Well, I Tried

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So. Yeah. I think. I made. A poem, I think it is anyways... I tried to make it fluff because of valentines day in this month <span style="font-size:8px;">and the prompt was to write about something related to love,</span> but then...welp, you will see. <em> Why am I asked about a feeling I don't know Is it real or not, why am I slow The Non-fiction reader and database of facts Has lost information in his deepest of thoughts If love is something you cannot describe Then why is there a word with the meaning locked inside The Database looking for more details Of a feeling most people know too well The monotone color that leads to uncertainty The quickening of the heart, is that it The Database searching for a feeling he can't hold "Why, oh why do facts mock me so," What is wrong What is right Why is love So apparent but lost to the Database of facts.</em>


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[elie]

I made a "poem" for my Lost Boys fandom, but, it kind of went downhill after a bit...


"My my, you look young,"


the cardinal sung.


"Yes, yes, I guess I do,"


replied the Lost Boy as he flew.


"Why, oh why, do you look so young?"


again the cardinal sung.


"Because I refuse to grow old,"


said the Boy, as he began to get cold.


"I must go in, so I can be warm,"


he told the bird, avoiding the cold swarm.

 

[elie]

Oh, Also! My favorite poem by far...


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[Ahribelle]

☆*:. o(≧▽≦)o .:*☆

 

[Sombra Arcana]

[QUOTE="T h e F o o l]So. Yeah. I think. I made. A poem, I think it is anyways... I tried to make it fluff because of valentines day in this month and the prompt was to write about something related to love, but then...welp, you will see.

Why am I asked about a feeling I don't know


Is it real or not, why am I slow


The Non-fiction reader and database of facts


Has lost information in his deepest of thoughts


If love is something you cannot describe


Then why is there a word with the meaning locked inside


The Database looking for more details


Of a feeling most people know too well


The monotone color that leads to uncertainty


The quickening of the heart, is that it


The Database searching for a feeling he can't hold


"Why, oh why do facts mock me so,"


What is wrong


What is right


Why is love


So apparent


but lost to the Database of facts.

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I liked it. It was quite deep. It toally transmitted me the feelings of gray you have.

 

[F o o l i s h n e s s]

I made a "poem" for my Lost Boys fandom, but, it kind of went downhill after a bit...
"My my, you look young,"


the cardinal sung.


"Yes, yes, I guess I do,"


replied the Lost Boy as he flew.


"Why, oh why, do you look so young?"


again the cardinal sung.


"Because I refuse to grow old,"


said the Boy, as he began to get cold.


"I must go in, so I can be warm,"


he told the bird, avoiding the cold swarm.

It didn't go that far ^-^.

Oh, Also! My favorite poem by far...
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That is awesome, they found a way to switch from the happy tone to more of a deeper level ^-^.

[QUOTE="Sombra Arcana]I liked it. It was quite deep. It toally transmitted me the feelings of gray you have.

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Thank you!!

 

[Rosemary Scar]

OK I know it ois not really repeated but this is what I wrote


I have the deadly sickness


Its not makes me want to cry


The sickness is called love


Many don't understand why


But to me I die inside


Love can cut you


It can make you bleed


So beware or you'll


End up like me

 

[Nozomu]

Good job on the poems guys ^0^