Fandom Chaos in Hoenn

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How long is the skip?

 

[Elysium]

@SpicyLickiTounge - It would be a skip to the next morning.

 

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Oh, Ok.

 

[Elysium]

@Arcaeus - accepted

 

[Assailant]

@Jose Prime I thought I posted hours ago...

 

[Jose Prime]

@Jose Prime I thought I posted hours ago...

It's alright, but I have to go to ready for bed, I work tomorow. I'll post as soon as I can.

 

[Scrubnoppon]

Name: Warren Ledden


Age: 13


Region of origin: Unova


Group: Unafiliated


Personality: Warren is a cherry and fun, yet naieve kid. Likes to make jokes and have fun. Chill and easy to talk to. Can light up a room with his beaming personality. Does have a short temper, though.


Appearance: Warren doesn't wear anything fancy. Usually just a t-shirt and jeans or shorts if it's hot out. He has pale, freckled skin and curly auburn hair that's longer on the top than the sides, with complimenting green eyes.


Bio: The son of an important team rocket leader. He doesn't necessarily believe in what his dad, and what people in his town think. He always could get along with Pokemon, and tell what thier needs are. Likewise, he gets along with other real people, too. In his town there are two stances on team rocket. You either side with them, or you don't like them, but you HAVE to side with them. Warren was different, though. He was never found the ideals of team rocket to be ethical, and was made fun of by the other kids in his town for that. He didn't let the kids stop him. He wanted to be a nice person, and he didn't let others put him down. His father has been transferred to Hoenn on business, and has just recently got settled in. As a gift, his father recently got him his first Pokemon, torchick and growlithe


Pokemon: torchick and growlithe.


Specialty: Fire Pokemon are his specialty!


Style: Likes to deal a lot of damage quickly.


Dream: Wants to be a big shot at the world Pokemon federation. ( don't tell his dad! )

 

[Elysium]

@Scrubnoppon - I get what your going for with this character, but I can't accept him as he is right now. Your grammar needs some work, which made your bio difficult to read. There was some spelling errors in there too. Fix that and we'll talk.

 

[Scrubnoppon]

@Scrubnoppon - I get what your going for with this character, but I can't accept him as he is right now. Your grammar needs some work, which made your bio difficult to read. There was some spelling errors in there too. Fix that and we'll talk.

Really? Oh man, my bad. Lemme fix those.

 

[Scrubnoppon]

@Scrubnoppon - I get what your going for with this character, but I can't accept him as he is right now. Your grammar needs some work, which made your bio difficult to read. There was some spelling errors in there too. Fix that and we'll talk.

Okay, I fixed a ton of things. Fixed some word choice, one misspelled word, and some other things here and there, which hopefully Made it easier to read. Once again, my bad.

 

[Scrubnoppon]

@Scrubnoppon - I get what your going for with this character, but I can't accept him as he is right now. Your grammar needs some work, which made your bio difficult to read. There was some spelling errors in there too. Fix that and we'll talk.

Do you think that's good? If there's anything you need me to fix lemme know.

 

[Shadow Inori]

Name: Shadow Baskerville


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Region of Origin: Kanto





Age: 18





Group: Hoenn Elite 4 (Number 4)


Personality: known for her short temper and snarky attitude to those she dislikes or doesn't know, if your not disliked and do get to know her however she is kind hearted and protective of those she cares about. Even though she mainly uses Dark and Ghost type pokemon she shares a bond with her haunter and her sylveon whom she found as an evee whilst travleing in the kalos region.





Biography: Her parents died in the war when she was young leaving her home alone from the young age of 6. Her first pokemon was a gastly whom she found wounded whilst looking at the flowers by her home. after taking it to a pokemon centre it began to follow her, scaring away the other pokemon and never left her side since. On her journey she crashed into hibiki as she wasn't paying attention where she was walking, choosing instead to stare at her now haunter, as an apology they battled, Hibiki seeing her potential and inviting her into hoenn's elite four.


Pokemon:


Haunter, Sylveon, Banette, Drifblim, Dusknoir, Jellicent.





Specialty: Ghost type, Sylveon is the only exception to this





Tactical Overview: Attack mostly


Dream: To help in anyway she can with children who also lost their parents on way or another.

 

[Elysium]

@Scrubnoppon - I'm afraid I still can't accept your character. The sentences don't really flow together, making it difficult to read.


@Shadow Inori - Sorry for taking so long to review your character. Anyway, I'd like a bit more detail in your backstory. Doesn't have to be a word wall, but bit more story to your story would be nice. Also, make sure it's alright with @LeSoraAmari before you use his character in your biography. Thanks