[THIS IS OUR HOME] Ignem Inferni

[chancesam]

Ignem Inferni

• INFO
• PERSONALITY
• HISTORY

• 
  BASIC INFORMATION
  
  Name: Ignem Inferni (It means "Hell Fire"
  
  
  Age: He's 4 years old
  
  
  Species: Elemental
  
  
  Pack: Ignemium
  
  
  Rank: He's hoping to get Lead Fighter
  
  
  Specific Power Set: Incineration. He can set things on fire, burning them to ashes. But not other wolves, of course. The larger objects drain him of his strength though. (Sorry that it's so short, there's really nothing more to describe his power.)
  
  
  APPEARANCE Ignem has a dark, crimson coat speckled with specks of brown and black. At the longest point it's 2 1/2 inches long. It's so long and thick that it covers his athletic, muscle layered body. His eyes are probably the feature that sticks out the most. His left eye is a bright crimson orange with fire like markings in his iris and his right eye a spectacular dark sparkling blue. He has jagged scar next to to his left eye on the left side. Some think that's why is left eye is so oddly colored.
  
  
  His teeth are a pearly white color, a beautiful contrast to his dark coat. At the longest, they're 2 inches long, nice and pointy too. His claws are also white, but more of like a cream white than pure white. They're about 2 inches long also, and are in perfect pencil like points, even when he was a pup they were like that. His ears remind some of a German shepherd's ears. They have little tufts of fur around them and they have black tips. His tail has puffy fur just like the ruff around his neck & throat.
  
  
  
• : Ignem is an extraordinary wolf. He's intelligent and witty. Sarcastic and sweet. He can be a bit overprotective at times, great when facing other packs. He has a bit of a problem with authority figures and he hates it, just hates it, when other wolves try to boss him around. Because he likes to do his own thing.
  
  
  He has some....issues. He doesn't really have any..compassion. He cares for no one but himself. He's quite evil and sadistic.
  
  
  
• Ignem was born to a she-wolf of the shadows and a he-wolf of fire. His dad was an amazing specimen of a fire wolf; not hot headed at all. His mom was a bit overprotective but overall she had a good disposition. When Ignem was about 1 years old, he and his father went out to hunt for the pack. His father was Alpha. They were hunting in the pack's favorite spot, with luscious trees and lots of deer and grizzly. Ignem and his father were in the middle of taking down a good sized grizzly, when they heard a loud POP. Ignem turned toward his father; going to ask him what that was. His father was spread on the ground, a bullet lodged in his heart. DAD! He shouted, and began licking his father's wound. No son, get out of here! But Ignem wasn't leaving without his father, he grabbed him on his ruff and ran while holding him.
  
  
  By the time Ignem reached his mother, he knew; deep down in his gut, that his father was dead. When his mother saw the body, she just shook her head and one single crystal colored tear ran down her face.
  
  
  One day Ignem and his mother were fighting; over something stupid, and Ignem said to his mother to go to hell. When he came back from a hunt later that day he went into the den and saw his mother's lifeless body laying on the dirt ground. You know what he did; laughed.
  
  
  

 

[elliphant]

Dennied

I'm sorry, but this form is unacceptable. No guidelines were followed regarding for form. The appearance calls for 2-4 paragraphs, just for starters. I'm not sure what your definition of a paragraph is, but mine is five to seven well-constructed, thought out sentences. That is not what I see. Personality and History also need quite a bit more beefing up. I called for 2+ paragraphs for personality and 3+ paragraphs for history. I'm going to give you the chance to revise this, but if in the roleplay you will be presenting bare minimum like so, I won't be able to accept you. Please post when you have revised your form and message me if you feel like you're having problems completing the form.

 

[chancesam]

<p><a href="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2014_09/upload_2014-9-20_21-8-2.jpeg.a7371dfa66c7cafe98a840a52830ba2e.jpeg" class="ipsAttachLink ipsAttachLink_image"><img data-fileid="30246" src="<fileStore.core_Attachment>/monthly_2014_09/upload_2014-9-20_21-8-2.jpeg.a7371dfa66c7cafe98a840a52830ba2e.jpeg" class="ipsImage ipsImage_thumbnailed" alt=""></a></p>