Noble Scion
Crow, seeker of shiny things
Peckinou
I believe the RP is still open xp
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all Birdsie 's fault
Edit: I had no idea that noble was also making a rejected statement as well, so don't take this as an attack.
Yeah i forgot to add more to the backstory when you were looking at it sorry about that. As for The 7 Reapers yeah they were not alone they had others but the 7 main people were the leading causes of destruction as for why attack 2 kingdoms? Why do people fight wars? Why does terrorism exist? ok real answer for the reason of the 7 reapers is cause they are a cult and their leader had a case of god syndrome thinking he should be able to decide who lives and who dies and that death required sacrifices in order to fuel his power.Peckinou
Okay so since Birdsie is going to sleep now since it's 1Am in Poland, I was told to tell you about your CS.
First off, many problems arise up, firstly being your characters age and Race. First off for Age, there is a limit to how old a person can be and while this differs from race to race, not many can live to over a hundred years. Second there is already a neko race that my buddy One Mean Ghost is using that you can use.
Now onto other problems, one glaring problem is the group The 7 Reapers and how they are so powerful that they just destroy armies. First off that's extremely OP if it's just 7 people, second why would they even terrorize those two countries in the first place? Seems weird if you ask me.
The major issues now start to come out, first off his personality "Personality: Is pretty stoic, calculated, has a love for strawberry's and stories, he follows those who accept him, gives him benefits and he thinks are worthy of his services and is also pretty shy when he isn't trying to kill people." This here has many problems. First off it isn't much of a personality than just some quirks he has. There are much better examples of personalities in the characters in this Rp that you could look over for a better idea of how to make a personality. Though I would suggest to look at the first page of the CS Area and take a look at all the characters there for an idea to help you.
Your Backstory is not acceptable at all. "Backstory: Was 5 when his parents were killed by a group of bandits along with his village" this is 1 line of bio, yet it's clear he has more history. With the way I see the character sheet and I look at the backstory, I know that if you made more I'd be in for a lot of Edge. Now in this Rp if your character is either too op or edgy, you won't be accepted, I know that for a fact since Birdsie has denied people already for having too op characters. To avoid this I again suggest taking a look at the back stories of already accepted characters and take inspiration, just be sure not to copy and past the backstories please, because everyone would frown upon that.
Don't take this criticism too badly, I'm not trying to be mean, just being honest and informative.
But for more help you should ask my Friend One Mean Ghost to help you on your CS since he has a pretty good one.
Edit: I had no idea that noble was also making a rejected statement as well, so don't take this as an attack.
All you need to know about Turenval is:
All you need to know about Turenval is:
- Super-Lich
- Powerful enough to scare Gods away
- Has a group of elite undead called Death Knights
- Slowly conquering the world from the Dark Forest
- Evil
- Was once beaten by William Black, the founder of the Guild
- Not very nice guy
Gods work here the same way they do in D&D.
People worship stuff = creates energy with specific concepts tied to it.You're looking at someone who knows jack shit about D&D
WAIT
let me change my title
People worship stuff = creates energy with specific concepts tied to it.
Energy gets vented to Astral Plane.
There, energy melds together and forms sentient beings.
Energy beings create their own planes that drift away from the Astral Plane and become its own distinct places in cosmology.
Energy beings communicate with the people that created them, give these people spooky paladin powers and do miracles and shit, get called gods.
That's the gist of it.
In D&D, the mythology is so contrived and ancient that not even the oldest deities remember how existence came to be. The truth is actually that in the beginning there were three dragons: Syberis, the Dragon Above; Eberron, the Dragon Between; and Khyber, the Dragon Below. Kyber slew Syberis, and in response, Eberron twisted her body around Khyber to envelop her forever. According to that, everything inside Eberron's body is existence as we know it, but this legend is probably limited by in-universe understanding and interpretation.Although D&D sounds like a lot is up for interpretation. Or should I assume that the eldritch powers are more to blame for existence? COnsidering I always thought that if mortals attempted to understand existence itself we would just...go mad ya know.
I'm not a moderator xp
I'm not a moderator xp
but from what I've seen, yes, you're allowed to make already-existing members.
I wasn't accepting it xpWell then, I guess that means someone must've liked my first CS.
I wasn't accepting it xp
I just thought it was pretty neat
It had detail, which I found quite pleasing xpHow so? I kind of dislike how edgy I may have made the character.
It had detail, which I found quite pleasing xp
If you want to be so hard on yourself, sure xDPersonality felt vague and the whole backstory was a shitpost I thought of after playing some Assassin's Creed origins...I also feel I made him a little too generic compared to character #2 Backstory isn't everything.
If you want to be so hard on yourself, sure xD
I found it delightful.
There's nothing wrong with generic characters. Gandalf is just your stereotypical wise mage, and he's an amazing character! You'll do fine xD everyone gets better.I don't mean to run myself into the ground, but I have had a hard time playing characters I wrote kind of...generic. Dude loses whole family to asshole sibling, kills sibling, pisses off in teenage angst. When I did make edgelords, I found it VERY hard to play them. Eventually, in an RP I tried to give them a legitimate reason to struggle...but that RP flopped and I kinda regret some of what I did in it, even though it was a different character. Birdsie might remember the BS I had flung in from my issues.
So I kinda have issues now with playing quiet edgelords or very happy outgoing characters cause it brings back bad memories of me being an ungrateful, blaming, and moody piece of shit. That was like...a year ago I think.
There's nothing wrong with generic characters. Gandalf is just your stereotypical wise mage, and he's an amazing character! You'll do fine xD everyone gets better.