Realistic or Modern Crimson Temptation OOC

[OceanBunny]

Just some advice, I would suggest flushing out her personality more, right now she's just a trope/cliche, make her a person, also I would advise on looking for a hmm more savory picture, probably on Pinterest. You are trying to convince me to choose your character. I'm not going simply accept whoever shows up

Sorry, been out of town on vacation. Will work on backstory and finishing everything up.

 

[TerrorKitty]

Sorry, been out of town on vacation. Will work on backstory and finishing everything up.

You can be the extra I set aside, but the main roles are taken, so you won't be romanced but still involved

 

[Veltsu VI]

TerrorKitty may i edit stuff from my CS?

 

[TerrorKitty]

TerrorKitty may i edit stuff from my CS?

Talk to me about it first

 

[Veltsu VI]

Talk to me about it first

Biography: Hanah and her mother lived her childhood under her fathers fists, until he left them. Hanah never had good grades at school and because her clumsiness her father's doings has stayed hidden. Hanah's mother tries do her best to feed both of them, pay rent and depth that Hanah's father left them deal with.

Strengths:

• Great at mechanical stuff
• pretty even through she doesn't use makeup.
• quiet

Weaknesses:

• clumsy
• submissive
• shy
• speaking problems
• worst cook ever

Distinct Features: old and new scars and bruises that when asked she says she felt.

oh and editing personally so that she doesn't defence others, she offers herself instead of her friends.

 

[TerrorKitty]

Biography: Hanah and her mother lived her childhood under her fathers fists, until he left them. Hanah never had good grades at school and because her clumsiness her father's doings has stayed hidden. Hanah's mother tries do her best to feed both of them, pay rent and depth that Hanah's father left them deal with.

Strengths:

• Great at mechanical stuff
• pretty even through she doesn't use makeup.
• quiet

Weaknesses:

• clumsy
• submissive
• shy
• speaking problems
• worst cook ever

Distinct Features: old and new scars and bruises that when asked she says she felt.

oh and editing personally so that she doesn't defense others, she offers herself instead of her friends.

I added that because you made her too submissive, she's a blank slate, has no character like that. As a Dominant I know a person who just submits with no principles is not mentally healthy. It's not good. Don't try to make characters simply because it's hot to have someone that who's worthless and will do anything for anyone slightly dominant.

 

[Veltsu VI]

I added that because you made her too submissive, she's a blank slate, has no character like that. As a Dominant I know a person who just submits with no principles is not mentally healthy. It's not good. Don't try to make characters simply because it's hot to have someone that who's worthless and will do anything for anyone slightly dominant.

(I really have had long pause when i didn't RP with my characters and some reason brain works best when bed, nearly at sleep, now translating my thoughts and hopefully i posted this before i falled to sleep) Bit of what i only now remembered about Hanah; still she wouldn't defense others, unless they are her friends, family or loved ones, as it would put her on spotlight and shy person would avoid that.

 

[A Thousand Rivers]

Second that TerrorKitty

 

[Cosmos]

I crie. //QwQ//

 

[Veltsu VI]

(so conversation about it is negative)

 

[Veltsu VI]

Hello! Is anyone alive!

 

[Veltsu VI]

I wanted to join in sleepover! Why you left?

 

[Eliasdagood]

I didn’t.

 

[Veltsu VI]

I didn’t.

*Hugs Eliasdagood *
It's scrary

 

[Eliasdagood]

Aww, I gotcha. Posted, so maybe people will come back!

 

[Radio_Rat66.6]

Azrael just has nowhere to go or do because he's literally THE ONLY GUY in the whole thing!

 

[Eliasdagood]

Lol, attempt to join sleepover.

 

[Radio_Rat66.6]

I could see that going south. A sleepover of human girls and a single vampire guy.....

 

[Veltsu VI]

I could see that going south. A sleepover of human girls and a single vampire guy.....

I see that you would benefit from it, as you get head start with 4 girls, when your opponents have fun with each other.

 

[Veltsu VI]

Cosmos you going to post, even though Bunny is away?

 

[Veltsu VI]

Cosmos i can see you.

 

[A Thousand Rivers]

Has this group rp been stopped?

 

[Veltsu VI]

Has this group rp been stopped?

Not stopped, people just left without saying after Bunny vanished.

 

[A Thousand Rivers]

Ahh, okay.