Fantasy The War

[Cosmo]

@CERBERUS177 Sadly, not joking, I was called Jesus so often in high school that whenever someone says Jesus or Jesus Christ I now look over as if they called me.

 

[Angelostar4]

@Cosmo , he called for you... C:

Of course I would, he was the one that help made the process easier to do. Now I just waiting for his looking over.

 

[Angelostar4]

@CERBERUS177 Sadly, not joking, I was called Jesus so often in high school that whenever someone says Jesus or Jesus Christ I now look over as if they called me.

Whoa... that's uncanny

 

[H3LLJUMPER_177]

@Cosmo


Sorry...Well, I'm going to bed, it being 135AM now, and I would like to wake up and take a shower before I get yelled at for taking one when we're not allowed to, g'night everyone!

 

[Angelostar4]

@Cosmo
Sorry...Well, I'm going to bed, it being 135AM now, and I would like to wake up and take a shower before I get yelled at for taking one when we're not allowed to, g'night everyone!

Night man. I might follow you shortly.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

I should do that character of mine, I have ideas, but no motivation to stand up and get to my pc...

 

[Angelostar4]

[QUOTE="Ami the breadling]I should do that character of mine, I have ideas, but no motivation to stand up and get to my pc...

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What's your character's deal?

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

What's your character's deal?

A mad and very strong woman that is restraint by Bellatrix because she would destroy everything she could otherwise.

 

[Angelostar4]

[QUOTE="Ami the breadling]A mad and very strong woman that is restraint by Bellatrix because she would destroy everything she could otherwise.

[/QUOTE]
Sounds like Rex when he achieves Kaiser form. Since I have a soft spot for insane powerful people, I think that's a good idea...

 

[KhalZhavvorsa]

Onto something more serious.


@Leo Radomir


First off, your character's age needs to be UNDER Arkos's


Secondly, Teleportation is a HELL NO. Ice summoning/binding is whatever. Creatures of that nature should be pointed out that no sentient creatures may be binded in this manner. IN DEPTHLY (as though I was 5 years old and have no idea what this was.) explain to me what Counter/Curse is.


Third, Alignment: Says true neutral/neutral evil... don't think he understands what neutral evil is... he obeys contracts thus, at worst, he would be lawful evil but he appears lawful neutral really.


@CERBERUS177


You need to remove the Legionnaire as the Light Kingdom doesn't have legionnaires. They may use the Skyrim pictures, but she never used the term legionnaire.


Understand that 'controlling' fire has limits as to how great a type of fire he can control. Bellatrix's black flames are original to her and her only.


The items you got from one of soldiers has no power to it. The Hellfire Legion can naturally control Hellfire. They don't need anything to help them.


Job: Soldier


Would it kill you to take five god damn seconds to read the Kingdom CS and just pick something that exist like infantry or silver knight or fucking anything? Please. If you want to join a kingdom, be respectful enough to read the kingdom CS and make your character accordingly.


@Salex


Superhuman reflexes is a no on a the 'know what they are doing before they do it thing'. That has nothing to do with reflexes. Like. at all. The only two ways he could do that is through pre-cog, which would be an unrelated power, or through combat experience via seeing them move a shoulder or by guessing from their eyes which, again, has nothing to do with reflexes. Seeing through bluffs is also an experience thing, not a reflex thing. (Any swordsmen can do that though... just experience in fighting.)


Patience is not a power. In any shape or form. It is a personality trait.


Alignment..please look on the other CS for how to do that..

 

[Strategos]

Onto something more serious.
@Leo Radomir


First off, your character's age needs to be UNDER Arkos's


Secondly, Teleportation is a HELL NO. Ice summoning/binding is whatever. Creatures of that nature should be pointed out that no sentient creatures may be binded in this manner. IN DEPTHLY (as though I was 5 years old and have no idea what this was.) explain to me what Counter/Curse is.


Third, Alignment: Says true neutral/neutral evil... don't think he understands what neutral evil is... he obeys contracts thus, at worst, he would be lawful evil but he appears lawful neutral really.


@CERBERUS177


You need to remove the Legionnaire as the Light Kingdom doesn't have legionnaires. They may use the Skyrim pictures, but she never used the term legionnaire.


Understand that 'controlling' fire has limits as to how great a type of fire he can control. Bellatrix's black flames are original to her and her only.


The items you got from one of soldiers has no power to it. The Hellfire Legion can naturally control Hellfire. They don't need anything to help them.


Job: Soldier


Would it kill you to take five god damn seconds to read the Kingdom CS and just pick something that exist like infantry or silver knight or fucking anything? Please. If you want to join a kingdom, be respectful enough to read the kingdom CS and make your character accordingly.


@Salex


Superhuman reflexes is a no on a the 'know what they are doing before they do it thing'. That has nothing to do with reflexes. Like. at all. The only two ways he could do that is through pre-cog, which would be an unrelated power, or through combat experience via seeing them move a shoulder or by guessing from their eyes which, again, has nothing to do with reflexes. Seeing through bluffs is also an experience thing, not a reflex thing. (Any swordsmen can do that though... just experience in fighting.)


Patience is not a power. In any shape or form. It is a personality trait.


Alignment..please look on the other CS for how to do that..

oh, well i can't think of a 4th power so can 3 just do it? and also i'll edit that mistake out, i had not slept from last night at that time @xEmoBunnehx

 

[KhalZhavvorsa]

oh, well i can't think of a 4th power so can 3 just do it? and also i'll edit that mistake out, i had not slept from last night at that time @xEmoBunnehx

3 will be fine.

 

[Strategos]

3 will be fine.

nevermind, i made a 4th one, i edited it already

 

[Cosmo]

@Angelostar4


All these different weapons and armor, are they manifested by the crystals?


Crystal Sword appearance is the same as the dragoon armor.


"Others: Sophia is known to be gay among the family, but she tires to deny this to the best of her ability." <---- ... O.o Do you mean gay as in happy? Or that her family believes her to be homosexual?


Anyways, I think it is fine. Balanced, nothing is too strong and the weaknesses are clearly defined.

 

[Cosmo]

@Salex *Cough* he can't cut cannon balls in half because cannons don't exist here *cough*

 

[Angelostar4]

@Angelostar4
All these different weapons and armor, are they manifested by the crystals?


Crystal Sword appearance is the same as the dragoon armor.


"Others: Sophia is known to be gay among the family, but she tires to deny this to the best of her ability." <---- ... O.o Do you mean gay as in happy? Or that her family believes her to be homosexual?


Anyways, I think it is fine. Balanced, nothing is too strong and the weaknesses are clearly defined.

I meant it too be that her dad knows that she is a homosexual. I'll be sure to change that, and the crystal sword appearance.


And yes, all those weapons are from the crystals.

 

[Strategos]

@Salex *Cough* he can't cut cannon balls in half because cannons don't exist here *cough*

it was just for reference.... i mean he could if he had the chance but he can't because it doesnt exist, it was reference

 

[Cosmo]

@Angelostar4 Alrgithy.


@Salex Pointing it out as a picture involving cannons spewed a minor controversy that lasted two pages in the OOC. I would rather not repeat that.


Arrows gets the point across just fine.

 

[Strategos]

@Angelostar4 Alrgithy.
@Salex Pointing it out as a picture involving cannons spewed a minor controversy that lasted two pages in the OOC. I would rather not repeat that.


Arrows gets the point across just fine.

aaahhh alright, because the illuminati as a controversy isn't enough

 

[Angelostar4]

@Angelostar4 Alrgithy.
@Salex Pointing it out as a picture involving cannons spewed a minor controversy that lasted two pages in the OOC. I would rather not repeat that.


Arrows gets the point across just fine.

Also thanks man. Without you, I would probably not done the character justice.

 

[Cosmo]

@Angelostar4 No problem, half the reason Bunneh keeps me around.


@Salex Especially when you are the one who has to clean up the mess.

 

[Strategos]

@Angelostar4 No problem, half the reason Bunneh keeps me around.
@Salex Especially when you are the one who has to clean up the mess.

yeah but your cosmo, you can just poof away the mess! jk jk yeah i understand, sorry bout that!

 

[Strategos]

so does this mean my character is accepted or is something else quite wrong or missing? @Cosmo @xEmoBunnehx

 

[Cosmo]

@Salex Bunneh is working on a post right now. When your character is accepted, Bunneh will like the CS.

 

[Strategos]

@Salex Bunneh is working on a post right now. When your character is accepted, Bunneh will like the CS.

ah alright, thanks!