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Accepted.Exiled said:
Name: Thorn Mitchell Age: 17 Gender: Male Grade (1st-5th): 4th Element: Dark
Anything Special about Weapon: Thorn has a marking on his right hand that glows purple when he summons his weapon. His scythe is also infused with his dark magic.
Special Skills: He is unexpectedly very intelligent and athletic.
Classes Overview: Advanced Combat, Monster Studies, Advanced Elemental Control, Potions
Clubs: None
Sports: Gauntlet Run, Siege Defense, Battle of Champions (didn't take it this year)
Other: He hides his true personality behind his flamboyant facade. No matter what he does or say he is elegant and graceful.
Do I just jump in?Shog said:Accepted.
Yup. Just find what you think would be a good spot and start.Exiled said:Do I just jump in?
Alright. Thanks!Shog said:Yup. Just find what you think would be a good spot and start.
First, I need to make sure you read the rules. Next, I'm confused by your "Power Within". This isn't a video game where you can take health and convert it into damage. The closest that could work with this power is the amount of magical energy you have, and that drains away some moly by using your powers anyway. Even then, how does that convert it into more damage when your still swinging the same sword?Eagershadow3 said:Name: Nash Rayes
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Grade (1st-5th); 3rd
Element: Fire
Weapon Appearance:
Anything Special about Weapon: none
Special Skills: Power Within, He can use this to increase his damage by a lot, but in the process it also drains his health away.
Classes Overview: Combat, Element control, and Mythical History.
Clubs: Sports club
Sports: Gauntlet run
Other: none
Accepted. Sorry about the weight, I've had a bit on my plate recently.Blackrose7 said:Name: Maka Keane
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Appearance:
Grade: 3st
Element: Earth
Weapon Appearance:
<- Love this hammer, and hammer time. ^w^
Anything Special about Weapon: Maka's hammer will become very light when she picks it up. If someone else tries to pick up her hammer, they won't be able to pick it up.
Special Skills: Even though she is a Geomancer, Maka was also manipulate sand as well, but she will only use it if there is no rocks around her. She is also nicknamed as the Mole Queen, since she can dig extremely fast underground with just her bare hands, and sometimes, she will end up making some pit traps by accident. Maka likes to make unique sculptures that always ends up looking like a house.
Classes Overview: Combat, Elemental Control, and Mythical History
Clubs: Student Government <- House Leader, and Art club <- Likes to sculpt
Sports: Battle of Champions, and Siege Defense
Other: Maka loves gems, and she sometimes finds them, when she is digging underground. She ends up giving these gems to a Ferramancer, since they can make them into jewelery. Maka likes sweets, and she actually very kind, even thought, she ends up making herself look pretty intimidating by accident, since she likes to carry her giant hammer around in either her hands or her back.
Read the rules and add a last name. "battle skills" is not specific enough. They really don't have a science class. Potions is probably the closest you will get. They also don't have "normal" sports teams. I don't mean to sound like a jack a** here, but this character feels lazy. I'm not saying I think the character will be lazy, I mean it feels like you put no effort into your character at all. With almost every other character used in this RP, I feel like they have depth and could be a real person. This feels kind of like Mario, flat. I hope you don't take this the wrong way because I am trying to help.xXMiaXx said:Name: Fayth
Age:17
Gender:female
Appearance:
Grade (1st-5th);5th
Element:Fire
Weapon Appearance:View attachment 156501
Anything Special about Weapon:blade lights with fire
Special Skills:battle skills
Classes Overview: Art, Sport, Science,Combat, Elemental Control
Clubs:
Sports:Soccer
Side of war (only for new characters): Resistance
Other:
it's not offensive seeing as i didn't put much like good stuff i''l say cause i was hurrying and yea so... i'll finish some later i'm just so TIRED.... and about the lazy thing ...your talking to mee IT'S GONNA BE LAZY...only joking thoughShog said:I'm just going to write stuff down as I find them, so if it seems like I'm being nitpicky, I am. I'm not going to allow "jets" in the ax for flight. However, I will allow it to work as a glider and "flight" can be attained by using her power on the weapon. No flame thrower (or phoenix thing). I'm also going to ask you to cut down on the number of knives that can be held because of how heavy that much titanium will weigh in addition to an already heavy ax and the amount of space the titanium would take if you are going to make knives large enough for any use. So, um, how to put this. She won't "merge" with metal. That's out of the question. If you want to coat her in metal, I'm ok with that as long as you add an appropriate energy cost. And me being sort of a chemistry nerd (only first year so far so don't judge me... I can feel the judgement!) I'm going to say that to make liquid metal it will need to be the appropriate temperature, which I'm going to let you do as long as you keep in mind how insanely hot that can be and the energy that may take. You can forcibly bent the metal into shapes you need easier, however. House (not dorm) leader starting second year and you have a deal. I let Kuroha slip that rule as a "once in a blue moon" kind of thing, but speaking frankly, no one is going to elect a first year to represent their house. Make sure to change the Extra somehow with the metal merging thing, but I like here little backstory. Would you also state what side of the war she will be on? It's something new I added to the CS, though you had no way of knowing that.
Read the rules and add a last name. "battle skills" is not specific enough. They really don't have a science class. Potions is probably the closest you will get. They also don't have "normal" sports teams. I don't mean to sound like a jack a** here, but this character feels lazy. I'm not saying I think the character will be lazy, I mean it feels like you put no effort into your character at all. With almost every other character used in this RP, I feel like they have depth and could be a real person. This feels kind of like Mario, flat. I hope you don't take this the wrong way because I am trying to help.
Thank you so much for understanding!xXMiaXx said:it's not offensive seeing as i didn't put much like good stuff i''l say cause i was hurrying and yea so... i'll finish some later i'm just so TIRED....
i only understand cause my brothers are JACK A** so...Shog said:Thank you so much for understanding!
Accepted. Just a quick tip I learned, tagging someone by editing a post will not notify them.Eagershadow3 said:Name: Nash Rayes
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Grade (1st-5th); 3rd
Element: Fire
Weapon Appearance:
Anything Special about Weapon: none
Special Skills: Power Within, He can use this to increase is elemental output (like he can shoot out more fire ) but in return it drains his magical energy away a lot faster.
Classes Overview: Combat, Element control, and Mythical History.
Clubs: Sports club
Sports: Gauntlet run
Other: I hope I fixed everything. @Shog
Soo... Just quick clarification, yes or no on how I presented the whole 'merging with metal' thing...? :xShog said:I'm not going to make you go through and change everything that we discussed, so accepted from your last post.