They say that all who die shall dead remain
But how I should forget the sweetest name?
I prayed to god, yet only demons came
To torment me until I had them slain.
Even now my eyes do shed a salty rain
The grief I bear is one I fail to tame
And yet I cannot hope to do the same
as...
I hope you do not mind the very late critique, and if you want commentary on more recent/other pieces of your work, please let me know where I can find them.
Now into the critique itself, I really like the imagery you provided for each of these vices, they all serve to reinforce the feeling of...
Just regarding the cattle thing.
Most forms of cattle could kill a human being without too much trouble. They don't mainly because a) we don't provoke them. b) we've got a long history of making them docile beasts.
An angry cow is not much less dangerous than an angry hippo, it's just that...
Another thing to remember is that the GSPs were designed by committee for a nominal goal, but aren't necessarily given urges to complete that goal, and in general had competing desires and influences of the different involved Yozi. It's also a fairly complex goal with no obvious methods of going...
Well if you want a more serious and less jokeyly pompous introduction...
I mainly play White Wolf's various games (especially Exalted) and a large variety of independently produced gamed (including Fate, tremulus, and Houses of the Blooded.)
I live somewhere on Earth (Near the Continental...
I am Ina.
I am the one who will bring the future.
I am the one who will sunder the past.
I am the one who changes the present.
I am a force to be reckoned with.