Fantasy Bermuda Academy OOC

[BecToTheFuture]

Karcen Kasarin @KodomoYamiya @Wildwy5 The Darkling JulesX @Isune @Lunaria Silver BecToTheFuture Kyrenka

Hey, guys... So maybe it's 'cause I'm new to this RP, or maybe it's because I am holding everyone to too high of a standard, but the posts I saw on the last page were kinda... Hard to read. Not everybody's posts, mind you. For example, Kyrenka's post was very well crafted. That being said, the main issues making posts difficult to read were (1) a lack of punctuation and (2) a lack of proper nouns. It's okay to use "he" and "she" fairly frequently, but it becomes an issue when you have zero actual names in a paragraph. Pronouns are like a bacon-bits garnish on mashed potatoes: to be used sparingly, despite how good they look. And trust me, I know EXACTLY how good they look.

I know it's probably a bit, well, rude of me to ask you to change your writing styles, but if you wouldn't mind just reading through your post once before you submit it (in order to catch mistakes and whatnot) it will make reading your writing so much easier and more enjoyable for everyone in the role play.

I'm sorry I'm coming out of the gate too harsh, guys... So... Here's to our future friendship?
*raises a wine glass uncertainly*

Understood! Don't hesitate to let me know if I'm even a touch off grammar-wise, guys.

 

[Scottybird Corvus]

I thought the same but I didn't want to come too harsh on everyone, also I have he same problem so it would be rather... hypocrate, aside from the fact that I write on the mobile browser (Doesn't really bother me) I am Southamerican, English is my second language but I still try my best to sound fluent, without many grammar errors or confusing paragraphs, so please, feel free to point out any of my mistakes, I could change them if I have time.

Honestly, I kinda figured that may be the issue with most everybody here. Maybe not, but maybe so. I should note that while you on particular have one or two grammar mistakes, your writing is actually pretty clean.

 

[Karcen]

If anyone wants to play editor to me do say so.

 

[Kasarin]

Honestly, I kinda figured that may be the issue with most everybody here. Maybe not, but maybe so. I should note that while you on particular have one or two grammar mistakes, your writing is actually pretty clean.

Thank you!

 

[The Darkling]

I know my writing is always the best andnif someone wants to let me know please do! Sometimes when i have to use my phone it screws my typing up (especially since im not used to this phone yet) and even when im on my laptop sometimes i have to rush a post u.u

 

[JulesX]

Applied for a teaching position, too, because I am GARBAGE.

 

[BecToTheFuture]

Applied for a teaching position, too, because I am GARBAGE.

[burr voice] This should be fun.

 

[Scottybird Corvus]

Applied for a teaching position, too, because I am GARBAGE.

Tred softly, young one xD The ground you walk is treacherous. You may be the master and the pupil, but one must be ever vigilant so that they do not become one.
*crosses his legs and begins floating due to sheer levels of enlightenment*

EDIT:
So Jasper DOES have a companion... Of sorts. It's a talking book. It does have its own persona, though. Should I make a a CS-mini for it, or just introduce it when I introduce Jasper?

 

[JulesX]

Tred softly, young one xD The ground you walk is treacherous. You may be the master and the pupil, but one must be ever vigilant so that they do not become one.
*crosses his legs and begins floating due to sheer levels of enlightenment*

EDIT:
So Jasper DOES have a companion... Of sorts. It's a talking book. It does have its own persona, though. Should I make a a CS-mini for it, or just introduce it when I introduce Jasper?

I would say to ask DevonWrites or if the companion is super important to make a backstory for it!

 

[Kasarin]

Tred softly, young one xD The ground you walk is treacherous. You may be the master and the pupil, but one must be ever vigilant so that they do not become one.
*crosses his legs and begins floating due to sheer levels of enlightenment*

EDIT:
So Jasper DOES have a companion... Of sorts. It's a talking book. It does have its own persona, though. Should I make a a CS-mini for it, or just introduce it when I introduce Jasper?

I made a little CS because that seems better, like a warning of what this companion looks like and does, maybe even introduce him indirectly to the rest.

 

[DevonWrites]

IMPORTANT LINKS

Bermuda Academy - Dorms
Bermuda Academy - Hallways/Common Areas
Bermuda Academy - Courtyard/School Halls/Clubs (Original Posting Area)
Bermuda Academy - Classrooms
Bermuda Academy - Special Events

 

[Kasarin]

IMPORTANT LINKS

Bermuda Academy - Dorms
Bermuda Academy - Hallways/Common Areas
Bermuda Academy - Courtyard/School Halls/Clubs (Original Posting Area)
Bermuda Academy - Classrooms
Bermuda Academy - Special Events

Cool! I started using the "Dorm" section

Is any type of class schedule coming soon or do you need help with it?

 

[Karcen]

well i am just waiting so yeah

 

[DevonWrites]

Cool! I started using the "Dorm" section

Is any type of class schedule coming soon or do you need help with it?

Umm... The class schedule (and teachers) are still being worked out. For now, just wander around and get used to campus and stuff.

 

[Kasarin]

Umm... The class schedule (and teachers) are still being worked out. For now, just wander around and get used to campus and stuff.

Nice, even in a roleplay it feels great to not have class

 

[Scottybird Corvus]

Nice, even in a roleplay it feels great to not have class

XD lol nice
I dunno though, Kas. Ever since I graduated I've just felt kinda lost.

 

[Kyrenka]

Nice, even in a roleplay it feels great to not have class

Check out page two for a tentative schedule. I haven't finished putting in your character's stuff but I'm getting to it lol

 

[Scottybird Corvus]

Check out page two for a tentative schedule. I haven't finished putting in your character's stuff but I'm getting to it lol

*le gasp*
You mean... Jasper might get to do a thing???

 

[Kyrenka]

*le gasp*
You mean... Jasper might get to do a thing???

gasps louder
Shocking isn't it?

 

[Karcen]

neat to see

 

[Scottybird Corvus]

Character	Self Defense	History of Creatures	History of Humans	Potions	Spellwork	Transformation Studies	Current Events (Creatures)	Current Events (Human)	Political Studies	Summoning 101	Runes	Home Economics
K. Moondancer	Yes	Yes	Yes	Yes	No	Yes	Yes	Yes	No	No	No	No
K. Hiragana	No	Yes	Yes	No	Yes	No	Yes	No	No	Yes	Yes	No
F. Nanami	No	Yes	Yes	No	Yes	No	No	Yes	No	Yes	No	Yes
L. Remmington	Yes	No	No	Yes	Yes	No	Yes	Yes	Yes	No	No	No
C. Ashford	Yes	No	No	No	Yes	No	Yes	Yes	Yes	No	Yes	Yes
H. Ravenwood	Yes	No	No	No	Yes	Yes	Yes	Yes	No	No	Yes	No
N. Vayne	Yes	No	No	No	Yes	Yes	Yes	Yes	No	Yes	No	No
Vienna	Yes	No	Yes	Yes	Yes	Yes	No	No	No	Yes	Yes	No
K. Hersing	Yes	Yes	No	No	Yes	No	Yes	Yes	No	Yes	No	No
M. Toragai	Yes	No	No	Yes	Yes	Yes	No	No	Yes	Yes	Yes	No
B. Satanson	Yes	No	No	Yes	Yes	Yes	No	Yes	No	Yes	Yes	No
A. Kiriyama	Yes	No	No	Yes	Yes	Yes	No	No	Yes	Yes	Yes	No
Dovahmiin	Yes	Yes	Yes	Yes	Yes	Yes	No	No	No	Yes	No	No
R. Lor	Yes	No	Yes	Yes	Yes	No	No	Yes	No	Yes	Yes	No
A. Hadley	No	Yes	Yes	No	Yes	Yes	Yes	Yes	No	No	Yes	No
M. Heartfillia	Yes	No	No	Yes	Yes	No	No	Yes	No	Yes	Yes	No
S. Chills	Yes	Yes	No	No	Yes	Yes	No	No	No	Yes	Yes	No

*prepares his attendance sheet*

 

[Kasarin]

*prepares his attendance sheet*

Ah dude nice I never saw that! Lmao

 

[Karcen]

i hate to sound stupid but did i get kicked because my character doesn't even have a dorm room.

 

[DevonWrites]

i hate to sound stupid but did i get kicked because my character doesn't even have a dorm room.

Sorry, still in the process of updating the dorms as well. I was kind of absent for a few days and have to catch up with a lot on here.

 

[Karcen]

ok just checking saw updates happening then realized it was updated to the last two people to join lol