Daicetta: The Impure City

[QUOTE="Zaffre Blue]You work at the club, we work at the diner.

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There's a diner too?


DINNER****


-Stone
 
[QUOTE="Zaffre Blue]A. That was very classy charrie and I too enjoyed reading it.
B. Me and Stone had an idea that Amazon and Dysis could work at The 24/7 * name for the diner unless you have a better one* with Sam. Are you open to that ?

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That's a really good idea! I like to make connections in roleplays so I think it'd be a good way for Am, Dys, and Sam to already have a relationship.
 
StarshipsFanfics said:
That's a really good idea! I like to make connections in roleplays so I think it'd be a good way for Am, Dys, and Sam to already have a relationship.
*Slowly begins planning ships*
 
StarshipsFanfics said:
Edited it
you don't seem to understand. Hidden magics are just magics that aren't publicly known and need approval before being used. You only get one magic.
 
StoneWolf18 said:
you don't seem to understand. Hidden magics are just magics that aren't publicly known and need approval before being used. You only get one magic.
Ahhh! I apologize! So bump off Ethereal and Mind and keep Lightning?
 
Give me a moment and i'll make a character sheet


 
Name: "Alex Moore...now go bother someone else..."


Wolf name: None


Age: 19


"Old enough to kill and drink..."


Appearance: "its not a pretty sight but thats how i want it..."


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In wolf form:


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Race: werewolf


"Translation...you may start running now...."


Height: 5" 6'


Wolf: 4" 5'


Weight: 260 pounds


Wolf: 110 pounds


Personality: quiet and violent. He rarely talks unless he has to and when he does it annoys him. When someone bothers him he will get very angry but wont show it.


Bio: "none of your business..."


As a child he was raised by his two big brothers. One day they were taking a short cut home through an alley way and they stumbled upon a mafia drug deal. Being witnesses, the mobsters killed off his brothers but alex managed to escape. Having witnessed his brothers death he vowed to have revenge against them. He later learned that a shapeshifter named justin may have been involed. Now that he had someone to blame he looked for a way to kill him. Eventually he learned he had werewolf DNA and was asked to help with an experiment to make more werewolves. Agreeing he was injected with 3/4 of venom turning into one. He now had a way to get revenge.


Rank: none


"Dont need a rank to prove my worth..."


Grade: none


"I dropped out...problem?"


What do i need to fix?



 

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[QUOTE="Quiet Dragon]Give me a moment and i'll make a character sheet
 
Name: "Alex Moore...now go bother someone else..."


Wolf name: the silence of the world when he arrived was terrifying


Age: 19


"Old enough to kill and drink..."


Appearance: "its not a pretty sight but thats how i want it..."


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In wolf form:


View attachment 112118


Race: werewolf


"Translation...you may start running now...."


Height: 5" 6'


Wolf: 4" 5'


Weight: 260 pounds


Wolf: 110 pounds


Personality: quiet and violent. He rarely talks unless he has to and when he does it annoys him. When someone bothers him he will get very angry but wont show it.


Bio: "none of your business..." he grew up with his two big brothers and was a very lively and nice kid. Until his brothers were killed in a mugging. Alex barely escaped and was forced to live on the streets. Because of this he was traumatized by this and took a vow of silence and hate, which is why he is often quiet. He eventually was turned into a werewolf and took this as an opportunity to kill the others who killed his family. He has yet to find them.


Rank: none


"Dont need a rank to prove my worth..."


Grade: none


"I dropped out...problem?"


What do i need to fix?

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Ok..lets see here..


Wolf name: you won't have one of aren't part of a pack. You will obtain one if joined.


Bio: please elaborate on how he was turned. I need a tad more. Also, the backstory is a bit stereotypical.


Please fix these things and il reconsider.
 
StoneWolf18 said:
Ok..lets see here..
Wolf name: you won't have one of aren't part of a pack. You will obtain one if joined.


Bio: please elaborate on how he was turned. I need a tad more. Also, the backstory is a bit stereotypical.


Please fix these things and il reconsider.
Does the bio HAVE to be changed? I couldnt think of much else.
 
[QUOTE="Quiet Dragon]Does the bio HAVE to be changed? I couldnt think of much else.

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If you need help, I would be more than happy to help. If so, please PM me.
 
[QUOTE="Quiet Dragon]Can't. They have a new system that only lets me start one if i have ten posts.

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Ah yes, I forgot. Well then we can do it in the OOC tab if you like?
 
StoneWolf18 said:
Ah yes, I forgot. Well then we can do it in the OOC tab if you like?
Sure


 


StoneWolf18 said:
Ok..lets see here..
Wolf name: you won't have one of aren't part of a pack. You will obtain one if joined.


Bio: please elaborate on how he was turned. I need a tad more. Also, the backstory is a bit stereotypical.


Please fix these things and il reconsider.
Edited it. Thanks to zaffre for the backstory help.
 
(I deleted my other character hope this one is a bit better)


Name: Nathan Smith


Age: 20


Appearance: He has silver iris.<p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_04/Orihara-Izaya-1izaya-orihara-34320249-990-700.jpg.9af9f54b23b8a2bbbc266ddbeb3492c8.jpg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="48231" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_04/Orihara-Izaya-1izaya-orihara-34320249-990-700.jpg.9af9f54b23b8a2bbbc266ddbeb3492c8.jpg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p> <p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_04/King-Cobra.jpg.9b21d79a2bdac12c0a89a03f366a15eb.jpg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="48232" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_04/King-Cobra.jpg.9b21d79a2bdac12c0a89a03f366a15eb.jpg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p> (King Cobra)


Race : Shape shifter


Height : 5"7 (shifted 12"6)


Weight : 136 (shifted 19)


Personality:


Sarcastic


Fun loving


Mischievous


Laughs easily


Can be a jack*ss


Lies with ease


Bio:


Nathan never saw his father seeing as he was imprisoned and placed on death row for drug, dealings, assault, kidnapping, murder blah de blah. So he just lived with his mother doing what he could to make sure he helped her. His family belong to a long line of shifters and he was no exception. Nathan was a lot like his father and always ended up doing something illegal or getting into trouble (though he was rarely caught).


He kept the good boy façade on for his mother and stayed in school, studing to become a doctor, which is back breaking work and the amount of money he needed was astounding. He never would ask his mother for help so he delivered drugs and did a few other things to keep up with the bills and make sure he wasn't baggage to his mother. He usually stuck to delivering drugs and things of that caliber.


On one of his drug runs things went south and he was forced to kill a few witnesses and hide there bodies. Since he was training to be a doctor doing this sort of thing didn't really bother him. In fact he wanted to use the bodies, but decided it may not be the best idea. After this incident he went to visit his mother who was waiting for death in a hospital since she had a large tumor in her head that couldn't be removed. He did everything he could, but later that day she passed and even though he had been ready for this he was still hurt over it.


He kept working to be a doctor and still helps with drug runs and such when he has a chance. Even though he felt distraught over his mothers death he honestly doesn't feel a thing for the people he murdered, after all when you are a doctor, sooner or later you will kill someone.


Rank/Job : Inter doctor/underground doctor. (Still helps in drug runs)


Grade: Medical school..(just started)



 

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Peaceswore said:
(I deleted my other character hope this one is a bit better)
Name: Nathan Smith


Age: 25


Appearance: He has silver iris.View attachment 112249 View attachment 112250 (King Cobra)


Race : Shape shifter


Height : 5"7 (shifted 12"6)


Weight : 136 (shifted 19)


Personality:


Sarcastic


Fun loving


Mischievous


Laughs easily


Can be a jack*ss


Lies with ease


Bio:


Nathan never saw his father seeing as he was imprisoned and placed on death row for drug, dealings, assault, kidnapping, murder blah de blah. So he just lived with his mother doing what he could to make sure he helped her. His family belong to a long line of shifters and he was no exception. Nathan was a lot like his father and always ended up doing something illegal or getting into trouble (though he was rarely caught).


He kept the good boy façade on for his mother and stayed in school, studing to become a doctor, which is back breaking work and the amount of money he needed was astounding. He never would ask his mother for help so he delivered drugs and did a few other things to keep up with the bills and make sure he wasn't baggage to his mother. He usually stuck to delivering drugs and things of that caliber.


On one of his drug runs things went south and he was forced to kill a few witnesses and hide there bodies. Since he was training to be a doctor doing this sort of thing didn't really bother him. In fact he wanted to use the bodies, but decided it may not be the best idea. After this incident he went to visit his mother who was waiting for death in a hospital since she had a large tumor in her head that couldn't be removed. He did everything he could, but later that day she passed and even though he had been ready for this he was still hurt over it.


He kept working to be a doctor and still helps with drug runs and such when he has a chance. Even though he felt distraught over his mothers death he honestly doesn't feel a thing for the people he murdered, after all when you are a doctor, sooner or later you will kill someone.


Rank/Job : Inter doctor/underground doctor. (Still helps in drug runs)


Grade: Medical school..(I don't really know the grade for this, but he has been in it for four years)
I believe the maximum age is 20
 

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