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You got me there, hmmmmmm well in that case if were talking about liquid then would it make sense if the suit was made of slime?
Actually ITS PERFECT! I shall work on the quirk again and probably renaming the quirk and etc
alright. Just remember that whatever the suit is made of has to justify ALL the effects and weaknesses of the quirk.
 
Just gonna remind ya here that while this doesn't break the rules yet, the divine and profane are in every capacity things I won't accept around here.


Where is your PM?

hero costume is also missing

1. Don't worry, that quote was just a shout-out to a video game I like (Blazblue if you're wondering). So no,


2. Didn't mean label that as a secret, I haven't the backstory yet.

3. Wrote this on the hero costume portion:
Hero Costume: As of right now, his hero attire is just a black, Dri-fit t-shirt with the words "Plus Extra" emblazoned in blue in the center, black jogging pants, and black tennis shoes. (This was all that he had on during the time of the entrance exam)
Is that fine for now or should I edit it?
 
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1. Don't worry, that quote was a reference from a video game I like (Blazblue). I won't overdo with that kinda thing.

2. Didn't mean label that as a secret, I haven't the backstory yet.

3. Wrote this on the hero costume portion:
1. good

2. Then mark your stuff as [WIP] since you haven't finished yet

3.ah, my bad, it's a bit out of order

Is that fine for now or should I edit it
edit it by putting a wip, then finishing your backstory, then removing the wip. When the edits done, call me again
 
For adding more detail to my quirk, does that include match-ups against other quirks, or just what the quirk does?
 
For adding more detail to my quirk, does that include match-ups against other quirks, or just what the quirk does?
this means stuff like an exact set of your options or a good set of restrictions because I can't have you coming up with powers on the fly, that's never gonna pass.
 
Name:
-Avery Baburu
Nicknames:
-N/A
Desired Hero Name:
-Blue Bubble
Age:
-16
Gender:
-Male
Chosen Extra Class:
-General Studies
Appearance:
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Hero Costume:
(Just the costume)
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-Avery's costume isn't anything too special and can be confused with normal outside attire. However what makes it different is how it works with his quirk. The clothes are dominantly white with added baby blue, some dark blue, and some gold on the soles of his shoes.

The key point of the suit is the balls located on his shoes, around the neck piece, around the end of the jacket, and on the shoulders. There's tubes near the hands that extract the substance that his quirk produces, guiding it to the balls. When activated, the balls will inflate with the liquid, allowing Avery to jump to higher places or descend slower to not worry about fall damage. However, these do follow the same 2 minute use, meaning that after its used, a refill time is needed in between.
Height:
-5'6
Weight:
-132
Personality:
-From first glance, Avery is your happy-go-lucky boy who has a smile that refuses to falter, even in the darkest of situations. There's always some kind of positive aura coming from him and his outlook on life is always something good, seeming like there's never a bleak moment in his life. He values friendship very dearly and will put his trust and loyalty into those he sees as friends.

Avery is also very social and is always ready to meet a new friend. He's always introducing himself and is determined to make as many friends as possible. This leads into another thing, his determination; whether it be in his goal to achieve what his parents have set out for him to do or, as said above, making friends, he will not back down. Avery will keep moving, even if his own life is on the line, valuing the safety of others over his own survival. This is his biggest fault, how much he will go to save another person.

There is more, he does have other faults in the form of his trusting nature when it comes to friends, he values friendship and will trust them completely, backing them up on whatever the matter it is, as long as it isn't something illegal. Another flaw is his curious nature, leading him to want to know things and get himself into trouble by poking around in other peoples business. Avery also, like said before, doesn't know when to quite and will keep pushing leading him to be slightly obnoxious in that regard. Along with that are three traits that shouldn't be together, his loudness, how much he talks, and clumsiness. He doesn't enjoy silence and quiet areas bother him quite a bit; he has to make some kind of sound, some kind of word must be spoken or else it drives him insane. Avery doesn't know when to keep his mouth shut either and will drown on and on if you let him. He's also got two left feet, meaning stealth isn't the best option for him. He's one to mess up quite easily, bump into people and trip over himself.

Something else is how he deals with sadness, push it back and lie to yourself. He looks at his imperfections like a giant scar; he wants to be the ideal hero. The hero who never cries, the hero who can't do wrong, and the hero who will sacrifice everything to make sure lives are saved. All of this probably isn't possible but to Avery, this is. It's why he stays positive, even in the lowest of times, why he sacrifices his life. Maybe, just maybe, he can be like his parents, be like the PSA teachers, the pro heroes. Maybe he could be just like all of them, a hero.

Likes:
-Most people
-Heroes
-Writing
-Sweets

Dislikes:
-His own faults
-Anything spicy
-Betrayal
-Sadness whether it be his own or others
-Silence
-Dark Humor

Fears:
-Fear of large bodies of water
-Fear of not becoming a hero

Mannerisms:
-Tends to have his hands moving while he's talking, whether it be extending them to show great importance, twirling them to show a repeat, etc.
-Known to use words like "Howdy," "Gee Wiz," and other odd American words that no one uses.

Backstory:
-Avery isn't naturally from Japan and is actually from America. Avery was born in the southern part of America though his family was known to move around wherever they were needed. His parents were both heroes and they tried their best to raise Avery while moving place to place. Jobs where harder then it seemed, the duo usually getting bested by a better hero and moving was the only way they could earn money.

Like most moving children, Avery was never able to keep friends and it usually led to him having to start from the ground up. However, his parents always pushed him forward and taught him the hero way. how heroes acted and how he could become one of them. This made Avery want to be like them, his parents and heroes, the brave and perfect people of the world. Moving became less of a problem, his parents were helping people, and that was all that mattered. His parents then thought about the life of Avery, their sons career, and what mattered more, their own jobs or their sons job.

That's when it was decided that instead of continuing to move, they'd go to Japan and stay there, a permanent home. It had good schools that could help Avery become what his parents and him dreamed, a hero. Avery couldn't believe the news and was prepared to go to what he believed to be was "The Heart of Heroes." He would work towards this goal and nothing could stop him.

Avery spent most of his time after that studying the language and learning little facts here and there so that he wouldn't botch his chances. One year later, when Avery was 13, he finally went to Japan and has since been pursuing his parents goals for him, trying to be a hero in a unknown land full of opportunity.

Relationships:
-Julia Baburu(Queen of Suds): Julia cares very much for her son and husband. Willing to so much to make sure her son is able to reach his goal. While soft, she does have a firm hand and doesn't allow herself to be pushed over, she's the parent with a short temper when it comes to others.
  • Julia's quirk makes it so that her body produces soap suds from her body. Making her a very slippery hero and hard to catch once she's covered.
-Enka Baburu(Sticky Avenger): Enka is actually from Japan but moved with the rest of his family when he was merely a baby. He is a normal father with a tough appearance but with a soft side only his family can bring out. He loves his son and wife, willing to move to another side of the Earth for them.
  • Enka's quirk allows him to produce a substance from his hands and feet to stick to almost any surface. He is able to scale large buildings and shoot it out to stop villains in their tracks.
Quirk:
-Bubbles: This quirk allows the user to ability to create bubbles of varying size and shape. The creation of them is one at a time, coming from the users palm, expanding from the middle out to form whatever sized bubble is needed. Little command can be given and can only be controlled to go one way and will keep going until finally popping; each bubble has 2 minute creation time though Avery can make them pop on command, after either, they'll pop.

The bubbles can be only done through the users hands, the actual secretion is unknown but is said to be slightly sticky, to that of simple duck-tape. The strength will depend on the size as a basic bubble will just pop from simply stepping on it while a bubble the size of the user(Avery) will need pressure of 150 pounds to pop it. However, this is blunt force. The bubbles can also be popped by sharp objects like swords or high powered shots like with guns. The creations also have a slight stickiness to them, so if used on something like a plank, it can actually lift it up though it might take a few as one single average sized bubble will not lift the board.

Special Moves:
-Bubble Barrage: This is when Avery creates two large bubbles on different hands before throwing them forwards toward the enemy. This process is repeated until the enemy is covered in bubbles and in most cases, will probably start to float up. This is really only meant to disable enemies and not actually hurt them in anyway.
Items:
-Journal to write daily
-A special pen with the signature colors of All Might.

Skills/talents:
-Writing
Theme Song:
Favorites:
Other:
-I imagine him sounds like Jack Mcbrayer
Approved!
 
(Revamp Character/Quirk.)

Quote: "Ugh, i need sometime to whoop ass and take care of some...'Cravings.'"

Name: Kuma Beruseruku

Nicknames: N/A

Desired Hero Name: Mad Gear

Age: 15 Years Old

Gender: Male

Chosen Extra Class: General Studies

Appearance:
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Kuma Beruseruku stands at 221 cms or 7, 3 feet which makes him tower over most normal people and weighing at 455 lbs or 201 kgs however his weight can increase depending on his Quirk would think because of his unnatural size. Underneath his right eye is a tattoo in red ink that is the word "REVENGEFUL" in English that is styled cursively and under that tattoo is another one that is alot smaller that is the word "LIVING" in blue ink. On the right side of Kuma's face is a set of tattoos which represent his family as there is a black star with a Venus flytrap growing in it and is wrapped up in Diamond, Gold and Silver chains which represents his father's situation while a white star with a rose growing inside of it that is being placed inside of a detailed coffin represents his mother's death, finally his star is grey in color as a cannabis plant grows inside as it is covered in slash marks and bullet holes represent his fighting but drugged influence fighting spirit. (The picture with the white dreadlocks, he also doesn't have a mustache. The dark marks are massive birthmarks or huge callus that become black because of the gigantic build up of dead-skin).

(soon to be) Hero Costume:
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(The mask, gloves, tire-like wrist bands, tire-like shoulder band and shoes/tire wrist-band has very special engraves are made to be rather durable as well as expansive because of his increasing size. The glove's have small spikes that covered the knuckles, fingers and palms which could lead to increase damage from fist strikes or grappling techniques.)

Personality: Kuma is a dominant person who likes to behaves and act in a way that he isn't control by another because he prefers himself this way because he differs from the normal. He is a blunt person as he can't sugar-coat anything no matter, this bluntness could be considered rude to many people as he tells them what is on his mind at the moment, the bluntness he has is connected to his honesty as he couldn't lie to save his life or anyone else.

As a result, Kuma Beruseruku is seen as a hard spoken individual or rough around edges to say that speaks his mind freely to anyone no matter their who they are. It means that Kuma is seen as a rude person by most people his age as not people can take his comments which means that he is a often lonely or distant from others which he doesn't like being alone.

Despite that bluntness and rude way of speaking, he is a rather good person who understands more... crazier personal situations so he isn't judgmental at all but rather the more wild and out of the ordinary is, the more Kuma will respect the person because of their suffering/living through their situation. He's a rather loyal person to anyone who shows him the same respect he gives to them as Kuma believes and says that everyone, no matter the Quirk, Age or Position is the exact same so because of that.

Kuma's view on the world is rather strange as he does care about almost anything unless it should directly affect him. Whenever he is angry in anyway, he is closed off and doesn't like to talking to annoying at the moment as he always mumbles great deal of curses and insults directed to himself under his breath as he sees everything as something extremely annoying but whenever he is pleased/happy, he has a small smile on his face and quietly humming a tone to himself as he finds everything to be calming and somewhat enjoyable.....except his dislikes, his other moods are exactly alike as he will just have a blank face while rarely speaking but he does speak out at random times. Kuma's moods shifts rapidly and quickly so it makes others think that he has a mental disorder or something along those lines, it is one things that people find rather strange about him but Kuma doesn't care about what others think of him.

A problem about him is that his relation ship with his father or lack of has affected some of his emotions that had inhibit some of his positive emotions while it has boost his aggression by a great deal so whenever he isn't experience happiness or a similar emotion, he won't react to many things.

Likes:
  • Eating​
  • Training​
  • Eating great deals of food of any sort​
  • People In general​
  • Good-Looking Women or Women with good personality​
  • Not being allowed to train at all​
  • Injuries​
  • The fact he can't care about what others think about him.​
  • Working in a construction yard or dismantle heavy machinery​
  • Massive, Loud and High Performance vehicles​
  • Drinking Lean (A Fruit tasty Soda combine with cough syrup that contains Codeine.) or smoking legalize marijuana in general​
  • Any/All kinds of Alcohol​
  • Extremely flashy and expressive belts​
  • His "Sisters" and any of their friends​
Dislikes:
  • Things people find cute​
  • Those that look down on others or people who push their achievements in the faces of many​
  • Drinking water is rather hot​
  • Villains without honor​
  • Holding back in a fight​
  • Being called or even consisted a pervert​
  • Cancer sticks aka Cigarettes​
  • Cigars (Too damn fancy and pretty to be smoked.)​
  • Teachers that try to prevent him from doing any of his "cravings."​
  • Clothes that aren't baggy or pants without belt loops.​
  • School that forces him to wear a very tidy uniforms​
  • His "Sisters" working together to get at him or taking any of his..."Cravings."​
  • Those that talk badly about his "Sisters."​
Fears:​
  • Not being Loved/Respect at a Person and only seen as a Demon or Monster.​
  • Seen as a Villain or an Evil Hero with rather different air about him​
Mannerisms:
  • Kuma tends to sleep with class that have great quantity of writing or lectures that don't involve fighting
  • Tends to complement men because of their fighting ability and girls because of their appearance​
  • If he doesn't like something he'll just say "Hm." for a period of time depending on how angry he was.​
  • Always has a box of construction screws which he treats like toothpicks while he sometimes gnaws on them when has a craving for anything.​

Backstory: Kuma Bersuseruka was a child born into a single mother that was connected to a Villain who just so happened to be Kuma's father. That man was a small-time crook that went big as in his early stages was making his money through small robberies, assault and theft so the only reason he was able to get away with it all was his Quirk, a rather strong Quirk that his father used for crime and competing/fighting off the police or any pro heroes in the area of his crimes.

Kuma's father however was arrested after a crime and sentence to life in prison, the police however interrogated him on the matter of where the money and valuable, priceless items that he had stolen. The police then proceed found out about Kuma and his mother in which, the two Bersuserukas were moved out the "home" and into another home with a fresh start for the both of them.

Kuma had much trouble over his Quirk's Awakening, it then proceed to permanently change his appearance til he looked very similar to his father in which he was bully by many child around his age because of the negative reputation his old man had. However Kuma's mother grew greatly sick in which she passed away but not before leaving a message for Kuma that said "Don't be a Evil Man like your father...Be a great Man...Like a Hero."

Moved into a small orphanage which he then grew up in however he listening to his mother's words, he looked at who heroes were and what he found was amazing things. Powerful people who were just and beloved, it pushed him into a positive light however he wanted a goal to have and his eyes locked onto All Might. The Number 1 Hero in the World and The Strongest One of them all, his goal was found as he wanted to be just as that man...the Strongest of them all so he trained and trained to keep on getting stronger until now.

Relationships:
Riba Hone (@Shammy the Shamrock): Riba is a girl who Kuma meet in middle-school as a result it lead to them having a relationship similar to "brother and sister." The reason behind it is that they have a great deal of respect for eachother despite their limited number of interactions which lead to "fun" (Aka fights with people that didn't like them) moments, she doesn't give him a positive attuide or makes alot/any of small-talk with him. Kuma is rather protective of her and provides a older brotherly presence despite the fact he is younger than her.
Lián Shimizu (@yuckeroni): Lián's another girl who Kuma meet in middle-school which resulted in a "brother and sister" relationship between the two. Kuma's relationship with Lián is...extremely rocky as she has often tried to harm him or destroy his belongings but despite this negativity that she always gives to him, he cares for her and watches out for her so nothing bad or crazy happens to her.

Quirk: Muscle Enlargement Augmentation A Transformation Type Quirk: Muscle Enlargement Augmentation is a Quirk that make Kuma be able to augment the muscle fibers that are beneath his skin, increasing the power and speed of his movements. When using this Quirk, the enhanced muscle fibers protrude from and cover the skin of the area that is being augmented greatly increase in size


As an example of a more complex strength-enhancement Quirk, Muscle Enlargement Augmentation can be used to attack and defend in a number of different ways. As well as simply augmenting Kuma's strength and speed, he is also seemingly able to control his muscle strands individually, utilizing them for more refined attacks, such as crushing crushing a enemies limb or weapon when it's caught in augmented muscles or act like a very protective shield capable of block multiple attacks or single, destructive blows. Additionally, Kuma can increase the size of augmented muscles which results in a greater increase of strength and durability in exchanged for speed and stamina because of the extra weight while he can enlarge certain parts of his body.



This Quirk improves as it requires the user to having to do large amounts of harsh and rigorous physical training so that Kuma's muscles will grow in mass and strength which leads to his quirk's muscle augmentation becoming far more stronger. There are weaknesses in this quirk, the first is that whenever Kuma fights beyond his current limit of ability, his body can't contain the destructive power which cause his muscles to be torn apart and his bones to shatter. Kuma also can't exceed a certain level of enlargement if he does try to exceed the limit, the muscles fibers will begin to tear themselves appear which can result in damage that will take along time to heal.


Kuma's current level of muscle augmentation level, increase mass allowance and power usage at the moment is at 1%, Kuma`s reckless and wild-self means he has a habit of causing destruction or breaking things by accident, this helps him because the Quirk has a time limit of 1 hour where Kuma can continuously use his powers freely. Muscle Enlarge Augmentation enables Kuma to have superhuman strength at destructive levels, increased agility, superhuman speed while having an increasing his overall durability. Kuma's base augmented muscles only allows him to throw around 500 lbs but he can thrown around 625 lbs when he is enlarge all muscles in his body, much higher pain tolerance compared to normal humans, faster reaction time/speed than the average human and sprinting at speeds of 21.2 miles per hour as his base but it's reduced to 16.4 miles per hour when his whole body is enlarged but it means that his stamina is decreased in such .


Kuma's enlarged state leads to an increased size of the augmented muscles, it will give him a major strength boost and defensive exchange for major decrease in speed and overall stamina as the new weight that he acquires makes it harder to move around and it takes alot more energy to move at such monstrous size as Kuma reaches when his whole body is enlarge however if he gets more training in, he'll slowly get used to it but he is far more durable in this state compared to normal as the muscle fibers are much larger and cable of cover more area so it becomes a far better "shield". Additional, Kuma can enlarge selective parts of his such as his arms, legs or torso/neck/head which will only yield a 25 lb increase in strength while a 1.2 mile per hour decrease as his body weigh will by 30 lbs which will result when he enlarges his entire body, he will weigh in at 605 lbs.


A strange part of the Quirk is that whenever Kuma attacks a organic bodies, his strength doesn't resonance as well which means his attack power is greatly reduced as he can't destroy someone's body with a single blow but he still punches hard. His power however functions at full force when he attacks something that isn't organic and it can be told apart whenever his limbs that are augmented begin to glow, if he attacks something that is't alive, the muscle fibers will glow a fiery orange but if he is attacking something that is alive, it won't glow.


Special Moves: SMASH! Kuma is a fan/follower of All-Might in which inspired him to be a future hero. As a result, whenever Kuma attacks with maximum strength behind it or has the intention of killing/destroying the target. Kuma will say with a roar "Smash!!!" In which the attack will have a great deal of destructive power.{S}

Items:
  • Locket containing a picture of his mother and himself after being free from his father.​
  • Box of "Toothpicks" (Or Iron made Construction Screws.)​
Skills/talents:
  • Even without Formal Training in any Martial Art or Fighting style, Kuma is still quite good at close-quarters combat to the point he is considered a Prodigy with alot of natural talent.​
  • No showing emotion when it isn't required.​
  • Dismantling/destroying Machinery of any sort or carrying heavy equipment around​
Theme Song:
Kendrick Lamar- HUMBLE (Instrumental/Normal Theme)((Theme 1))

One Punch Man Rap beat End Ost -Otaku Furiku (High or Drunk/Happy Theme)((Theme 2))

Hajime no Ippo Soundtrack - Black and Blue (Battle/Enraged Theme)((Theme 3))


Favorites: Prefer meats over vegetables but eats both, Likes disobey rules about the drugs that he uses and his "sisters" are two girls that he cares for the most.

Other:​

  • Takes great care of his dreadlocks which means he has plenty of uniquely patterned or designed colored headbands, do-rag and dreadlock hats​
  • Wants to acquire a great deal of tattoos so he spends most of his money on tattoo shops however....he hasn't found one that is willing to allow him to get inked.​

Rage Rage I am gonna take a leap of faith here and approve your character. However, be warned of this: I purposely did not yet review the measures. This is because I am gonna be busy now making the table which registers the measures for the charater's quirks, all of them. That should give me a better idea of the average, which may and likely will imply changes to your measures accordingly. If you have a problem with this, please voice within 24 hours.
 
I think I'm done with my CS, though the quirk seems weak compared to the others.
It most definitely isn't. In fact even just the character immediately surrounding yours there are severly worse quirks. Not that having a weaker quirk is really a problem in this roleplay were being weaker is rewarded.

In any case, now I just need the concrete limits.
 
It most definitely isn't. In fact even just the character immediately surrounding yours there are severly worse quirks. Not that having a weaker quirk is really a problem in this roleplay were being weaker is rewarded.

In any case, now I just need the concrete limits.
I don't understand what you mean by a concrete limit, do you mean what the strongest material someone can break is?
 
I don't understand what you mean by a concrete limit, do you mean what the strongest material someone can break is?
Concrete limits are the upper limits of every single aspect of your character's power. If you are any more or any less durable than the average human being with your quirk, you need to state how much that is, exactly. How many hits can you take of what. If you generate energy, how much energy. If can lift a lot, just how much. Every single little one of those things
 
I think it's finally done, though I might add a theme or two in the future for normal encounters (If it's allowed.)
 

Enton Reiji
Hero-saurus

The quickest way to anything's heart is it's stomach.
Enton Reiji



  • Age:
    16
    Gender:
    Male
    Appearance:
    Enton has curly blonde hair with a few patches of brown hair. He has hazel eyes and short eyelashes, with slightly pale skin. The rest of his features are average sized, except for his teeth, which are larger than average.
    Hero Costume:
    His costume is just a leather padded blue boiler suit with holes for any appendages he might grow with his quirk. (i.e his back, the bottoms of his arms, etc.)
    Likes:
    Foods made from potatoes.
    Card games.
    Nature documentaries.
    Video Games.
    Dislikes:
    Really hot/spicy foods (i.e peppers, red Doritos, etc.)
    Birds.
    Really hot weather.
    People who are really loud and annoying.
    Favorites:
    {S}
    Cats are his favorite currently existing animals.
    His favorite Dinosaur (and mutation) is the Therizinosaurus.
    His favorite drink is Milk.
    Mannerisms:
    If he's interrupted by someone while talking, he'll instinctively pause.
    Items:
    A plastic figure of a Therizinosaurus, which is more than 10 years old.
    A photo of him with his cat and family.
    A phone with secret contents.
    Themes:
    Normal Battle Theme

    Serious Battle Theme

    Super Serious Battle Theme

    Any situation where Enton is brought to using holepuncher.

    Extra Class:
    General Studies
    Fears:
    {S}
    Relationships:
    He's on pretty good terms with his family.
    He loves his cat, and she loves him too.
    Skills/Talents:
    He's really good with puzzles, as long as they're not slide puzzles.
    He's great with aiming his hits.
    Other:
    He's been considering working out.

Approved!
 
I mentioned this last time, but you need to add the actual contents of the belt here. And by actual I mean a concrete list, not just their vague denomination like "basics for stealth"

I would also appreciate it if you could tell me where the aforementioned plates are located exactly, but that's a bit more minor for now


This line is nonsensical. I get that in a sense it feels real, because real people often tease people even if they are not actively looking to upset or irritate people normally, but at least in the way you phrased it, it seems like the character goes out of his way to not be a bother to others... which makes it completely upside down for him to be the kind of person who'd tease someone else.

In any case, the personality is still underflawed.




I should have asked before, but what exactly IS this suit? You keep piling more and more effects on it, and while at first it was kind of just an augmentation thing it's quickly turning into an arsenal of abilities. It's already pretty obvious you're gonna have to cut some out, but it's also begginign to seem like you also have no idea what this is actually suppose to be, besides the aforemention venom rip-off. Some powers will just not suit every explanation, no pun intended, so at this point I really need this answered.


This is one that I am almost 100% sure it's gonna get rejected after your explanation. Manipulation in general is overpowered, but that add that's it's just one effect, that the word "somehow" is somehow in your description suggesting you stuffed this in there without thinking about it, and the strange idea that this manipulation is so ultra-specific without any actual reason for it and you get an ability that sticks like a sore thumb and probably hurts just as much to keep.



This is way too much to begin with. 0.5 miles blows the roof completely into utterly bonkers.

I have to refresh on a couple things aout yoru backstory and we'll go back to concrete limtis once we fix your quirk's conceptual problems, but focus on dealing on these problems for now.
Alright I fixed the quirk and specified what its made out of, and the personality. Hope its in better shape. Including the utility belts equipment and the armored plates.
 
Slime suit: Kuba when not being able to defeat his opponents in his normal physical form, transforms into his humanoid slime form. This slime suit allows Kuba to manipulate his body to dodge his opponents attacks and utilize it for ranged attacks like tentacles to whip at enemies or grab at medium range (20 feet), or throw some his slime at his opponents to slow them down or capture. His slime form can also grow to increase his strength and ranged attacks for the cost of mobility and speed.
Rejected. The quirk is invencible except to direct counters, making it conceptually OP
 
Tazer, and a line launcher.
remove these two. I am already being generous letting you keep the smoke pellets, but it's gonna cost ya. Litterally.

Personality ain't fixed yet either. You didn't add flaws this time even, you just added the perception of others (which you can't control, cause that would be powergaming)
 

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