The Omen of Death
My presence has marked your eventual demise.
Based on the CS I deemed that the character wasn't intelligent. Therefore she would not fit the RP.what was the problem with it?
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Based on the CS I deemed that the character wasn't intelligent. Therefore she would not fit the RP.what was the problem with it?
His intelligence does not really feel like it fits this RP. So I am going to have to deny this unfortunately.Name: Dudley
Fandom/Universe from: Darkest Dungeon, OC
Alias: (None)
Age: 37
Appearance:![]()
Personality: Dudley, if his mental health is not compromised, maintains a calm and uncaring demeanor if not somewhat cynical. His normal self is noted to be proud of his skill with his flintlock pistol, boasting he never misses.
However, Dudley is noted to harbor guilt over acts in the past. This is best shown if Dudley goes insane, where he'll break down at times.
Skills/Abilities: Dudley is extremely experienced in terms of disarming traps, owing to his past as a bandit. Also owing to his past as a bandit is that Dudley is skilled in the arts of robbery, able to disarm locks on chests with ease and is faster and dodgier than a normal human, not to mention he's decent at scouting areas.
Equipment (these won't be regained for a while, just want to know so what they usually carry on them, whether they are weapons, or useful gadgets): Dudley carried a flintlock pistol and a knife, and his overcoat is tougher with subtle additions.
Background: Dudley used to be one of the bandits that would plague any unfortunate passerby. One day, however, Dudley was caught up in combat with a seemingly unguarded stagecoach before a group of guards inside the coach surprised Dudley and knocked him out.
The bandit's robberies were seemingly numerous. It was certain that the hangman would execute Dudley, but when Dudley seemed resigned to his fate, the judge added another option.
There was a hamlet, not too far from where Dudley would rob passerby at will. That hamlet needed adventurers who would go down into one of five dungeons and complete certain tasks-one of which included scouting. Dudley, choosing between the noose and the near-certain death in one of the dungeons, chose the dungeons in the hope he MIGHT make it out alive.
Other: Dudley is NOT superhuman. His intelligence only extends to identifying and disarming generic traps (think spike traps, bear traps, deep hidden holes, etc.) and locks. He has trouble solving puzzles and as such needs time to solve a puzzle. Dudley is also more fragile than a normal human, meaning if a guard spots him and hits/a trap activated and Dudley was caught in the trap then Dudley will be more wounded than the normal human.
(If denied, criticism would be greatly appreciated)
Sorry for the delay, in my response but yes you can. I'm not discriminating.Shame about that. Mind if I spectate?
Unfortunately it does not look like this character will fit, I'm sorry to say but this will have to be denied.
Based on what I interpreted from your characters CS she doesn't have any notable intelligence. This RP is meant for characters without powers and are intelligent. So based on what I saw I denied your character for that reason.What's wrong with my CS? Isn't it good enough? Was there something wrong?
Accepted.The Omen of Death
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Name: D.A.R.Y.L
Fandom : D.A.R.Y.L
Alias: Freak , Data Analyzing Robot Youth Lifeform
Age: likely around Six-Seven in Human terms , his A.I has been around for a lot longer before his body was made .
Appeareance: He is a young Caucasian kid with brown hair and brown eyes. His attire varies quite a bit , but here he is seen with a different outfit.
Personality: D.A.R.Y.L was shown to be a polite and kind kid ( Shown here during the beginning of the movie ) , trying his hardest to be nice to everyone & please everyone , as well as understand everything due to his nature as an automatic advancing A.I & a curious child . At first, he didn't know of emotions such as love, fear, and sadness . However, as the movie went on, he was able to show these traits over time. This was seen as impossible by his creators, as there was no way a A.I had any sort of 'heart' ( In Kingdom Heart's terms... It's like the moment when Pinocchio got a heart ) . However, at a time, he had no concepts of human expression such as fear , which explains why for the majority of the movie he displays nothing more than a blank face.
Skills:
Equipment: None
- Analyzation: With just a glance, he can easily analyze bits of information at a time. He was shown as capable of analyzing information well, considering his mind surpasses that of the greatest Supercomputers known to mankind. He was able to play a piano effortlessly just by being taught the basics, and didn't make one single mistake . By analyzing how his family acted, he was able to develop genuine human emotions that were actually real. By watching someone else play a game, he got the highest score in the world on it. He scored a home-run the entire game except when he decided to hold himself back , after learning only the basics of baseball, without any prior knowledge of the sport. He learned how to fly a jet , and managed to sneak into a government base , and outsmarted everyone in the Millitary base just by observing them for a few moments. His potential for learning is limitless .
- Intelligence: There isn't any doubt he is a Super-Genius, as he has the knowledge of a Supercomputer that is completely advanced in comparison tot he Supercomputers utilized in the movie , which govern the entire world . But , what makes him so dangerous is his uncanny ability to learn nigh-instantaneously . Due to this, he can be an incredibly dangerous adversary just via this alone.
Other:
* The kid is pretty naive about most things, which can be used to another's advantage.
* He was stated twice as having the " mental ability to take over the world " at many points, and was going to be used as a weapon by the government.
* His creators stated he has the potential to accomplish anything.
Lol, you're making me sound like I am a monarch or something. XDMost excellent Omen. Thank you .
It just sounded that, way thank you anyway lol... Was I really ? I was just trying to be polite XD
Name:High Pain Tolerance: Izuku has shown in many occasions that he is able to handle and bear with a lot of pain, such times are mostly because of the repercussion of over-using his Quirk. However, he can still manage to move his body despite feeling excruciating pain which was seen in his fight with Katsuki.
Izuku 'Deku' Midoriya
Fandom/Universe from:
Boku No Hero Academia (Pre One-For-All)
Alias:
Deku
Age:
14
Appearance:
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Personality:
Izuku is a very timid, helpful and polite boy, frequently overreacting to abnormal situations with exaggerated expressions. Due to being bullied since childhood for being born without a Quirk, he is initially portrayed as insecure, being more reserved and not self-expressive, especially in front of Katsuki Bakugo, who constantly subdued him for his aspirations to be a hero. However, after being accepted into U.A. High School, making new friends and facing Katsuki during the Battle Trial Arc, he has gradually turned into a more confident and brave person, to the point of developing some leadership skills.
Izuku is also very diligent and strong-willed. His dream of becoming a Hero drove him to develop a habit of writing down notes about everything he knows in regards to their Quirks. Because of this practice, Izuku has developed a great analytical mind and is easily able to form complex battle plans in a matter of seconds, taking advantage of his allies' and enemies’ Quirks to put them in motion. Izuku externalizes his observations through endless mumbling, a habit which annoys or scares his peers. Izuku often writes down his observations in a notebook he refers to as Hero Analysis for the Future.
Izuku is a caring person, and will never hesitate to rescue someone in danger, even if he knows that he is not strong enough to do it. Often, he does this on a whim, taking a more careless approach than the usual overthinking he goes through. Izuku has also shown to be selfless enough to try to help people with personal, emotional problems, even if it does not concern him, claiming that a Hero is someone that meddles on the lives of other people. Izuku's heroic spirit is recognized by many, having earned the loyalty and gratitude of characters that were previously antagonistic to him such as Tenya Iida, Shoto Todoroki, and Kouta Izumi.
Of all Heroes, the Symbol of Peace All Might is the one that has had the most impact in his life, with the formerly Number One Hero having shaped most of the goals and beliefs that Izuku follows since childhood. Many of Izuku's decisions and actions are inspired by his desire to become a Hero similar to All Might, and thus he has a great devotion for him, to the point of collecting several pieces of various Merchandise related to the Hero and emulating several of his traits. Having inherited his Quirk, one of Izuku's current priorities is to be able to live up to his idol's legacy, as he is always looking for ways to improve his usage of One For All, being aware of the immense pressure that is succeeding the greatest Hero of all time.
Izuku appears to have a more brash and abrasive side to him that mostly shows up when he finds himself in combat. This side of him makes him act more like Katsuki, being rather loud and unwavering, and also with a strong drive towards victory. He claims that this is because he sees Katsuki as the embodiment of what someone who strives for victory should be. He also has admitted that he doesn't like this side of him very much, and tends to keep it in check.
Skills/Abilities:
Keen Intellect: Izuku has proven to be exceptionally intelligent on many occasions, displaying both keen observation and analysis as well as adept intuition and resourcefulness. It is usually his intelligence that has helped him more than his Quirk. Izuku is able to formulate strategies that takes advantage of the situation and uses his knowledge to creatively utilize the Quirks of other people to their full potential, such as working together with Tsuyu and Minoru to escape the villains at the flood zone in the USJ. Izuku also has extensive knowledge on Pro Heroes and their Quirks as well. Izuku's intelligence has allowed him to figure out One For All's mechanisms, allowing him to utilize the Quirk more efficiently in a short span of time. Gran Torino even compliments Izuku's intelligence, saying that Izuku is the type of person who thinks before he acts. Izuku's intelligence is so vast that it allowed him to rank fourth in the academic exams, which showed that all of his training doesn't hinder his studies.
Artistic: Izuku has a notebook in which he designs and recreates costumes that look almost identical to the real thing.
Equipment:
Notebook: Where he takes notes on all the heroes he has watched and designs possible costumes for people
Background:
Being born with no power in a world where everyone has one, Izuku was bullied in school almost constantly. He looked up to All Might as the number one hero, and wanted to be like him even when he knew he had no quirk. Once he met him, Izuku training immensely, wishing to become All Might's successor as the power 'One For All' is a special quirk which can be transferred from host to host. Unlike the normal time line, however, Izuku was taken before he could inherit these new powers and so is still powerless.
Other:
Accepted.Name: Ivana Clawyu
Fandom/Universe from (If OC universe just state its OC and just a small bit of general info of where they come from): Cats and Dogs
Alias (if they go by one): Kitty Galore
Age: Unknown/Adult Cat
Appearance (photo or description will be just fine):![]()
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Personality:
She seems to have no regard for the life of either dogs or cats against her, as evidenced by her decision to let Catherine and Diggs drown. This extends to humans because, although the dogs were her targets, her plan placed humans at risk and could have resulted in injuries, even fatalities, for humans and dogs.
To some degree, however, Kitty Galore is something of a tragic villain. This is due to the fact Catherine revealed to Diggs and Butch that, while Kitty was a M.E.O.W.S. agent named Ivana Clawyu, she was chased by a guard dog on her last assignment before going rogue and fell into a vat of hair removal cream. Humiliated and jeered by her own fellow agents, Ivana left M.E.O.W.S. and returned to her human family. But her owners didn't recognize her and she was thrown out into the cold Christmas night. This led to Kitty to angrily vow to "make them (humans) pay." She was later found by a magician, but still devoted to evil.
Skills/Abilities:
M.E.O.W.S secret agent training- As a former MEOWS agent Kitty was trained to do things such as pick locks, use paw to paw combat, stealth tactics, aviation, marksmanship, ect things a spy would be expected to know.
Cat-like reflexes- Being a cat Kitty is quick to react, nothing superhuman but instinctive feeling of danger or how to land on her feet after falling.
Intelligence- Kitty while in her universe it is not unusual for a cat to be able to speak or walk on its' hind legs, she is able to do much more. Kitty was able to build her robotic minion Paws, out of spare parts she had from the making of her satellite. She was also able to stay in hiding for a lengthy period of time without anyone finding out her plan until she revealed it over a secret message meant only for cats. Not to mention she was able to set up traps and make a disc which would play a sound that only dogs could hear and would drive them mad.
Equipment (these won't be regained for a while, just want to know so what they usually carry on them, whether they are weapons, or useful gadgets):
USB drive that functions as a camera and grappling hook
Background:
Kitty was once known as Ivana Clawyu, a well respected long-haired cat agent in the employment of M.E.O.W.S. (Mousers Enforcing Our World's Safety). But during a mission at a cosmetics factory, a guard dog chased her into a vat of hair removal cream, permanently removing her long hair. Shamed by her fellow agents, Ivana returned to her owners, only to be tossed out in the snow on Christmas. Angered, Ivana vows vengeance on all humans and changes her name to Kitty Galore.
With nowhere to go, Kitty sets up base in the company of Play Land's Chuck the Magnificent, a magician whom Kitty takes no pleasure in being his "assistant". Despite this, Kitty used the resources of Play Land to her advantage, including turning a ride into a giant sattalite dish, and creating a robotic Maine Coon henchman, Paws. She even adopted a relunctent white mouse named Scrumptious, who she tries to protect from Paws from time to time.