White Masquerade
QuirkyAngel's Red Oni
Hello. Earlier in the year, I tried out making a Virtual Reality-based RP and I enjoyed it. The first test is coming to a close and I'd to begin working on a Part 2.
What I'm looking for, is a few people to go over what I did in Part 1 and give some critique. Specifically, what part of the RP is unclear, looks odd, or can be simplified. This includes both story and mechanics. By mechanics I mean there's a class system and simple stats to determine how strong people are. It's really cool stuff. However, I'm not looking to make it complex - only varied, yet simple.
There is no release date in mind (could even be next year), I only want to start planning and fleshing things out. If you are interested, let me know. Also, I'm not a beginner RPer or GM, so I'm not looking for basic help or tips. This is advanced.
What I'm looking for, is a few people to go over what I did in Part 1 and give some critique. Specifically, what part of the RP is unclear, looks odd, or can be simplified. This includes both story and mechanics. By mechanics I mean there's a class system and simple stats to determine how strong people are. It's really cool stuff. However, I'm not looking to make it complex - only varied, yet simple.
There is no release date in mind (could even be next year), I only want to start planning and fleshing things out. If you are interested, let me know. Also, I'm not a beginner RPer or GM, so I'm not looking for basic help or tips. This is advanced.