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The Pun Tyrant
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( )Null said:alright, Thanks!
hope i don't be incomprehensible
I really like the part where he states; "And so Ty made his way to Blackwood so he could get a better education so that he could get a better job, like working at a better food shack." xD Fucking hilarious!Nawmoo said:Name: Ty Ren
Age: 17
Appearance: Ty is a tannish-black man 5.6 feet tall with a natural figure and a large afro accompanied with a spaniard facial hair combo. Ty usually wears a sage hoodie with black pants, socks, fingerless gloves and shoes. He often likes to wear a green shirt, but to which green shirt he wears varies. Ty wears censer bar sunglasses at all times, because he thinks they look cool. He also likes to carry his books and whatnot's in a dull-sage satchel that hangs over his right shoulder.
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual
Species: Human
Background: Ty doesn’t really remember his past, and frankly, he doesn’t really care. All he knows is he woke up one day on a beach and started working at a food shack called “The Fried Fish” because…reasons. During his break time while working around the shack, he figured out that he could fly. With this discovery, he began to do what any other person would do when they discovered that they have the power of levitation…use it for miscellaneous means. He started flying slightly above the ground instead of walking. One day, he receive a letter from a "Mr. Black" about a school for gifted people. And so Ty made his way to Blackwood so he could get a better education so that he could get a better job, like working at a better food shack.
Likes/Dislikes: Like: casual gaming, TV, the pain of others, electric swing, rudimentary tasks, common courtesy, junk food, performing on stage, the color green. Dislike: oceanic cuisine, country music, drama, black people, the color yellow.
Personality: Slightly robotic in nature, Ty mostly likes to gets to the point in a conversation and finish tasks in an efficient manner. Ty prefers to be kept busy or else he just wanders off into doing something miscellaneous. Even though Ty may act robotic, he still likes to interact with others in conversations and whatnot. He often likes to talk about television sitcoms and animated series.
Gift: Ty has the ability of levitation, mostly used to levitate around instead of walk, and an enhanced condition. The extent of his flight and how far he can levitate varies from the amount of his concentration while his enhanced condition does make him physically more superior, it does not necessarily mean he can survive falls from great heights or crashes into walls.
Best subject: Music, Art
Worst Subject: English, Writing
Grade: Class 2
Motivation: Money, because why not get paid to do stuff.
Optional Pet: Rocky, the pet rock
Great profile here, but are you sure you don`t want to expand a bit on the background, instead of just giving the character (yet another) random case of amnesia?Nawmoo said:Name: Ty Ren
Age: 17
Appearance: Ty is a tannish-black man 5.6 feet tall with a natural figure and a large afro accompanied with a spaniard facial hair combo. Ty usually wears a sage hoodie with black pants, socks, fingerless gloves and shoes. He often likes to wear a green shirt, but to which green shirt he wears varies. Ty wears censer bar sunglasses at all times, because he thinks they look cool. He also likes to carry his books and whatnot's in a dull-sage satchel that hangs over his right shoulder.
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual
Species: Human
Background: Ty doesn’t really remember his past, and frankly, he doesn’t really care. All he knows is he woke up one day on a beach and started working at a food shack called “The Fried Fish” because…reasons. During his break time while working around the shack, he figured out that he could fly. With this discovery, he began to do what any other person would do when they discovered that they have the power of levitation…use it for miscellaneous means. He started flying slightly above the ground instead of walking. One day, he receive a letter from a "Mr. Black" about a school for gifted people. And so Ty made his way to Blackwood so he could get a better education so that he could get a better job, like working at a better food shack.
Likes/Dislikes: Like: casual gaming, TV, the pain of others, electric swing, rudimentary tasks, common courtesy, junk food, performing on stage, the color green. Dislike: oceanic cuisine, country music, drama, black people, the color yellow.
Personality: Slightly robotic in nature, Ty mostly likes to gets to the point in a conversation and finish tasks in an efficient manner. Ty prefers to be kept busy or else he just wanders off into doing something miscellaneous. Even though Ty may act robotic, he still likes to interact with others in conversations and whatnot. He often likes to talk about television sitcoms and animated series.
Gift: Ty has the ability of levitation, mostly used to levitate around instead of walk, and an enhanced condition. The extent of his flight and how far he can levitate varies from the amount of his concentration while his enhanced condition does make him physically more superior, it does not necessarily mean he can survive falls from great heights or crashes into walls.
Best subject: Music, Art
Worst Subject: English, Writing
Grade: Class 2
Motivation: Money, because why not get paid to do stuff.
Optional Pet: Rocky, the pet rock
Seems like a nice profile to me. I should point out though, the gift could use a little fix:electricity[/URL], which gives Damien the control over electric fields, electric charges, electric currents, electronics, and electromagnetism.
[*]Shifting: While in his Devil form, his physical features increase to peak human levels. The power of his electricity also seems to increase in power as well.
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Best subject: PE, Chemistry
Worst Subject: Art and Math
Grade: Freshman
Motivation: To get strong enough to protect the ones he loves
I understand amnesia is a kind of generic thing to do, but to my defense, I'm not gonna let it define me. I included it for comedic effect for the "I have no Idea who I am....Well, time to go work". I wanted my character to come off as I guy who really doesn't care about his past and is just here to do stuff.Idea said:Great profile here, but are you sure you don`t want to expand a bit on the background, instead of just giving the character (yet another) random case of amnesia?
Apart from that, everything good to go and start rping unless the owner opposes.
Seems like a nice profile to me. I should point out though, the gift could use a little fix:
*Eletrokinesis: As I pointed out to a few people before, being able to create stuff is OP. So downgrade it in a concrete manner or remove it. Also, while there is a connection between electricity in it`s common form and electromagnetism, electronics are far too complex it to be included in the control of electricity. It would be a complete separate power, so please remove it.
*Shifting: Peak human levels is alright. Please be careful amount this increase in the power of electricity. Also, for how long does this last, how often can he use it?
If you wanna use it, I won`t stop you (not that I could, anyway). I made that suggestion for two reasons:Nawmoo said:I understand amnesia is a kind of generic thing to do, but to my defense, I'm not gonna let it define me. I included it for comedic effect for the "I have no Idea who I am....Well, time to go work". I wanted my character to come off as I guy who really doesn't care about his past and is just here to do stuff.
alrightNawmoo said:Duly noted
Yep that's rightNawmoo said:So just to be clear, in a plot-related sense, we are technically still on the first day of school and people are right now on like the 12:00 break? I'm just looking for a place to jump into the story.
Ok, where do I start? Well, first of all good profile. Congrats, you were one of the few (if not the only one) who actually posted something on the pet`s appearance.Tazmodo said:Name: Eric
Age: 16
Appearance:
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Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Hetero
Species: Human
Background: Nobody knows. After a freak accident he was left with permanent amnesia.
Likes/Dislikes: Chess, games, reading, and cooking.
Violence
Personality: Cunning and Shy
Gift: Transformation
Teleportation (only to where he can see)
Best subject: Science
Worst Subject: History
Grade: 11
Motivation: Become a lawyer.
Optional Pet: Winged lemur
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I fixed itIdea said:Ok, where do I start? Well, first of all good profile. Congrats, you were one of the few (if not the only one) who actually posted something on the pet`s appearance.
Now, there are several problems too. I`ll begin with the most important:
Transformation- this word has a billion different meanings. Please expand on it.
Teleportation- even though you made it to only where he could see, which seriously helps fix the ability, there should still be a limited amount of times he can use the ability within a given span of time, otherwise you character can`t be hit.
Likes/Dislikes- please state clearly which are likes and which are dislikes. I think I know, but the point is that anyone who looks at it will, nomatter who it is. Also a single generic dislike like "violence" isn`t enough. Please add some more character-specific dislikes.
Now, a few things were you`ll likely want to expand, but are not as important to do so as the previous ones:
Background- amnesia is generically used without thought of the implications. Please consider VERY carefully if you want to keep it. Remember that using to hide some secret power or a plot to pull focus based on his "forgotten" past is a great way to annoy/bore other rpers.
Personality- Again, you might want to expand. "cunning and shy" are too vague.
Name- Does he seriously have no last name or is that "amnesia"? Either way you may want to consider him having a last name.
Also please add your Class
I suppose it IS better now. Well, go rp and have fun!Tazmodo said:I fixed it
Ok.. So first of all, this is a BIG profile, congrats. Not everyone can have both quantity AND quality in the same piece of work.Federoff said:Ayne Aswerlath
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Name: Ayne Aswerlath (I-Yawna As-were-l-ath)
"Hi, it's so nice to meet you"
"Go jump off a cliff"
Age: 17
"I'm 17 right now"
"Why does that matter to you?!?"
Height/Weight: 5'7/105 IB
Gender: Female
"Aww come on now"
"Are you F***ing blind!?!"
Sexual Orientation: Demipansexual-Homoromantic
"I like everyone"
"I prefer girls, is that a PROBLEM?"
Species: Half Frost Giant
"I'm only half"
"Yeah, and?"
Background:
Ayne's life was a very difficult one, from her childhood she was quickly labeled a demon child due to her heritage and was an outcast for all of her life. At a young age, her father was forced to give her up due to complications, and she was sent to a community where her father is well known...and well hated. She was bullied 24/7 by most of the kids, and shunned by the rest of the community; besides for one person, and her name was Eir.
Eir was the only person to accept her and see past her heritage, the only true friend Ayne was able to make in a place where friends were impossible to make for someone like her. With the new friend, she began to open up more, she felt comfortable and safe around the girl; the two of them were almost always together. Whether pulling pranks on others, doing combat practice, or just hanging out; they were almost always together, and Eir stood up for Ayne, giving Ayne the boost in self confidence that she needed. Despite this though, the bullying and teasing of the other children did not stop, and this took a toll of her already fragile to begin with state of mind, and it only got worse. When she was born, she was not alone in her own body; instead she was born with a second conscious, or personality if you will, that warned her of society and how she needed to be careful around everyone.
During these times, the second side of Ayne was not too much trouble, it was just there, nothing more nothing less; but that all changed (when the fire nation attacked xD ) when she became 11 when she and Eir were caught by the Aldaföðr, the leader if you were, and was accused of corrupting Eir, and so was banished to the cold isolated forests, where she spent 5 solid years in isolation; no communication with anyone or anything.
During this secluded part of her life, Ayne went through a whole transformation, and her mind slowly broke into the two pieces in which it is today, her old self being pushed down and away while her new personalities took up (In which I'll go into more detail in the personality section). When her banishment was finally lifted by the Aldaföðr and retrieved, Ayne was completely different in both looks and how she acted, she was a changed person. For a full year she lived back with the community, the same as always but somehow different, very very different. Instead of the old Ayne, who was shy and passive, new Ayne had a side in which was angry and fierce, along with a more cheerful side.
After a full year of this volatile nature, and unsure of what to do with her, it was decided that should get rid of her by sending her to a Academy to help her learn to interact with people, and so was sent here to Blackwood Academy.
"I'd rather not talk about it..."
"How about, go f*** yourself"
(Young Ayne ->)
Likes/Dislikes:
+ Plant life (Light stance only)
+ Baking Cookies (Lso)(Also... don't trust her with making anything besides cookies...)
+ Sleeping in (Lso)
+ Small and adorable animals (All)
+ Reading (All)
+ Organization (All)
+ Yelling (Dso)
- Stupid people (Dso)
- Stupid Actions (Dso)
- Cooking/Baking (Dso)
- Yelling/Fighting (Lso)
"It's complicated"
"Why does this matter to you?!?!"
Personality:
Ayne is quite the split up individual, as she has three sides to her personality; although one of them is locked deeply inside of her and will only come out when she is extremely stressed, to the point of snapping; so lets start with that side of her. This is the side of her that was suppressed by her other two new personalities, and in a sense is the little girl before she was banished; a shy and timid little girl who is very kind and trusting, despite the fact that she was bullied most of her life.
The second side of her (the one with snow jacket on) is a more kind and carefree personality, she likes to talk and hang out with people, make them feel better, and usually is very easy to talk to...or so you think. Despite being all cute, cuddly, innocent, and outgoing; she can actually be described as manipulative by Eir; she often saying that she would rather trust the Dark stance of Ayne then the light stance, as she is at least honest with her answers. Despite this though, this side of Ayne seems to just wish for the well being of others and hates to fight or argue, often giving control to her other side when dealing with rude people as she doesn't know how to deal with them. Ayne likes to compliment others in this form, help others, and overall just tell others what they want to hear in order to make them feel better; she is just very easy to talk to.
The third side of Ayne is the dark side (the one with purple hair), she is the more angry side of Ayne and the most violent; often calling people out of stupid stuff, getting very angry with people, and often ends up hurting people on accident because claws plus anger management does not equal a good time. She tries her best to be nice, tries to change herself, but ends up coming off as angry and pissed off; reflected in how she speaks. Ayne is very self conscious of how she looks, and will be shut down if someone comments on her claws in a negative way; yet if she is complimented she acts angry in response, even if that's not what she meant. Nice is just not her. Despite being very angry and violent, she is not like her other self, who she argues with a lot of the time both verbally and mentally, this side of Ayne is shockingly more truthful in her answers then her other side, but is prone to being flustered and stressed. She does not fully grasp the consequences of her actions unless someone points them out, or it is too late.
"Like two peas in a pod!"
*Grumbles*
Gifts:
Despite her heritage and the pool of powers she could have, hers in comparison are weird and less powerful compared to her family.
Plant Manipulation: Ayne's first power is plant manipulation, giving her the ability to control, grow, manipulate, shape, create, and most interestingly destroy and whither plants; which includes, plants, trees, shrubs, flowers, moss, a specific part of a plant, vegetables, etc... Her power, just like herself, is split into two and due to her personalities and mental barriers, her powers are different depending on which side she is on. When in her light stance, she has the power of creation, while in her dark side the power to whither and destroy plant life. As it stands right now though, she cannot create a lot of plant life at the moment and costs a lot of energy and focus to do so.
Divided Mind(Also known as Mode Switching): This is what makes Ayne, well, Ayne. She has multiple personalities within her that act differently and on their own, unlike others though she is completely aware of them, and most notably; her physical appearance changes when in different personalities, along with her voice slightly changing to a lower pitch when in her dark form; hence her different stances. This is really only a minor power as it doesn't really give her any benefits.
Levitation: This is Ayne's weakest power as she can only levitate 4 inches off the ground, which is not a lot compared to other people who have this ability. She usually is using this power to move from place to place, and doesn't really mind only being able to go 4 inches off the ground.
"I'm sure your much more interesting to talk about then me"
"So what?!?!? I can still KICK YOUR ASS"
(<-Young Ayne again)
Best subject: History, Science
Worst Subject: Math, English, Home Ec
Grade: 2
Motivation:
"I just wanna meet people and learn how to control myself"
*Grumbles*
Optional Pet: Her pet is a small fox squirrel named Gullinkambi (Gull-in-Kambe). (He has almond shape eyes and they are fully green, no pupil)
"Do my brothers count?"
"Aww, isn't my little Gullinkambi the cutest? Aww who's a cute harbinger of death? You are, Yes you are...(Etc...)..."
*Fake Gags**Pets him a little*
An interesting, sintetic (that`s misspelled, sry), profile and wonderful and a much needed cheerful character. Simple, yet functional, well done.Maxwelle said:
Name || Star
Height || 4'11"
Weight || 113 Ibs.
Age || Unknown (Equivalent of a 17 year old human girl)
Gender || Female
Sexual Orientation || Pan-Demisexual
Species || A species of alien that takes on many properties of stars
Background || Star has only recently arrived on Earth. She isn't supposed to be here but that is neither here nor there. Curiosity can make any creature do strange things. Because she hasn't been here long there are many things she isn't accustomed to. Before she came to earth she lived on a star just outside the galaxy.
||Likes/Dislikes ||
+ Colors
+ Music
+ Sweet foods
+ Spicy Foods
+ Heights
+ Light
+ Being warm
- Being Cold
- Silence
- Sitting still for too long
- Darkness
- Bats
Personality || Star is very enthusiastic and hopeful. She's often smiling and laughing. Sometimes she follows people around instead of actually speaking to them because she lacks common social skills. She's sensitive if she knows she's being offended. Other things like expressions she might take seriously. She's also very energetic and likes to climb things, jump off things, and bounce around.
|| Gift ||
- The ability to transform completely into her star form which boosts things like senses, speed, agility, power, and her stamina.
- The ability to blast star projections from extremities of the body.
Best subject || Math
Worst Subject || History
Grade || Class 2
Motivation || To learn about humans and creatures 0f earth
Ok, I think you`re good to go. Just one last thing: Can your character give plants any characteristics they normally wouldn`t have (such as poison, being sticky, any sort of power, etc...)? If she can, please remove that.Federoff said:fixed
Ok, then, you`re good to go. Have fun!Federoff said:Yes, she can give plants the power to fly and shoot laser beams out of acorns xD (Jk) Yeah don't worry she can't do that.