Fantasy The War

[The Fluffiest Floof]

So.... feedback on my character and kingdom?

 

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@xEmoBunnehx Request to be ruler of the flame kingdom?

 

[KhalZhavvorsa]

@xEmoBunnehx[/URL] Request to be ruler of the flame kingdom?

That one is currently reserved.

 

[Cosmo]

@xEmoBunnehx[/URL] Starting work on one of my twins, probably the sickly younger mage one.

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[KhalZhavvorsa]

Since I am a sneaky bitch, and my teacher still isnt here, I figured why not get on.


So..


I do. And I see this snazzy mother fucker known as @Cosmo doing a better job than me. -.- buttt kudos and thanks bruh. Because my brain is total toast right now. (Thanks college.)

 

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@xEmoBunnehx If the flame kingdom is reserved what about Ice? Or Water?

 

[KhalZhavvorsa]

@xEmoBunnehx[/URL] If the flame kingdom is reserved what about Ice? Or Water?

Either or is fine, just inform me which you prefer.

 

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@xEmoBunnehx Changed my mind, going with Water Kingdom.

 

[KhalZhavvorsa]

@xEmoBunnehx[/URL] Changed my mind, going with Water Kingdom.

Okay c: its yours.

 

[Cosmo]

@Cunning Commander ... Kinda glad you are not doing Canada because... ( O.o ) come on really?


Although... now... now I can't get over the idea of mounties in plate with their silly hates charging into battle on the back of caribou, so thanks for that mental image. (> )

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

Not the GM, obviously as I am much better looking (B') But I will gladly give feedback on your work.
Well, if I didn't feel like a scrub before, I do now. All three of you have such amazing formatting... >.> Just... Just don't rub it in too harshly.

Svenja

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The CS is just beautiful and I love the design and layout. Makes me super self-conscious of my barebones one, so, kudos but also, >.> Go to hell. I really love the picture you used, noble, regal but very beautiful and it fits what you wrote for her to a tee.


Alignment is a DnD-personality, there are nine categories for it, and you can find in-depth explanations for each category through a quick google search, and if I had to guess, she looks Neutral Good. Maybe Lawful Good, but I would say she is on the border of it if she is.


I like what you were going with for the three likes/dislikes/strength/weakness/hobbies, having three of each really makes it look neat and clean.


The theme song is neat, never heard it before. Was the theme song would gave you the idea for a more Russian influence to your character/nation? Or did you know you wanted a more Russian theme and found the theme song that fit?


(Lol, also, for lawls, this is what I listened to on loop while writing my Wight:


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[/media] Makes so much sense... >.> <.<)
Her history is very short. I really want to know what she did on her journey, what people she met, how life was growing up and what has she done so far to feel worthy of the crown... But if you are one of those people (Like Bunneh) that like having the history vague and slowly revealing it as it becomes relevant or impact in the RP, itself, then I understand.


Her fighting style and powers have a lot of flow and interaction. You designed her with raw speed in mind, I imagine, since everything is geared towards this lighting (forgive the pun) fast approach to combat. A decent AoE attack and a support ability in healing, she seems like a well-rounded character. Not too powerful, but certainly enough to give any of the current characters a run for their money if she can close the distance.

Galadarnad

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Dear God woman, your skill at codes and making your CS beautiful is straight up inhumanly good. I.... both love and hate you now, torn apart by envy and awe... (:'() Why can't I be that good!?

*Cough* Any who, I love the idea of separate islands, really taking that class division to a whole other level. It is a very neat idea that I had never considered before this moment. Races are about what I would expect, do like the halflings addition, and I dearly hope to see them in your post in the future because they are adorable.

The lightfruit seems to be the bane of every husband/wife/child that wants to sneak downstairs and grab a snack without anyone knowing.. since.. you know... light.

Ahhh, so we are using LotR-style Orcs. I wasn't sure if I wanted LotR-style Orcs or the bigger DnD/Warhammer Orcs (To hell with the hippie Warcraft Orcs. Anything after WC2 Orcs are just piss) so I left it vague, but if you set the precedent with the Lotr orcs, I am okay with that.

Like your law as it sets up the religion, they are monotheistic. Which... reminds me I totally forgot to put up religion in mine, but whatever, be one of those things I flesh out during the RP. The laws are well thought out, and I love that you included their punishments in it.

Love that you wrote out your military. (> ) Military-Bros, UNITE!!! *Fist bump offering*

I like the color scheme you are going for, the light silverish appearance, very fitting for the 'light' kingdom especially given their mithril like metal (>.> Also, I wish I had thought about adding in a super metal, but you beat me to it. Again, kudos... well played... >.> And go to hell.) Skyrim/Dark Souls, mm? Solid choices allround. I think my favorite thing is just... how pretty they will look on the battlefield because of how well everything meshes together.

Also.. I see you have Hippogryph riders.... (8))

That is where it is at, mein freund. Gryphons are for pansies, Hippogryphs FTW!

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@xEmoBunnehx Starting work on one of my twins, probably the sickly younger mage one.

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Wow. That was a whole lot of feedback and i really, really appreciate it.


The themesong is in latin, making it my opinion fitting for the lihht kingdom AS they also sing about justice and light.


I do want her history to be vague, yep.


Erm... Kingdom next, right?


Yeah, i am a total DS & TESV fangirl, so that had to be. Also i might he the only girl in town... or germany.. that will look at a movie and say: "That sword is forged so nice!" Or "I love that armor!" So... those games make my heart jump.


Also hippogriphs ftw!

 

[Cosmo]

@Ami the breadling No problem, was it latin? Hmm, sounded Russian, but then again... I only speak English so... yeah.


Ahh, see, now I have to pester you in the IC until I find out what I wanna know.


Lol I do the same thing! Some movies and games get armor and weapons down really well. Love seeing functional weaponry and armor in video games, so I hear you.


Sorry, what was that about Kingdom next? I have already done a Kingdom. The current character I have is part of Bunneh's kingdom. I made my own Kingdom already and I am working on twins for it... wanted to do the kingdom first to flesh that out so I could give myself some freedom to work on their histories. Unless this was about something else?


If we ever go into a war side by side, we shall have to play ride of the Valkyries.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

@Ami the breadling No problem, was it latin? Hmm, sounded Russian, but then again... I only speak English so... yeah.
Ahh, see, now I have to pester you in the IC until I find out what I wanna know.


Lol I do the same thing! Some movies and games get armor and weapons down really well. Love seeing functional weaponry and armor in video games, so I hear you.


Sorry, what was that about Kingdom next? I have already done a Kingdom. The current character I have is part of Bunneh's kingdom. I made my own Kingdom already and I am working on twins for it... wanted to do the kingdom first to flesh that out so I could give myself some freedom to work on their histories. Unless this was about something else?


If we ever go into a war side by side, we shall have to play ride of the Valkyries.

You indeed are right about her theme, i used the russian song Katyusha there, i forgot. I thouhgt i used the same as for the hymn of my kingdom, in which they sing latin.

 

[Cosmo]

@Ami the breadling Ohhh, neat. Thought I was going crazy.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

@Ami the breadling Ohhh, neat. Thought I was going crazy.

Yeah my bad there, sorryyyy


I was a bad Ami-chan. Please dont hurt me though...

 

[Cosmo]

@Ami the breadling >.> Do you have insurance?

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

@Ami the breadling >.> Do you have insurance?

For what? Health? No... Everyone keeps kicking Ami-chan around with their feet because she is so small and cant do something against it. Why dont i get a fairy godparent/oddparent?

 

[Cosmo]

@Ami the breadling Drats, see, now I can't hurt you because I would feel bad.


>.< I retired from that business when Wanda left me and took the kids.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

@Ami the breadling Drats, see, now I can't hurt you because I would feel bad.
>.< I retired from that business when Wanda left me and took the kids.

Oh, I am sorry to hear that. I thought Wanda loved you? What happened? Did you screw up? Like... more than ususally?

 

[Cosmo]

@Ami the breadling Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat? >.> I... would never... <.<.....

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

@Ami the breadling Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat? >.> I... would never... <.<.....

Okay. I think i made you mad, so i will hide in my crawlspace. Its proctected by a net, so you cant poof in. I feel safe there. I will return when i think i wont get kicked around.

 

[Cosmo]

@Ami the breadling (>_>) Gotta come out sometime.

 

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@xEmoBunnehx @Cosmo Feedback on my character? I have my kingdom information all ready for when it's approved.

 

[Cosmo]

@Cunning Commander Not the GM, I was only doing the last one because Bunneh has class. She should be getting out soon, so I'll leave this one to her since I covered the last.

 

[The Fluffiest Floof]

@Cunning Commander Not the GM, I was only doing the last one because Bunneh has class. She should be getting out soon, so I'll leave this one to her since I covered the last.

*glances out* Is it save or will people kick me?