@Mitchs98
It's really cute how instead of taking offense to some of the stuff Courtney does, Ciri actually appreciated the attention. I've already mentioned how I think Ciri is a great fit into the bros because of her boundless happy energy. They all have different personalities that kind of just fit together for a team. Ciri brings a lot of childish innocence to the team that I think is exceptionally useful in helping build a team that glues together well. Not every personality needs to mesh to have a functioning team but you kind of need... something. Kind of like Sid in Ice Age; he kind of does keep the team together. I think Ciri could be the same for Yuri bros if things continue.
Also, the observation on Shua's clothing was really really amusing xD
@Maki
Since Ava and Ouroboros are in the same place, I think you could have had them converse a little more in a 'back and forth' sort of way but the way you did it also works perfectly fine (I mean there are posts where Chester and Lanna are constantly back and forth, and posts where they don't really interact so I understand it works either way.( I really like how you portray Ouroboros; she still seems to be on the more lighthearted, yet strict villain. Something that appears pretty but can snap and become dangerous depending on which side is needed. Her tone and the words you have her use continue to build upon this concept and I think it's well done.
Ava is... someone I'm still getting a read off of. She's interesting, and she's loud, and she's going to create an interesting dynamic... but I don't know her well enough to know what to say. I think your choice of words fit the character you've made her out to be in a strong fashion so far.
Golden Sun's idea was genius and I dont know if you left that area open for Courtney to correct or not, having that one flaw in the plan was entirely genius. The plan itself was well done, and that little pat on the back Mary gave to herself at the end was absolutely priceless. Really good post, Maki
@SirBlazeALot
Courtney's ability to see flaws in plans highlights her background hisotry because it's not something most people would be able to do as well as she does. She's definitely a very strong reason why the Yuri Bros haven't crumbled; her intelligence is an incorporal part to them not falling apart. Also her lack of thinking before speaking is awesome because it causes a lot of funny instances with Shua like with the 'baby girl.' Not meaning that Courtney never thinks about what she's saying; just that sometimes it feels like she's the type of character to speak her mind and toss in nicknames without thoroughly thinking them through. Why would she need to, afterall? I think it's great you throw those instances in, though; and I also think it's fantastic how strongly Shua and Courtney contract. Having them interact really displays a lot about each character.
Marionetta... seriously, what is there to say? Her continued childish behavior paired with her high intelligence makes for a lovable character despite her being an Anti Bro. She's just so dang cute it's ridiculous. And she's also a force to be reckoned with and she knows it; it's a good thing Ouroboros saved her and that Mari's loyalty is to the woman. The Anti Bros are very lucky to have her.
The Grin... is someone else, like Ava, I'm still trying to get a read on. I'm sure she'll be a useful character and yet I don't know her all that well yet. Your posts make her seem like a very standoffish and quiet sort; which isn't a bad thing. Just a thing... It's odd because when you think Jester you tend to think a personality more like Mari's. But it's not a bad thing that she's not either.
Great post, Blaze. The scene was continued to be moved along and the characters were as engaging as always
@theglassangel
Kathalina... I am so glad that we discussed having her and Ella/The Ringmaster meetup because it's been great getting to know Ella. Granted we've seen a 'kinder' side of her because of Kathalina but I think that's just going to help get across how unkind she actually is later. (Granted she's kind to everyone that works for her obediently; just not to those who would betray her or have issues with the way her cirucs is run). Her fascination with Cotton candy, though... how does she not get sick? I would get really sick with that much cotton candy. I'm glad that you made it positive, though. Because that made things a little bit better for Ella; not feeling like she was overwhelming Alexandrea with gifts.
) SO WHY STAHP NOW lmfao.
@RubyRose @Maki @theglassangel @SpookySableye @Mitchs98 @Leaf Fi
Sweet I'll start brainstorming too. I'm not supposed to make any new characters until I finish the fire emblem app, but I've technically already broken that rule (I'm very excited to introduce that character btw but I'm gonna be coy about which RP they're in cause I'm a coy little bastard
I'm gonna go on record though and say that I don't wanna make the captain for either team, especially not the pirates because I already have a pirate captain. I'd rather be a regular team member or maybe a right hand man to one of the leaders of whatever team. I never play right hand men. But preferably, regular team member.
You know, I kind of would like to play leader of one team or the other if that option is open. If other people have laid claim, regular team members are awesome too! But if a space is open, I'd like to lay claim it
A magic mike gif???
@SirBlazeALot
You mentioned that the evil space bros probably rob from other villains too, right? Would it be a far stretch to kind of pose them as an Evil Robin Hood? Rob from the rich to give to the less fortunate which just happens to be themselves? XD
Okay, so I really want to make the leader of the evil bros group but I also think that would be the way fun role to make and yet I have her in mind and made up in my head and everything and it's beyond ridiculous. Still, if @Maki or someone else was aiming for that role I will step down.
I also have my Orion character figured out for the most part
Took them out. But otherwise, yeah. I'll make sure to get her written up asap because I'm super psyched for some space characters XD
Well my Orion Character is actually going to be someone that I drew quite awhile ago; I came up with a culture for her and freakin' everything XD I did some minor editing on it now because she had wings that just don't fit the image I was going for so
Also, thanks Maki!
I don't think that would be too far of a stretch at all.
What are your characters like
Got any ideas for your character(s) so far?
The thing with the flame is more a capability of holding and carrying flames, releasing chemicals that allows it to keep burning but not able to actual make the flames without some kind of spark element to set it off. The image for my Orion Girl
View attachment 210631 The thing with the flame is more a capability of holding and carrying flames, releasing chemicals that allows it to keep burning but not able to actual make the flames without some kind of spark element to set it off.
/monthly_2016_11/73e00058783299f5f79e93f32978cbee.jpg.f63f93cb84250e67215372a77f48d058.jpgAnd then the great Captain Maverick of the ship Deviance, danger not only to the innocent cargo space ships but also to other pirates and villains. If she can steal from them, she will. (Does anyone want to write an AI for the ship? I think it would be cool if the ship itself had a character; like an actual form that will talk to the captain and crew and tell them if engines aren't running at full capacity etc etc...? )
I can't wait to see what you do with the Orion girl's history.
Those are both super cool
I think I'm all AI'd out with Mari so far. I know forsure I wanna make an actual alien for the pirates.
I'll post my orion girl at some point today. I'm nearly done with her.
