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Name: Egala Weatherly
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Race: Half breed Demon and human, sometimes called a tiefling, though that phrasing often holds negative connotations.
Height: 5'9"/6'3"
Weight: 140lbs/180lbs
Appearance:
As a human Egala looks rather fragile, often seen covering herself from the sunlight. Her pale skin and cyan eye color with silver white hair, leaves her as a stunning woman. Her attire is more fitting of someone of nobility, constantly wearing dresses and such similar attire.
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As a demon, Egala goes from Regal and Admirable to Savage and Terrifying in an instant. A pair of horns increasing her height by a bit and drastic increase in muscle mass, though her overall slim appearance remains the same. Her eyes shining golden as the power of her father courses through her. Ps, her umbrella turns into the massive spear.
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Personality: Depending on whether or not Egala is in her human state determines a great deal of her personality. In her human state Egala is reserved, kind, and passive. She will often refrain from speaking her mind as the tutors had instructed her. When she does speak, it's clear and powerful while still being minimal. She seems to have no anger in her and has been occasionally called a saint by those that have met her.
When Egala becomes her demonic self, she is very direct and has no filter. She becomes wild, flirtatious, energetic and head strong. She beats to the sound of her own drum and she'll smash the face in of those that try to stop her, as long as she isn't fully aware that she'd lose the fight. She's got brains to go along with those guts. In her demonic appearance, Egala isn't afraid to state what she wants or believes either. It's a release from the desire pent up inside her.
Backstory:
Egala's mother, Vanessa, was once a lowly housewife in a middle class family. However, she was very much unfulfilled with her life and eventually wound up joining a cult to a demon lord named Garlok. Entranced by the majesty of the demon, Vanessa prayed to the demon to grant her an extravagant life that she could only dream of. She felt like it would never come true, but as always is the case, be careful what you wish for.
The cult suddenly came upon an old tome describing in detail how to bring Garlok into the world. After months of planning and preparation the cult brought forth the hellspawn into the mortal world. Vanessa was awestruck by how the demon took a human form and was so appealing. And when Garlok looked at her, she could feel something like a connection to him. Ignoring the throws of people, Garlok went to Vanessa with an offer. If the woman would giver herself to him, he would grant the wish she'd prayed so hard for.
Without thinking of the consequences Vanessa agreed and Egala was guaranteed into the world of mortals. With his business in the mortal world complete, Garlok returned to the world of demons, but not without ensuring that should the members of the cult perish, their wills left all their money to Vanessa as she would bear Garlok's child. As if by magic, once the wills were changed, each of the cult members began to die in weird accidents. Garlok had granted Vanessa's wish but she was now isolated from the world and looked at with scorn. Now with a vast amount of money and a child on the way, Vanessa began her dive into finances and wound up holding a large portion of shares in a vast number of companies, increasing her wealth further.
Egala's name was chosen by her father, whom made it a point to at least be at the hospital, in spirit, for her birth. He possessed Vanessa and smiled as he saw that his child had his powers and wouldn't be as weak as a mortal. Satisfied with the outcome he returned to his plane of existence and let Vanessa raise the child. But the life of a businesswoman left no room for Vanessa to raise the girl. Nor did she exactly want to, remembering what Garlok had done to the cult members.
She pushed the child away, enrolling her into private schools and assigning tutors to make her a quiet polite woman that Vanessa could marry off to someone and let her be their problem. Unfortunately, Egala's darker side eventually made itself known, at least to a select few. The demon half of Egala appeared once before her fencing tutor. The tutor was surprised and terrified, but realizing that it was still the same Egala, just with more potential, was able to compose himself and keep things under wraps. After all, he was being paid quite the sum for his lessons. The lessons never panned out though and the wild fighting style of the demon Egala continued to prevail.
However, the more lessons that Egala took, the more the demonic side of her manifested until Vanessa couldn't take it anymore. She stopped them all and sent the girl to Myra's Gear School hoping that the girl would eventually get killed by some monster out in the world and no longer be her problem.
Abilities:
As a human, Egala has no abilities to speak of outside of the normal skills for a "good wife," cooking, cleaning, dancing, making her partner seem better than they are, and so on.
As a demon, Egala taps into her war hungry father's powers.
Inhuman strength that is on par with several large monsters and races. A speed factor that can come close to the breaking the sound barrier and a healing factor that can help her recover from non-fatal wounds anywhere from within a few seconds to a few hours, depending on how severe the injury is.
Strengths: Egala is a well rounded individual as a human. She can do almost anything she sets her mind to and if she's not good at something she'll work at it until she's passable. She has a grace, refinement and charm that convinces people to lower their guard around her. As a demon, Egala is a powerhouse of physical ability. She's passionate, carefree and unpredictable. Couple that with her adrenaline junkie personality in this state and you have one fun chick to be around.
Weaknesses: Egala as a human is incredibly passive and although she may see the best idea for a solution, she won't show it on her face, nor speak her mind until asked, if she's even asked at all. She's also fairly meek when it comes to dealing with people, she will continue to keep a conversation going as long as someone ELSE initiates it. Demon Egala is reckless and impulsive, often just charging into a problem rather than thinking about it. She also can infuriate people easily for speaking her mind without reservation. The ultimate weakness of Egala is that she doesn't have the ability to force the change on her own. Egala's demonic side only comes out as a defensive mechanism for some reason.
Extra:
Meet Egala's dad: Garlok the Forgotten Demon Lord of Passion and Combat.
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kHuman part? Great. Demon part? Too OP for standard. Plz nerf as well as include some weaknesses to offset the demon change.
So, I lowered the demon's speed, moved the healing factor onto human form and made it weaker while also making sure that Egala can reverse the change if she feels the demonic side is going too far. I also made her one of those characters that underestimates her opponent leaving her vulnerable. So she's got a great amount of power, she can't exactly wield it properly.Human part? Great. Demon part? Too OP for standard. Plz nerf as well as include some weaknesses to offset the demon change.
So, I lowered the demon's speed, moved the healing factor onto human form and made it weaker while also making sure that Egala can reverse the change if she feels the demonic side is going too far. I also made her one of those characters that underestimates her opponent leaving her vulnerable. So she's got a great amount of power, she can't exactly wield it properly.
He sometimes says a lot of slang when angry which means he's gonna go back to his real I'm uncultured personality which he is easily annoyed and keeps it real even if it hurts.
Name: Vincent Soure (Vin-cent Su-our)
Age:17
Gender:Male
Race:Half demon and human
Height:6'2/6'10
Weight:180
Appearance:
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Demon abilities and form:
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Upon transforming into his ultimate form Vincent becomes a true demon boosting all of his regular attributes by X5 expect his intelligence which boosts by X50 and he gains the abilities to make small black holes or portals for him with advanced demon technology made by his grandfather which can also fire weak blasts of negative energy.He is able to make larger portals but loses the time he's in the form to half if the portal is meant to hold 5 people and he loses his form comepletely when it holds 35.He also has a small healing factor that works on small wounds in about 5 minutes but fatal wounds can be held stable maybe heal comepletely if left alone long enough.
Personality:Vincent is a respectful and chill young man who doesn't really want bad drama and is always want to have fun if possible and wants to get along with everyone.He sometimes says a lot of slang when angry which means he's gonna go back to his real I'm uncultured personality which he is easily annoyed and keeps it real even if it hurts.He is usually chill and smiling and will and can do something if he says he can,but is extremely shy when he gets stuck in random silence and his sense of humor is funny but dirty at the same time making him a slight pervert if he gets caught off guard.He overall is a calm gentlemen that's respects and wants to be everyone's friend.
Backstory:N/A
Strengths:
Vincent is a man who stays neat and organized at all times and knows how to take care of himself and others pretty well when it comes to living in a household.Also being a gentlemen and not-bad looking himself he is kind of a ladies man and loves to have fun but can chill to if wanted so he is naturally cool to be around.He also works out and always keeps himself in his best shape so he's built pretty well too.
Weaknesses:
-He sometimes might get to comfortable with people sometimes and might do to much so don't judge him.....that much
-His healing factor can only last fatal wounds for 2 hours but after that he gets the full brunt of the injury
-He doesn't take to many battles seriously which makes him vunerable if left alone for a minute in the middle of battle
-He sometimes might lose control during the battle and randomly enter his demon form
Extra:
Meet Vincent beloved weapon when he isn't in his demon form Demonio Blanco
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Name: James Victor Rogers Nickname: Franky, Jolley Green, Greeny
Age: 73 which is about 30 in homunculus years
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Polymerous
Species: Homunculus/Frankenstein monster
Occupation- Caretaker at Myer's Gear School
Appearance:
Occupation: Mechanic, though he used to do jobs for various governments and sometimes is brought back in.
Personality: A 'matter of fact kind of guy' who while sometimes can get brought down by what he is has a fairly positive if realistic outlook on life. He is an easy going kind of going guy, never really getting bothered by much, happy enough with a cigar, bowl of curry and a few good mates. James is fairly social kind of guy normally getting along with the other residents. If he gets mad, he normally punches something or someone. Don't be that thing. If gets sad, normally brought on by remembering what he can't do in life due to what he is, he ignores it and tries to bury himself in work. Or drink one or the other.
Likes:
Curry
Drink
Guitar playing
Being around people who accept him
Telling his old stories
His job
Fixing things
More Drink
Dislikes:
People making fun what he is
Life reminding him what he can't do due to who he is
Other supernatural being made fun of
Stubbing his toe
Bio: Franky was... not born of course but made, specifically in 1943. He was found by a bunch of troops early on during the invasion of Italy. At first afraid and confused, the government at the time made him an honorary citizen after he helped fight with the allied forces. Eventually, after the war ended, he spent much of his time at a government facility where he was taught how to read, write and all the other fun things of human culture. In 1959 he was given honorary human rights status. They told him he could leave though advised to stay within the parameters of people like him. This lead him to Myer's Gear School. He had known of gears even had his own license, government training. He had used some of the gear techs in the past and was fairly familiar with its workings and so a caretaker role seemed the best fit.
Powers/ Skills:
Is stronger than a human able to lift a car at his peak
Is more resilient than a human able to survive and bounce back from multiple wounds
Is very skilled with multiple firearms and even the sword
Weekness:
His laidback nature can lead him to mistakes
His over-reliance on brute force.
His caring nature can be exploited.
Theme:
Name: aj
Age: 16
Gender:m
Race: a shadow humnoid being (more below)
Height:6
Weight: 200
Appearance: i wear black jeans with a black windbreaker i have pale white and a black and a hazel eye with a long scar from me ear to my chin
Personality: has a tendency to fight people for no reason wanting to prove that i am the best.
Backstory: my master got incinerated by an elder dragons flame leaving a realistic shadow on the ground below after 300 years i became solid inheriting the powers of shadows and the ability to form 2 swords which raised me and tried to teach me
Extra: the swords talk and i have a shadow cat named roxy
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Name: aj
Age: 16
Gender:m
Race: a shadow humanoid being (more below)
Height:6
Weight: 200
Appearance: i wear black jeans with a black windbreaker i have pale white and a black and a hazel eye with a long scar from me ear to my chin
Personality: has a tendency to fight people for no reason wanting to prove that i am the best.
Backstory: my master got incinerated by an elder dragons flame leaving a realistic shadow on the ground below after 300 years i became solid inheriting the powers of shadows and the ability to form 2 swords which raised me and tried to teach me
Extra: the swords talk and i have a shadow cat named roxy
powers: i can manipulate the shadows around me bending them to my will and because of these abilities i have no shadow of my own
swords: the swords absorbed the 2 souls of my master and the elder dragon
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edited
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Name: aj
Age: 16
Gender:m
Race: a shadow humanoid being (more below)
Height:6
Weight: 200
Appearance: i wear black jeans with a black windbreaker i have pale white and a black and a hazel eye with a long scar from me ear to my chin
Personality: has a tendency to fight people for no reason wanting to prove that i am the best.
Backstory: my master got incinerated by an elder dragons flame leaving a realistic shadow on the ground below after 300 years i became solid inheriting the powers of shadows and the ability to form 2 swords which raised me and tried to teach me
Extra: the swords talk and i have a shadow cat named roxy
powers: i can manipulate the shadows around me bending them to my will and because of these abilities i have no shadow of my own
swords: the swords absorbed the 2 souls of my master and the elder dragon they where normal swords until i turned them into shadow soul swords but they are just normal no extra properties then the talking
Weakness to controlled light and not mentally strong
Simply i can travel through them and use them to attack or defend as well as heal to a certain point but the shadows strenth depends on its size so ill be stronger at night or in a darker area then in a bright areaSo once you tell me what he can exactly do with shadows then you're good.