I'm considering a set of custom Dragon Blooded Enlightening charms. I would like constructive criticism...
Charm 1: The Glint in the Eye, Brighter than Gold
-- Martial Arts 4, Essence 3, Mastered (All charms in the tree) a terrestrial martial arts style
Permanent
Terrestrial martial arts charms cost 4 xp less and take half the time to train.
After mastering two Celestial Martial arts, Celestial martial arts charms also cost 4 xp less and take half the time to train, in addition it negate the need for a sifu who knows the complete style, a manual on the style will do. The Dragon Blooded may still only learn one Celestial Martial arts style at a time, with the same xp penalties for learning Terrestrial martial arts charms.
Charm 2: The Sweat on the Brow, Better than Jade.
--Martial Arts 5, Essence 4, Any Martial Arts Excellency, Mastered (All charms in the tree) 2 terrestrial martial arts styles
Permanent, Enlightening
All form charms have their speed reduced by 1 tick. While in a form charm, the style’s form weapons gains a +1 accuracy or +1 damage (Player’s choice) for every dot of essence over the form charm’s minimum and every dot of martial arts over the form charm’s minimum.
After Mastering(All charms in the tree) a Celestial Martial Arts Style, the Dragon-Blooded no longer needs to make a (Dexterity + Martial Arts) Check to assume the style’s form charm.
Charm 1: The Glint in the Eye, Brighter than Gold
-- Martial Arts 4, Essence 3, Mastered (All charms in the tree) a terrestrial martial arts style
Permanent
Terrestrial martial arts charms cost 4 xp less and take half the time to train.
After mastering two Celestial Martial arts, Celestial martial arts charms also cost 4 xp less and take half the time to train, in addition it negate the need for a sifu who knows the complete style, a manual on the style will do. The Dragon Blooded may still only learn one Celestial Martial arts style at a time, with the same xp penalties for learning Terrestrial martial arts charms.
Charm 2: The Sweat on the Brow, Better than Jade.
--Martial Arts 5, Essence 4, Any Martial Arts Excellency, Mastered (All charms in the tree) 2 terrestrial martial arts styles
Permanent, Enlightening
All form charms have their speed reduced by 1 tick. While in a form charm, the style’s form weapons gains a +1 accuracy or +1 damage (Player’s choice) for every dot of essence over the form charm’s minimum and every dot of martial arts over the form charm’s minimum.
After Mastering(All charms in the tree) a Celestial Martial Arts Style, the Dragon-Blooded no longer needs to make a (Dexterity + Martial Arts) Check to assume the style’s form charm.