters. Aleph's arm will be done soon, and he'll be taking him back to his clan, so depending on when the war starts, I'm sure that he'll be gone for the duration.
We also have the dragon battle to start and finish, so maybe Kumii will delay the attacks on Ironshire till then. That'll just leave Seiryoku and Urag-hau to battle. (if he chooses to do so)
Who's Natalie?
Also, Kumii , you never answered. Where will the Seiryoku-Urag-hau vs Deathly Coalition part of the war take place? Unless you want it to go down at the empire.
Unless the dragons are in cahoots with the Death Knights army, I'd say keep it separate. We are talking about an elder dragon, and the potential for more than one of them, which is something Ironshire seems to never have faced before. And also, those things are fucking powerful. It's gonna be a tough one. I'd say sequence it as different events but in a similar time frame. Dragon attack, then Ironshire tries to start repairing the damage. Maybe there could be skirmishes on the borders, but Natalie isn't given them any ground as she's pushing back as an aggressive force, and then after the dragon attack the Death Knight sees it as an opening because they are weak and goes for the full invasion. I could see Natalie having been put in charge of handling the skirmishes, but through being too stretched thin and focused on the dragon attack, she doesn't even see the second one coming.Oh yeah, it'll take place at the Empire, starting only with proxy attacks at first then escalating into a full blown invasion at about the same time the invasion of Ironshire happens.
Oooor maybe the attacks get timed with the dragon attacks...
I'm gonna be real, things are gonna get tough for Ironshire real fucking quick.
For now, Luminosa and the Desert Nation will be untouched by the war until the conclusion of the corresponding character chapters.
No.. no not an elder dragon. Just a regular dragon. Besides, I never said they were and never said the dragon was not gonna attack the Army of the Dead. To the Death Knight, his army is expendable and easily replaceable. Having Ironshire deal with both an invasion and dragon is a smart move on the Knight's part. Exhaust your enemy and all that.Unless the dragons are in cahoots with the Death Knights army, I'd say keep it separate. We are talking about an elder dragon, and the potential for more than one of them, which is something Ironshire seems to never have faced before. And also, those things are fucking powerful. It's gonna be a tough one. I'd say sequence it as different events but in a similar time frame. Dragon attack, then Ironshire tries to start repairing the damage. Maybe there could be skirmishes on the borders, but Natalie isn't given them any ground as she's pushing back as an aggressive force, and then after the dragon attack the Death Knight sees it as an opening because they are weak and goes for the full invasion. I could see Natalie having been put in charge of handling the skirmishes, but through being too stretched thin and focused on the dragon attack, she doesn't even see the second one coming.
Good to know. Skyla's group can just fuck around during their character chapters while the whole nation goes to war lol
So the dragon that took Aleph's arm isn't an elder dragon? Or is there a whole nother dragon here?And, there's no potential for more dragons, it was just the one that was revived so just the one will attack
Yes two voices, one of them was Strunqonah (The elder dragon in question who won't stay because he's a major enemy for a side story) and Nahagliiv (The dragon who everyone will fight later)So the dragon that took Aleph's arm isn't an elder dragon? Or is there a whole nother dragon here?
Wait, wait, wait. Correct me if I'm wrong. Weren't there two voices?
Is Nahagliv the dragon Kaius and Rayya are off to fight right now?Yes two voices, one of them was Strunqonah (The elder dragon in question who won't stay because he's a major enemy for a side story) and Nahagliiv (The dragon who everyone will fight later)