Walking Without a Crutch

hullo~


my CS is up and it's rather horrid at the moment because I pulled the idea off the top of my head and it's not really well planned out {i think there's lots of loopholes} and I've got writer's block ;;


so do tell on places I need to patch up on >^<


@Contessa
 
@themediocregatsby


I was planning to start last night but in light of the new member and Lime's delay I decided to postpone it a bit longer.


But if some of you guys are really dead-set on RPing, you can make some opening posts.
 
Contessa said:
So, I would like to know more about her recent future. What has she done recently to become so infamous to warrant a summons? Also, I would like to see a lot more about her relationship with the crystal, why she took it, etc. She has the potential to be a truly pivotal character, so I want to really understand her; more than just a brief mention of motivating fear would be helpful in that endeavor. I'd like to know more of her mother's powers and how the night before his death went and how she came into her own powers.
I still feel like I don't truly know what drive her or what exactly scares her. I would like you to go more in depth here.


I also want to know what her skills are.


As for your princess, I am going to need you to create a lore and a name for the country she in princess of and explain how she is "evil" enough to have made it here and explain how she got here, away from her palace. Her personality and bio seems hollow, but I know she's WIP.
Yeah, I agree that I need to work on those details. I plan to at least reach five to eight paragraphs on each of their bios, and then at least three/four on each of their personalities. Of course I will have one paragraph of their personalities revolving around what-if situations, such as 'what if they lost their powers'. Currently though, everything I've stated's just my plan, so I may change my numbers.
 

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