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No, he's current parallel to her... Meaning the "star" would be inbetween them and blocking their vision of each other.

The one eye Cosmo still had flickered across the environment after it'd adjusted to the change in lighting, scanning the field for the other Avatars and taking in the battleground itself. To his far left stood the hulking creature that looked as though someone had meshed together purple clay and stuck a rod straight through the middle to keep it all together. To his right was a far different kind of opponent (Cobra), sporting multiple ranged weapons and looking far less monstrous, while still seeming as dangerous as the other. The last Avatar he couldn't see from his positioning and could only assume was on the opposite side of the arena.

Whenever the fighters arrived in the arena, they would be met with the immediate smell of burning, scorched stone and the heat of an overbearing star floating lazily in the sky above them.

It says here that Cosmos should be across from me... :v And that the star is above us. So unless the arena is huge, I would be able to see you, I should think.
 
It says here that Cosmos should be across from me... :v And that the star is above us. So unless the arena is huge, I would be able to see you, I should think.
With how it was written, it's implied that the center of the arena is in someway blocked or obscured by the star... And if that's not the case I would need to rewrite my entire post because I was working under the impression that Cobra would not be able to see whoever was in front of him (and that would make Crazy Trey-n Crazy Trey-n post even more confusion, since he says that Glitch was to his left and Cobra was to his right... Meaning they would have to be the parallels and Cosmos was perpendicular to them)
 
With how it was written, it's implied that the center of the arena is in someway blocked or obscured by the star... And if that's not the case I would need to rewrite my entire post because I was working under the impression that Cobra would not be able to see whoever was in front of him (and that would make Crazy Trey-n Crazy Trey-n post even more confusion, since he says that Glitch was to his left and Cobra was to his right... Meaning they would have to be the parallels and Cosmos was perpendicular to them)

What? It wasn't implied at all that the center of the arena is blocked? Unless I'm not getting something. Lemme ask. Um... he said the purple dude was to his left. Solder was to his left.

To his far left stood the hulking creature that looked as though someone had meshed together purple clay and stuck a rod straight through the middle to keep it all together.
 
SniperBus SniperBus Is the giant ball o' fire in the arena blocking the center of the bridges or somethin' so Glitch wouldn't be able to see across from her? Also, how big is the arena?
 
What? It wasn't implied at all that the center of the arena is blocked? Unless I'm not getting something. Lemme ask. Um... he said the purple dude was to his left. Solder was to his left.
I read that and thought he meant Glitch (since I don't recall Soldier being described yet in the story). I likely just mixed the star with the lava pit... So that is easy to clear up.
 
This is going to be troublesome... If I edit my current post, it could potential ruin the post afterwards... But it would also technically be cheating if I were to delete the post and make a new one with current events. But I have to fix this somehow (why does making errors always have to make things so complicated T-T)
 
I read that and thought he meant Glitch (since I don't recall Soldier being described yet in the story). I likely just mixed the star with the lava pit... So that is easy to clear up.

Solder stands idly at the foot of his rope bridge; he is a monstrosity of purple, muscly flesh with a vague humanoid shape. He has small, almost stumpy legs, with a gargantuan left arm that he presumably uses to get around with. His right arm is clearly cybernetic; designed akin to a flamethrower- there is a central tank just below the elbow joint, attached via tubes and cables to the nozzle that takes the place of a hand. Sticking out from between his shoulders is a pointy, metal spike, with a single large red eye that takes up his entire "face".

He was described in the post describing the arena. Maybe you should go over it...?
 
Omg, I forgot and this happened to me twice the other day. My browser places a "back" shortcut mine somewhere on the keyboard that I keep pressing.

OOoooof, that sounds pretty sucky. Your browser must hate you. :v *Pats* Comrades in losing drafts, so fun.
 
He was described in the post describing the arena. Maybe you should go over it...?
Must've missed that part... With how large the post was I did, admittedly, start skimming towards the end (my attention spam is limited at best, so it's hard to read massive posts like that)

But that still doesn't change the matter of: How do I fix this without making it in unfair to anyone?
 
Must've missed that part... With how large the post was I did, admittedly, start skimming towards the end (my attention spam is limited at best, so it's hard to read massive posts like that)

But that still doesn't change the matter of: How do I fix this without making it in fair to anyone?

Erm, I don't remember you putting anything about position or the sun in your post...? I think you're fine.

Oh, nope I see what you mean. It doesn't seem too bad? Maybe? Depending on what Cobra would do if he could see.
 
Erm, I don't remember you putting anything about position or the sun in your post...? I think you're fine.
Except that Cobra uses Monty to locate Soldier... When he could see him regardless (and Monty's lines make it sound like the arena is larger than it actually is).
 
Except that Cobra uses Monty to locate Soldier... When he could see him regardless (and Monty's lines make it sound like the arena is larger than it actually is).

Hahaha, yeah, I just went and reread it. Oof, perhaps the heat haze was obstructing his eyesight for a moment? Or is that a bit of a stretch.
 
Hahaha, yeah, I just went and reread it. Oof, perhaps the heat haze was obstructing his eyesight for a moment? Or is that a bit of a stretch.
I think that would be a stretch... I doubt someone who casually stares at a fireball would be blind by the haze XD
 

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