Blackwood Academy for the Gifted

Name: Ty Ren


Age: 17


Appearance: Ty is a tannish-black man 5.6 feet tall with a natural figure and a large afro accompanied with a spaniard facial hair combo. Ty usually wears a sage hoodie with black pants, socks, fingerless gloves and shoes. He often likes to wear a green shirt, but to which green shirt he wears varies. Ty wears censer bar sunglasses at all times, because he thinks they look cool. He also likes to carry his books and whatnot's in a dull-sage satchel that hangs over his right shoulder.


Gender: Male


Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual


Species: Human


Background: Ty doesn’t really remember his past, and frankly, he doesn’t really care. All he knows is he woke up one day on a beach and started working at a food shack called “The Fried Fish” because…reasons. During his break time while working around the shack, he figured out that he could fly. With this discovery, he began to do what any other person would do when they discovered that they have the power of levitation…use it for miscellaneous means. He started flying slightly above the ground instead of walking. One day, he receive a letter from a "Mr. Black" about a school for gifted people. And so Ty made his way to Blackwood so he could get a better education so that he could get a better job, like working at a better food shack.


Likes/Dislikes: Like: casual gaming, TV, the pain of others, electric swing, rudimentary tasks, common courtesy, junk food, performing on stage, the color green. Dislike: oceanic cuisine, country music, drama, black people, the color yellow.


Personality: Slightly robotic in nature, Ty mostly likes to gets to the point in a conversation and finish tasks in an efficient manner. Ty prefers to be kept busy or else he just wanders off into doing something miscellaneous. Even though Ty may act robotic, he still likes to interact with others in conversations and whatnot. He often likes to talk about television sitcoms and animated series.


Gift: Ty has the ability of levitation, mostly used to levitate around instead of walk, and an enhanced condition. The extent of his flight and how far he can levitate varies from the amount of his concentration while his enhanced condition does make him physically more superior, it does not necessarily mean he can survive falls from great heights or crashes into walls.


Best subject: Music, Art


Worst Subject: English, Writing


Grade: Class 2


Motivation: Money, because why not get paid to do stuff.


Optional Pet: Rocky, the pet rock
 
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Name: Ty Ren
Age: 17


Appearance: Ty is a tannish-black man 5.6 feet tall with a natural figure and a large afro accompanied with a spaniard facial hair combo. Ty usually wears a sage hoodie with black pants, socks, fingerless gloves and shoes. He often likes to wear a green shirt, but to which green shirt he wears varies. Ty wears censer bar sunglasses at all times, because he thinks they look cool. He also likes to carry his books and whatnot's in a dull-sage satchel that hangs over his right shoulder.


Gender: Male


Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual


Species: Human


Background: Ty doesn’t really remember his past, and frankly, he doesn’t really care. All he knows is he woke up one day on a beach and started working at a food shack called “The Fried Fish” because…reasons. During his break time while working around the shack, he figured out that he could fly. With this discovery, he began to do what any other person would do when they discovered that they have the power of levitation…use it for miscellaneous means. He started flying slightly above the ground instead of walking. One day, he receive a letter from a "Mr. Black" about a school for gifted people. And so Ty made his way to Blackwood so he could get a better education so that he could get a better job, like working at a better food shack.


Likes/Dislikes: Like: casual gaming, TV, the pain of others, electric swing, rudimentary tasks, common courtesy, junk food, performing on stage, the color green. Dislike: oceanic cuisine, country music, drama, black people, the color yellow.


Personality: Slightly robotic in nature, Ty mostly likes to gets to the point in a conversation and finish tasks in an efficient manner. Ty prefers to be kept busy or else he just wanders off into doing something miscellaneous. Even though Ty may act robotic, he still likes to interact with others in conversations and whatnot. He often likes to talk about television sitcoms and animated series.


Gift: Ty has the ability of levitation, mostly used to levitate around instead of walk, and an enhanced condition. The extent of his flight and how far he can levitate varies from the amount of his concentration while his enhanced condition does make him physically more superior, it does not necessarily mean he can survive falls from great heights or crashes into walls.


Best subject: Music, Art


Worst Subject: English, Writing


Grade: Class 2


Motivation: Money, because why not get paid to do stuff.


Optional Pet: Rocky, the pet rock
I really like the part where he states; "And so Ty made his way to Blackwood so he could get a better education so that he could get a better job, like working at a better food shack." xD Fucking hilarious!
 
[QUOTE="The Haygor]I really like the part where he states; "And so Ty made his way to Blackwood so he could get a better education so that he could get a better job, like working at a better food shack." xD Fucking hilarious!

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Lol, thanks
 
Name: Damien Welch


Age: 15


Human Appearance:


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Devil Appearance:


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Gender: male


Sexual Orientation: Bisexual


Species: Blue Devil


Background:


Damien was born in the outbacks of Australia. His parents were doing a bit of research during the time his mother was pregnant with him. Hi father told him that his mother had disappeared three weeks after his birth, but he knew his father wasn't giving him the full details. Damien seemed like he was able to control his powers well enough to attend a human school, his anger though, always led him into fist fights. After getting kicked out of six schools and rejected by another three. His father eventually knew that the only school that would accept him, was one that had supernatural beings in them. His father had originally wanted to keep him away from other species, but he knew it was a lost cause. Two weeks before Damien would be attending the school, his father eventually told him the truth about what happened to his mother. She was murdered three miles outside the camp grounds, three miles away from the new born child. Panicking about what could happen to their son, he called off the research parties and left Australia, not even giving his mother a proper funeral. He told Damien that he didn't know what had killed her, but it would have to be powerful, strong enough to take down a Devil with ease like it did his mother. Although angry at his father from hiding the truth from him all this time, he learned to forgive him, as this gave him the motivation to try his best in school. He wanted to protect those close to him, so the incident that happened to his mother, would never happen to anyone close to him again.


Likes:


Electronics


Techno music


Helping people


Sports


Bullies


Dislikes:


Nature


Country music


Laziness


No phone service


Attention hogs


Personality:


Damien likes to think of himself as a helpful and irreplaceable person in society. However, despite his pride, Damien has the problem of always overreacting to everything around him. He is quick to pick fights with people he doesn't know, and even quicker with people who doesn't know who are talking to his friends. Despite always trying to help, he can actually make things a bit worse at some points. He is very overprotective with his friends and girls that look like they can't handle themselves. Despite his punch first and ask questions later attitude, he will often hide his true feelings from everyone to prevent them from having to worry about him. He has shown to have a very big heart, and often times will find a quiet place to cry if he feels he has messed up to bad.


Gift:

  • Electrokinesis: Damien can create, shape and manipulate electricity, which gives Damien the control over electric fields, electric charges, electric currents, electronics, and electromagnetism.
  • Shifting: While in his Devil form, his physical features increase to peak human levels. The power of his electricity also seems to increase in power as well.


Best subject: PE, Chemistry


Worst Subject: Art and Math


Grade: Freshman


Motivation: To get strong enough to protect the ones he loves
 
Nawmoo said:
Name: Ty Ren
Age: 17


Appearance: Ty is a tannish-black man 5.6 feet tall with a natural figure and a large afro accompanied with a spaniard facial hair combo. Ty usually wears a sage hoodie with black pants, socks, fingerless gloves and shoes. He often likes to wear a green shirt, but to which green shirt he wears varies. Ty wears censer bar sunglasses at all times, because he thinks they look cool. He also likes to carry his books and whatnot's in a dull-sage satchel that hangs over his right shoulder.


Gender: Male


Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual


Species: Human


Background: Ty doesn’t really remember his past, and frankly, he doesn’t really care. All he knows is he woke up one day on a beach and started working at a food shack called “The Fried Fish” because…reasons. During his break time while working around the shack, he figured out that he could fly. With this discovery, he began to do what any other person would do when they discovered that they have the power of levitation…use it for miscellaneous means. He started flying slightly above the ground instead of walking. One day, he receive a letter from a "Mr. Black" about a school for gifted people. And so Ty made his way to Blackwood so he could get a better education so that he could get a better job, like working at a better food shack.


Likes/Dislikes: Like: casual gaming, TV, the pain of others, electric swing, rudimentary tasks, common courtesy, junk food, performing on stage, the color green. Dislike: oceanic cuisine, country music, drama, black people, the color yellow.


Personality: Slightly robotic in nature, Ty mostly likes to gets to the point in a conversation and finish tasks in an efficient manner. Ty prefers to be kept busy or else he just wanders off into doing something miscellaneous. Even though Ty may act robotic, he still likes to interact with others in conversations and whatnot. He often likes to talk about television sitcoms and animated series.


Gift: Ty has the ability of levitation, mostly used to levitate around instead of walk, and an enhanced condition. The extent of his flight and how far he can levitate varies from the amount of his concentration while his enhanced condition does make him physically more superior, it does not necessarily mean he can survive falls from great heights or crashes into walls.


Best subject: Music, Art


Worst Subject: English, Writing


Grade: Class 2


Motivation: Money, because why not get paid to do stuff.


Optional Pet: Rocky, the pet rock
Great profile here, but are you sure you don`t want to expand a bit on the background, instead of just giving the character (yet another) random case of amnesia?


Apart from that, everything good to go and start rping unless the owner opposes.


 


electricity[/URL], which gives Damien the control over electric fields, electric charges, electric currents, electronics, and electromagnetism.

[*]Shifting: While in his Devil form, his physical features increase to peak human levels. The power of his electricity also seems to increase in power as well.

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Best subject: PE, Chemistry


Worst Subject: Art and Math


Grade: Freshman


Motivation: To get strong enough to protect the ones he loves
Seems like a nice profile to me. I should point out though, the gift could use a little fix:


*Eletrokinesis: As I pointed out to a few people before, being able to create stuff is OP. So downgrade it in a concrete manner or remove it. Also, while there is a connection between electricity in it`s common form and electromagnetism, electronics are far too complex it to be included in the control of electricity. It would be a complete separate power, so please remove it.


*Shifting: Peak human levels is alright. Please be careful amount this increase in the power of electricity. Also, for how long does this last, how often can he use it?
 
Idea said:
Great profile here, but are you sure you don`t want to expand a bit on the background, instead of just giving the character (yet another) random case of amnesia?
Apart from that, everything good to go and start rping unless the owner opposes.


 



Seems like a nice profile to me. I should point out though, the gift could use a little fix:


*Eletrokinesis: As I pointed out to a few people before, being able to create stuff is OP. So downgrade it in a concrete manner or remove it. Also, while there is a connection between electricity in it`s common form and electromagnetism, electronics are far too complex it to be included in the control of electricity. It would be a complete separate power, so please remove it.


*Shifting: Peak human levels is alright. Please be careful amount this increase in the power of electricity. Also, for how long does this last, how often can he use it?
I understand amnesia is a kind of generic thing to do, but to my defense, I'm not gonna let it define me. I included it for comedic effect for the "I have no Idea who I am....Well, time to go work". I wanted my character to come off as I guy who really doesn't care about his past and is just here to do stuff.
 
Nawmoo said:
I understand amnesia is a kind of generic thing to do, but to my defense, I'm not gonna let it define me. I included it for comedic effect for the "I have no Idea who I am....Well, time to go work". I wanted my character to come off as I guy who really doesn't care about his past and is just here to do stuff.
If you wanna use it, I won`t stop you (not that I could, anyway). I made that suggestion for two reasons:


1. Having background already set gives you something more to work with while doing your post. A sort of content stash in case you have a particulary short reply and can`t get out of it.


2. Amesia is often used out of laziness or as an annoying justification to pull off Deux- ex-machine (bloody autocorrect!) stuff, such as creating something in his past to justify some ridiculous power or skill to solve any slightly harder conflict or creating something to pull your character to center of attention. These don`t go well in the end.


Still, feel free to do as you like, since your profile is fully functional. If you want to, just go, rp and have fun!
 
So just to be clear, in a plot-related sense, we are technically still on the first day of school and people are right now on like the 12:00 break? I'm just looking for a place to jump into the story.
 
Nawmoo said:
So just to be clear, in a plot-related sense, we are technically still on the first day of school and people are right now on like the 12:00 break? I'm just looking for a place to jump into the story.
Yep that's right
 
Name: Eric Taylor


Age: 16


Appearance:


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Gender: Male


Sexual Orientation: Hetero


Species: Human


Background: When he was a child his family was murdered in front of his eyes. If not for the police he would have been killed too. After that Eric ran away from any home they put him in and lived on the streets.


Likes/Dislikes: Likes:Chess, games, reading, and cooking.


Dislikes:Violence, boredom, studying, and pointless drama.


Personality: Eric is a lone wolf. He like to think about the problem at hand and make a plan rather than charge in half cocked. He will gladly lay down his life if it means saving another.


Gift: Transformation (into any animal)


Teleportation (only to where he can see. Causes physical fatigue after the first couple of teleports. Can due no more then 5 without rest)


Best subject: Science


Worst Subject: History


Grade: 11


Motivation: Become a lawyer.


Optional Pet: Winged lemur


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Name: Eric
Age: 16


Appearance:


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Gender: Male


Sexual Orientation: Hetero


Species: Human


Background: Nobody knows. After a freak accident he was left with permanent amnesia.


Likes/Dislikes: Chess, games, reading, and cooking.


Violence


Personality: Cunning and Shy


Gift: Transformation


Teleportation (only to where he can see)


Best subject: Science


Worst Subject: History


Grade: 11


Motivation: Become a lawyer.


Optional Pet: Winged lemur


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Ok, where do I start? Well, first of all good profile. Congrats, you were one of the few (if not the only one) who actually posted something on the pet`s appearance.


Now, there are several problems too. I`ll begin with the most important:


Transformation- this word has a billion different meanings. Please expand on it.


Teleportation- even though you made it to only where he could see, which seriously helps fix the ability, there should still be a limited amount of times he can use the ability within a given span of time, otherwise you character can`t be hit.


Likes/Dislikes- please state clearly which are likes and which are dislikes. I think I know, but the point is that anyone who looks at it will, nomatter who it is. Also a single generic dislike like "violence" isn`t enough. Please add some more character-specific dislikes.


Now, a few things were you`ll likely want to expand, but are not as important to do so as the previous ones:


Background- amnesia is generically used without thought of the implications. Please consider VERY carefully if you want to keep it. Remember that using to hide some secret power or a plot to pull focus based on his "forgotten" past is a great way to annoy/bore other rpers.


Personality- Again, you might want to expand. "cunning and shy" are too vague.


Name- Does he seriously have no last name or is that "amnesia"? Either way you may want to consider him having a last name.


Also please add your Class
 
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Idea said:
Ok, where do I start? Well, first of all good profile. Congrats, you were one of the few (if not the only one) who actually posted something on the pet`s appearance.
Now, there are several problems too. I`ll begin with the most important:


Transformation- this word has a billion different meanings. Please expand on it.


Teleportation- even though you made it to only where he could see, which seriously helps fix the ability, there should still be a limited amount of times he can use the ability within a given span of time, otherwise you character can`t be hit.


Likes/Dislikes- please state clearly which are likes and which are dislikes. I think I know, but the point is that anyone who looks at it will, nomatter who it is. Also a single generic dislike like "violence" isn`t enough. Please add some more character-specific dislikes.


Now, a few things were you`ll likely want to expand, but are not as important to do so as the previous ones:


Background- amnesia is generically used without thought of the implications. Please consider VERY carefully if you want to keep it. Remember that using to hide some secret power or a plot to pull focus based on his "forgotten" past is a great way to annoy/bore other rpers.


Personality- Again, you might want to expand. "cunning and shy" are too vague.


Name- Does he seriously have no last name or is that "amnesia"? Either way you may want to consider him having a last name.


Also please add your Class
I fixed it
 
Ayne Aswerlath




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    Name: Ayne Aswerlath (I-Yawna As-were-l-ath)


    "Hi, it's so nice to meet you"


    "Go jump off a cliff"


    Age: 17


    "I'm 17 right now"


    "Why does that matter to you?!?"


    Height/Weight: 5'7/105 IB


    Gender: Female


    "Aww come on now"


    "Are you F***ing blind!?!"


    Sexual Orientation:
    Demipansexual-Homoromantic (Meaning its hard for her to fall in love and she doesn't care about gender, but prefers girls)


    "I like everyone"


    "I prefer girls, is that a PROBLEM?"


    Species: Half Frost Giant


    "I'm only half"


    "Yeah, and?"


    Background:



    Ayne's life was a very difficult one, from her childhood she was quickly labeled a demon child due to her heritage and was an outcast for all of her life. At a young age, her father was forced to give her up due to complications, and she was sent to a community where her father is well known...and well hated. She was bullied 24/7 by most of the kids, and shunned by the rest of the community; besides for one person, and her name was Eir.


    Eir was the only person to accept her and see past her heritage, the only true friend Ayne was able to make in a place where friends were impossible to make for someone like her. With the new friend, she began to open up more, she felt comfortable and safe around the girl; the two of them were almost always together. Whether pulling pranks on others, doing combat practice, or just hanging out; they were almost always together, and Eir stood up for Ayne, giving Ayne the boost in self confidence that she needed. Despite this though, the bullying and teasing of the other children did not stop, and this took a toll of her already fragile to begin with state of mind, and it only got worse. When she was born, she was not alone in her own body; instead she was born with a second conscious, or personality if you will, that warned her of society and how she needed to be careful around everyone.


    During these times, the second side of Ayne was not too much trouble, it was just there, nothing more nothing less; but that all changed (when the fire nation attacked xD ) when she became 11 when she and Eir were caught by the Aldaföðr, the leader if you were, and was accused of corrupting Eir, and so was banished to the cold isolated forests, where she spent 5 solid years in isolation; no communication with anyone or anything.


    During this secluded part of her life, Ayne went through a whole transformation, and her mind slowly broke into the two pieces in which it is today, her old self being pushed down and away while her new personalities took up (In which I'll go into more detail in the personality section). When her banishment was finally lifted by the Aldaföðr and retrieved, Ayne was completely different in both looks and how she acted, she was a changed person. For a full year she lived back with the community, the same as always but somehow different, very very different. Instead of the old Ayne, who was shy and passive, new Ayne had a side in which was angry and fierce, along with a more cheerful side.


    After a full year of this volatile nature, and unsure of what to do with her, it was decided that should get rid of her by sending her to a Academy to help her learn to interact with people, and so was sent here to Blackwood Academy.


    "I'd rather not talk about it..."


    "How about, go f*** yourself"







 

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Name || Star


Height || 4'11"



Weight || 113 Ibs.


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Age || Unknown (Equivalent of a 17 year old human girl)

Gender || Female

Sexual Orientation || Pan-Demisexual

Species || A species of alien that takes on many properties of stars

Background || Star has only recently arrived on Earth. She isn't supposed to be here but that is neither here nor there. Curiosity can make any creature do strange things. Because she hasn't been here long there are many things she isn't accustomed to. Before she came to earth she lived on a star just outside the galaxy. See, each creature similar to her is born from a star that is created at the same time. These creatures are like an entity of that star, being the same in spirit but not in body, allowing Star herself to travel where she pleases. She'd watched her star for many years and grew bored rather quickly. There were times where she'd come to inspect earth, eventually enter the atmosphere and, as of late, come directly to earth. Unfortunately, unaware of the fact that leaving her star raises the chances of fatality for both, she has left herself vulnerable.

||Likes/Dislikes ||

+ Colors

+ Music

+ Sweet foods

+ Spicy Foods

+ Heights

+ Light

+ Being warm

- Being Cold

- Silence

- Sitting still for too long

- Darkness

- Bats

Personality || Star is very enthusiastic and hopeful. She's often smiling and laughing. Sometimes she follows people around instead of actually speaking to them because she lacks common social skills. She's sensitive if she knows she's being offended. Other things like expressions she might take seriously. She's also very energetic and likes to climb things, jump off things, and bounce around.

|| Gift ||

- The ability to transform completely into her star form which boosts things like senses, speed, agility, power (strength, hits), and her stamina.

Edit: Depending on her will, determination, and stamina, her time in this form lasts from 10 minutes to 2 hours. If she were just to take advantage of the speed per say, she could last a lot longer in the form. If she pushed her limits, her stamina would drain quickly.

Edit #2: Her normal speed being about 20-25 mph running and her enhanced speed being about 50-75 mph depending on how much she pushes herself. If she used up all of her energy quickly, she might be able to hit speeds up to 200 mph but not be able to do much after.)

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- The ability to blast star projections from extremities of the body.

Best subject || Math

Worst Subject || History

Grade || Class 2

Motivation || To learn about humans and creatures 0f earth​
 
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Name:Haru Sokai


Age:17


Appearance:<p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/Random_Anime_Guy_by_animeAnimeANMIE.jpeg.8c4445adf593564f2abdbd601535c1f0.jpeg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="59061" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/Random_Anime_Guy_by_animeAnimeANMIE.jpeg.8c4445adf593564f2abdbd601535c1f0.jpeg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p><p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/C4.jpeg.9537abf10c3e4f82d6a3b84877989755.jpeg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="59062" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/C4.jpeg.9537abf10c3e4f82d6a3b84877989755.jpeg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p>


His sword has a length of 73cm


Gender:Male


Sexual Orientation:Straight


Species:Geneticly alternated human


Background:Haru and his sister Naomi's mother Mary is a genius who works for a group who wanted to find a way to fight the supernatural this group was simple call The Church of Order they gave them a liquid codenamed Holy Water. It gave them powers they were warned that their thoughts and feeling would affect the powers. In the end they were right. Haru's power is more for attack thanks to his hot blooded nature and bold thoughts. He first learned his power when he got in a fight with some thugs and Naomi stepped in to protect him she was hurt. Haru jumped into action when he hit them they went flying he had gotten stronger. Later a sword made of pure energy was abled to be made by him. He found it hard to fit in with other people and usal found himself in fights whenever he tried to make friends. Then he'd beat them up and get yelled at by Naomi but Mary always seemed just a bit too busy to scold him he hated this he got into more an more fights trying to get her attention. But it never worked or he thought until he was one day just sitting on the roof and Mary came out and smacked him on the head with a laptop. She told him how much of an idiot he is but how lucky he is as well. Lucky to have a sister who cares for him lucky to be as strong as he is....Lucky to have a smoking hot mother. Haru agreed expect with the last one that's where he got his motivation to get stronger. And also why he agreed to come to the school.


Likes:Sweets, fighting, working out, cute girls, danger, Naomi's cooking.


Dislikes:Sour things, jerks, cheaters, sore losers, Naomi getting hurt, when Naomi bugs him, when Naomi uses herself as a shield.


Personality:Haru is tough but can be kind when he wants to he tries not to be a jerk but sometimes can screw up then he'll quickly try and fix his mistakes. He's quick to get into a fight which ends up causing a lot of problems. He's not the type to just back down either even when he's clearly out matched. He likes training and fighting and being on edge the more dangerous the better. He hates people who think they are better then everyone. He also can't stand people who don't know how good they got it.


Gift:Can make a sword of pure energy which can cut through anything supernatural but has no affect on physical objects that aren't supernatural or have power. (So a human with powers can be cut)


Enhaned physical strength and speed he can lift a ton and run mach 1(But using it too much can give him extreme exhaustion)


Best subject:Gym


Worst Subject:Math


Grade:class 2


Motivation:He wants enough power to be able to take on anyone and anything that wants to hurt his family. He also has a desire to be known as the hearm king and have tons of girls in love with him.


Optional Pet:none


Name:Naomi Sokai


Age:17


Appearance:<p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/403549.jpeg.ffb0d62fcb5ad7b3673c9deff779ff17.jpeg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="59063" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/403549.jpeg.ffb0d62fcb5ad7b3673c9deff779ff17.jpeg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p><p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/glowing_shield_by_jesse_the_art_maker-d3c0eqx.jpeg.5288d059b47e3159acb22f499959b3de.jpeg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="59064" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/glowing_shield_by_jesse_the_art_maker-d3c0eqx.jpeg.5288d059b47e3159acb22f499959b3de.jpeg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p>


Her shield is as thick as a bulletproof shield and covers half of her body she is 5,4


Gender:Female


Sexual Orientation:Straight


Species:Geneticly alternated human


Background:Mostly the same story as Haru expect when she saw Haru fighting all those thugs she thought she had to jump in she shielded him from a bat she went down and Haru attacked. Of course the idiot didn't watch his back and was attacked from behind she shielded him again this time she blocked a steel pipe and it broke over her shoulder. She didn't feel any pain she later was able to make a shield like Haru's sword. She was never much of a fighter and before getting her powers was a small frail girl. She mostly spent time in Mary's library reading wanting to be as smart as her. But she could never be in the library long without worrying about Haru and for good reason. He seemed to be getting in more and more fights and she didn't know why. She began to try and study the human psyche to understand how to help. She found nothing but she did find help by Mary coming in and talking to her. She told her to stop worrying so much and that Haru was tough but Naomi knew that she knew that better then everyone. She wanted to be useful somehow then Mary went on to say how he's also an idiot a huge Idiot and that without Naomi he'd never finish the maze on the back of a cerial box. Naomi smiled she could help in her own way she could help. She did some more research and found the school telling Haru and Mary she got Haru to agree and Mary sent them on their way.


Likes:Sour things, reading, math, bugging Haru, Yaoi.


Dislikes:Sweets, When Haru ignores her, when Haru hits on girls poorly, when Haru's rude, jerks, cheater, sore losers.


Personality:Naomi is mostly the opposite of Haru she is smart and likes to plan out the attack rather then just run in guns blazing. She almost always is able to keep a cool head and always has Haru's safety over her own. Which can lead to her useing her self as a human shield. Which leads to Haru yelling at her. She takes pride in being the brain and isn't afraid to fend for herself. Although she does know when she's outmatched but if Haru is around he always seems to find a way to get her to stay and fight.


Gift:Can create a shield of pure energy which can block or reflect any supernatural attack but doesn't work on physical attacks.(meaning an physical attack using power can be blocked but a punch without can't be blocked even enhanced strength punched or kicks can't be blocked unless energy is being used directly.)


Enhaned physical durability and stamina she could go on in a fight for weeks 2 at most and she can be hit by a bullet train going top speed and get away with only some broken ribs and other bones.


Best subject:Math


Worst Subject:Gym


Grade:class 2


Motivation:She wants to be able to protect her family from anyone or anything. She also hopes to be smart like their mother Mary.


Optional Pet:Haru<p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/Random_Anime_Guy_by_animeAnimeANMIE.jpeg.30b98f4a56c3b7c4df7fa199212cbfa0.jpeg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="59057" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/Random_Anime_Guy_by_animeAnimeANMIE.jpeg.30b98f4a56c3b7c4df7fa199212cbfa0.jpeg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p><p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/C4.jpeg.633be112970d8589af33878d24e98800.jpeg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="59058" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/C4.jpeg.633be112970d8589af33878d24e98800.jpeg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p><p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/403549.jpeg.78bd589b437094c287c6fd6573d00a44.jpeg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="59059" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2015_06/403549.jpeg.78bd589b437094c287c6fd6573d00a44.jpeg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p>













 

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Federoff said:
Ayne Aswerlath



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    Name: Ayne Aswerlath (I-Yawna As-were-l-ath)


    "Hi, it's so nice to meet you"


    "Go jump off a cliff"


    Age: 17


    "I'm 17 right now"


    "Why does that matter to you?!?"


    Height/Weight: 5'7/105 IB


    Gender: Female


    "Aww come on now"


    "Are you F***ing blind!?!"


    Sexual Orientation:
    Demipansexual-Homoromantic


    "I like everyone"


    "I prefer girls, is that a PROBLEM?"


    Species: Half Frost Giant


    "I'm only half"


    "Yeah, and?"


    Background:



    Ayne's life was a very difficult one, from her childhood she was quickly labeled a demon child due to her heritage and was an outcast for all of her life. At a young age, her father was forced to give her up due to complications, and she was sent to a community where her father is well known...and well hated. She was bullied 24/7 by most of the kids, and shunned by the rest of the community; besides for one person, and her name was Eir.


    Eir was the only person to accept her and see past her heritage, the only true friend Ayne was able to make in a place where friends were impossible to make for someone like her. With the new friend, she began to open up more, she felt comfortable and safe around the girl; the two of them were almost always together. Whether pulling pranks on others, doing combat practice, or just hanging out; they were almost always together, and Eir stood up for Ayne, giving Ayne the boost in self confidence that she needed. Despite this though, the bullying and teasing of the other children did not stop, and this took a toll of her already fragile to begin with state of mind, and it only got worse. When she was born, she was not alone in her own body; instead she was born with a second conscious, or personality if you will, that warned her of society and how she needed to be careful around everyone.


    During these times, the second side of Ayne was not too much trouble, it was just there, nothing more nothing less; but that all changed (when the fire nation attacked xD ) when she became 11 when she and Eir were caught by the Aldaföðr, the leader if you were, and was accused of corrupting Eir, and so was banished to the cold isolated forests, where she spent 5 solid years in isolation; no communication with anyone or anything.


    During this secluded part of her life, Ayne went through a whole transformation, and her mind slowly broke into the two pieces in which it is today, her old self being pushed down and away while her new personalities took up (In which I'll go into more detail in the personality section). When her banishment was finally lifted by the Aldaföðr and retrieved, Ayne was completely different in both looks and how she acted, she was a changed person. For a full year she lived back with the community, the same as always but somehow different, very very different. Instead of the old Ayne, who was shy and passive, new Ayne had a side in which was angry and fierce, along with a more cheerful side.


    After a full year of this volatile nature, and unsure of what to do with her, it was decided that should get rid of her by sending her to a Academy to help her learn to interact with people, and so was sent here to Blackwood Academy.


    "I'd rather not talk about it..."


    "How about, go f*** yourself"


Ok.. So first of all, this is a BIG profile, congrats. Not everyone can have both quantity AND quality in the same piece of work.


However, there are still as few problems:


1.Sexuality-Please explain what "Demipansexual-Homoromantic" means, exactly. The point of sexuality is that people know whether or not pairings are possible, with all the implications of that info. I, and no doubt many (if not most) others, don`t understand “Demipansexual-Homoromantic”.


2.Gifts-Two issues: First, two gifts is the max. Either remove one of the gifts or try to find a way to mix of them (in a way that makes sense, of course). Second, plant control. As far as killing/withering/destroying plants or controlling their movement, I can follow. But CREATE them? No. And frankly, with something like “plants”, I don`t see how it could possibly be downgraded enough. No creating. It`s OP.


 


Maxwelle said:

Name || Star


Height || 4'11"



Weight || 113 Ibs.


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Age || Unknown (Equivalent of a 17 year old human girl)

Gender || Female

Sexual Orientation || Pan-Demisexual

Species || A species of alien that takes on many properties of stars

Background || Star has only recently arrived on Earth. She isn't supposed to be here but that is neither here nor there. Curiosity can make any creature do strange things. Because she hasn't been here long there are many things she isn't accustomed to. Before she came to earth she lived on a star just outside the galaxy.

||Likes/Dislikes ||

+ Colors

+ Music

+ Sweet foods

+ Spicy Foods

+ Heights

+ Light

+ Being warm

- Being Cold

- Silence

- Sitting still for too long

- Darkness

- Bats

Personality || Star is very enthusiastic and hopeful. She's often smiling and laughing. Sometimes she follows people around instead of actually speaking to them because she lacks common social skills. She's sensitive if she knows she's being offended. Other things like expressions she might take seriously. She's also very energetic and likes to climb things, jump off things, and bounce around.

|| Gift ||

- The ability to transform completely into her star form which boosts things like senses, speed, agility, power, and her stamina.

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- The ability to blast star projections from extremities of the body.

Best subject || Math

Worst Subject || History

Grade || Class 2

Motivation || To learn about humans and creatures 0f earth​
An interesting, sintetic (that`s misspelled, sry), profile and wonderful and a much needed cheerful character. Simple, yet functional, well done.


Still, you did have a few misses.


*Her background prior to coming to Earth (which was a big chunk of her life, as I understood), isn`t described properly at all. Please, tell us about it.


*Her first gift you have to specify the meaning of “power”, the amount of speed (comparative please) and the duration of the buff.


 


[QUOTE="Nenma Takashi]Name:Haru Sokai
Age:17


Appearance:View attachment 135610View attachment 135611


His sword has a length of 73cm


Gender:Male


Sexual Orientation:Straight


Species:Geneticly alternated human


Background:Haru and his sister Naomi's mother is a genius who works for a group who wanted to find a way to fight the supernatural they gave them a liquid codenamed Holy Water. It gave them powers they were warned that their thoughts and feeling would affect the powers. In the end they were right. Haru's power is more for attack thanks to his hot blooded nature and bold thoughts. He first learned his power when he got in a fight with some thugs and Naomi stepped in to protect him she was hurt. Haru jumped into action when he hit them they went flying he had gotten stronger. Later a sword made of pure energy was abled to be made by him.


Likes:Sweets, fighting, working out, cute girls, danger, Naomi's cooking.


Dislikes:Sour things, jerks, cheaters, sore losers, Naomi getting hurt, when Naomi bugs him, when Naomi uses herself as a shield.


Personality:Haru is tough but can be kind when he wants to he tries not to be a jerk but sometimes can screw up then he'll quickly try and fix his mistakes. He's quick to get into a fight which ends up causing a lot of problems. He's not the type to just back down either even when he's clearly out matched. He likes training and fighting and being on edge the more dangerous the better. He hates people who think they are better then everyone. He also can't stand people who don't know how good they got it.


Gift:Can make a sword of pure energy which can cut through anything supernatural but has no affect on physical objects that aren't supernatural or have power. (So a human with powers can be cut)


Enhaned physical strength and speed he can lift a ton and run mach 1


Best subject:Gym


Worst Subject:Math


Grade:class 2


Motivation:He wants enough power to be able to take on anyone and anything that wants to hurt his family. He also has a desire to be known as the hearm king and have tons of girls in love with him.


Optional Pet:none


Name:Naomi Sokai


Age:17


Appearance:View attachment 135612View attachment 135614


Her shield is as thick as a bulletproof shield and covers half of her body she is 5,4


Gender:Female


Sexual Orientation:Straight


Species:Geneticly alternated human


Background:Mostly the same story as Haru expect when she saw Haru fighting all those thugs she thought she had to jump in she shielded him from a bat she went down and Haru attacked. Of course the idiot didn't watch his back and was attacked from behind she shielded him again this time she blocked a steel pipe and it broke over her shoulder. She didn't feel any pain she later was able to make a shield like Haru's sword.


Likes:Sour things, reading, math, bugging Haru, Yaoi.


Dislikes:Sweets, When Haru ignores her, when Haru hits on girls poorly, when Haru's rude, jerks, cheater, sore losers.


Personality:Naomi is mostly the opposite of Haru she is smart and likes to plan out the attack rather then just run in guns blazing. She almost always is able to keep a cool head and always has Haru's safety over her own. Which can lead to her useing her self as a human shield. Which leads to Haru yelling at her. She takes pride in being the brain and isn't afraid to fend for herself. Although she does know when she's outmatched but if Haru is around he always seems to find a way to get her to stay and fight.


Gift:Can create a shield of pure energy which can block or reflect any supernatural attack but doesn't work on physical attacks.(meaning an physical attack using power can be blocked but a punch without can't be blocked even enhanced strength punched or kicks can't be blocked unless energy is being used directly.)


Enhaned physical durability and stamina she could go on in a fight for weeks 2 at most and she can be hit by a bullet train going top speed and get away with only some broken ribs and other bones.


Best subject:Math


Worst Subject:Gym


Grade:class 2


Motivation:She wants to be able to protect her family from anyone or anything. She also hopes to be smart like their mother Mary.


Optional Pet:Haru

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Good profile! This is simple, contrasting and effective. Kudos to you for the original motivations. The profile is good to go for rp, as far as I can see.


However, a couple tips for good measure:


*you might want to expand on the background, the time where they were under the "group who wanted to find a way to fight the supernatural". Also, name the group.


*Don`t go overboard with the speed buff.
 
Federoff said:
Ok, I think you`re good to go. Just one last thing: Can your character give plants any characteristics they normally wouldn`t have (such as poison, being sticky, any sort of power, etc...)? If she can, please remove that.
 
Yes, she can give plants the power to fly and shoot laser beams out of acorns xD (Jk) Yeah don't worry she can't do that.
 

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