More backstory, expand on the powers, and expand on the weaknesses. That is one very obscure DC character. Took me awhile to remember who it was. And then I just gave up and googled him.
Dawn of Batman III
“Hey did you hear about that guy that attacked the cruise liner team?” Two of the Red Hood's stood vigil outside the massive Wayne chemical plant. The building had two large chimneys that shot an odd smelling smoke into the air. The factory shouldn't have been running at...
Wonderboy, you seem to have question marks where commas should be. Probably just a glitch or something. I usually go three pages on word for a post.
Diamond, that's okay. Just separate the dialogue from the paragraphs please.
To Diamond, can you edit your post a little? It jumps from present to past tense a lot and the dialogue is hard to read when it is in the middle of paragraphs.
Possum, you should be fine.
Yep, go ahead and make an IC post. Take your time with it, I promise those posts we just put up took awhile to write. Make sure we can see that dark yellow, make it DARK.
Anyways, I'll get to work on Dawn of Batman III.
Dawn of Batman II
Bruce lowered himself back into the cave. It was daytime now, nearly noon. In the cave however, it was pitch black. He could see nothing and the only sounds were that of water dripping somewhere in the distance. He cracked his blue glow stick and illuminated the area around...
I did the same with my Batman post. For similar reasons. Let's just go ahead and post those first two... uh posts. That way we can get it out there early.
Also, Lantern is fine if Vandy thinks so. I know he's a big GL fan so if he says you're good to go, I guess you're good to go.