Fantasy A Heart of Ice: Characters

[Venom Adhamm]

Okay, that occupation is fine. I will warn you, however, that this RP will be very boring for you and very difficult for me, at least at the beginning as I try to figure out how to push your character towards something more interesting. If you're okay with that, then that's fine and I'll begin work on your starter post.


@TabbyCatTM

 

[Tabby Cat™]

That's fine. I don't mind, it makes a better, more real story.


And thank you


@Venom Adhamm

 

[Venom Adhamm]

Okay. You'll have to give me some time to work on your post. I'll tag you in the main thread when it's up.


@TabbyCatTM

 

[GreenEyedStranger]

Name: Fa-Let'iAge: 47Race: GreyOccupation: Wandering Prophet, also a psychic assassin, but can only be encouraged to do jobs related to his holy wordAppearance:


Let'i constantly wears a strange mask around his head that seems to be a large rectangle of a highly reflective sheet metal with some odd lines and patterns engraved into it. This helmet amplifies his powers but completely blinds him, as he relies mostly on his alien abilities to detect danger. His body is covered in an opulent robe, somewhat reminiscent of human royals of old except much longer to accommodate his height. He does not wear anything on his hands or feet, as he has no need for footwear since he floats a few inches off of the ground.


Starting Weapon:


Dusty Rifle


Biography:


Let'i had arrived in the world of Restora not with a sense of dread or homesickness, but with that of opportunity and adventure. His life before The Arrival had been that of a high prophet. The mysterious Grey gods are silent and formless, yet Let'i was one who could turn their whispers into guidance for his people. Now in this new world, Let'i is determined to keep his gods alive and to spread their ominous presence across the world. However, his simple words were met with hostility in this world. In the first few weeks he was beaten and driven out of areas where he tried to proclaim the word of his gods. Now seeing them as heretics, he realized he would have to come up with innovative ways of spreading his gods' influence. After silently breaking a ruffians mind, Let'i stole his rifle. It was not much, but it would do. The gun floated in front of him, manipulated by his mind. If they would not willingly accept the formless gods, then he would have to do something about it.

 

[Venom Adhamm]

@GreenEyedStranger


Declined. Firstly, you cannot start with any items that would increase your character's abilities or power. Second, the portion of your character sheet where you mention your character "breaking a ruffians mind" seems quite overpowered. Lastly, Greys don't float. Levitation certainly does exist in the world, but it's something that must be learned.

 

[GreenEyedStranger]

@Venom Adhamm


Alright, Ill try to fix all that. Thanks

 

[That Poppy]

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Ever since Odette was but a little child , all her mother ever spoke about was her beauty , that it was the only thing that would save her . Standing at 5'4 , Odette was quiet small in comparison to her siblings . Her facial features are common but thank's to the remedies that her mother so benevolently forced on upon her , her features became that of a queen . Mid length , light brown hair, wavy and overly pampered hair , for a women whose family's father works as a fisherman . Her hourglass figure took years to achieve , typically because as a child Odette was very how you say plump . If you were to take a gander (look/examine) at Odette it would seem like she was physically carved to achieve the shape she is presently in . (I think the appearance is a bit to perfectionist , and I understand you don't want that . Just say it and I will fix it right away ! )

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Odette was born in a family without the hard cash , a family who relied on two men one being her father step, that is . Her mother Lilly Opal was a mercenary , she wed a man with money , her 4th was Odette's old man, Ki Topher . The marriage didn't last long , still in her mother's womb (2 months old) Lilly left Ki . The reason for the annulment was the loss of Ki's money , how did he lose such a fortune , it was his wife who squandered all his riches . Now at the age of 49 Lilly is rather old considering her age , yet beauty is still present , she his jackpot when she slept with a man twice her age , throwing the heinous lie that Odette was his child . George Adroff did not believe the women , but for his own welfare he held his tongue , Lilly had sworn that if he should abandon this child she will spread the rumor of what he and she had committed . The man feared for his reputation and accepted the gravid women in , with her elder son Cornelius Topher .Not shortly after the same fate had been struck the now elderly women who had now been in her 50's taking care of a young child , a girl to be exact . George Adroff had been stripped of all his riches, he now had to support a family of three , he quickly found a job, a fisherman , the job was quiet hard to keep , he wasn't very keen on working with the people he used to beat and call 'trash' . 
The son was also forced to stop taking his 'combat classes' or so he called them , forced to work with his father , selling the fish . You would thing most the money was spent on food ,resources to survive ( since there in a tough time the queen and all ) yet Lilly spent every cent and penny on her daughter . Most who looked at Odette thought of her as belonging to a 'Royal' family , but once they laid eyes upon the family it was clear who she was . Lilly wasn't planning on pampering her daughter till the end , she wanted results & she planned to get those results even if it meant selling her daughter to a troll .
Odette finally reached the age of 17 , a perfect age for her to be wed , the family acted fast , arranging countless dates for the young maiden, after quite some time a man at the age of 30 to be exact accepted Odette . The marriage was a success for the Adroff family the son-in-law began supporting the family for 6 years and it seemed it was all he could take . Christopher left his wife carrying three children ( 1 week old )  although Odette was a common beauty that took care of her self , she was prideful . Men like Christopher Stormborn seemed to like women who sat at home and shut their lips or as he called it muzzle . Odette was blunt in conversation and although he believed in happily ever after and loved eating lemon cakes that didn't make her weak , girly, yes, weak . . . no. Odette had to support three unborn children , without the help of her mother , her brother now must take care elf his family & she of here's . If she learned anything from her mother is that money is everything without it your nothing , to lay low and earn the amount of money to survive Odette began teaching at a church who happily accepted the expecting women in . This to her is quiet a good cover , there is no way she's going to keep living like this .
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[Venom Adhamm]

@2PM


Declined. Your writing is very difficult to read, and not in a good way. It's difficult to read because you punctuate very strangely (that is, putting a space before and after punctuation marks, instead of just after the mark like you're meant to). The worst part, however, is that most of your sentences are run-on sentences that lack clear transitions. Furthermore, your writing is rife with grammatical mistakes, none of which are too major on their own, but they do add up.

 

[That Poppy]

Alright , thank you anyway . Great Rp by the way , Bye. 

 

[theclassicbebo]

Name: Doctor Richter Rockwell XXVI
 
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Age: Twenty six, claims anywhere between eight months and 'older than time'
 
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Race: Human? Human.
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Occupation: Freelance doctor of medicine, freelance musician, medical themed vigilante
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Appearance: I'm five ten, sturdily built, got some scars on my skin those are pretty cool. My blonde hair is shaved to the skull to prevent sweating in hot environments. I wear a set of light blue surgical scrubs with some dark blue surgical gloves. I also have one of those surgical masks you'll occasionally see those yellow looking folks wearing, maybe they've got fucked up horse teeth under them, I'll never know.
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Starting Weapon:Tattered Spellbook
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"We found him in a drainage pipe."
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"Really now? What's with the surgeon's getup?"
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"I couldn't tell you, he keeps saying he's a doctor. Bastard swung at me with a scalpel."
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"Does he still have the scalpel?"
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"I don't think so."
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"Then what did he just fucking stab that orderly with?"
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"I could not tell you."
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"You've just let a patient out. And he has a scalpel."
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"Oh jeez, this is the one thing we didn't need to happen."
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"This is the one thing you didn't need to happen. This is your fault."
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"I do believe that this is the end of our employment here."
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"David you fucki-" *Recording cuts off to noises of vigorous babbling and stabbing*
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"Oh dear."
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[King of Theives]

-Name-


Isha Sahni


-Age-


65


-Sex-


Male


-Race-


Eldrin


-Occupation-


Adventurer


-Appearance-


Isha is 6’7” towering over most humans he meet, Despite his age Isha is still strong enough to wield a greatsword and take a lot of damage. Wears a light outfit for more mobility.

-Starting Weapon-


Worn Greatsword


-Biography-

In Isha’s youth he was a sellsword, a mercenary for hire looking for fame money and glory, He did this for years gaining money and being feared by many an enemy. One day Isha took a lover and sold his famous greatsword to support his new family, with his life savings and money from selling his greatsword he bought a farmhouse out in the country and gave up a life of killing for a life of growing. Isha was never good at farming and because of the fear for his kind he would often get blamed for any local droughts or storms but because of his past as a warrior he would rarely get in any fights with locals. Throughout his life Isha had seven sons who all bore the life of a warrior, three died in the path three left the life seeking other fortunes and one stayed in the life growing stronger than Isha. Isha fearing being killed in his old age with his reputation dying down he bought a old greatsword and started training again, this time no matter how hard he trained he couldn’t wield his sword like he used too. To counter this he started picking up the mantle of magic training and growing stronger, Isha feels the call for adventure again and leaves his small home in look for adventure fame and a death worthy of the gods.
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@Venom Adhamm
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[Venom Adhamm]

@Gobo_King


You need to be more specific with your character's height. That's the most minor of problems though.


Firstly, Eldrin aren't reptilian. They have horns, but they aren't reptilian. I have absolutely no idea where you got that from. Secondly, your character's occupation does not match your biography at all. You talk about how he was a mercenary, then stopped being one, and then became an adventurer. At no point do you mention him being a "priest in training," yet you have that as your occupation.

 

[King of Theives]

Fixed it! 


@Venom Adhamm

 

[Venom Adhamm]

@Gobo_King


Couple of other things now.


Your occupation is "adventurer." For your case, what does that exactly mean? Does your character wander aimlessly looking for places to explore? Or does he go around doing quests and tasks for people?


Next, your character's appearance. It's acceptable (meaning you can keep that appearance if you really want), but understand that his clothes are extremely out of place in the setting, as this takes place in a somewhat modern era.