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Wandering Spirit said:
Fable Fable Option 2: She could be an old friend of the captain.
She could be trying to get onto the ship because she wants to see her old friend again?
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For some reason I kinda wanna say old rival for humor XD
 
Forgy Forgy has been officially removed.
 
Doughnut Doughnut
Wandering Spirit said:
Air WalkingShe can walk on the air, treating it like a solid matter. ConcentrationConcentration is needed to walk on the air. Body HardeningShe can harden her own body, making her all but invulnerable to blunt force. LimitThere is a limit to how much damage she can take.
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Could you give a time limit to these? A few minutes to an hour max?
Other that that looks alright. I'll be posting the next GM post to start the next round for everyone, but it will probably be the last post round in Booty Bay as people are bored and want to move on.
 
Birdsie Birdsie Grimgal better do something amusing. -stare-
 
Doughnut Doughnut Alrighty, you're on the roster for crew and can post. :3
 
mikyuu mikyuu Cross posting the notes on your CS here from Discord.
Far Sight
Moray's right eye is magically enchanted to see the smallest detail up to 100 km away.
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100km is way way way way too far. That is like me being able to see the next two cities over from where I live. A normal person can only see as far as 5km to the horizon in any direction when on a ship so they could see a km radius from a point, but after that the horizon "cuts off" visually so to speak. (googled research lol)

So he could say see very well within 10km, which is still way better than say a hawk/bird of prey because they can see only 8x a human (which conceptually doesn't necessarily cover distance, but imagine a bit like a magnifying glass with 8x power that you're using).

Blacksmith's Flame
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As long as it's a very very short duration for max temp I'll allow it.
 
LazyDaze LazyDaze Just a note, you have a very similar skill as mikyuu mikyuu
Since auk posted their CS first with the skill I'd give them priority for the skill. You could do something alternatively like "sea tracking" perhaps, predator instinct, or get creative with a physical ability being what he is. Such as something like a squid camouflage or echolocation as ideas.

The rest is fine, and this is just a strong suggestion to consider alternatives.

Additionally, just a note from me about his race. I tend to have a personal hesitance with hybrid characters. I've rarely had any good experiences with hybrid characters and even have them outlawed in another of my RPs. The issue I mostly have is the race as for "Demon" because they do exist, if you look at the Infamous Pirates lore at Dante the Demon. Demons I wouldn't really call a true race but rather more a "racist" term towards a specific race.

I would suggest swapping the name Demon for a racial name of your own creation. You could keep your concept of 'demon' and use a translated word that kinda means the same thing (I'm uncreative, lol) like Daimonas (Greek), Dzhavo (Serbian), Shaytan (Arabic), Jinni (Somali), etc.
 
Fyuri said:
LazyDaze LazyDaze Just a note, you have a very similar skill as mikyuu mikyuu
Since auk posted their CS first with the skill I'd give them priority for the skill. You could do something alternatively like "sea tracking" perhaps, predator instinct, or get creative with a physical ability being what he is. Such as something like a squid camouflage or echolocation as ideas.

The rest is fine, and this is just a strong suggestion to consider alternatives.

Additionally, just a note from me about his race. I tend to have a personal hesitance with hybrid characters. I've rarely had any good experiences with hybrid characters and even have them outlawed in another of my RPs. The issue I mostly have is the race as for "Demon" because they do exist, if you look at the Infamous Pirates lore at Dante the Demon. Demons I wouldn't really call a true race but rather more a "racist" term towards a specific race.

I would suggest swapping the name Demon for a racial name of your own creation. You could keep your concept of 'demon' and use a translated word that kinda means the same thing (I'm uncreative, lol) like Daimonas (Greek), Dzhavo (Serbian), Shaytan (Arabic), Jinni (Somali), etc.
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Thanks for the feedback and info. I think I changed everything that needs to be changed (mostly following your suggestions lol) Um also added some info about the new race at the beginning of the backstory. Also I'm sorry to hear that about hybrid characters. You mind if I ask what often leads to those negative experiences. I was just trying to be creative. LOL

EDIT: Also changed crew outlook to diversify my character from mikyuu mikyuu
 
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LazyDaze said:
Thanks for the feedback and info. I think I changed everything that needs to be changed (mostly following your suggestions lol) Um also added some info about the new race at the beginning of the backstory. Also I'm sorry to hear that about hybrid characters. You mind if I ask what often leads to those negative experiences. I was just trying to be creative. LOL
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I'll check your edits later when I have a moment to re-read your CS.

As far as why I tend of cringe with a mention of a hybrid character is that in nearly all (not all, just most) it's basically a Mary/Gary-Stu tactic that is used because a player believes if they include some crazy genealogy type deal they can be an Demon Angel Vampire Bakeneko who is a girl with cute cat ears, a dark side with dark powers that conflict with her light powers and caring nature while trying to resist her craving for blood and being an 'immortal.'

After so many encounters with this trope tactic it's almost a form of RP PTSD at having to constantly go "sorry no, that's excessive and a poor writing."
 
Fyuri said:
I'll check your edits later when I have a moment to re-read your CS.

As far as why I tend of cringe with a mention of a hybrid character is that in nearly all (not all, just most) it's basically a Mary/Gary-Stu tactic that is used because a player believes if they include some crazy genealogy type deal they can be an Demon Angel Vampire Bakeneko who is a girl with cute cat ears, a dark side with dark powers that conflict with her light powers and caring nature while trying to resist her craving for blood and being an 'immortal.'

After so many encounters with this trope tactic it's almost a form of RP PTSD at having to constantly go "sorry no, that's excessive and a poor writing."
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LMBO I can totally see that. I normally don’t do hybrid characters but I can promise you I’m not trying to be that “deep”. Can totally understand why you would just scrap the whole idea after seeing that trope so many times. I’ll do my best not to trigger the PTSD. xD
 
So I haven't been able to read all the edits (time crunch lol but didn't wanna leave you waiting too long). First note is one that you should avoid altering the merfolk lore. You can simply leave the racial for the Wraigog as only their info rather what merfolk do or don't do since it's really the literal only race I've constructed specific lore for beyond my own elf race for my GMPC and a few to later be revealed.

LazyDaze LazyDaze and the skill is also still the same so not sure if you meant to edit that as well or if you want a duplicate power of the other navigator?
 
Fyuri said:
So I haven't been able to read all the edits (time crunch lol but didn't wanna leave you waiting too long). First note is one that you should avoid altering the merfolk lore. You can simply leave the racial for the Wraigog as only their info rather what merfolk do or don't do since it's really the literal only race I've constructed specific lore for beyond my own elf race for my GMPC and a few to later be revealed.

LazyDaze LazyDaze and the skill is also still the same so not sure if you meant to edit that as well or if you want a duplicate power of the other navigator?
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Lol I actually did change it idk what happened. Maybe I accidentally wrote over it.
 
LOL ok sorry for all the trouble btw Fable Fable but I changed it! Idk what distance for his sensing ability is okay but I just put 10km as a default and just left that open to whatever is ok.
 
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LazyDaze LazyDaze You can post IC now. Just a note backstory you forgot to swap demon for the custom race name XD
 
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