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Fandom Fushigi Yuugi: The Wish of Sealing

QuirkyAngel said:
Wow. I got a little sick during finals week, and somehow developed a rash, but nothing as bad as what you have. Hope you feel better =(
@animegirl20


Kailai knows about princess Akemi, but he's never met her personally--because he spends more time in library than in court. That's why he hasn't realized Jun=Akemi yet. Though his family might. That's why I had them all disappear for a while -.-


I also imagine evil, ex-bethrothed might have spread some lies regarding the previous emperor's death. Something like princess Akemi murdered her father then ran away...or something like that. Does that sound okay?
yeah that could work
 
Mine said:
It seems I'll only be able to reply on Friday, I have an exam I really need to ace at this time around. Once again, I apologize.
On that note, welcome to the roleplay, @happyizakaya81, apologies for consequently having to delay my reply to your post...


@Jack Rakan and @The Suspicious Eye, I hope you two get well soon!
No worries, Mine! I can wait. Besides, after tossing a small novel at you, I'll need the time to re-charge my batteries. <3 Good luck on your exam!
 
QuirkyAngel said:
@Shin Positron Laser
Is it alright if I change Kailai's father's occupation? We've got far too many general-related people and its been bugging me for while. Plus its odd that his family home is in the capital, but he's the general of an army in another province. I can just make him a merchant or something.
Yes, that is fine.


@Mine No worries, I have yet to reply myself, so I cannot exactly be pushing others to follow my lead. Anyway. I should have a post up before you. Then we can get things moving along.
 
Okay, it seems I found a good solution to help with the breathing part of my problem, and also learned that i was so dehydrated that my muscles were literally starting to crush my bones somehow.. or at least it felt like that... Bwhaha.


So, My post is actually almost done finally. May have to rewrite it a little towards the end but thats okay.


@Shin Positron Laser I am to understand that I am starting the event correct?


UPDATE: I got stuck on a couple sentences, which I'll have to change that bit of the post. Will be up today(friday) or saturday. Pretty much done other than that last bit i need to edit and the coloring for the speaking stuff.
 
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Posted finally. It's actually very rough, so i may have to edit it... of course, this is the limit for my thinking for now. Comments and constructive criticism would be very much needed for this.
 
@Jack Rakan


I personally think this reply really strengthens my idea that each of your posts keeps showing us more and more depth to your character. Not only this one showed a vulnerable side to Hak but also give us more insight to what kind of character he is and his intentions. I'd say, keep it up! I believe the best a role player can do is to show that their character is more than just a one-dimensional tool for writing, it has strengths and flaws, it is unique in its own way, it feels real. And you do just that.
 
Jack Rakan] [URL="https://www.rpnation.com/profile/21955-shin-positron-laser/ said:
@Shin Positron Laser[/URL] I am to understand that I am starting the event correct?
Yes you may.


@Mine If you post before me it can give my character more cause to enter the situation considering whether or not he speaks to Gensho via the tool given to him. If he chooses not to, Gensho will still be able to sense something is amiss.


I am also trying to lead in the new character into the frey in some way.
 
@Mine Huh... Thank you for that. That helps me out a ton, you basically pointed something out that i actually had no idea that's what i was doing. it's funny really since every time I usually RP I more than likely have literally no clue how my character will develop nor am i 100% knowledgeable of the character him/her-self even though they are my characters.


So, though I created Hak, i pretty much know next to nothing about him other than what comes out of my head as i write.


Since I have two styles; 1.One-dimensional character, pre-created along with how he will develop, his relations with other etc.


The 2nd style is basically what i'm doing with Hak. I have created four other characters that are similar to him, which I know what happens at the beginning and end, but not in between. Hak is actually a 'alternate version' Of two characters from both styles i have.


Even though i say that Hak is still a different beast compared to most of my previous characters. I don't really know how to explain other than he is pretty much a new existence.


But again, thanks for that insight. :)


@Shin Positron Laser Okay then, Hak has encountered the caravan at the gate, so we can go as planned.
 
@Shin Positron Laser


Once again, I'm sorry, my family wanted to spend some quality time with me this weekend and I ended up being unable to continue writing my reply. It's really late at the moment so I'll make sure to post it tomorrow.
 
@Jack Rakan


Great scene. Good character development. Moved the story forward. You'll get no complaints from me^^


Seriously, you guys are all great writers. Makes me eager to post.
 
Oh my Whale-san O_O


I didn't know these existed ...


Happiest day of my life ;A;!


I've been looking for a Fushigi Yuugi RP


since I was born! Are you guys still accepting?
 
[QUOTE="A Guileless Fable]Oh my Whale-san O_O
I didn't know these existed ...


Happiest day of my life ;A;!


I've been looking for a Fushigi Yuugi RP


since I was born! Are you guys still accepting?

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Yes we are. Please fill out the character sheet found under the character tab and post your draft here in the ooc for approval
 
Mine said:
@Shin Positron Laser
By the way, I have to ask...is my NPC accepted?
Lol goodness, I did not even get a notice for a new post in the neutral section. Well, no point in reviewing it anyway.


In the future, pls pm or post the npc or tpc here in ooc. That way for sure I will not not miss it.


Yes your npc is accepted. However please keep in mind that more important than interaction with npc is the interaction with other players. When I observe the npc and the need for its appearance, I believe that it would have been possible for the character to show up at a later time, or was it necessary to have her appear now?
 
[QUOTE="Shin Positron Laser]Lol goodness, I did not even get a notice for a new post in the neutral section. Well, no point in reviewing it anyway.
In the future, pls pm or post the npc or tpc here in ooc. That way for sure I will not not miss it.


Yes your npc is accepted. However please keep in mind that more important than interaction with npc is the interaction with other players. When I observe the npc and the need for its appearance, I believe that it would have been possible for the character to show up at a later time, or was it necessary to have her appear now?

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Understood.


Um, I apologize if I don't follow the question clearly but yes, I think it was fairly important for her to appear as of now, giving the fact that she will help progressing Namame's quest to find Koi, as he does not possess the skill to do so on his own.
 
Member Username: A Guileless Fable


Times Available: Availability depends on how life is but open from 5 P.M. - 8 P.M


How many posts in a day and/or week: Maybe 3 posts per week?


Roleplays you are part of: None Yet


Particular Gender?: Prefer Female, but I go both ways :P . I also play a mean whale!


What interested you from this interest check? Always hoped to RP a Fushigi Yuugi Roleplay!


What would you want the GM to add to this RP? Betrayal, Political Corruption, Evilness-ses...





  • Character Role: Senshi


    Character Name: Qiaolian


    Character Age: 18


    Four God Representative: Genbu


    Occupation: Child Caretaker (Orphanage)


    Character symbol: Cow (?)


    Symbol Location: Inner Left Thigh


    Celestial Power: Qiaolian is capable of manipulating the electrical signals sent to the brain. The brain is the control center of the body which is covered by thousands of neurons that send electrical impulses from other parts of the body allowing one to feel pain, to think, and to react to objects in their surrounding. Qiaolian ability focuses on amplifying the electrical currents which in turn increases her reaction time, body physical movements, and cognitive capabilities. Along with that she is also able to inhibit the electrical signals from reaching her brain which stopping the sensation of pain.


    Celestial Artifact: Copper Bull Skull


    Weapon of choice: Iron Katars


    Elemental Affinity: Lightning & Water


 
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Symbol Location: Inner Left Thigh


Celestial Power: Qiaolian is capable of manipulating the electrical signals sent to the brain. The brain is the control center of the body which is covered by thousands of neurons that send electrical impulses from other parts of the body allowing one to feel pain, to think, and to react to objects in their surrounding. Qiaolian ability focuses on amplifying the electrical currents which in turn increases her reaction time, body physical movements, and cognitive capabilities. Along with that she is also able to inhibit the electrical signals from reaching her brain which stopping the sensation of pain.


Celestial Artifact: Copper Bull Skull


Weapon of choice: Iron Katars


Elemental Affinity: Lightning & Water


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Physical Appearance

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  • She is 5'6"



  • Entire body is covered in bandages



  • Has permanent whip mark on her back.



  • Wears a single dirtied cloak.





Personality:

Intelligent: With her ability her cognitive ability is far beyond any normal persons and therefore she is capable of thinking and making decision easily. Her knowledge of the world is substantial due to her travels.

Logical: Some see her cold and heartless, but in all actuality she simply thinking of every situation in a logical way. She does not take part in unnecessary bouts if she can avoid it and could careless about the lives of others that she deems unimportant. She understands that life is a cruel thing and therefore if she wishes to avoid such things then there's no better way than simply not joining in on it. Main reason why she doesn't care for her warrior status.

Manipulative: In order to survive she understands sacrifices must be made. However, she doesn't want to be the sacrifice made and therefore manipulates other into position that would not cause her any loss. Having experienced such manipulation in the past, she is aware of its importance and the effects of it as well. She has no remorse for her victims.

Hard-working: Work is necessary in order to live. With this being a universal truth, Qiaolian works hard for those she cares for, but for herself mostly. She knows her limits, but knows in order to succeed such limits must be passed and so works hard to surpass her own limits.

Biography: Born of noble birth in the land of Toukan, Qiaolian had quite the luxurious life. She was fed the most delicious of cuisines, dressed in the finest of silks, and given top quality toys to play with. Being the tomboy she was, she never really cared much for the dresses and toys, preferring to spend her time playing outside with the servant children. However, this was not allowed as a noble's daughter and therefore her father forbade her for playing with them ever again. His words never meant anything to her as she continued to play with them regardless of what he said often times leading to longer lectures on position and status. She didn't really like either of her parents as she rarely saw them, the two often going away to handle political affairs, leaving the child to be raised under the maids supervision. The only times she and her parents actually conversed were the many times they'd lectured her on her position and how the world of nobility worked. Other than that they never worried about their daughter, leaving her to her own devices. This made her quite the independent kid, but also brought about a naivete that would soon be her down fall.

While playing with the servant's children, she had found a new face in the crowd, a girl who looked almost identical to her. If she didn't know any better she'd think that the girl would have been her sister or something, but knowing herself to be an only child she quickly threw away the thought. However, having found a girl with the same face as herself she couldn't help but pay heed to the child's presence. The two chatted for a bit and played together soon creating a unbreakable bond that Qiaolian thought would last forever. The days continued like this until the girl named Xiou asked if they could switch places for awhile as she had never been a noble before. Qiaolian didn't think much of the request at the time and agreed seeing no harm in the little game as they were identical. Assured that they wouldn't be caught and interested to see how her servants lived, they switched without a single soul knowing what had been done.

Living in her servant's quarter she found the place to be unbearable. The beds were hard and smelled of urine. The food consisted of stale bread and some potato concoction that she didn't even think was edible before she saw the others around her devour it like it was the best thing they've ever eaten. Qiaolian never noticed this before, but their clothes were awfully itchy and were made out of old wool and rags that had been worn out. A week had passed since they switched and it was time for them to return back to their normal lives. As she waited she saw beautiful Xiou walking toward her in a hot pink gown, her complexion much better than before when they had first switched. Coming towards Qiaolian, Xiou asked with sweet words if they could prolonged this little game until the next week saying that she never knew of such luxury in her life. Remembering the shabby shack she'd lived in for the past week she agreed telling herself that another week of this wouldn't be so bad. In the guise of a servant, she cleaned the stables, lifted heavy pails of water to there destinations, cleaned the halls of the castle, all while watching the joy on Xiou's face as she played with her toys and ate her food.

The week had soon come to an end with Qiaolian waiting for Xiou to return so they could switch once more. She waited... and waited ... and waited. She never came. She rationalized it to be that she was just having a little fun and came back the next day to only find that she didn't come. While waiting for Xiou, days soon became weeks, and weeks then became months. Tired of waiting, she went to see Xiou who was now the spitting image of a princess living the life that her father had intended for her. She asked Xiou to switch with her, but was met with a face of confusion as if she had never seen Qiaolian before. Confused, Qiaolian exclaimed her name only to meet another confused look as Xiou told her that it was her name and that she needed to leave immediately. Soon after, her father came into the room along with his fellow guards. Ecstatic to see him for the first time in her life she told of Xiou's treachery only to be answered by the two guards at her father side. As she heard her father stating that a bronze skin child could never be Qiaolian he order them to take her away and whipped her for her disobedience. That day she received 50 whippings that left permanent scars on her back, a constant reminder of where her naivete led her.

Qiaolian continued under the servitude of her family, watching her former friend live an astounding life that had once been her. A life she had took for granted and missed so much. At one point, she could no longer take it and allowed her anger to get the best of her as she lashed out at her look like, running her claws across her face. The guards came to her aid as they pulled the wild beast away from the "girl" and sent her off to the market to be sold as a slave to another. Her life then was clouded in mystery as she hopped from master to master, learning that being a girl was only a hindrance and so she hid her gender. She then learned from an old prostitute that even is she was a boy, a pretty face like her own would gain the attention of the master regardless of gender. This led to her hiding her face in bandages, and she lived such a life for 7 years until finally escaping from her enslavement and becoming a free girl (boy) at last.

Life skills:

Camouflage

Extended Knowledge

Hunting

Swimming

Athleticism

Increased Senses

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List of special techniques:


Name: Yellow Whirpool


Type: Mana


Element: Lightening


Description: A large torrent of electricity formed into a whirlpool like structure and used in both close to long range combat. Dependent on focus of wielder.


Name: Purification


Type: Mana


Element: Water


Description: Purifies water for drinking.


Name: Lightening Fortification


Type: Ki


Element: Lightening


Description: Electrically charges her Katars increasing the heat as well as its density.


Name: Pulsation


Type: Ki


Element: Lightening


Description: Sends a large shock through the body to give it an added boost of power, or to wake it up when some parts of the body is immobile.


Name: Hydro Arrow


Type: Ki


Element: Water


Description: At one point it was an arrow, but has now formed into something shaped like a bullet that is denser than the arrow before it. Once it is condensed it is then shot at the opponent with great speed.


Other:


  • She was not born with Heterochromia. The reason she has a red eye is because she overused her ability in that eye which caused the cells that made it blue to burn turning it to the red it is now.
  • She learns of her warrior status during her slavery, but cares very little for the position.
  • She gained her martial arts skills from an old slave and her athleticism from wandering gypsies.
  • Thought about gaining revenge, but found it irrational so decided not to pursue it.
  • Doesn't have a last name as she refuses to use the name of her family.
  • Likes to experiment on organic items.


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I just got back from work. I will be looking into your character now. Some changes may need to be applied. Thanks for your character submission!
 
@A Guileless Fable


Let's begin the analysis.


Celestial Power: Her celestial power is way too broad. To illustrate, the power is comparable to drinking from a GULP size container, and I would like you to concise and precise it to drinking with a straw. The power is supposed to give a slight edge in all aspects of life for the celestial warrior, not just combat. Have a look at some of the other approved powers. Some may be vague but that is because I have special use for their character or because I have been RPing with them a long time and they know not to abuse the use of said celestial power. However most can be rather unique, something that instead of giving prowess in combat, develops their characters traits.


Personality:


1. Intelligence. As the RP is only loosely based on the Fushigi Yuugi franchise, such things as lore,history,locations, timelines, teachings, government etc may be all created from scratch, as GM that is my responsibility or to choose who to delegate that to. I cannot have a character who has 'been around' in such a broad sense. I suggest to stick to their specific towns or regions. Intelligence is one thing and acceptable as well, but I guess I am referring more towards being knowledgeable.


2. Logical and manipulative: These ones seem to appear quite often, if possible please choose 1 of those and find another.


Biography: I am not sure if you knew this, but all celestial warriors are born with the constellation symbol. Your characters parents would have certainly known about it and would act as proof that she was the real deal and not Xiou. If you have find a loophole around it, more power to you, I am just putting that in there. Also, if she was a noble of any sort, then she would be a celestial warrior known to the Empire of Toukan, which is part of the current storyline; the empire wants to use the celestial warriors powers in some way, perhaps for war or the like. Otherwise excellent story.
 
@Shin Positron Laser


Since @Koi Miazaki 's priestess character had a special ability, I gave one to Mei-Lin as well since I finally thought of one. I wanted to see what you think of it, is it doable? Also do we as Priestesses get a certain item to be our Shinzoho since we'll need that and the warriors to summon the Beast Gods.
 

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