Unaware as to whether the Wanderers' steward was seeking out a wine that met the request best, or indeed if he were even present, Otiorin took a hold of Bria and urgently but gently pulled her aside,
Changed it to that instead.
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Unaware as to whether the Wanderers' steward was seeking out a wine that met the request best, or indeed if he were even present, Otiorin took a hold of Bria and urgently but gently pulled her aside,
Sherwood sez, "Luna can't help but look up at Otiorin and let out a "Aww! How sweet! Girl, you had best give him a hug and a kiss after that!"
Luna's thoughts are very nice, but Cap'n wrote, "...Otiorin took a hold of Bria and urgently but gently pulled her aside, away from the others. Once he'd gotten them some space, he turned to regard her face." (bold mine)
This tells me that no one but Otiorin and Bria witnessed what Otiorin had said to Bria. The only thing Luna (and anyone else) would have noticed was Otiorin "urgently but gently" pulling her aside away from the others.
Unless I missed something (do correct me if I have)? If I haven't, then Sherwood? Would you alter your post to that effect, please?
@Sherwood Could you please stop having Luna respond to conversations she isn't part of? Bren, Shalin, and Melshaef went over to the far side of the pool room specifically so as not to be overheard. I guess I should have had Bren lead them behind closed doors, but really I thought that being on the far side of this big room would be far enough to avoid eavesdroppers.
Until now, I was not aware that the others were out of earshot of Luna.
"...But my voice is hardly the only one of the party."