Carnite flies away from the arena to rest. Lloyd and Blaze enter the arena and the match starts with Lloyd summoning a minion and transforming it into wings. Both of them fly into the sky and start blasting fire and lightning at each other. Lloyd summons more minions and orders them to try...
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“How is the sword coming along?” The minecraftian named Blaze asks the cow across the room while getting out of bed.
“Still having some problems. Slime isn't going to work.” The cow named Tom responds. They...
Carnite says while struggling to dodge Gyga's four hammer arms. Gyga swaps to chainsaw arms and manages to cut Carnite's leg off. It begins healing but before it gets far he is cut in half. Gyga swaps to flame thrower like arms that shoot lava instead of fire. Carnite uses his least damaged arm...
Blaze and Lloyd leave the arena. The match begins Gyga activating his gem and tries shooting Carnite with a sniper arm. Carnite easily dodges the bullets as he runs towards Gyga. Carnite kicks Gyga into the air and flies up after him. "I guess I'm almost out of secrets. Everyone knows I can fly...
I'm writing a short story for 4-H but I'm not experienced with breaking something with paragraphs. Could anyone help? This is what I have so far.
“How is the sword coming along?” The minecraftian named Blaze asks the cow across the room while getting out of bed. “Still having some problems...
The next day the four remaining contestants entered the arena ready to battle when the Announcer began to speak saying, "Welcome back for round two! Before the fighting starts I would like to share some interesting information. While you already know that Gyga and Folter exist in the same...
A few of the voltie carry Lloyd out. "Um... Please go easy on me...." Lloyd asks when Folter enters the arena. "I'm nowhere near as strong as Gyga." Folter responds as the match begins. Lloyd summons a few more voltie and begin delivering orders to them. Once the voltie are in position they...