Fantasy The War

[Leo Radomir]

No one has been forgotten. I'm just currently busy.

k i replied to what you said and explained this in more detail so when u get a chance.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

I will sit here and wait for something to post.

 

[H3LLJUMPER_177]

[QUOTE="Ami the breadling]I will sit here and wait for something to post.

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So I'm stuck between Black Elite or Royal Guard... I can't see my character fitting in Infantry, he seems a bit, powerful to be pushed to the front lines, but if there's room for the 2 choices, I'll pick Infantry.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

So I'm stuck between Black Elite or Royal Guard... I can't see my character fitting in Infantry, he seems a bit, powerful to be pushed to the front lines, but if there's room for the 2 choices, I'll pick Infantry.

THe royal Guards are never the frontline, they are one of the elites and have a status similar to that of nobles.


The Black Elite is more like... If your in there, your nothing but a Elite anymore. They almost never take of armor and are ruthless efficient.

 

[H3LLJUMPER_177]

[QUOTE="Ami the breadling]THe royal Guards are never the frontline, they are one of the elites and have a status similar to that of nobles.
The Black Elite is more like... If your in there, your nothing but a Elite anymore. They almost never take of armor and are ruthless efficient.

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...Black elite it is...

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

...Black elite it is...

But then his armor had to be the one shown (or at least mostly). For normal soldier up to guards i dont care, but the elite must stay with those.

 

[H3LLJUMPER_177]

[QUOTE="Ami the breadling]But then his armor had to be the one shown (or at least mostly). For normal soldier up to guards i dont care, but the elite must stay with those.

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Isn't Tybolts armor close to it?

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Isn't Tybolts armor close to it?

Close enough i guess. Maybe he is a commander so he can have a little special armor?

 

[H3LLJUMPER_177]

[QUOTE="Ami the breadling]Close enough i guess. Maybe he is a commander so he can have a little special armor?

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Alright. Hold on, let me edit him

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Alright. Hold on, let me edit him

I love his fire abilities, they suit the black elite very good.

 

[H3LLJUMPER_177]

[QUOTE="Ami the breadling]I love his fire abilities, they suit the black elite very good.

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Tybolt is finished I hope, now we're waiting for approval.

 

[KhalZhavvorsa]

Tybolt is finished I hope, now we're waiting for approval.

Cause I like to pick on people, there are no vikings in this era x3


But in all seriousness, welcome to the RP~

 

[H3LLJUMPER_177]

Cause I like to pick on people, there are no vikings in this era x3
But in all seriousness, welcome to the RP~

*Claps super fast and furiously*

 

[Angelostar4]

*Claps super fast and furiously*

Good on ya man! You'll serve whatever kingdom well.

 

[H3LLJUMPER_177]

On PC, let's see what I can do...

 

[H3LLJUMPER_177]

[QUOTE="Ami the breadling]I will sit here and wait for something to post.

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Black elites are allowed to roam when not fighting or anything like that right...?

 

[Cosmo]

Annnnd I is on. So I'll take a look around, post and what not.

Seriously? xD

A lot of the times, yeah. O.o I didn't even notice that till now.


>.> Seriously gotta stop coping me Bunneh.

 

[Cosmo]

@Angelostar4 Your character was accepted.


@Salex Mmm, okay, thank you for your patience.


The 'strength of a dragon' is fine because you are going for the position of Champion who are supposed to be some of the strongest beings in this RP. (Although, we are going with an Adult Dragon, not like one of those mountain sized Ancient Wyrms for clarification on 'Dragon Strength')


in this mode, veins protude in his eyes alot like neji or hinata in naruto. in this mode his eyes can see thermal imaging and time seems to move in slow motion for him although he moves at the normal speed, although he rarely uses this power as if he does use it frequently he can be either temporarily or permanently blinded


I would prefer it if you remove the words neji, hinata and naruto and described the ability. Such as, "The iris in his eyes seem to dissolve as his eyes turn into a disconcerting milky white. Pulsating veins protrude from the skin increasing the blood flow to the mutated eyes as they draw in more energy," <-- Something like that.


Thermal imaging, while fine, I will say that... there is a bit of a... weakness there.. a pretty bad one. A lot of the Dark Kingdom's beings like the Wights or Bellatrix won't be able to be seen in this mode due to them being dead and so not having body heat. If you are okay with that then I will go ahead and accept him.

 

[H3LLJUMPER_177]

I might be getting a bigger phone that's newer too, maybe in like 10-45 minutes depending on how long it will take mom to turn it on, I'm on my shitty phone right now again since she has to activate it from the computer...

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Annnnd I is on. So I'll take a look around, post and what not.
A lot of the times, yeah. O.o I didn't even notice that till now.


>.> Seriously gotta stop coping me Bunneh.

Cosmuuuuu! GIMME CHARACTER FEEDBACK PLSSSSS!

 

[Strategos]

@Angelostar4 Your character was accepted.
@Salex Mmm, okay, thank you for your patience.


The 'strength of a dragon' is fine because you are going for the position of Champion who are supposed to be some of the strongest beings in this RP. (Although, we are going with an Adult Dragon, not like one of those mountain sized Ancient Wyrms for clarification on 'Dragon Strength')


in this mode, veins protude in his eyes alot like neji or hinata in naruto. in this mode his eyes can see thermal imaging and time seems to move in slow motion for him although he moves at the normal speed, although he rarely uses this power as if he does use it frequently he can be either temporarily or permanently blinded


I would prefer it if you remove the words neji, hinata and naruto and described the ability. Such as, "The iris in his eyes seem to dissolve as his eyes turn into a disconcerting milky white. Pulsating veins protrude from the skin increasing the blood flow to the mutated eyes as they draw in more energy," <-- Something like that.


Thermal imaging, while fine, I will say that... there is a bit of a... weakness there.. a pretty bad one. A lot of the Dark Kingdom's beings like the Wights or Bellatrix won't be able to be seen in this mode due to them being dead and so not having body heat. If you are okay with that then I will go ahead and accept him.

the neji and hinata hing was kind of a stupid decision since it was just a reference i used, im not the best at describing things sorry. and also yeah thermal imaging is still useful at some extent, but i just used that as an excuse so i have 4 powers xD .

 

[Strategos]

@Cosmo edited it, should check out now... wow this is the longest time that an rp took to accept me xD althought i appreciate the amount of detail put into this rp

 

[Angelostar4]

@Angelostar4 Your character was accepted.
@Salex Mmm, okay, thank you for your patience.


The 'strength of a dragon' is fine because you are going for the position of Champion who are supposed to be some of the strongest beings in this RP. (Although, we are going with an Adult Dragon, not like one of those mountain sized Ancient Wyrms for clarification on 'Dragon Strength')


in this mode, veins protude in his eyes alot like neji or hinata in naruto. in this mode his eyes can see thermal imaging and time seems to move in slow motion for him although he moves at the normal speed, although he rarely uses this power as if he does use it frequently he can be either temporarily or permanently blinded


I would prefer it if you remove the words neji, hinata and naruto and described the ability. Such as, "The iris in his eyes seem to dissolve as his eyes turn into a disconcerting milky white. Pulsating veins protrude from the skin increasing the blood flow to the mutated eyes as they draw in more energy," <-- Something like that.


Thermal imaging, while fine, I will say that... there is a bit of a... weakness there.. a pretty bad one. A lot of the Dark Kingdom's beings like the Wights or Bellatrix won't be able to be seen in this mode due to them being dead and so not having body heat. If you are okay with that then I will go ahead and accept him.

And it's all thanks to you that it was accepted. I gotta say, the process of making that character was fun indeed.

 

[Cosmo]

@Ami the breadling Ohhh, okay.


As always the CS, itself, is freaking gorgeous and... >.> You make me feel like a dirty peasant with it since I have like.. zero skill at that. People might read what I write if I was able to make it as pretty as you do. >.<


Her equipment/fighting style is really cool. Don't think I ever would have thought of something like that. Daggers onto bone wings that lets her strike out with them, a little whirlwind of terror and death. Can she fire these daggers off her wings if she wants and they will simply reappear on her armor afterwards?


Bloodseekers are a neat idea, where would they be on the demon hierarchy would you say? Like... above demons more of an assassin/specialist? Near Greater Demons?


Ohhhhh is their accessory like the sign of their summoned 'contract' with their master (Bellatrix in this case?) I like that you incorporated the metal of your other Kingdom into her by adding it as a weakness. Although, I am totally picturing a... straw like suction from her wings when they are absorbing the blood/life of prey.


Where is the extra blood stored? In her body? In the tubes of her wings?


The Plague is really neat. I like that added dimension of even light strikes from her can be deadly (Also like you, once again, incorporating your other kingdom into it with the lightfruit, helps make the RP lore seem more... together and inclusive.)


The nightmare form looks cool as shit. Also reaaaally powerful. Infecting people just by being around them and that breath? Ouuuuch,. >.> Also.. I.. I.. I kinda want Arkos to ride her into battle...


Personality is adorable. Not what I expected. Lazy and playful just waiting until she can go all Maim, Burn, Kill. With her being Arkos little buddy... that made me laugh, and I think that would be fun.


As always, I like your creations, you're always super creative and I love it.


Oh right, @Clockwork Syringe I have never been a fan of Alucard. Probably one of my least favorite vampires out there.


@Salex Ahhh, okay. Nah, its cool, I just know Bunneh doesn't like the names of other fandoms being used to describe something, prefers it to be.. customized to some extent.


Okay, everything looks good, you're accepted.

 

[Strategos]

@Ami the breadling Ohhh, okay.
As always the CS, itself, is freaking gorgeous and... >.> You make me feel like a dirty peasant with it since I have like.. zero skill at that. People might read what I write if I was able to make it as pretty as you do. >.<


Her equipment/fighting style is really cool. Don't think I ever would have thought of something like that. Daggers onto bone wings that lets her strike out with them, a little whirlwind of terror and death. Can she fire these daggers off her wings if she wants and they will simply reappear on her armor afterwards?


Bloodseekers are a neat idea, where would they be on the demon hierarchy would you say? Like... above demons more of an assassin/specialist? Near Greater Demons?


Ohhhhh is their accessory like the sign of their summoned 'contract' with their master (Bellatrix in this case?) I like that you incorporated the metal of your other Kingdom into her by adding it as a weakness. Although, I am totally picturing a... straw like suction from her wings when they are absorbing the blood/life of prey.


Where is the extra blood stored? In her body? In the tubes of her wings?


The Plague is really neat. I like that added dimension of even light strikes from her can be deadly (Also like you, once again, incorporating your other kingdom into it with the lightfruit, helps make the RP lore seem more... together and inclusive.)


The nightmare form looks cool as shit. Also reaaaally powerful. Infecting people just by being around them and that breath? Ouuuuch,. >.> Also.. I.. I.. I kinda want Arkos to ride her into battle...


Personality is adorable. Not what I expected. Lazy and playful just waiting until she can go all Maim, Burn, Kill. With her being Arkos little buddy... that made me laugh, and I think that would be fun.


As always, I like your creations, you're always super creative and I love it.


Oh right, @Clockwork Syringe I have never been a fan of Alucard. Probably one of my least favorite vampires out there.


@Salex Ahhh, okay. Nah, its cool, I just know Bunneh doesn't like the names of other fandoms being used to describe something, prefers it to be.. customized to some extent.


Okay, everything looks good, you're accepted.

yes! thank you!