So I’m working on a pbp game and here’s what I got thus far.  We haven’t started the game quite yet. Just so you know, the players made these backgrounds up, not sure how possible or likely some of them are.
Twilight:
Former Realm member of the All Seeing Eye (minor member, mortal astrologer) who exalts into a Twilight while witnessing a Wyld Hunt.  Now he’s been tutored in the arts of Sorcery by a Lesser Elemental Dragon in the West.  He has few spells right now, Emerald Counter Magic and Emerald Banishment.  But he’s all Artifacted up and uses an Ori Grimcleaver.  He can do more damage than anyone else in the game right now.  Also he has a lot of 5’s in Attributes (Dex and Int) and Abilities (Occult and Dodge).  But with all the Artifacts he’s got good Soak, DV, Acc, and Dmg. Since he has this powerful being helping him out, i can somewhat handle the idea that the dragon gave him the Artifacts, but still 7 points of Artifacts. That seems really odd to me.  But that’s just dnd wizard thoughts getting in my way. Â
Zenith:
Criminal with martial arts living near Halta, kills a random merchant who turns out to be the mortal brother of a Fire Aspected Dragon Blooded.  Big fight, the gang he works with is pretty much destroyed and now he’s missing an eye.  The DB loses him in the woods, where he later exalts.  He finds a rank four hidden Solar manse with the Seven Leaping Dragons Heartstone.  He’s got DEX 5, Martial Arts 5, and with his Ori Razor Claws his base attack is 19 dice. He also has the Past Lives Merit. Â
Dawn:
First time player using the Kade character in Tomb of 5 corners. This puts him in the Lookshy/Nexus area. That game gives out Artifact weapons, so he doesn’t start with any.  I’ve already figured out I’m going to have to give him something to keep up with the rest of them.
Eclipse:
An astrologer (two in one game, hmm) from Yane in the South, makes a wrong prediction and becomes an outcaste. Â After that he becomes known for his knowledge of Spirits and how to deal with them. Â Get taken in by Fair Folk and spends years in the Wyld. Â He has no memory of the time, and his eyes now look like emeralds and he gained the Longevity Pox. Â Also says he was thinking he had assimilated. Â I no longer have my copy of the Book of the Wyld, so not sure how that works. Â When he exalted he had attempted to escape and was helped out by a Sidereal, who he has fallen in love with and she is now his Ally background. Â
Night: Player is still working on it.
Any suggestions on a really good story? Â And also how to handle the semi lack of balance, since right now the Twilight and Zenith could destroy anything that would be a challenge to the other two.
Twilight:
Former Realm member of the All Seeing Eye (minor member, mortal astrologer) who exalts into a Twilight while witnessing a Wyld Hunt.  Now he’s been tutored in the arts of Sorcery by a Lesser Elemental Dragon in the West.  He has few spells right now, Emerald Counter Magic and Emerald Banishment.  But he’s all Artifacted up and uses an Ori Grimcleaver.  He can do more damage than anyone else in the game right now.  Also he has a lot of 5’s in Attributes (Dex and Int) and Abilities (Occult and Dodge).  But with all the Artifacts he’s got good Soak, DV, Acc, and Dmg. Since he has this powerful being helping him out, i can somewhat handle the idea that the dragon gave him the Artifacts, but still 7 points of Artifacts. That seems really odd to me.  But that’s just dnd wizard thoughts getting in my way. Â
Zenith:
Criminal with martial arts living near Halta, kills a random merchant who turns out to be the mortal brother of a Fire Aspected Dragon Blooded.  Big fight, the gang he works with is pretty much destroyed and now he’s missing an eye.  The DB loses him in the woods, where he later exalts.  He finds a rank four hidden Solar manse with the Seven Leaping Dragons Heartstone.  He’s got DEX 5, Martial Arts 5, and with his Ori Razor Claws his base attack is 19 dice. He also has the Past Lives Merit. Â
Dawn:
First time player using the Kade character in Tomb of 5 corners. This puts him in the Lookshy/Nexus area. That game gives out Artifact weapons, so he doesn’t start with any.  I’ve already figured out I’m going to have to give him something to keep up with the rest of them.
Eclipse:
An astrologer (two in one game, hmm) from Yane in the South, makes a wrong prediction and becomes an outcaste. Â After that he becomes known for his knowledge of Spirits and how to deal with them. Â Get taken in by Fair Folk and spends years in the Wyld. Â He has no memory of the time, and his eyes now look like emeralds and he gained the Longevity Pox. Â Also says he was thinking he had assimilated. Â I no longer have my copy of the Book of the Wyld, so not sure how that works. Â When he exalted he had attempted to escape and was helped out by a Sidereal, who he has fallen in love with and she is now his Ally background. Â
Night: Player is still working on it.
Any suggestions on a really good story? Â And also how to handle the semi lack of balance, since right now the Twilight and Zenith could destroy anything that would be a challenge to the other two.