Walking Without a Crutch

@Contessa: I am back from finals and ready to resume character creation. How is my Dementia looking so far? Also, I will be unable to size restrict until after I am back on a computer (likely tomorrow, I use a phone most of the time).


 
I'm finished with everything except resizing images & removing italics (cannot on phone).


 
Okay, I have removed italics and added thumbnails instead of full pictures.(^U^) I hope you like her. If anything needs changing, answering, or elaborating, please bring it to my attention! Thank you!
 
Contessa said:
@themediocregatsby
If you think that would still remain true to your creative vision, go right on ahead!
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Alright, thank you so much! Also, I want to apologize if I sounded annoying yesterday. I was a little irritable and lightheaded due to my migraine, but I'm going to start fixing up my character now.


 
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Kiyoko Tomoe]Laura was born to a family of emptiness. Her mother's only purpose in life was giving birth to her said:
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I didn't see any major changes made, tag me once you've updated this post!

Nyxx said:
She also enjoyed leading men on, and occasionally women, and subsequently drained their blood, and used it later on for either a meal, or forced others to drink it. She always took joy out of others suffering.
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Nyxx said:
She is also spoiled and snobby, but when you slowly reveal what's beneath her narcissistic attitude, you can find someone who actually relates to people, and becomes much kinder and more considerate.
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These attitudes are highly incongruent and unbelievable. I'm not saying you have to change it, but at least explain it in a way in which I can reconcile her behavior with your description.


Her bio doesn't have any specific problems, but it is a bit sparse, and could do with a few more explanations of her more recent past- the 3 years you didn't really elaborate on are the most important. I care to know what has made her infamous, not what made her evil.


@Dementia


She's coming along wonderfully!
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Contessa said:
I also want to know what her skills are.
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Ah, I'm working on it slowly. I wasn't able to do much at all yesterday, and today my stomach's dead from my constant eating of bittersweet chocolate chips. My stomach's rejecting the mass amount of chocolate, but I can't stop because I love them... I'm so torn on what to do about my stomach problem! ►_◄
 
@Kiyoko Tomoe


I feel you, man, I feel you, but I'm hoping to start by the end of tomorrow, about 7PM EST. So about 26 hours from now! If your character isn't up by then, I'll probably start and let you post once your finished and accepted.


Same goes for everyone else, I'll be posting another announcement in the OOC.
 
@themediocregatsby


Yes, I saw, and you're completely forgiven! I'm just trying to keep this thread more or less clean of personal OOC and more focused on character development OOC.
 
Contessa said:
@themediocregatsby
Yes, I saw, and you're completely forgiven! I'm just trying to keep this thread more or less clean of personal OOC and more focused on character development OOC.
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Ah, okay, understandable. What should I change before she is accepted?
 
oh, I apologize for the lack of activity! I'm trying to work on a lot of school stuff, and I haven't had the time to come on.
 
Birth Name: Blaire Lily {yes i am totally going horror style names rn okay if you get the references hohoho}


Adopted Name(s): -


Title(s): The Blair Witch


Word: Inferior


Physical Appearance:

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are modern outfits {like modern-ish like a top and a skirt that doesnt look medieval} accepted?


Skills:


Blaire was born with witch powers, the rawest kind that could be twisted into any form of magic. Be it transforming into a cat or flooding an entire nation, she can do it, if she wants to. {too much godmod?}


Personality:


The witch has always been undoubtedly insecure of herself, constantly questioning certain judgements and finding the need to compare herself to everyone. She hates being belittled and can have abrupt outbursts of sudden indignance if her name is mentioned with the littlest of negative criticism. She finds no need to ask others for help, even when it's necessary, but it usually ends with an irritated second party stepping forward and helping her and Blaire getting indignant but accepted the party's help.{okay by negative i mean "omg she's so weak" not "omg she's evil" cause yeah she is} She tries her best to suppress her feelings and not let people see any of her emotions, though it often fails miserably and most can read her like an open book. Blaire generally acts with attempts at being mature and calm, but anger sometimes gets the better of her, and the ones who offended her have practically committed suicide. The witch treats nearly everyone as an enemy, someone she has to upstage, someone she has to be better than, but once she's triumphed them, she enjoys making small conversation about their next plan to rule the world and such.


Biography:


Blaire is the product of a witch and a warlock falling in love, and so is her sister Elisabeth. Elisabeth, or as most should know her {yes people should know her}, the Dark Queen {cliche, yes, but that's just the type of person Elisa was}, was the first born of the witch Zeanna Lily, a temptress who went out of a business when she fell for one of her targets. 4 years later, Blaire came. Elisa and Blaire were both born before their father decided that it wouldn't work out anymore, and that he had other plans, bigger, more important plans to do, and so he upped and left Zeanna to raise her two children on her own. Both girls were born from powerful magical entities, as such, both had the gift of raw magic, something quite rare and incredibly powerful. Blaire and her older sister had a great relationship as young kids, but that relationship was pulled taut, and threatened to break at any second when Zeanna sent her children to a magic school.


Sure, Blaire was talented, she was gifted, some might say she had quite the looks and smarts too. But Elisabeth was older, Elisabeth was better, Elisabeth was... well, perfect. Zeanna always preferred Elisa- gave her the best clothes, gave her anything she wanted- leaving Blaire with second place, hidden in her sister's shadow. No one cared about beautiful, smart, amazing Elisabeth's younger sister. It was always "Elisa did this", "Elisa did that". Never "Blaire did this,". She gained the title of "Elisa's sister", and she wasn't sure anyone ever remembered her name. Blaire didn't get it. She aced every class, she made an effort to look good, she did everything that was asked for her, but Elisa was always better.


When they graduated, Elisa gave a speech about how her years at school had been wonderful, how she thanked her teachers, mother and friends. The only person she missed out: Blaire. The one stuck following her older sister. The one who had no other choice. That was the last straw. The string pulled tight had finally snapped, and Blaire would make people see she was better, the best, even, that she wasn't inferior to Elisa and she never was.


A few years after, she received a letter from her dear sister Elisabeth, sent to their old home where she had been then living in. It seemed that Elisa had caught the eye of a human king, and they had wed. The letter was mainly Elisa gloating over how she had used her powers to get the favour of the king. Blaire smiled at this. She'd been waiting, waiting for the right chance to strike, hit her sister where it hurt the most.


The next day she left on a trip towards the kingdom Blair, where Queen Elisabeth and King Romund resided. The witch thought that Elisa must have found it funny, taking a kingdom by the name of the sister she stopped acknowledging. Blaire scowled at the thought as she crossed hills and plains on her horse. By the time she reached the kingdom, it was the night of the third day. The witch stood atop the nearest hill, overlooking the grand city. She nearly flinched at the thought of doing this to all the humans residing there, but she forced herself to let out a short laugh. Let them fear me, let them know just how far I will go. she thought, her black coat flapping. "I will be remembered." she said into the wind, letting the words carry itself far, as far as the air would take them.


That night, she uprooted the entire kingdom and tossed it into the sea nearby. It didn't matter if Elisa lived or not. Even if she did, she wouldn't ever show her face, her damaged pride and the humiliation of losing everything she had would be enough to make her want to have died. And she'd always have to live with the fact that it was her sister who'd done it, her dear darling sister who would have never did it if she'd remembered.


Word soon got round at how the entire kingdom has upped and vanished within a night. Someone had witnessed the ongoings and had passed it around. It didn't take long until she earned herself the title of The Blair Witch, after the kingdom she had thrown into the sea.


After that, Blaire was always on the move, leaving marks anywhere and everywhere on any city she came across, upstaging the people she came across, anything, anything to make her feel like she was better.


It was the only thing that could do anything against the guilt slowly chewing her up.


{ i'll be editing the post to add in a male character (seems like you need one) but I have no idea what I should make him so if you have any suggestions? }
 
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If Dem's powers aren't okay now, I will edit them back.


 
I changed her powers back. I didn't like the new ones
 
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