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Yep! Im writing the cs now so you'll see soon
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She's not perfect, some aspects of her background make her skilled at why she is the way she is. I definitely agree with the tech tone though that's a bit much thinking on it. But to counter your claim about her physical feats. Killua , Illumi, and Hisoka were WELL advanced over the feats of hunters physically given their backgrounds. She's not different from them. I can make more weaknesses no problem. But the entire purpose is her not being average (thus is the case for becoming a Hunter in the first place.)OppositeInverse
I like her, I think I would tone down the technological aspect of it, however. She seems to be drifting away from the HxH universe in this regard. HxH had more so early 2000's technology and I think her weapon, for example, kind of treads away from that. Cetra is allowed to have a firearm, however, just scale back the time period.
Furthermore, I think you should balance her abilities and weaknesses right now. This is more so for the style of rp I am going for. Your character is allowed to be fairly capable physically, but she can't be perfect in this regard. Think about her compared to other hunters, not the average human when compiling strengths and weaknesses. I want characters to evolve and become more powerful as the rp goes on, rather than her starting out as the ultimate soldier. I think it's more fun that way. : )
Anyhow, love her character and backstory. I would be more than happy to accept you if you make the changes.
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If you're wondering what kind of technology I am shooting for, this character would be a good example.
She's not perfect, some aspects of her background make her skilled at why she is the way she is. I definitely agree with the tech tone though that's a bit much thinking on it. But to counter your claim about her physical feats. Killua , Illumi, and Hisoka were WELL advanced over the feats of hunters physically given their backgrounds. She's not different from them. I can make more weaknesses no problem. But the entire purpose is her not being average (thus is the case for becoming a Hunter in the first place.)
What do you mean by that, lol?lowkey gonna be an elsword type character
Like, inspiration will be taken from a character from Elsword, if you know about it. Such as Ain, or maybe Add, or both if I find a cool code.What do you mean by that, lol?
I feel like growth isn't predicated on current level of strength, but the level of progression from said current level. Even the likes og Gon cuaght up with Killua and surpassed him so current strength isn't really relevant (Imo), It just took me a ton of time and work to put into this character and now I have to water her down over something I wasn't aware of? Like I get not wanting to be OP which she's not. She is just a good fighter and stealthy person and after I revise the tech stuff that's all she'll have because I'm removing the gadgets and weapon. So without that she's just another vanilla character. Her limits is that she can't fight more than a couple of well trained people at a time, I could list a ton because she's still a human who hasn't met how extraordinary hunters are.Glad you brought those three up, because I know a lot of people are going to compare themselves to them. There will NPC characters that will be on their level or Hisoka-like, but that is only to set up future events in the rp (and to add stakes). For reference, I want your characters being around Gon, Kurapika and Leorio's level, each with their clear physical limits and weaknesses. Your character is just a little strong in my opinion and I want her to have a little more room to grow. This is just so when she does become a lot stronger, it will be a lot more meaningful in growth. : )
Thanks for understanding, I know this is partly my fault for not being the clearest.
No problems what so ever. Sorry to hear you are dropping out, I did not mean to sound like I hated the character, I quite liked her and the ideas that came along. It is just I have a vision for this RP and I want to stay true to that as much as I can.I feel like growth isn't predicated on current level of strength, but the level of progression from said current level. Even the likes og Gon cuaght up with Killua and surpassed him so current strength isn't really relevant (Imo), It just took me a ton of time and work to put into this character and now I have to water her down over something I wasn't aware of? Like I get not wanting to be OP which she's not. She is just a good fighter and stealthy person and after I revise the tech stuff that's all she'll have because I'm removing the gadgets and weapon. So without that she's just another vanilla character. Her limits is that she can't fight more than a couple of well trained people at a time, I could list a ton because she's still a human who hasn't met how extraordinary hunters are.
I by no means mean to have disrespect or attitude while typing and I can see how this blunt nature can come off. (I'm actually not annoyed at all or anything) I just feel as though as much as I put in, I'll probably have to opt out if I have to make her :weaker: just because I wanted her to stand out and be a strong female character while also showing she is far from perfect with learning the ways of the outside world and honing her emotions.
Either way it goes, absolute best of luck to this and thanks for the invite. No hard feelings from me whatsoever!
I said if you're going to force me to make her weak I probably will. Well i revised it so she has nothing but tactical combat and stealth skills. Neo City is no longer about tech nor is she. CELL is still a force but confined to the city. All she has is well-trained combat skills and senses and stealth skills. Is that still too much?No problems what so ever. Sorry to hear you are dropping out, I did not mean to sound like I hated the character, I quite liked her and the ideas that came along. It is just I have a vision for this RP and I want to stay true to that as much as I can.
Not a problem, sorry again for the back and forth I'm usually complicit unless it deals with having to make a female weaker. I'm not like one of those super woman power type of people but I had a bad experience in the past with other RPers and inferiority complexes. Sorry if I caused anymore stress than need be.I misunderstood, my apologies.
As it stands, I really like where she is now. Her poor group-skills works balances her own ability. She's accepted. Thank you very much for the changes.
I got you! I can help shrink it XDThank you! I'm sorry but I'm on vacations and I only have my phone with me. I'll ink it and color it and then see what I can do. If someone with a working pc could shrink it some i would appreciate it!
Yup, you're welcome to use it. There's no rule for it or against it. Go nuts.Oh let me ask-
Code is allowed right? Like BBCode?
I'll just edit your post to change the size if that is fine with you?Thank you! I'm sorry but I'm on vacations and I only have my phone with me. I'll ink it and color it and then see what I can do. If someone with a working pc could shrink it some i would appreciate it!
yep XDNo problemo. I'll try and remember that they are a boy, there is going to be lots of sexual confusion in this rp, I can already tell.