Fantasy A King's Reign

[Reinhardt]

This is the OOC section of the roleplay, where people can chill out and relax as they wait for others to post, to chat about everyday things, to input their questions and suggestions into. However, in order to avoid any mess in this section I will instill rules. Rule#1: No fighting against another role player. You may have different views, and some may have unintentionally offended you, but that does not mean you should fight it out. Respect their opinions and give them the feedback they need. Rule#2: No spamming. I do not want this area to be flooded by such things, for they annoy not only me, but other role players as well. Rule#3: There shall be no release of in rp chatting in here, other than planning, collaboration requests and inquiries.

The OOC

A place to relax, chill and chat.

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[Reinhardt]

@Trundle @Newtype @Da Ruler @Emma Parker


Other discussions regarding the rp shall take place here.


 
@Archie @Vengeance Spirit @Sternritter

 

[Vengeance Spirit]

What do you mean, Item name?


 
Nevermind. I read that so off xD

 

[Archie]

Nice didn't expect this to be up so quick, what up everyone

 

[LeRuse]

Question. If a character is a member of either faction should that be listed under occupation?

 

[Vengeance Spirit]

I thought the faction would be your only occupation O.o (My chara's neutral)

 

[LeRuse]

Your probably right Vengeance. I just wasn't sure if I should put the occupation the character had before the rebellion began.

 

[Emma Parker]

If possible could we see the King and Rebel Leader's CS (since they're NPCs) so that we may have something to tie our story to as well as have a more personal motive of each leader?

 

[Da Ruler]

@Bravest Can i be the rebellion leader? Sounds awesome.

 

[LeRuse]

How long did it take for people to rebel against the king?

 

[Reinhardt]

[QUOTE="Emma Parker]If possible could we see the King and Rebel Leader's CS (since they're NPCs) so that we may have something to tie our story to as well as have a more personal motive of each leader?

[/QUOTE]
I will so that, however, I am unsure if it could be done today.

How long did it take for people to rebel against the king?

Pretty much after he rose to the throne.

 

[Vengeance Spirit]

Also, I'd think the power ones were discriminated against before the king became the way he is, maybe that's a reason some of them joined. A feeling of belonging.


(P.S: I hope my character's ability isn't too strong)

 

[Reinhardt]

I will be editing in some details in the overview for better clarity, sometime later.


As for the faction in the cs, just edit that in. I'll be doing the same in the template.


And, @Vengeance Spirit I am yet to review the cs's so, I can't say yes or no. Not yet.

 

[Emma Parker]

Sounds great, I'll wait for the templates before send in a cs.

 

[Reinhardt]

@ Everyone, I've updated the cs and did a bit of tweaking in the overview. Sorry it took a while, I had to go offline for an event.


@Vengeance Spirit According to your bio, it seems that he cannot freeze time as a whole, or am I wrong? If he cannot, then what could be how large would be the area wherein he could freeze time?


@Da Ruler CS seems good, yet I still need some details regarding your ability. Does your character's living drawings last forever, or not? Can these things be killed? If possible, then how?


 
@Da Ruler please edit in the faction part of the cs. Thank you.

 

[Vengeance Spirit]

xD that's a coincidence because I do tarot card reading irl.

 

[Reinhardt]

@Valhite your cs is quite incomplete. Please add more details in your personality and bio for clarity. Look at the earlier cs's submitted for reference. As for you ability, please explain it further. What is this energy that you say? What are the limits of this tarot cards? Also, an ability that can ensure an instant skills is not allowed, well unless you're an NPC.

 

[Vengeance Spirit]

@Vengeance Spirit According to your bio, it seems that he cannot freeze time as a whole, or am I wrong? If he cannot, then what could be how large would be the area wherein he could freeze time?

Yeah. It's not a full freeze(Sorry for late reaction, yet again I got no notification) The area is depending on how much he channels it, the larger effected the more energy used. Right now, its around 30 to 50 feet.

 

[Reinhardt]

All right. Edit that in your cs, so it won't confuse people when they refer to it.

 

[Vengeance Spirit]

All right. Edit that in your cs, so it won't confuse people when they refer to it.

Kk.


 
Alright~Done.

 

[Valhite]

@Valhite your cs is quite incomplete. Please add more details in your personality and bio for clarity. Look at the earlier cs's submitted for reference. As for you ability, please explain it further. What is this energy that you say? What are the limits of this tarot cards? Also, an ability that can ensure an instant skills is not allowed, well unless you're an NPC.

What did you mean by ability that can do instant skills? Give me an example from my cs if you may

 

[Reinhardt]

What did you mean by ability that can do instant skills? Give me an example from my cs if you may

I meant instant kill. The judgement arcana is the one I'm referring to.

 

[Valhite]

I meant instant kill. The judgement arcana is the one I'm referring to.

Edited. Could you review it?

 

[Reinhardt]

Your profile is enough, but your ability still needs a lot of work, since some of the cards are quite overpowered.


The card that changes his appearance is one of those. How does his appearance change? Does his face alter, does his eye color change, does he lose his hair, etc. Is this change permanent?


On the summoning card, who and what is this Devil? How long can this creature be summoned? Can it be killed? What does it do? Does it have any strengths? Weaknesses?


On the magic card, it's too broad, since there are many types of magic. Elemental, the use of the elements such as fire, water, air, earth etc. Light, which uses the light, and some sacred spiritual things. Darkness, which uses dark-related things. Please specify which magic he can do with the card.


On the tower card, does he control it? Can it be destroyed?


On the reverse tower card, it's pretty much invulnerability so that's denied.


Overall, you have too many abilities. If you cannot justify on why, and how he's able to do so, then I recommend you to use simpler ones such as super strength, heat vision, pyrokinesis, etc.

 

[NeoLeaf]

Yay. super power drama and all o' that stuff.


time to add another person to the King's faction >:3